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I love how these Dirty Bits novellas are just so good. In His Undercover Virgin you have Ash the virgin and Eli the cop. Hello there officer. AS you can guess Eli is undercover trying to take down what he thinks is a prostitution ring. Little does he know what Ash is really up to. This is a scorching hot little read that draws you in from the start. You can't go wrong with this one.

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This story was a little more predictable than the others on this series, but I enjoyed it none the less.

M. Never is an author that I relate with straight to the point stories, good characters and sexy times when needed. I was not disappointed when I read His Undercover Virgin because the author delivered exactly what she promised on the premise of this book.

Eli is a police office undercover trying to figure out who is behind an auction of virginities in the community. He "bought" one of the virgins and tried to keep his hands off her at the beginning. As the time wore off, he falls for her and she falls for him.

I really like the stories where the guy is an undercover cop of some sort because he can't be completely honest and just when he's decided to come clean... puff.

I would recommend this book if you have a short time to read a fast romantic story. If you have read any M. Never book before you have to pick this one up. Also, it's really cute and sexy at the same time.

I voluntarily reviewed an Advance Reader Copy of this book provided by Netgalley. The opinions expressed are my own.

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Extremely entertaining, captivating and interesting read. I could not put it down. Wonderfully written with strong, intriguing characters. I want to read more from this author. I voluntarily read and reviewed an Advance Reader Copy of this book.

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This is book two in a mini series by Carina Press. The series is called Sorority Secrets. They are quick short reads. Ideal for a quickie before bed time.

Eli is an undercover cop. Ash is selling her virginity in an online auction. These two are so hot together.

I know this is a short quick read but some bits bugged me. Having said that I really enjoyed it & was sad when it finished.

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This is hot. Yes, it’s an insta pretty much everything but I don’t care, it’s still hot. I was into it. Not a bad way to spend an hour of my time reading about Eli and Ash and all of their hotness.

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Officer Eli Kirschner is accustomed to going deep undercover. This time this job is different, though. A suspected prostitution ring, with college girls sent off to the highest bidder. A face like an angel. The thought of someone taking advantage of her makes my blood boil.Eli is blindsided by Ash’s innocent allure. The instant pull she has on him and the way she makes him feel again. I’ve encountered a lot of women, but none that have affected me on a primal, paramount, primitive level. The desire to protect is immeasurable.Caught between duty and desire, reality and fiction, Eli continues the ruse as the intensity of his relationship with Ash deepens. I’m not a wealthy businessman. I’m a cop who barely has two nickels to rub together.When I started reading I couldn't put it down.M.Never is magnifysent writer.I cannot wait to read more of there books.Keep up the great work.You should definitely read this book.Can't wait for the next book.

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His Undercover Virgin is another epic short and sexy read.
I'm honestly blown away with the Sorority Secrets series so far.

When I looked over the books and authors of this series my eyes immediately went to M. Never's His Undercover Virgin and I knew if I only had one book to read in this series...I would want it to be this one.
I've read several books by M. Never in the past. I love this author's ability to tell a sexy story but also keep the emotional connection in tact. Ahhhh Perfection.

Eli is going undercover.
When he and his fellow police officers catch wind of a group of college girls auctioning off their virginity, he's going undercover and he's about to reign hell fire down on the person responsible. When Eli wins the auction. He never imagined he would give the woman his heart.

His Undercover Virgin was a fun read. I loved Eli from the start. He was everything I wanted in a lead plus so much more. I loved his struggle and his fight between doing the right thing and getting his job done.

The only reason why I rated it a four star instead of a 5 is due to it being so damn short. I knew it was novella length when I went into it, but damn, I wanted to see more of Eli and Ash.... I wasn't ready to let these two go.

I cannot wait to check out the other books in the Sorority Secrets series. I'm excited to see how this serious continues and further grows. I can't wait!

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I enjoyed this one a lot...

-- It was super short (under an hour to read).
-- Only the hero's POV (would have preferred dual POV for this one).
-- It was pretty much all sex.
-- A smidge of angst.
-- Likable characters.
-- Now OW or OM drama (although hero admits to flirting with OW when they break up for a bit).
-- And epilogue that really wasn't an epilogue since it takes place mere minutes after the last chapter. (lol)

On to the next book I go!

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"Our physical chemistry is off the charts. A mix of water and liquid nitrogen, it's explosive."

While the first two books in this series were by new-to-me authors, I've had the privilege of listening to an audiobook by M. Never. So, that being said, I knew immediately that it was going to be dirty, exactly the way I like it. She doesn't disappoint in the sexy department. But in this story she took on even more. She tackled a sticky issue that had me on the edge of my seat, worried for both of the main characters.

Since the synopsis hasn't been revealed yet, I'm gonna be careful not to disclose anything to make sure I don't overshare. All I can tell you is that following the theme of Sorority Secrets there's a virgin auction, and he bids on her, and he wins. The woman that he feels is "A portrait of lust come to life." But now that he's got her, what's he gonna do with her? He wants to know why she put herself on the block. And she doesn't want to tell him.

I'm really really enjoying this series of quick 'dirty bits' that are the perfect way to get try out a new author, or to get your fix of a favorite. It's a win/win that keeps me coming back for more. I'm excited to dig into the next one. The line forms here...

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I really dislike it when I have to suspend ALL reality when reading a story. For example, a cop investigating an alleged prostitution ring decides "She's mine" based on a pic AND the night they meet face to face they get down to all kinds of sexy business ... #eyetwitch. C'mon, seriously?! STOP.IT. Sooooooooooo many realism lines just crossed.

So clearly, this did not work for me. And again, writers have choices when they write these stories. Would it kill you to make it maybe the second time they meet before he has his tongue on her clit? And don't get me started on the whole ILY thing ..... no.

NOTE: I have NOT lost my love and feeling for Dirty Bits :)

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***4 Stars***

This was a quick and steamy read, which I know these are SUPPOSED to be, but I finished it in no time flat and just really liked how everything played out with Eli and Ash.

I really liked Eli and Ash and just how everything played out with them. There was some insta going on, but it was how everything evolved between them that made it work for me. They spent time together, both of the smexy kind (which was HAWT and the simple hanging out kind and they just flowed well and I loved how everything worked out for them in the end.

This is my first read by the author and I really enjoyed it.

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Cute story. I love these Dirty Bits books. Being able to read a book over my lunch hour is terrific.

Virgin auctions. HOT HOT HOT sex scenes. Happily Ever Afters. All of my favorites.

I'm glad things weren't too easy for Eli.

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Eli and Ashley’s story was amazing. Loved everything about it. Good cop and great girl make for one hot story!

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Best way to describe this story is steamy. Because foreplay is that important and in this book the journey is even more exciting than the goal. Eli runs the risk of loosing everything for deceiving Ash but he can’t help himself from wanting more. On the other hand she can’t deny that more than anything, he is protective and worthy of her trust. It’s just a matter of reading to see if she is smart enough to put those feelings and intuition first.

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Wow they are right to call these Dirty Bits! This was a steamy hot, dirty little story. The undercover officer seemed to throw everything to the wind once he laid eyes on the virgin. He was all in. Maybe even over the top. It could have almost been too much but she was into it. And these two were definitely a sexy pair. I really enjoyed it.

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