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I received a free ARC from NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.

This was a cute book. The pictures were bright and fun. I think kids will enjoy it.

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This was a very pleasant read. Cute little children's book with a nice moral to it at the end and it was all in good fun. Would recommend.

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The two sisters set out to find the culprit behind their messy rooms. Beautiful illustrations

Thanks to netgalley and the publisher for the eARC

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I read this book because I received a letter from the author asking our library to purchase it. I could not get the book to open on my computer, so I read it on my kindle paperwhite. That means that it was in black and white and the font and color of the font made it a bit difficult to read. The story is cute. I am not sure if I like the font. I think that fonts in children's picture books should be big, bold, clear, simple, and easy to read. In the story, two sisters awaken to find both of their bedrooms are messy and their parents and grandfather help them to solve the mystery and find out who messed up their rooms and why. I did pass the letter on to our purchasing director and told him that I enjoyed the book.

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Jane and Joanne are sisters. In this book they have to solve the mystery of the mess in their rooms. They wake up to find crayons and papers all over their rooms and can't figure out how they got there. Through a series of questions to Dad, Mom and Grandpa they find the responsible party. But in finding that out they find they are responsible too! Wonderful story with very good illustrations. Good bedtime story for 2-4 and beginner reader story.
I received this book in exchange for my honest opinion.

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Joann and Jane: Who Made This Mess?
by Brandon T. Mayes
Lit Genius Publishing

“Joann and Jane: Who Made This Mess?” is a wonderful story that teaches kids to use deductive reasoning and has a lesson about responsibility and doing a job “right.” While many children’s books tend to underestimate a child’s ability to problem solve, this book walks children through a household mystery without talking down to them. Few mystery books are complete without a twist ending, and “Who Made This Mess?” is no exception. Overall, this is a fun read that will keep young ones entertained during story time.

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Two little girls play detective to find out who went into their rooms and made messes. Mom is more concerned with making breakfast, but grandpa offers some help.
At one point one of the girls lifts up the beagle’s ear and asks the dog if it was the culprit. When called on it, she says, “It was worth a try.” Adorable.
The story’s cute enough. The artwork is okay as well. Nothing is made about the family being mixed-race, which is as it should be.
3.5 pushed up to 4/5

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This is from an advance review copy for which I thank the publisher.

If you were hoping to let your kids read this on a smart phone as an emergency distraction, it won't work! The picture is larger than the screen so you can't read the text, and you can't shrink the picture! You'd best plan on reading it only on a tablet or in the printed form.

The screens slide up and down, not side to side, but you can't catch the slide in the middle to maybe read the missing text, because for one thing, the text simply isn't there, and for another, the screen doesn't slide - it quantum jumps to the next image too quickly to ready anything even if there was text there to read at the margin.

That said, it's beautifully illustrated by Taylor McDaniel and engagingly written by Brandon Mayes, and it's wonderfully colored in more than one way, because this is a mixed race family which is very rare to see in a children's book even though such marriages have been steadily increasing in real life.

It's been half a century since mixed-race marriage stopped being illegal in the USA, and they're now at the highest proportion in US history, with one in six couples being mixed race, but it remains the case that Asians and Latinx are more likely to marry outside their race than black or white people are. Unsurprisingly, especially in the present political climate, twice as many Democrats as Republicans believe that mixed race marriage as a good thing.

But I digress! Sisters Joann and Jane can't figure out how their room got into such a mess. I'm sure many parents have heard this excuse many times, but here, it's a bit more complicated, it seems. While everyone is wondering how this happened and J&J are playing detective, the little beagle, known as London Dog, seems to be napping quite contentedly. I wonder why? I thought this was a great book and I commend it.

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Loved this book!

Joann and Jane are engaging miniature detectives in this delightful children’s book. The story and illustrations draw you in and create anticipation for what will come next. Who created the messes? Will the girls be able to unravel the clues? I think children of all ages will really enjoy this series.

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When they wake up for the day, Joann and Jane each find a very messy bedroom. What happened? Who made the mess? The sisters approach the situation as detectives would; they look for clues and interview family members. Young listeners may guess the culprit; regardless of whether they do or not, they will have fun along the way. There is a gentle message in the book about cleaning up and taking responsibility that I am certain parents will appreciate. A cute read overall.

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The book, Joann and Jane: Who Made This Mess? is very cute. The two girls find a mess in their room and they don't know where it came from! They ask dad, mom and grandpa. Eventually, the figure it the culprit is the cute dog (who looks like a beagle!). However, it is because they left candy in their room that the dog went through and made a big mess. The girls end up taking responsibility and joke about starting their own detective agency.

The message is a good one that they tried to figure out what happened and then admitted their role in the mess. It was cleaned up and they learned their lesson. I'd recommend this book to kids ages 3-5.

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Joann and Jane is a darling picture book that has the capability to be used in multiple ways. Joann and Jane are sisters who are uncovering the mystery of the mess in their room. They move about their house interviewing their family members and looking for clues as to where the mess came from. After compiling all their evidence and theories, they finally discover who made the mess- and they learn a valuable lesson in the process.

I highly recommend this book. It can be used to teach responsibility, problem and solution, and text evidence based questioning. The dialogue is repetitive and fun, and the illustrations are very appealing. The final bonus of this book is the interracial family. What a great book!

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This cute children's story is about a little girl waking up to a mess in her room and her and her sister investigating to find out who made the mess.

This book was cute, however the formatting on kindle was terrible and I had to squint and squint trying to read this book since the page was so small. Hopefully that gets corrected so it can be more easily read.

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