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This book is the second installment in a supposed story of Snow White.  In this story, Snow is a member of a pack of werewolves.  She is torn between her friend/lover and a businessman.  These books are novellas and are intended for adults only.  I found the story to lacking in character development with a shallow plot and should not be touted as a story of Snow White.

Snow’s Submission by Kristin Miller will be available June 12, 2017 by Entangled Publishing.  An egalley of this book was made available in exchange for a honest review.

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As we continue here in book two, Hunter has agreed to help Snow learn how to seduce Malcolm. His lessons are also teaching him a few things.

Lots of sex in this book but the author does provide a storyline. I can't but help falling for Hunter myself. Damn, he is hot, sexy and I look forward to the conclusion of this tale.

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Caught between duty and passion, between two men who on the surface do not seem right for Snow, especially with her position in her pack. I really enjoyed the intrigue, passion, and friends turned to lovers story line. One hell of a wicked stepmother too.

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Not the best series. I couldn't get past the Sed on every second page. The plot was weak and the Characters annoying and undeveloped.

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Snow’s Submission is book two in the series, A Snow White Werewolf Tale by Kristin Miller.

Snow is normally awkward, shy and withdrawn around men. But when her childhood best friend, Hunter, shows up for her 25th birthday party, Snow feels a physical attraction, an overwhelming chemistry, that can’t be denied. But Hunter is leaving in two days, back to his life on the road. Snow needs to find a mate, someone that will love her and share her life on her estate. Snow is comfortable with Hunter, though, so who better than to teach her how to be a seductress.

It’s time for lesson two. Hunter is going to teach Snow how to draw the attention of the man she wants while in a room full of people. Hunter’s six friends help with this lesson as they all enjoy a night of poker. Snow seems to excel at this lesson much to Hunter’s dismay. It’s killing him watching Snow flirt with his friends. He can’t be feeling these feelings of jealousy. She’s not his, can never be his.

“I’ve always been out for myself, fulfilling my own needs first. I’ve been called a lone wolf on more than one occasion. But when it comes to Snow, I want to care for her, pleasure her, and satiate her desires. It’s an impulse deep in my gut that I can’t squelch.”

Snow and her stepmother are on the verge of losing everything. Financially they are hanging on by a thread. She’s always had a crush on Malcolm, a very rich jewelry store owner. Her stepmother is pushing her to get him to fall in love with her to solve all their problems. Snow owes it to herself to try. She’s been dreaming of him for so long. But that was before Hunter came back into her life and her bed. She knows there is no future for them, that he is leaving. But her body and her heart have other ideas.

“With him I’m the best version of myself.”

This book is off the charts hot. Snow and Hunter are insatiable. When she finally gets her chance to have a conversation with Malcolm, it’s Hunter that’s on her mind. But the conversation takes a very shocking turn.

I can’t wait to see what happens next in the final book in this series, book three, Snow’s Surrender. I’m loving this series. Kristin Miller can most definitely write steam. This book practically smokes.

“I can’t get enough. Even if she gives me everything, it’ll never be enough.”

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"Clitar Hero". YAS. My girlfriends and I have a competition to see who can find the most random scene in a contemporary romance, and thank you for winning me a free beer ;)
Clever re-telling of an old story, adding smokin' hot sex and a fast-paced storyline, I thoroughly enjoyed this book. I was lucky enough to be allowed all 3 parts to it at once; again, I will reiterate to the author that in my opinion this is a risky and annoying way to publish a book. Most people will give up. Between either having to wait between parts and losing interest or the consumerism of buying 3 times the number of downloads on Amazon (even if theyre priced accordingly, people will balk at 3 purchases as opposed to one; its psychology) it's just not a sound idea.
As such, asking for 3 reviews for one story that you've arbitrarily broken up isn't likely.

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The second part of the twisted fairy tale of "Snow White" will leave readers breathless and eagerly awaiting the exciting conclusion of the series. Definitely recommend.

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Ok more of the same.

Total sex fest.

Poor choices and letting others influence you when you know what you really want.

Something is afoot.

Again just write one book!

Received a copy from the publisher through NetGalley.

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Who isn't familiar with the story of Snow White and the seven dwarfs? But this is NOT a child's fairytale! This is a sexy, paranormal werewolf version. I would recommend reading Snows Seduction first to follow this more completely.

Hunter has agreed to teach Snow how to seduce Malcom. In this lesson, Hunter assures Snow that seducing a guy's friends will make her more alluring by showing Malcom that others are captivated by her and therefore he should be too.

Who better to try this on? Hunter's six buddies who have gotten together to play poker. Hum...Hunter and six buddies...but no way are these guys dwarfs. Rather, they aware sexy GQ quality men!

Showing Hunter that she's maybe too good a student, Snow becomes even more irresistible to Hunter. Sexy times ensue!

When Snow finally gets it right with Malcom, is he everything she wants in a man? Is she ready to commit to him being her mate? Where is Hunter in all of this? You must read Snows Surrender to find out!

I liked this one much better than the first installment. It's fun watching Snow play poker with the 6 guys, practicing her seduction on the group and essentially driving Hunter crazy! We also get more glimpses of Malcom and Snow setting up a good cliffhanger for which wolf will Snow choose?

Thank you NetGalley and Entangled Publishing for an advance reader copy in exchange for my honest review.

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Snow's Submission continues with Snow's lessons in seduction from Hunter and some sizzling hot scenes between them that will burn up the sheets.
First off, as always with serials, I always mention where it's at. This is part two in a three part serial. If you're coming to this without reading Snow's Seduction, you need to go back and read that first for context and of course, more sexy times between Snow and Hunter. It's possible to read this on its own but why miss the fun of part one?
Hunter continues to be his sexy playboy self, hot enough to knock your socks off, he certainly did Snow's but he's not one for commitment and that's what Snow is looking for. Except now he's feeling jealous of the idea of Snow with someone else and it's not sitting well with him, though he continues to maintain his love 'em and leave 'em ways. At least Snow knows the score.
Snow is slowly coming into herself which is lovely to see, though she's still inherently a sweet and innocent young woman. I find it hard to believe that she's going to become Alpha of her pack and rule over them. Sexual confidence and the ability to rule are pack do not go hand in hand, but she seems inexperienced to me even if she thinks she's ready to assume the mantle of Alpha.
It's hard to say what kind of role Malcolm plays in all of this besides a means to an end but Snow seems to have her head screwed on straight about things with him, so I'm a lot less concerned of her getting into trouble with Malcolm. She seems to think she knows what she wants out of a relationship.
I have my suspicions about Snow's stepmother and her machinations. I'm questioning her motives and what she's done but so far we haven't been enlightened.
I've got lots of questions that need to be answered, like, is Snow's stepmother plotting something? What happens when Hunter finds out about the estate? And of course, the biggie, who will Snow end up with? I'm off to read part three to find out.

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Part 2 of 3
The saga continues .... Hello Malcolm!
In this episode we see the relationship between Snow and Hunter growing. Both are very confused about their feelings. They are friends first and foremost. But as Hunter teaches Snow how to use her assets, they begin to feel something more.
Enter Malcolm and see how Snow's world gets tipped upside down.

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Second serial in this steamy sexy story. Hunter Snow and Malcolm

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