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I love the enemies-to-lovers troupe, slow burn, and pirate-y adventures and this is kinda that, but not. Idk, maybe it's me, but I just wanted more from it. My students still check it out, so for me, that's a win.
Plot
The plot was okay, but did drag a bit through the second half. Not bad, but it could have moved along faster. I like that there was a clear cut mission for both Ira and Elian and it wasn't just all over the place, which I have read too much lately. Of course, Lira's mission did shift by the end of the book to a new focus, but her goal was the same. I love sea adventures, so I wish there had been more sea/underwater scenes. I think Keto could have been utilized in the story more, even if the main storyline was on the surface.
Characters
Lira went through a pretty big shift through the story. She went from tough and dedicated to her mother and kingdom to tough and dedicated to herself and her kingdom. Sure, Elian was a big part of that, but it was clear she wanted to escape her mother's rule. I really like that she stayed loyal at the end to Keto and didn't abandon them to run off with a prince. Elian was an okay character for me. There was nothing really wrong with him, but he wasn't that memorable for me either. I suppose it was pretty cool that he wanted to do the siren hunter/pirate thing, but really he came off as a bland prince.
Really interesting concept and just the right amount of fanservice cliches (I mean that in the most positive way possible!) It was a unique character driven story that I have definitely already recommended.
I like that it took the Little Mermaid story and flipped it on its head. She’s a badass siren chick who can take care of herself. He’s more than a vanilla, generic prince character. He’s ruthless. It seems like a good match. Except I couldn’t understand how they could so easily move past the fact that they have murdered a ton of each others’ people.I would have been ok with them crossing paths, going on this adventure, and not falling for each other. YA fantasy doesn’t always have to end in a relationship. I think the story would have been stronger if that hadn’t been the focus!
I ended up listening to this one on audio shortly after it released and I was enthralled!! I loved this story and the characters and had a hard time not listening to it and so found excuses to drive around or take the long way home to hear more of the story. This book was so much fun and my biggest complaint is that it ended and that it was a standalone title.
This is a bit of a unique retelling of the Little Mermaid-- and it was interesting, but it just didn't hook me enough. I think fans of the more dark fairy tales might enjoy it more, and I may revisit it in the future. If you like fairy tale retellings, give it a try.
I'm honestly surprised this was the first retelling of The Little Mermaid to come at the story from this angle—a kind of dark romance of pirates, monsters, and vengeance. I've already recommended it to multiple people I know who have a real connection with the Christian Andersen and Disney versions. You may also know people who would love this book at the intersection of The Little Memaid/Pirates of the Caribbean/The Night Before Christmas—it seems like a strangely common corner to end up on.
I'm honestly sad it took me so long to work through my ARCs to get around to reading To Kill a Kingdom because this book (cue unable to put into words how much this book blew me away) uhg so so so so good. Enemies to lovers is one of my all time favorite trope and this book had great fantasy and mythological elements to keep everything super interesting. Definitely recommend to anyone looking for a great escape from reality.
Overall I liked this book, but it was fairly predictable, and I felt like it could have been a little longer to develop the plot and relationships a bit better and deeper. This just felt like a story that I’ve read a good number of times before.
Look, that doesn’t mean that I didn’t enjoy my reading experience. Like I said, this was a good book, and I read it fairly quickly. It just took me a couple reading sessions to finish. So it’s always a plus when I can finish a book in just a couple of days.
The relationship between Lira and Elian just happened a bit too quickly and without too much development so it would be more realistic, a phrase that seems a bit odd for a fantasy book, but good relationships form from time spent together and conversation together, and shared experiences. I would have liked to experience more of those moments with the main duo.
I thought the world was interesting and there was just enough world-building to make me intrigued. I would love to know more about each of the countries. Perhaps there will be more books set in this world in the future. I don’t know.
I’m glad I read this book, even if it isn’t going to make one of my favorites lists.
Rating: 3 to 3.5 stars. I enjoyed this book well enough. The author definitely hits some points of brutality and darkness that had me legitimately wary of this protagonist, and I quite liked that. As for the prince, he is a likable character, but as it is with many YA books, this book dips into mediocrity once the romance starts to creep in. Enemies to lovers tropes are great when done subtly and gradually, but this trope becomes an epic fail when familiar paths are taken to reach that point. An overall fun read, but nothing particularly special.
Mermaids? Enemies to Lovers? Yes and yes. What's not to like? Just lovely. Great dark teen fantasy novel perfect for fans of Cassandra Clare.
A fun new take on fantastical creatures living beneath the ocean's surface. This story had excellent world building and a exciting cast of characters. My greatest fear going into reading this book is that I would be reading a pirate falls for mermaid romance book and wow was it so so so much more. The only downside to this book was that it's a standalone. I would have been here ready to read book two it had been a series!
This was one of those YA books that I do not think is for everyone. There's nothing wrong with it, and it's not a bad book by any means, but I think the audience for this book is going to be very minimal. There are books in the YA world that I would recommend to anyone at any age with no hesitations, but this is not one of them. It was quite tropy and typical YA, but also really fun and enjoyable.
I really enjoyed the plot, characters, world building, and setting. I enjoyed the sea creature and pirate aspects of the book, and wish both of these topics were explored more in novels. Plus, I'm a sucker for a fairy tale retelling.
Much like modern pirate movies that aren’t in the Pirates of the Caribbean series, siren books aren’t that common. The last one I read was a hot garbage fire and made me more than a little hesitant to check out To Kill a Kingdom, but c’mon! The collision of a siren-hunting prince and a prince-hunting siren sounds really, really cool. I don’t entirely regret reading the book, but it’s left me feeling a little bit whelmed.
You’re about to read a bunch of criticisms of To Kill a Kingdom, but I promise you I didn’t despise the novel. It’s just one of those unfortunate books where all the things you like are followed by the words “but unremarkable.” Elian is a fun character and co-narrator–but unremarkable. What little we get to see of this apparently large world is cool–but unremarkable. Everything that this novel does right does so only at a satisfactory level, never really going beyond that point to become something you’ll remember.
Part of that may lie in how lifeless the book feels. Of course things are happening and the characters are going places, but it’s not the kind of narrative journey you get swept up in. It was a bit like reading an IKEA instruction manual and seeing that X piece connects to Y in the correct assembly of your fun new piece of furniture. Like plugging the numbers in front of you into the mathematical formula to get the correct answer.
And this isn’t me being An Old who’s outgrown YA books. I certainly didn’t feel that way about the other YA books I read just before To Kill a Kingdom!
Lira’s character arc is a bit weak since she’s a siren who has already experienced human emotions that her mother the Sea Queen thinks are unbecoming of a true siren. Had Lira been learning humanity entirely akin to Anya in Buffy the Vampire Slayer, I might have been more invested in her. She never gives much thought to her mother’s winter solstice deadline either despite her desire to remain a siren, which robs her conflict of immediacy. I wasn’t feeling her romance with Elian either. Oh, how I would have loved their relationship if it had just remained platonic!
There’s one more thing I can appreciate, at least: the siren’s song works regardless of the target’s gender or sexual identity, unlike that other siren book I read and its determination to remain heteronormative. Since the siren song here lures in victims with a falsified feeling of love, I’m curious how their song might affect an aromantic or asexual person. Alas, my question goes unanswered.
Do you remember how pre-Pirates of the Caribbean, pirate movies were more often painful belly flops like Cutthroat Island than they were hits? Even the beloved, commercially successful Hook was considered a financial disappointment because it “only” made the studio a profit of $50 million. (I don’t think even the people in Hollywood understand Hollywood math.)
Well, maybe that’s me and YA books with sirens. It’ll change the game when one that succeeds with me comes around, but the ones I keep reading flop for me as a reader.
A dark retelling of The Little Mermaid, To Kill a Kingdom explores the question - What if Ariel was a killer and Eric was one of her greatest threats?
I've been dying to read To Kill a Kingdom for ages. I always enjoy retellings and when an author can put such a great dark twist on the Disney version we all know and love it's always a good time.
Princess Lira is the parallel version of Ariel who's version of treasure is hearts buried in sand. She takes royal hearts like her mother did for her as a child. These hearts are meant to bring power, prestige, and a way to get revenge on humans. By taking royal princes hearts, she is taking away the future of their kingdom's. One man will not let that happen.
Elian is the parallel version of Eric who hates being tied down to his kingdom, is a pirate, and the best siren killer in all the seas. One siren that has eluded him is the fiery, Prince's Bane, who he has sworn to kill. Unbeknownst he's about to get his chance.
The introduction of Lira is a pure masterpiece. She's not a weak, terrifying looking mermaid obsessed with becoming human. She is a violent princess who will do anything to steady her mother's wrath and prove that she is a worthy successor, but she makes a mistake that changes her life forever. As a result, she is transformed into a human and must find a way to get out of her situation with the help of one of her greatest enemies.
“I reach out my hand to pull her up, and the look Lira gives me is nothing short of poisonous. “Do you want me to chop it off?” she asks. I keep my hand hovering in the space between us. “Not particularly.” “Then get it out of my face.”
Lira is the best part of this book. I absolutely love this warrior princess. Not only is she a warrior but she has a kind side too that you see take shape mainly with her bond with her cousin. Her motives that drive her are compelling. She faces many new emotions when she becomes human. I enjoyed her progression as a character and insights to her past. Her aggressiveness, wit, and the honest way in which she spoke was well placed but also balanced out by her more protective, kind gestures.
“Technically, I’m a murderer, but I like to think that’s one of my better qualities.”
Elian is a bit less compelling but he is still interesting. I like how he's a siren killer and he is doing it all to protect not only his kingdom but every kingdom across the land. He has a selfless quality that gets him in a lot of trouble but it is a commendable one. He's mostly an take action type of guy who sometimes thinks things through. I never understood why he trusted Lira so easily. There was an obvious red flag, multiple ones really, and yet he still chose to trust her. Is she that beautiful or is he that reckless?
One of the other things that further bothered me because of this almost immediate trust of Lira was Lira and Elian's banter in the beginning. It felt too forced. Again, I couldn't wrap my head around how much Elian trusted her right away so their banter in the beginning so this portion of the story I quickly read through. I did enjoy their relationship once a certain event occurred and was grateful after the fact because now I could enjoy their budding relationship.
I didn't care for the side characters. There were a few crew members that were friends of Elian that were put there for readers to try to care for but I just didn't feel it. They were okay at times. Frankly, Elian could have treated his best friend better. He could be annoying with the way he dismissed his friends concerns. I would be that friend in the situation though so that's why I was probably bothered by it so much. If something is the least bit shady, skeptical me will continually warn you and try to get you out of the situation.
“Love is a word we scarcely hear in the ocean. It exists only in my song and on the lips of the princes I’ve killed. And I have never heard it from my mother’s mouth.”
The Sea Queen was the most perfect, vile villain ever. She did not care for her daughter whatsoever. It's nice to have a villain so clear cut evil. It makes scenes with them all the more fun.
The writing, although I didn't enjoy the immediate trust and some of Elian's scenes, was fantastic. This is the retelling I never knew I wanted but needed. This is a debut novel as well so I am highly impressed with Christo. I can't believe she is already coming out with a book next year called Into the Crooked Place. I can't wait to read more of this author's work in the future. It'll be nice to see her progression as a writer.
4.5 Stars!
Full Disclosure: I received this book from Netgalley in exchange for an honest review. Thanks, Macmillan!
TW: Abusive mother - mostly emotional abuse but a bit of physical
One of the reasons that I wanted to read To Kill a Kingdom, was because it’s a standalone. My experience with ongoing series is that I read the first book, love it, and then forget the entire plot in the year it takes for the second book to come out. I then either reread the first book or just plain give up. (usually the latter because I’m lazy). Anyway, that wasn’t a problem with To Kill a Kingdom; the story is perfectly contained in one engaging book instead of being spread out to a poorly-paced trilogy.
To Kill a Kingdom is being advertised as a Little Mermaid retelling. It is if you’d allow for Ariel to be a prince-hunting siren named Lira set on stealing a certain siren-hunting prince’s heart -- literally, of course. Obviously, their relationship transitions from enemies to allies to lovers as relationships tend to with such a premise. I love this trope to pieces and it was especially good here. (Tangent: I feel as if every romance on a ship has a hate-to-love romance. And the hero always ends up calling the heroine a hellcat. Am I wrong?)
To Kill a Kingdom has been described as “dark,” but I don’t think it’s due to the fact that Lira is a frequent killer. Rather, I think the darkness is derived from the toxic dynamic between Lira and her mother. Even though her mother continually verbally abuses her no matter how hard Lira tries to please her, Lira tries to be the perfect daughter in the hopes of gaining a modicum her approval. This sad element brings a dose of reality to an otherwise fun fantasy story.
To Kill a Kingdom is an exciting enemies-to-lovers story tinged with darkness. I’m excited to read whatever Alexandra Christo writes next!
I loved this Little Mermaid retelling. Christo creates a ruthless world where nothing is as it seems. Lira is an amazing MC and she is nothing as she seems. She surprised me throughout the novel with her choices and realizations. Elias was a swoonworthy prince who wanted to be anything but a prince. I loved the way the two interacted and the way they changed each other.
The only thing I wanted out of this book was a little more world-building in the kingdoms that they visited on their journey for the crystal. We're dropped into 2 (maybe 3?) of the 100 kingdoms and I was a little jarred when it happened. I just wanted a little more description of the people there and why they belonged to the kingdoms they did.
The characters were fleshed out extremely well and I loved all of them. The side characters brought life to the novel and made Elias' crew meet their reputation. The sirens and the creatures of the sea were utterly terrifying. I loved that they weren't the beautiful and fun mermaids we've come to know. They're ruthless and murderous.
Overall, I really enjoyed this retelling and if you want a more horror like spin on our favorite sea creatures, pick this one up.
I didn't quite know what to expect from this book, but I ended up really enjoying it. The cover led me to believe there would be more octopus creatures than there actually were-the sirens are more like mermaids and the mermaids are more creature-like. It's a good read and the world-building is enjoyable. For fans of the Little Mermaid, but this is quite different than the original tale-in a good way.
My Review: I really loved this at the start but as the story went on I found it turned to a pretty meh story. The romance was lack luster and well the dark and creepy aspect just wasn't enough to keep me reading. The best part about this story is the pirate prince. The plot of this one and how everything came about felt way to calculated for me. I wished I would have loved this one and I am very sad that it just didnt work out for me at all.
Do I Recommend this book? This one wasn't really slow but it felt like there was so much going on that nothing was really working. I would try this one from the library.
Go Into This One Knowing: Meh
ARC provided by publisher via NetGalley in exchange for an honest review
Omg this is like a twisted version of my favorite childhood movie The Little Mermaid and I need mmmmooooooorrrrrrreeeeee!!! I'm so not ready to let these characters go and I'm super happy for that sentiment as well as sad.
I was really getting into a slump of not really being able to focus on any book for a long period of time and the audio for this book had been sitting in my phone for ages. I finally downloaded it and listened. I wish I had sooner. This has got to be my ultimate favorite summer read of 2018. I was so absorbed into this world of oceans and sirens and pirates. It's all I could ever want and Elion as a pirate as well as a prince was a really nice touch. More raving about him later but I will start with the badass siren Lira.
Lira is pretty much a much crueler version of Ariel. She did not save princes, she took their hearts instead. Every heart for every birthday and each heart gave her immense power. She was the princes bane and she tried to keep that title but not just killing but acting like she was a ruthless, callous creature of the deep. But inside she was something different. She pretty much had the emotions of humanity before her mother even transformed her into a human. She cared for her cousin Kalia and tried her best to protect her from her mother's wrath. The Sea Queen, Lira's mother was as ruthless as one creature could get and she tried to groom Lira to be the same. But this whole time she refused to be another cruel queen to take the throne. I really liked that part of her but I also liked her more bad side that kept her emotions from getting the better of her as is what most female protagonists are won't to do. I can rave about her all day I really wish there was more characters like her.
I have to of course rave about the dashing prince who is more pirate than prince. His home was always the sea so he never wanted to settle down and become the Kind of Midas. It's a pretty unique background to a character I have yet to really encounter this in books so I liked it a lot. Since he really did not want to be a prince he also became more humbled and less conceited. He did not like the luxury of being a prince nor did he really know it. He was too busy spending time with his crew, sleeping on simple cots and eating whatever they could scrounge from the sea when they were not close to a port. Like I said with Lira there needs to be more male characters like Elion. Strong but compassionate who also has a deep respect for women.
Another quality of this book that made it so high rated for me was the delicious slow burn of a romance. Nothing is more glorious than a romance that slowly builds with the couple not spending half of the book make goo goo eyes at each other as well. Yes there was kissing and yes there was a lot of self-sacrificing but just the right amount. There was more hating and punching than really anything else and it was great. There was also the really nice happy ending to this story as well. Sade endings are not necessarily a bad thing but I always like a good happily ever after. Lira gets to be the Queen she always wanted to be and Elion gets to continue sailing the never ending seas. They also get to spend time together as well since Lira's magic can transform her back into a human as well as the fact that her kingdom is also open to everyone. It's so fluffy and sweet but had a good dose of gruesome and dark elements to it. I can't recommend this book enough y'all need to stop what you doing and go pick up a copy of this book or even better start listening to the audio version you won't be disappointed.