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His Undercover Virgin is unique in this series (thus far at least, I'm 3 books into the 5 book series) in that it is told predominantly through the hero's first person POV. Because of this, we spend A LOT of time in his head and he is really poetically wordy. We don't get the heroine's POV until the epilogue and by then it doesn't quite seem necessary. I've read (and enjoyed) M. Never books before and I don't know if it was because Dirty Bits books are compressed and thus maybe not conducive to her writing style, but I didn't like this one as much as her other books. Eli was sweetly obsessed with Ash, but so very naive especially considering that he was a cop. And the insta-lovey nature of their hookup felt a bit much considering the circumstances of their meeting (although I suppose the fact that he'd seen at least one picture of her prior to their meeting helped him). That being said, as per usual for these books and this author, His Undercover Virgin is sexy and entertaining. I'm really coming to look to this imprint to satisfy my cravings for guaranteed fun without being a time suck. 3 out of 5 wine glasses.
Officer Eli is going undercover to find out about a sorority prostitution ring and had bid for the lovely Ash. He wasn't sure what he was expecting going into this case but now he can't help but want to protect to women and people he was supposed to take down.
It was a nice little novella good for if you are pressed for time and was a interesting story with plenty of steamy scenes. I wasn't much interested in the steamy scenes but the story line was how everything played out was interesting enough. I was curious to see if it was just be steamy scenes based or if there was going to be a storyline to go with it and from what I can see it was good.
M. Never's "His Undercover Virgin" was okay for the most part - I just didn't care for the plot. The story had promise but I just got bored.
This novella was well written, the plot and characters were developed. I would read more titles from M. Never.
Eli and his police department have caught wind of the sorority's v-card auction, so Eli's undercover, posing as a wealthy businessman who won Ash's (Ashley) auction. He never expected to fall for her upon first glance. But how can he have a relationship based on a lie? What about the fact that if he turns in the evidence and gets her sorority brought up on charges? Can he do his job and keep the girl?
This Sorority Secrets series so far has been great, and this one is the best one yet. It's short, hot and super sweet. I'm normally not a fan of insta-love, but it works here, given the short time frame and that it's not too OTT. Eli and Ash make a sweet, super sexy couple, I wish M. Never would spin this story off into an entire series!
This is a very enjoyable quick read. With a plot that is a good blend of steamy and sweet. Eli and Ash made a great couple. I really liked their chemistry. A very good tidbit of a read for when you're short on time or just want something fast and hot.
His Undercover Virgin was another novella from the series that I would have loved as a full length book. It would have made a fabulous secret identity romance. The romance felt a little bit rushed, mostly because it is the only story in the series where the two lead characters didn't have a prior relationship (or at least know of each other). I did really enjoy it, but I would have loved it more if it was longer.
These steamy little treats are the perfect blend of sensual, naughty, and swoon. His Undercover Virgin is all that and more. With an edge of taboo, and a lot of shouldn't go there, this cop is in a lot of trouble but not the kind you think.
His Undercover Virgin is a another feather in the cap for this series. I can't stop eating them up like bonbons. M. never had me caught up in the case and trying not to face facts. And I'm not a naive virgin...
Hot, hot, hot! Another great Sorority Secrets read! I love this miniseries! All of the books can be read in about an hour and are steamy af! This one might be my fave so far. I loved Eli and Ash!
A quick steamy read, His Undercover Virgin is book 3 in the multi author series Sorority Secrets. I enjoyed this story and the characters and look forward to reading more.
This is apart of a series written by several authors where a sorority decides to auction of their virginity, in order to help a friends brother who was seriously injured. Eli is going undercover to check out a possible prostitution ring, however what he finds is not what it seems to be. Also he finds himself not able to be objective in this case as the girl that shows up has gotten under his skin.
This was a fast read.
**I received a copy of this book from NetGalley in exchange for an honest review**
Eli is going undercover again. He had done this a dozen times. This investigation was different. This op involved innocents- young girls being exploited. When the case hit Eli’s desk he couldn’t say no. Eli just didn’t bank on being so taken with a stranger with a pair of eyes that trapped Eli. called to him. Sme scumbag was auction off girls virginity and Eli wanted to find and stop him. To get information Eli had to pose as a buyer. So he sets up a front, creates a fake online profile and bid. Until he got the beautiful girl consuming his mind. She was Elis, his to save. To use, To bring down the auction ring. Eli opened the door to a girl he knew as Manda. Eli had come across a lot of women but none of them affected him like Manda did. The desire to protect her was immeasurable. She comes into the apartment she thought was Eli’s as he had to portray a rich business man with more money than sense. Eli then says he wants to take things slow and make out. They can see each other again. Eli wants Manda to know she is safe. She will be taken care of as long as she is with him. E li and Manda then go to the bed. He asks her what her real name is and it’s Ashley but she wants to be called Ash. Eli gave Ashley oral sex and she him. Elii had never been so reckless before This could end his career. Eli was no closer to finding out who the ringleader was to the auction. Eli knows he has a lot of work to do and he had a small window to do it. No matter how much Eli wants Ash and no matter how much Ash wants him. He can’t take her virginity under a cloud of deception.
I really liked this book. I didn’t like Eli had to lie to Ashley but considering he was a cop and undercover I could understand as he had a job to do. I loved Ashley and Eli together and how the interact with each other. I didn’t really care for the instalust. A real cop going undercover wouldn’t have let his hormones control a lot of his actions. Then we don’t know what his report said and I would have liked to see how he ended the case and not get the girls in trouble or himself. So I don’t feel this was realistic in any way. Bt it was a fun easy end of summer read. I read this in one setting. I liked the characters and the ins and outs and I recommend.
Why yes, I do love a good virgin tale. M. Never is a new to me author and I am thrilled ot have had the opportunity to check this one out. Extremely fast read, sexy!
Another quick, fun, steamy addition to the Sorority Secrets series.
The premise of these books is a little ridiculous. A fire burns down an animal shelter where the sisters of Beta Kappa Nu volunteer, leaving the animals homeless and seriously injuring the firefighting brother of one of the sorority sisters. In order to help raise money for medical bills and the shelter, the girls auction off their virginity.
In His Undercover Virgin, the online auction has caught the eye of a police task force, and Officer Eli Kirschner is assigned to go undercover as a rich businessman to find out who is making these girls auction off their virginity. Step one, bid on - and win - one of the girls. Step two - arrest the criminal in charge of this trafficing ring.
Ash shows up at Eli’s apartment. But Eli’s unable to keep a professional-only interest in her. He has every intention of keeping his hands to himself, but the more time he spends with her the more he wants to be with her for real.
Of course, things get a little bumpy when Ash finds out who Eli really is.
If you don’t expect too much from these stories, they are very amusing. It’s like eating a Snickers bar for lunch - completely satisfying, but devoid of all nutrition. Except for maybe the peanuts… Sometimes you read to be challenged, or grow as a reader. You want a book that makes you think and evaluate what you believe. Other times you just want to be entertained. And this series totally delivers on that!
* thank you to NetGalley and Harlequin - Carina Press for providing an ARC in exchange for an honest review
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This book had everything to blow my mind... but it is totally an 'ok/middle shelf'.
Its told only in male POV while The others had dual POV. Here I think it Would work Great for That story as Ash Would be more important.
There is so Little plot beside sex (Don't get me wrong I Love That but I need Also plot as That's what allured me to That series).
Characters had their own Good/bad things There.
3 stars for this one.
Super quick read. Loved it. The whole story was strong.
I'm a huge fan of MNever. So I jumped when I saw this.
**3.5 Stars**
This was a very quick, steamy novella of insta- love. I generally like more of a slow burn romance, but these are great little short stories when you aren't able to read a full book. The story was interesting, albeit a bit unrealistic. The chemistry between Ash and Eli was definitely there. It was an okay read.
I enjoyed His Undercover Virgin. For being so short, there was a solid beginning, middle, and end. But what I enjoyed the most was that it was from Eli’s POV. It’s so rare to get an entire story from the males POV unless it happens to be a companion book, so this was a breath of fresh air. His Undercover Virgin is great for a quick, steamy read.
Another short, steamy, sexy book in Carina Press’s “Dirty Bits” series. In this one we read about Eli and Ash and the unusual circumstances of their relationship - he’s an undercover cop and she’s an innocent sorority girl. Their chemistry is off the charts right from the beginning and doesn’t stop.
Sweet, fun and sexy. I loved it! It is definitely a quick read, but packs a huge punch. It had a lot of story involved, but was still paced well and didn't feel rushed. I am enjoying these short stories and can't wait to read more.