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This is a charming and heart-warming – and sometime heart-breaking – tale of a young Irish boy who emigrates to Canada from his native Ireland. His mother dies en route and he is left to fend for himself, alone and abandoned. Spanning the years from 1882 to 1904, and set in Toronto, we follow Joseph Conlon as he comes-of-age and makes a life for himself. This so easily could have been a sentimentalised and overly-romanticised story, but the author expertly avoids the clichés of the abandoned child story by allowing Joseph to meet and be sheltered by basically well-meaning and kind adults. He’s taken to an orphanage run by nuns – but these are not the cruel nuns of so many chronicles but gentle and loving ones. Joseph turns his skill as an artist into a successful career. He makes friends. In fact, it’s often Joseph himself who makes bad choices and hurts others. It’s an emotional novel, but a believable one, and the void in Joseph’s inner life and his longing for his unborn sister Annie is hauntingly portrayed. A pleasure to read.
This book started out as a good story, but it fell short quickly for me. It's a very quick read and some readers will enjoy it. Not my cup of tea.
I received an ARC of this book from Netgalley. Thank you, Netgalley.
All opinions are my own.
This is a beautiful story but involves great tragedy from a lonely childhood travelling across the Atlantic.
Many Irish immigrants travelled to Canada during the 19th century - the mother of Joseph Conlon (the main character in the book) tells of her brother Uncle Seamus who now lives in Montreal - "Montreal is a second Ireland ....so many Irish, they say you'll think you haven't left Derry".
But the idealism of sailing to a new continent is soon tragically dashed and by the time Joseph arrives on land with his sister Colleen they are lonely and frightened. Helpful Old Ciara takes Colleen while Joseph waits for his uncle. But when he never appear he is taken to 'Sunnyside' run by nuns of Our Lady of Mercy. I wondered if a Catholic nun run children's home was going to lead to all sorts of cruelty for Joseph but although he faced the cane, overall the Sisters were kind and helped him deal with his tragic circumstances.
In the home he meets and quickly befriends Deary Avery, an older girl, who Joseph idolises and for whom he loves, loses, searches and cares for throughout the novel. Joseph is often searching for things - particularly affection and love- and his young sexuality in a busy city where women often have to give their bodies for cash appears quite shocking but obviously quite realistic for the time.
Joseph felt like an Artful Dodger character at first, having learnt card games, gambling, heavy drinking and paying for prostitutes but this is often because he remains lost in the turmoil of his abandonment.
There are some great characters in the novel - one eyed Tim is Joseph's friend at the orphanage and the mill where they work, Myrtle the talented and somewhat 'new woman' as the century turns to the 20th and of course the ever present Deary.
The author had travelled often to Northern Ireland and she has certainly soaked up a lot of its history, religion and folklore. The many stories of Kings of Ireland and beasts that Joseph tells to remind him of home and engage with others are brilliantly told and create some wonderful images.
There is also the descriptions of the industrial city of Toronto, how it expands, the different nations who live there and the changes in factory life all of which develop as Joseph finds his eventual trade making stained glass pictures. Wonderful images are drawn with words in the novel and I found it extremely interesting to read of the development of the city from Joseph's arrival through the 1887 Toronto Industrial Fair to the new for Trade Unions within a workforce often left open to disfigurement or death in dangerous manufacturing industries..
As a reader I was totally invested in Joseph's life and hoped for happiness and peace for him in an often turbulent time as he grows from young boy to adult.
2.5 stars rounded up to 3 Thank you to NetGalley and Guernica Editions for allowing me to read and review this ARC. Publishes October 1, 2018.
Sadly I was not impressed by this book. I thought the premise sounded really good and the prologue gave me hope that it would be a really good book. However, as I continued to read I felt that the story was fragmented, it just did not read smoothly. It seemed to dart from one idea to another, often within the same paragraph, expecting the reader to understand the subject of the changing sentences. Many times over I was fully lost. The author kept returning to the overall premise, enough that you hoped that the story would finally come together, but that never happened for me. The ending did try to pull the most relevant parts of the story together, but by then it was too late. I had given up on making any sense of this story long before that final feeble attempt.
Shining Fragments, is an adult general fictional account of the trials and tribulations of the Irish immigrating to Canada in the late 1800’s. The protagonist Joseph Conlon, a resilient 8 year-old lad, boards a ship in Northern Ireland with his mother and sister but ends up growing up on his own in Toronto, Canada. The Shining Fragments is Robin Blackburn MacBride’s first novel, which she adds to her previously published self-help ebook (Birdlight) and poetry book (In Green).
“Mam died on the third day of the crossing. After that Joseph stayed in the dark…”
Joseph is left with his sister Coleen on the first line of Chapter 1. Soon after this he is separated from Coleen and spends his life growing up in an environment that is inhospitable for both his nationality and his religion. Through the help of his friends and the people he loves he learns to survive and to find his place. With age he even starts to understand the influences that make him the man he becomes.
McBride does an excellent job of portraying Joseph Conlon. I have to admit that I don’t like him. He continually makes himself a victim. When given opportunities he walks away from them. He focuses on himself primarily and does not treat those closest to him very well. He is very much a follower and is extremely lucky that the people around him lead him down the right path. McBride receives my accolades because she managed to make me really dislike Joseph without overtly making him out to be the bad guy.
There is an overall sadness about the book that I feel doesn’t break even as the book closes. Again McBride does an excellent job of leading one toward this feeling without dwelling on tearful events that make it obvious why one should feel depressed.
I recommend this book to people who like emotional stories. Life can be hard for some and they still do alright. I want to thank NetGalley and Guernica Editions for providing me with a digital copy of this book in exchange for a fair review.