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As soon as I saw this was a f/f book about a princess that transforms into a dragon, I didn't hesitate requesting his from netgalley. And though its premise kept my interest throughout, there were several glaring issues with it. First, I think the size and scope of this book would make it better fitted as a middle grade unless it underwent some rigorous editing and the author added a lot more to the story. It was predictable and the writing style was basic, if a little awkward. The dialogue read like a bad script, often cheesy and stunted. There were no miraculous, surprising elements to the story, but I do applaud the interracial f/f love story with ownvoices disabled rep (one of the girls has prothetic fingers replacing an old injury/unusable fingers).

Despite all the issues I had with it, I just can't discount how cute it was and how much I enjoyed reading this short story of two girls' journey. I think this book has potential, it just isn't the best version it could be at its current state.

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