Member Reviews
Ari P, Reviewer
I found this story incoherent, sloppy and very poorly thought out. The character motivations hardly held any ground, and despite the story having quite an unique set up (at least after Nate dies), the author failed to execute it to its fullest extent. What remained was quite a mess honestly.
I'm sorry but I can't write a full review for it anywhere because I just don't care about this story all that very much, and I won't be able to recommend it either.
