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Workers at a tractor and farm supply company play a common prank on Bobby, a new guy, by having him go into the factory after hours on a ruse, but things go wrong. There is genuine gossip about the factory being haunted and when Bobby hears a child laughing just before the lights go out, he is terrified. A subsequent unfortunate accident brings the incident under investigation.

Zed & Penelope make such investigations their business and are called in. They also consult an associate, Charles, who is an adept magician. The company owner brings in a magician of his own, but won't say who.

The story is fairly short, yet has a lot of strands. I thought it had too much description of minor characters and sometimes seemed unclear what was going on.

Apart from the beginning, I can't say there were a lot of scares and the story falls more into a detective story than chilling Horror, until near the end. There is even some doubt cast on the legitimacy of the hauntings.

Some interesting supernatural shenanigans happen towards the end, but then the story just stops. No explanation, no resolution. Presumably it's a serial, but there is no warning in the description to say so. There were some interesting ideas involved and the writing was fairly good, but the plot didn't have me riveted enough to compel me to read another book to tie up all the loose ends left hanging.

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An unusual death in a warehouse has the employer calling on the private detective Penelope.Drake to solve the mysterious incident. Her father’s ghost is haunting her office who tries to interfere with her investigation. Will Penelope discover what happened at the warehouse? Why does her father try to stop her from going to the warehouse?

This is a second book of a serial. Even though I have not read the first one, I was immediately involved in the novella. It is a paranormal mystery that is written well. I just wish I had the next novella to read. I do know I am going to read the first one as I was not aware that it was the second one when I read it. It’s a good read.

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