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3.75 stars--INFRACTION is the second instalment in Rachel Van Dyken’s contemporary, adult PLAYERS GAME sports, romance series focusing on the men and women of the professional football team and their cheerleaders The Bellevue Bucks. This is the Bucks tight-end Miller Quinton, and head cheerleader Kinsey Romonov’s story line. Miller and Kinsey were first introduced in book one FRATERNIZE wherein Miller was part of a love triangle (of sorts) featuring his life long best friend Emerson Rodner, and fellow player Grant Sanchez. INFRACTION can be read as a stand alone without any difficulty. Any important information from the previous story line is revealed where necessary.

Told from three first person points of view (Kinsey, Miller, Jax Romonov) INFRACTION follows the friends to lovers, fake romance trope between Bellevue Bucks head cheerleader Kinsey Romonov, and tight end Miller Quinton. Months earlier, following a weekend in Vegas with Miller Quinton, Kinsey found herself forcibly sent to Europe to escape the return of her abusive ex –boyfriend Anderson. Seven months later, Kinsey’s return to America is met with some devastating news that will all but destroy her immediate family. Not only does her father have cancer but her abusive ex-boyfriend is now a member of the Bellevue Bucks. Enter Miller Quinton, Kinsey’s friend, and her brother Jax’s teammate, and the man with whom Kinsey will fall in love. To avoid further conflict with Kinsey’s ex, her brother and ‘America’s quarterback’ Jax Romonov offers up a plan to protect the sister he has always loved-a fake dating scenario between Miller and Kinsey-a hands off relationship that, unbeknownst to Jax, began months before.

The attraction between Kinsey and Miller is immediate but an attraction that must be both played up and played down in order to keep the demons at bay, and Jax from discovering the truth about their past relationship. The $ex scenes are intimate and seductive without the use of over the top sexually graphic, language and text.

A side relationship is developing between Jax Romonov and Kinsey’s friend, fitness model and yoga instructor Harley. Harley is a fiercely independent and brutally honest woman who has caught the eye of ‘America’s Quarterback’, an over-protective alpha male where it concerns his younger sister. Pulled in too many directions Jax struggles with the emotional fall out of his father’s illness, potential threats to his sister, and the fake relationship that isn’t fake-at all.

INFRACTION is a story of family and friendship; secrets and betrayal; falling in love and letting go of the past. The cancer story line is emotional and heart breaking-a heart break that furthers Jax’s spiral out of control. The premise is emotional and sexy; the romance is passionate and fated; the characters are colorful and charismatic.

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5+ stars

If I could give this book 10 stars I would!
Infraction blew me away and I felt apart of the characters lives! They drew me in and wanted me to stay and I so would have!
I laughed, I cried, I loved this book wholeheartedly!
The characters, I can’t really find the words to express my feelings to be quite honest!
Quinton Miller, Kinsey, Jax, Sanchez, Em felt like old friends
This book was a real highlight for me! Beautiful words written that warmed my heart!! I’m really in awe at the words that were written!! Brilliant!!

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Having not read the first in this series, I did not feel lost at all only feeling that I need to read book 1 ASAP. I loved these characters! This book had me laughing and crying throughout. Miller is asked by his best friend and teammate Jax to fake date his little sister Kinsey. Jax trusts Miller not to touch his sister never realizing they already had a night together months ago. As Miller protects Kinsey from her ex can he protect their feelings and hearts from getting hurt. This book had great banter that made the sad moments bearable. We learn a lot in this book while enjoying Sanchez, Emerson, Jax and his distraction Harley courtesy of Kinsey. Can't wait for the next read!

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I love Rachel van Dyken and I usually devour her books but I skipped „Fraternize“ because of the triangle-vibe (I‘ll probably read it anyways someday but I have to be in the mood for such books ;) )
but I knew I wanted to read „Infraction“ immediately after reading the blurb.

Miller and Kinsey‘s story is sweet and tender and so enjoyable.
Typical Rachel book with loveable characters, funny banter and lots of swooning ♡

„Waffle, it‘s wrong to lie to your Chicken, you know that, right?“

And I loved the family dynamic, so heartwarming.
„He watches you, every movement. His hands aren‘t even at his side. He always seems like he‘s bracing for impact. I just don‘t know if he‘s waiting to run in the opposite direction, or into your arms.“

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This is the second game in the Players Game series. This book could easily be read on a stand alone basis, however, I would personally recommend reading Fraternize first to aid the reading enjoyment of this book.

This was another great read from RVD and I really enjoyed this one. The story grabbed me right from the start and it held me captive until the end. It was full of romance, there was an air of mystery running through it, full of humour and as always there was that one moment that just packed such an emotional punch and can I say that I love that RVD is getting a little sexier with her books without it being too much.

Infraction was a really enjoyable read with a fab story and wonderful characters. 4.5 stars from me and a definite recommendation

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Yay it is time for Miller's story and it is so good. A hot and tempting romance story about pretending to be someones boyfriend,even if that hot person is a sports star and a friend of your brothers. That ladies and gents only leads to serious sexual tension and emotions running high. But will either character survive the pit falls of pretending to be in a relationship if the emotions start to become more than pretend? You so need to read this book, and series, Miller is my fave so far from this series.

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This is the second book from the Players Game series and follows Miller and Kinsey (with older, protective, Big Brother Jax thrown in). Jax asks fellow teammate Miller to "fake date" his little sister and team cheerleader to help ward off other men. Unknowingly to Jax, Miller and Kinsey "hooked up" months before. This is the classic friend and little sister story, however the way Rachel writes the book it will have you laughing as well as crying. You get multiple points-of-view from the characters to help you fully become involved in the story. I very much recommend this book.

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Infraction by Rachel Van Dyken was one sweet, sexy and beautiful romance done right. Van Dyken truly captured the connection between Miller and Kinsey. Their chemistry was tangible and palpable but Miller is very well aware that they must keep their relationship a secret from Jax, who is Kinsey’s older brother. And so when Miller and Kinsey have to keep their relationship a secret, what happens when the truth is revealed?

Fun, sexy, heartwarming and had an emotional pull to keep readers entertained and drawn to RVD’s writing and characters. Infraction is an example of best-friends little sister romance done right with all the feels to keep you smiling and wanting more.

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ARC - I voluntarily offered to review this book with no obligations and my opinions are honest!
Can Miller really pull this off ?
Kinsey already had a little crush on Miller.
Now, Kinsey's brother had asked Miller to pretend to date Kinsey. As if !
He brother does not know that they already have a very steamy past history together.
The chemistry is there. ( You can see the sparks )
What will Kinsey + Miller do ?
Will they stop the pretend + really admit their feelings ?
Loved the storytelling + the characters!

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**4.5 Stars**

With a soft spot for Miller because of the first book, one could say I was very anxious for his story to play out and I was far from disappointed with the result. Infraction took the fake girlfriend trope and layered it with Miller and Kinsey’s tumultuous history, bringing with it a sizzling sexual tension and a deep sense of hurt and miscommunication from their past. No one could possibly resist these two pretending to be something they refuse to admit they want to be, least of all me, and it played out so wonderfully.

Having met Kinsey in the first book, there wasn’t an inkling of how much we didn’t know of her until you opened these pages. Her character came alive with each bit of information gleaned, and with it came an even deeper understanding of not just her but her effortless connection with Miller. The constant magnetic pull between them was palpable, and through it all there was this sense of an emotional pull that zinged between them unknowingly. Not only was it romantically satisfying (read: steamy), it was also heartwarming-ly filling, too. Infraction was an effortlessly enjoyable read with a love story that enthralled and delighted. It was fun, sexy, and the kind of story you read in one sitting.

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I adored Miller and Kinsey in Fraternize and was thrilled they would be featured in the second installment of Players Game. After the heartache Miller endured with not getting the girl, I wanted to see his chance at happiness. I liked Infraction but, it didn't evoke the emotions I usually experience with this author's work. I never truly felt the chemistry between Miller and Kinsey's romance.

The biggest issue is Jax's chapters and the secondary love story. It changed the flow of the book and distracted from Miller and Kinsey. These two deserved the full focus of readers, and Jax's over involvement seems to the the reason I didn't feel the connection of Kinsey and Miller's romance. Jax's storyline should have been omitted or saved for an additional book in the series. After knowing so much about Miller, I felt cheated in regards to Kinsey's past. Her story is compelling, but it felt rushed.

As with all RVD's books, I enjoyed the banter, witty dialogue, and supporting cast. It was fun seeing Sanchez and Em again too. I look forward to the next installment of the series. This wasn't an RVD fav, but I wouldn't discourage anyone from reading it.

Thank you to RVD for my advanced review copy.

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Infraction by Rachel Van Dyken is the second book in the Players Game Series. Every book can easily be read as a standalone, I recommend to read the books in order. Book one in the series, Fraternize is Emerson and Grant's story.
Infraction tells Miller and Kinsey's story. Quinton Miller is Emerson's ex and still a bit hung up on her. Kinsey is just like Emerson a cheerleader and her friend. She's also the sister of Jax, one of the pro football players. Sounds confusing? But isn't. I started reading and was sucked into the story real quick. Miller and Kensey share a past. And their chemistry is through the roof high. And when Jax suggests they should fake date both agree.
Infraction is full of twists and unexpected turns. The writing is great and I love the story and the characters. I could feel the characters emotions in the words. I give 5 stars and can't wait to read Jax and Harley's story

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OMG, I was so not prepared for the emotions in this book and I freaking LOVED it!! I have been looking forward to Miller and Kinsey’s story since Fraternize and it was fantastic.
I fell in love with Miller right from the start and my heart broke for him. I will admit, I really wanted Fraternize to end a different way but hey, we don’t always get what we want, right? But, OMG there is definitely some intense chemistry and crazy, powerful feelings between him and Kinsey that make me a true believer in their romance.
This book has it all – second chances, lust, love, romance, humor, devotion, friendship, heartache, loss, healing. I was completely wrapped up in the storyline and could not put the book down. It was definitely one of those don’t-mess-with-mom-while -she-is-reading moments for the entire book! I laughed, I cried, I mourned, and I loved right along with the amazing characters Rachel brought to life.
I also love that we get to see Jax find his HEA – two hot and steamy romances in one book – you CANNOT go wrong here! This is a must one-click and while you’re at it, make sure to pick up book one. Kudos to Rachel Van Dyken on an outstanding two book series!
**I requested and received an advanced copy, provided by NetGalley and the publisher, and I am voluntarily providing an honest review**

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Infraction is the second book in the Player’s Game. Two of my favorite tropes in romance novels are football books and brother’s best friend books. This story hit both those marks and did it so well. Infraction had all the secret love I yearn for along with a heartwarming story of how to grieve and love after and during a loss. While dealing with a heavy topic the book never got overly dramatic or angst, instead it delivered a fun story with a good dose of heart in the back story.

Infraction was a fun read that reminded me how much I love football books. Rachel Van Dyken did an excellent job of capturing the excitement of the game while developing a unique story. Another great installment into a series I am quickly getting hooked on.

~miranda

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Miller is the tight end for the Bellevue Bucks football team and he has just watched his best friend as well as the woman he believed that he belonged with end up with his teammate Sanchez. This turn of events led to an evening with his best friend’s sister Kinsey that he wants to make sure remains in Vegas.

Kinsey’s overprotective brother Jax has ensured that she has been out of the country for seven months so that she is far away from her abusive ex but with her father being ill she is back. She is a cheerleader for the team but she and Miller have been keeping their distance and pretending that the night in Vegas never happened but that is about to change.

With Anderson, Kinsey’s ex, trying out for the team Jax convinces Miller to pretend to date his sister so that Anderson doesn’t get anywhere near her again. Miller and Kinsey agree to a friends only relationship but is anyone willing to place a bet to see how long that will last?

Their journey is filled with heat and humor however It’s the emotions that this book draws from you that make it a must read. This is a great addition to the series and as a bonus you will also get to experience what happens when Harley enters Jax’s life which rather than distracting from the story only makes it better. I voluntarily reviewed an Advance Reader Copy of this book.

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Infraction

**received an arc in exchange for an honest review**

4⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

The Bucks are back and ready to take the year by storm again, but their is more in store for them than last time. Not only will Miller and Kins have to figure out their relationship, but Jax will be faced with his match. Rachel Van Dyken will keep you on your toes and cheering not only Miller on but Jax too!


After their explosive night together Quinton MIller thinks he has messed up and deicides to help Jax send his sister away, but is it the best decision?

Kinsey is back after being away for the summer and her world is falling apart. Her brother is overprotected like always, her dad is sick, her ex is on the same team as her bother and friends and she can’t forget her night with Miller. Even though that one night was amazing she is still upset that he help send her packing for the last few months, but when her brother comes up with an idea of them “fake dating” she can’t resist him.

Miller hasn’t forgotten his night with Kins but he knows Jax will kill him if he ever finds out and if he every touches Kins again. But when Jax gives him the okay to “fake date” his sister he feels like it’s his chance to make his move.

Miller and Kins can’t keep their hands off each other and being to walk a fine line between fake and real. But when the reality of what’s going on with KIns and Jax’s father becomes apparent it takes it toll. And when other secrets come forward it changes everything?

Can Miller and Kinsey count on each other? Or is Miller still running from the past? And is Kinsey ready to let him all the way in?

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Infraction is the second book in the Players Game series by the incredibly talented Rachel Van Dyken. Right before I read one of her books, I say to myself "She can't top the last one. No way. No how." And then she does! I really didn't think she could do it this time. Ok, I kinda knew she could. Infraction isn't just a football romance. It's a friends to lovers, forbidden story with lust, foreplay, humor, pain, sadness and loss. I laughed out loud and cried big fat sobbing tears. We know and love Quinton Miller and Kinsey Romanov from Fraternize. Miller is Em's best friend and Kinsey is Jax's sister.
I had a strong crush on Miller so I knew his story was going to be great. What I didn't realize was that we were also going to get Jax's story! He was so hard to read and I wasn't sure what was going on inside that sexy brain of his, but I love him. Hard. Miller and Kinsey shared a night together in Vegas and then she left town. Now she's back and neither of them stopped thinking about the other. There was passion and much more going on between them. When Jax wants them to fake date, they do it, but they both know it's a mistake. How can they pretend to be together when they both want to be together for real. But they can't because Jax will kill Miller. Or can they? Their attraction is too strong and they can't seem to stay away from each other. Fake kisses turn into real ones. Fake flirting becomes real and the real attraction takes over. Big time. When they are all faced with Kinsey's dad's illness, Miller has to face his past. He needs to move on and stop running. Kinsey needs him. They need each other. Will they be able to do real? Forever? Will Jax find his happily ever after too? I loved this story. So. Much. Every character. Every second. Every word. It's sexy, funny, sweet, sad and hopeful. I'm not ready to never see these guys again!

"One harmless dinner."
"It's not just one dinner."
"No, probably not."
"You're not harmless."
"Definitely not."

"Quinton Miller…best tight end with a tight end in the league."

"It may hurt, but it's good. Life is good."

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This is the second book in this author’s Players Game series. If you haven’t read Fraternize, I highly recommend reading it first. While this is a standalone book, the relationships between all the characters make more sense, and are richer, if you read book 1 (Fraternize) first.

Infraction picks up after Miller has slept with Jax’s sister, Kinsey, and helped send her off to Europe during the off-season. She’s hurt, of course, but comes home determined to not let it get to her. Determined to move on. But her emotionally abusive ex-boyfriend has made the team, and Jax asks Miller to fake date her to keep her “safe” from the ex’s attempts to get her back and/or hurt her. Miller agrees, and drama ensues!

There are a couple of plots going on during this book that make it all twisty and half romcom, half romantic drama. First, you have Kinsey and Miller’s history that isn’t quite history. He’s still hurt (more like hurt pride) about losing his best friend to… well, his other best friend. And he just doesn’t think a relationship is where he wants to go. But the chemistry with Kinsey is hard to deny. And hard to stay away from.

Then there’s the plot where Jax really sent Kinsey to Europe to keep her from finding out that their dad is sick. He has cancer. And the treatments have stopped working. Their dad is dying. When she comes home, Jax attempts to keep just how sick their dad really is from her. But she’s righteously furious when she finds out the 2 men she thought she could trust (Jax and Miller) have kept such a huge secret from her.

Both Miller and Kinsey do a lot of soul searching to figure out who they are now and who they want to be. They also have to figure out if they want to keep the fake dating ruse going or really give it all to a real relationship.

NICUnurse’s Rating: Someone once said that a book that won’t leave you, even after you’re read, “The End” is a 5 star read. So, I give this book 5 stars. Why? Because this one stayed with me. Like the emotions it drew out stayed with me for days. I could actually put myself in Kinsey’s shoes when it came to two things: 1. The ex-boyfriend and the emotional abuse and 2. Her feelings as she’s dealing with her dad’s illness and death. I’ve been in both situations and the feelings the author describes Kinsey having around these issues were spot on. I literally sobbed through several of the scenes about her dad, as I recently lost my own dad.

My favorite scene from this book is when they are all gathered in her dad’s hospital room and he’s eating chocolate chip cookies and loving every single bite. It’s one of the scenes where I was sobbing uncontrollably. It’s so real. So gut-wrenchingly real.

So… yeah… you’re not going to be sorry you took the time to read this book!

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Infraction is a book that is full of all the emotions a roller coaster ride can offer.

“Yes, I want to protect you. Because that’s what you do when you love someone. And someone like you, someone as special as you, deserves all the good she can get.”

Miller is the tight end for the Bellevue Bucks and Kinsey is a Bucks cheerleader and the sister to their quarterback, Jax. After a celebration in Vegas where the Bucks won the championship game, Miller and Kinsey end up in bed together. Then he helps Jax ship her off to Europe for the summer. Once she returns home, Jax comes up with the idea that miller and Kinsey should “date” so that he can focus on football and his dad’s health. Will Miller and Kinsey be able to stay on each side of the line that’s been drawn or will everything go up in smoke?

Rachel definitely hit all the emotions with this book. The book is full of the passion between two people while also revealing the bond that is between the players and the loves of their lives. We even get to see the softer side of Jax in Infraction and that makes me want more of him.

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