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This was such an epic fantasy! The writing was really detailed and visual, so it was easy to portray everything and that made the story really atmospheric. And the way the story was set up was just so intricate, I really loved it! I was left with some burning questions at the end, so I'm hoping the second installment won't take too long!

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I enjoyed how this story is told, we go from the past to the present with a thousand years of distance between one chapter and another and that has been super entertaining for me to read. This book is a great adventure with very strong female characters and that’s great, but at the same time I think it’s unnecessarily long and can become heavy at times. I don’t madly in love with this book as other people are, but I do think that the idea is very good and creative

The story follows Rielle and Eliana two independent and strong young women, separated by centuries of distance, who have the power to save their world or destroy it.
Rielle sees his best friend in danger and doesn’t hesitate to help him, but in the process she exposes her ability to control the seven types of elemental magic. The only people who should be able to control such power are a pair of prophesied queens: a Queen of Light and a Queen of Blood. To prove that she’s the Sun Queen, Reille will have to test her magic through different types of tests and if she can’t control it, she’ll be executed.
A thousand years later the story of Rielle is a mere fairy tale for Eliana, when the Undying Empire conquered her kingdom, she decides to dedicate her life to violence to keep her family alive. Until one day her mother disappears along with other women in the city and to find her she joins a rebel captain on a dangerous mission and discovers that the evil in the heart of the empire is more terrible than she ever imagined …
The stories of both girls will cross and the incredible connections between them will determine the destiny of the world

The story sounds without doubt incredible, right?! I think that although it has many magic aspects that we see quite often in fantasy, it’s still a unique and original idea. I think that everything is very well thought out on by author from the magical aspect to the connections between one time and another. I’m not used to reading a format in which we read the story of the main characters a thousand years apart from each other, that was something really new for me, but even so it worked and ended up being one of my favorite aspects of the book. On the other hand I think that at the beginning it’s somewhat difficult to keep the rhythm between one chapter and another, remember everything that is happening and the names and all that stuffs, so it can be a bit overwhelming but once you continue it becomes easier to move forward in the story.

I’m a bit surprised by the sexual content of the book, I think that to be Young Adult it can be a bit excessive, even when the main characters are between 19 and 20 years old. So I want to warn you in case this is something problematic for you. Personally the sexual content is not a problem for me if it’s well managed, although I must admit that in this book I couldn’t help but feel how all the characters are quite sexualized, maybe too much

I’m not sure how I feel about the girls, there were times when I loved Eliana and then she did something that I didn’t like and then I loved Rielle but then something happened and my thoughts changed, I know it sounds very confusing but it’s real lol.
I think they’re very complex , intense and above all very dramatic characters. You can’t stop reading about them, but at the same time you feel that you don’t agree with their personal attitudes and decisions since most of the time they’re both very impulsive, you know?. I think both characters were built with the intention that been controversial and that although they can be unlikeable at times even then you can’t stop reading about them.
Now that I have finished the book I think that I definitely don’t have a favorite, although I enjoy a little more of Eliana’s point of view, I couldn’t fully commit myself to anyone

In summary, the most interesting about Rielle is her connection with magic and watching her learn and interact with her mentor was something that I enjoyed a lot. The most interesting of Eliana, on the other hand, is that undoubtedly is the protagonist of the best action scenes and her chapters have a mystery/intrigue aura that make it very addictive to read

The first pages of this book are pure fire and they hooked me completely with the plot, it’s an incredible way to start with a book, I think it was so successful that I can’t stop mentioning it

I want to talk a little about the bisexual rep in the book that everyone has been talking about.
Personally I feel that it wasn’t explored in a very deep way, which I would have loved to see, since It’s not common for a main character in fantasy to be bisexual. I think the subject is mentioned at some point but there is not much happening, so I want you to know that if you’re looking for a strong bi representation in this book I don’t think you really get one

I think it’s a pity that the author has made this book so long, I know we all love a hugh book if the story is extensive and needs a great development, but personally I don’t think this book needs 500 pages, I think it would have worked better if was shorter because the plot is undoubtedly catchy, but there are scenes that really are no more than filling and make the book heavy and boring and I really don’t think that a story so well thought out deserve that, you know?

Finally the end of the story is very good, I enjoyed the last chapters and the revelation was very ingenious, I didn’t expect it at all and I loved that.

After all this I still recommend the book if you like dual points of views, if you enjoy strong and independent female characters and especially if you like action and magic. I think that although I had some obvious problems with it, I think that most of them are very personal and maybe they don’t prevent you from enjoying it. I can’t stop mentioning that it’s a very long book so if you plan to read it you have to know that you have a long way to go and you’ll have to make time for it

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I'm going to leave off a rating on Goodreads, because I didn't finish the book. I got about 60% on my eARC and I just . . . have no interest in continuing.

Though this review accurately sums up my feelings: https://www.goodreads.com/review/show/2242021127?book_show_action=false&from_review_page=1

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The jumping back and forth in time and POVs made it very difficult for me to follow. I'd get lost after having stopped reading and trying to pick it back up again. Storyline seemed interesting with strong female protagonists, just wish I could've finished it.

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I want to thank Netgalley and the publisher for sending an ARC.

DNF 63%

I really wanted to liked this book. It had a great premise, "two fiercely independent young women, centuries apart, who hold the power to save their world....or doom it." It started strong, but I was just bored through the whole book. The two main characters were not interesting and I didn't care what happened to them. I really tried to finish this book and tried to force myself to read it to the end because I got an ARC, but I realized that it wouldn't change my opinion. I might try to finish, but I wanted to write my review now and move on to other ARC that I have received from NetGalley that I am actually looking forward to reading. Reading this book just became a chore and reading should never feel like a chore.

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With all the hype I saw for this title, I will admit to wanting a little bit more. Hence four stars.

This story was great! I enjoyed the evolution of characters (while some were a bit static or archetypal, I still feel the growth of others overshadowed this) and overall plot. The pacing was good and can definitely keep the readers involved.

As a high school librarian, some of the more explicit parts I could see being a concern with some families, but at the high school level I would still feel safe having this on the shelves.

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♥I got an ARC from the publisher through NetGalley and this is my honest uninfluenced review♥

So, this is The book of the year™, right? Right? Oh well. Right. Definitely right.

Rating: 7 of 7; 5 of 5; 9 of 10

Here's what's happening. We have a prologue. This prologue isn't actually a prologue, is a flashforward to part one and a flashback to part two.
Rielle is this good-savior-queen-turned-dark-murder-queen and she gives birth to her daughter. Then, she asked this little boy - a friend's son, that actually hates her - to save the baby. So, we ended with an 8yo boy trying to save this born-in-the-last-minute-baby. Then something goes wrong (shocking, right?)
Back to part one, dear Rielle - who spent years hiding what she did and what she can do - just outed her powers in the front of the whole kingdom trying to save the king-to-be, who's also her friend. and the love of her life. Then King's counsel decides she has to perform 7 trials to prove that she'll be the Sun Queen, not the Blood bad Queen (which we literally know she turned out to be)
Flash forwarding, Eliana is a bounty hunter that basically kills rebels. And now she has to work with the rebels' second in command. Not awkward at all. Eventually, she'll learn about her heritage (which one we should know, but since I'm a terrible reader, I didn't get it) and she has to deal with her powers - powers that she always dismissed as deadly good lucky, or at least that's the lie she tells herself.

Positives: two words: plot twist - honest to god, there were so many plot twists in this book, even if you realise all the things the book tells you (which I didn't, so I had even more plot twists to enjoy) and oh Lud's plot twist isn't something one can see coming, that much I'm sure. I love all the main characters. Rielle, Audric, Lud, Eliana, Navi, Simon, Remy. Not you, dear Corien, you can just die, please? But great character anyway.

Ending: I thought Eliana's ending was pretty good, it fitted the way the history was going on and I totally bought her character development. Now, about Rielle's ending, I was left with the feeling that it could be not exactly better, but better tied up. I felt like there was something else that should be like the end™, like I was kind of expecting something bigger happen - which is preposterous tbh

Downsides: I personally thought the world kind of confusing. No, not exactly confusing, but I couldn't remember everything, so it was more like I didn't get all the world building. Which honestly, can't be an actual complaining cause it wasn't that bad, it was more like idk I was ok without it, what I honestly think that would annoy like everyone else.

Side note: [sligthly spoiler] (view spoiler) I was afraid I would hate this book cause you know eventually we hear people talking about some books and when we pick it to read we're disappointed but very fortunately to me it's not the case - and since I ran away of things like 'this character is like that and that and i loved/hated it' so i came utterly blind and I did enjoy it.

Tags: ya, bisexual, bisexuality, young adult, ya, new adult, na, magic building, magic, elements elementals,

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This was my first book from Claire Legrand and I must say, I am not disappointed. Furyborn is inntricately plotted, well written, fantasy that will keep your attention from begging to end. This is a series that is definitely worth investing time on!

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At first when reading this book I was confused with many aspects of the world, the characters, the plot, and other parts. As I read further it began to make sense and the pieces started coming together. It took until about the half way point in the book before I was able to pin point what the major plot of the novel was.

The best way to describe this story arc is, nothing happens, something happens, major something, something, another thing, major something, the end. The whole book really took place in the later half of the novel. In finishing the novel I don’t remember much of what happened at the beginning because it did not effect the rest of the plot in the way one might believe.

For a first novel in a new series at lot is not explained. I do not want to mention anything specific but know going into this, some if not many things are not going to make any sense and will have no explanation in the book. I hope that the explanations are to come later on in the series.

Over all I am giving this book 3.75 out of 5 stars. I do wish to continue the series as it comes out.

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From the summary, I had high hopes for Claire Legrand and her new novel.
But we'll get to that.....

First and foremost, thank you to Net Galley and the publisher for providing an ARC in exchange for an honest review.

Secondly, I was so pumped for this book!! So excited and giddy~ The description sounded amazing and I was excited to read something being marketed as a 'Bi' positive book.

This story follows two characters that have a time difference of... 1000 years.
We have Rielle Dardenne, who risked quite a bit for love, which I respect fully cuz he was about to get owned hard. Then we have Eliana Ferracora who is living in a rough world with nothing but tales of the great Rielle.

Furyborn hits mid ground for me.



Let me start with what I loved~ I ADORED the premise, the suspenseful intrigue, and holy moly that prologue. The Prologue was SO GOOD. I was hooked after reading it, insinuating angelic wars and corrupt government. It had my favorites all over it.

And then we hit Chapter One.

I was slightly irked by the time jumps but at first I was game. Then Chapter Two time jumps again and we do that every other chapter. I'm not saying the stories there weren't interesting. HOWEVER, when reflecting back to the prologue - I wasn't involved. I knew what happened with Rielle (I mean the prologue deals with her....) and Eliana's story was less than gripping.

I felt Eliana was almost faking it to make it? However, when you're introduced to her, she's supposed to already be this awesome bad-@$$ woman. It was a little off putting. Rielle was shown more as possibly cruel in the beginning but then she's super self absorbed.

I had also heard this may be a "Bi' positive book. Buuuuut these are foot notes (if at all).....and I would say mainly for Rielle's character as Eliana's mentions women, but I wouldn't say in away way signaling she's bi... more of sex is used for her role.



I powered through the book. It was hard, the pacing is not excellent, but I don't think it was bad. The world here is ripe for development. A lot is left hanging for me. The magic system especially!! Claire Legrand has so much to work with here and I truly hope she builds on it. I wouldn't say the book was terrible but it didn't wow me.

Overall, the world here could be so much more developed. I'm not sure if Claire Legrand is saving that for book two tho? I will probably wait to see how reviews sound for book two before reading it.

Overall Rating: 3 Stars
Plot: 4 Stars
Character Development: 2 Stars
Dialogue: 3 Stars
Writing: 3 Stars
I recommend this to anyone that likes YA fantasy and doesn't mind a slow build. It will get you there, it just takes a bit longer than most.

Happy Reading!!

~Ash

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Rielle Dardenne has hidden her powers since childhood. She is unusual as most people have only one power and need a focus to use it while Rielle doesn’t. She grows up playing with her best friends who are Princ Audric and Lu (her nickname). When Rielle saves Prince Audric by using her powers, she is to be tested by the king to see if she is to be the fabled Sun Queen or Blood Queen. When Rielle has a baby girl, she has the baby taken by a trusted friend who travels with the baby 1,000 years in the future. Her name is Eliana Ferracora. She has become famous as the asasin for the “undying empire.” She does this work to keep her family safe. He doesn’t know that her family - parents and brother Remy. When she comes home after a job, she finds her mother has been taken like so many other women. She decides to join the rebels to get help to find her mother. Will she find her mother? There is much more to this story but I don’t wish to spoil the story for you.

What an imagination, this author has! The story is addictive in that I didn’t want to stop reading it. It has two women heroes who stand on their own feet even when put in unbelievable situations that are so deadly, it’s heart-stopping. There are mythical beings, adventure and action that I wondered how she thought of, but m glad she did. The chapters alternate between the two women which at times I wanted to say wait - I need more of the chapter I just finished! I can’t wait for the next book to come out!

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Okay, so I'm going to look at this from two perspectives. First I want to look at this book as a librarian, and then as a reader.
First as a librarian: I could easily see many of the kids at my school loving this book. I can particularly picture some of my 6-10th grade girls adoring it. It has everything they like, strong heroines, magic powers and dreamy (and evil) boys. And therein lies the the problem. While I can easily see these girls loving this book, I'm not sure how comfortable I would feel recommending it to anyone below 10th grade, as there are several rather explicit sex scenes. I know that many of books that my students read and watch contain such scenes but I never feel fully comfortable recommending them.
That being said, since I know that many students would enjoy it, I will be recommending that it be purchased, but also that it be marked as KS4+ (9th grade and up only).
Second as a reader: I both liked and disliked this book. It was a fairly engrossing read, so I wasn't to tempted to put it aside in favor of another book. However, I did feel that the book was rather disjointed. The two parallel plotlines did not weave together particularly well, and at times it felt like two different books instead of one book. There were some intriguing plot points touched on in both stories, but I felt like very little of it was truly fleshed out. Still, it piqued my interest enough that I'll definitely pick up the next book when it comes out.

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Furyborn portrays an interesting fantasy world. The book has two strong female protagonists, years apart from each other. Their stores are told intercalated, each chapter focuses on either Rielle or Eliana. While I think the whole fantastic world created by the author is fascinating, and the trials Rielle faces are particularly interesting, I struggled a little bit in the middle of the book. But I managed to finish it, and would be interested in reading more stories in the same fantasy world. At the end of the book, there are some cheat sheets that help understand better the Gods, trials, and a little bit more of the universe portrayed in the book. They are so helpful, I wish I knew those were there before I started reading the book!

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The one question that kept spinning around in my mind as I read Furyborn is “why should I care?” I didn’t like the characters, the story almost put me to sleep, the stakes were never high enough to get my blood pumping, and the sex scenes made me laugh (not in a good way). I dislike giving one star but there was literally nothing I enjoyed about this book.

It's just too long, poorly-paced and oh so very boring. I feel like the author tried to channel Throne of Glass, which is also too long, poorly-paced and occasionally boring, but it still manages to somehow keep me interested. I need to break my notes down into points to try to make sense of them.

➽ Two perspectives. 1,000 years apart.
I'm not sure if I found it jarring and confusing because the book jumped quickly from one perspective to the next, not allowing me enough time to connect with either Rielle or Eliana, or if I found it jarring and confusing because these two different perspectives were 1,000 years apart, though the voices remained virtually identical and very little had seemed to change in that millennium.

If you compare it to our world, 1,000 years ago our world looked a little something like Game of Thrones but with disappointingly fewer dragons - how could so little have changed in that time frame in the novel? I sometimes couldn't even remember whose chapter I was on.

➽ A little less action, a little more conversation. Please.
Okay, that's decidedly less catchy. But I feel like this is a book of mindless action scene after mindless action scene. It lacked all the other things that give a story some substance-- complex characterization and relationships, world-building, compelling plot. It is 500+ pages of almost constant action and it draaaagggs. If I don't care about the characters or story, I'm just not going to care about the action.

➽ Bland characters.
You know what’s worse than a Mary Sue heroine? TWO Mary Sue heroines. Rielle is deliberately made to sound oh so baaaddd and uber-powerful but I just found her uninteresting. I think the author wanted her to be some kind of complex anti-heroine but instead she just rubbed me the wrong way with her all-powerful super specialness.

Eliana is pretty much the same. Super special cardboard cutout badass who is known as "the Dread of Orline.”

➽ What is the plot exactly?
I found it confusing to follow at times. I know what happened, but I really struggled to get a sense of what I should be concerned about, want to know, or root for, as I read. Rielle's chapters offered very little tension to me, even though I usually enjoy books with magical trials. Perhaps it was because she was so special that it never occurred to me that she might fail.

And Eliana's chapters were full of a lot of action but, again, I found it so dry and unexciting. It all felt like yet another forgettable YA fantasy bogged down by a bland romance and mindless action scenes.

➽ Romance, sex and bi rep(?)
It's just weird, honestly. Sex-positivity is great, the normalizing of masturbation is great, but these characters often act like sex is the most important thing in their world. I felt like all Rielle cared about was banging Audric the bland. I also don’t feel like it always was sex-positive, especially as Eliana seems to use sex as a form of manipulation.

The sex scenes themselves are pretty nauseating and overwritten, with the earth shaking and mist rising (no, seriously) à la Sarah J. Maas.

I don't know about you, but I was eager to read this for the bi rep. I've even heard this being touted as a "bi fantasy" which, having read the book, is a huge stretch. I'm gonna be honest and say I actually missed it the first time and had to go skimming back through the book to find it. The bi rep in this book is like two casual mentions of the MCs having been with women sexually. That's it. Great.

➽ To conclude...
I was mostly just bored. I think the book has a great premise, but that is by far the best thing about it. There was so much talk of angel wars and fantasy politics and deadly trials, but all that got lost somewhere under everything I didn’t give a crap about.

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I really enjoyed Furyborn and although it is most certainly a YA fantasy, it also has some elements of science fiction as well. I feel like I have read quite a few YA fantasy books lately that revolve around magic, but I did like this story and moves along at a pretty fast pace, blending the above mentioned genres. There are two different stories going on throughout the book focusing on two different main characters, Rielle and Eiana, yet the stories take place a thousand years apart.

I really enjoyed the prologue (no spoilers) that explains a few things about the duel story line right from the beginning. The book definitely starts out filled with action and the plot moves like that throughout the book. I have to say, there were a few story lines and things that happened that seemed a bit familiar, actually quite familiar, from one of my favorite series. But every reader can decide what they think about that on their own. Overall, it is a certainly a fast-paced and action packed YA fantasy. The author did a good job with the world building and overall I enjoyed it and look forward to reading the sequel.

Thank you to the publisher, Sourcebooks Fire, for sending me an ARC of this book.

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This is a solid fantasy title. The combination of realism and fantasy aspects is well combined. I'm excited for the next installment.

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This has now made me a fan of Claire Legrand. For life. I love a bad ass heroine. Or two. I love a good healthy dose of fantasy mixed in. This has all of that. This has everything. I was blown away! 5/5

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Furyborn is actually worth the hype! The writing is lush, the characters developed and the plot engaging and fast paced!

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Unfortunately this will be a DNF. I find the writing choppy and hard to follow and can't really get into the too-abrupt beginning. I liked the premise and the cover, but this book is sadly is not for me.

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I received a digital ARC from Netgalley and the publisher in exchange for an honest review.

I like to think that I'm able to find a book somewhat good, even if the general consensus is terrible. I have very few DNFs and less-than-3 starred reads. Furyborn is an unfortunate addition to the list. It was difficult to consume after the first chapter and it almost became a DNF from that point. But I tried, I really did. I am giving it two stars for the beautiful cover, the prologue, and the chapter heads.

I really wanted to love this book. It was one of my most anticipated reads of 2018. But I really struggled to make it to the finish line. To be honest, I was running right past the hurdles in desperation to finish. If I had to describe it in three words: bulky, boring, bland - you get the gist.

It started out strong. Incredibly gripping. It was well-paced, suspenseful, so full of hope for the rest of the story. But by the end of it, the entire plot was predictable. You find out what Simon can do, who comes next, etc, etc, etc. And you just know.

The rest felt like I was eating a block of paper and my mouth and brain absolutely could not, would not digest it. Probably because you're kinda not meant to eat paper. There were a lot of unnecessary scenes and paragraphs throughout. Rielle's chapters were vaguely interesting to begin with, but it all became painfully repetitive. I liked her POV better than Eliana's, though. Eliana was too trope-y and her personality did not win me over. Mostly because she kinda didn't have one. I liked her spunk at the start, however, so I'll give her that. But that was it. She was meant to be this badass but I found her ridiculous.
Don't even get me started on the romance in this book. Please don't.

The world building was basically non-existent. Most of it is all surface information that didn't have any information to add substance it it. I had no idea why the angels were a thing, for one. The magic: where and what and how even? Just so, so many things. So many things.

Time-consuming and hugely disappointing, this is definitely not one of my favourite reads of 2018. I managed to make it through the whole book, just barely, so I'll give myself a pat on the back for perseverance. It's generally just a very difficult book to consume. It definitely had potential and I am disappointed that it didn't reach any of it. Oh well.

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