While I enjoyed this book, I found it to be very similar to a lot of other YA fantasy books out there and ultimately, not one I'll be actively recommending. If it sounds like something you'd enjoy though, definitely give it a go!

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Princess Aurelia has blood magic, something banned in her country, and she knows just how much she isn't wanted as an heir. When she's almost assassinated, she leaves her home and sheds her name, disguising herself as a commoner. Without the pressures of her old life, she finds a new happiness and freedom, as well as possible love. But the past won't leave her alone, and as the ghosts come back to haunt her, she will have to decide if she can take responsibility for the path ahead of her.

I didn't know much about BLOODLEAF going in, and I was pleasantly surprised by how much I enjoyed it! It has Goose Girl vibes with the princess describing herself as a commoner, which I love. What I enjoyed most was Aurelia's growth once she became a commoner. She really adapts to her new life and finds so much happiness there. It was heartbreaking knowing that something bad was always creeping up on her and that her happiness wouldn't last forever.

The romance was also super swoony. It has a forbidden love trope woven in.

“What do you think?” I asked, masking my nervousness with flippancy. “Do I look murderable?”
“Very murderable,” she replied with approval. “Everyone there is going to want to murder you.”

If I had to use one word to describe Bloodleaf it would be Heartbreak.

This book was basically a running tally of sorrow and grief, making me feel sad for the main character Aurelia basically nonstop. And speaking of Aurelia, she had the best transformation of any character that I have read recently. She started frightened of basically everything, relying on others for her protection and guidance. By the end of the book she was capable and confident, able to stand her own- like a general (or a princess). I rooted for her personal strength and ability to make hard choices even while I instantly regretted almost all her hard choices.

The world building was great, the surprises and magic were fantastically done. If you like court politics and betrayal, as well as forbidden magic and forbidden love, then Bloodleaf is the perfect choice to read. Keep in mind that this is the first book in a series and while this does not end in a cliffhanger (actually this wrapped up well) there are definitely challenges still on the horizon for the characters. I will for sure want to continue on in the series, but I think I need something lighthearted inbetween to break up my current state of sorrow from reading this.

1st I would like everyone to know that I had not realized this book was so controversial before I read it.
2nd I would like to formally apologize, here in writing, to Laurie Frost and Harlequin Teen for all the backlash and mudslinging that occurred. I do this on behalf of any of the people who never read the book and rated it poorly, or slammed it.
3rd I LOVED this book! I mean to say that YES YES YES- I loved this book!
Now I will tell you why.
You can read the blurb to get the premise of the story. You can read blogs and reviews with spoilers to know the exact plot, characters, etc. So I’ll let you do that.
The reason I loved this book is because I WAS Elloren. Laurie, (may I call you Laurie?)- do you know me somehow?
Did we ever meet and I told you about my life and you turned it into a fantasy YA novel? Seriously. This book blew me away with its accuracy.
I grew up in the rural South. I am sure you can imagine what I was indoctrinated into believing about other races, cultures, religions, and belief systems. Then my mom married my step dad and I became what’s known as a “military brat.” We lived on base. Not just on base but a base that had other bases on it. From OTHER countries even! Oh my heck- was my mother infuriated. I was being exposed to Latinos, African Americans, Asians, Israelites, Indians… not to mention Catholics, Jews, Mormons, Jehovah’s Witnesses, and any other religious sect you can think of. I was being tainted you know. I mean, I had to go to SCHOOL with those people!
Then started the “teenage rebellion.” I was acclimating to this new life. I WAS being exposed and I WAS realizing we are ALL human. Real people with real feelings and real lives. And their lives were not really too different from my own. They mattered. Then came the worst. I actually started having crushes on some of those boys who weren’t good enough for me. I was literally put into a behavioral health center for “acting out.” No, really. This is not fiction. This was my real life, I swear.
Fast forward to now, where I have a completely opposing belief system than my mother. She is slowly coming around to these modern times of awareness, acceptance, and support of people who are different than her. I am SO glad my Dad joined the Army. I cringe to think of who I might be now and how I would think. But I digress. You get the point by now I am certain.
So…on to the “review.”
As you can imagine, this book resonated with me. I loved the plotline, character development, the writing style…just all of it. The author wrote with such vivid detail, I got lost in her magical world. The characters were engaging and came to life for me BECAUSE of their flaws. I cheered for their growth and resistance to perpetuate the dogma that had been ingrained into them since their birth.
This book was symbolic to me. It brims with hope for a future that is free of the prejudice and fascism that permeate not only this fictional world, but our society as well. It speaks to the capacity of our nature to develop and form new ideas based on our life experiences. It opens up for discussion all of the things people found disturbing about it. The first thing one must do to eradicate such offensive opinions, behaviors, and beliefs- is to ACKNOWLEDGE that they do exist!
Sorry for the rant…
To make a long story short, as they say, I found this to be a brilliant work of fiction and I give it 10/5 stars!!!
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Such a unique and magical story. Fantasy, magic, and action-packed scenes are all so present. I was super impressed with how Bloodleaf unfolded.

Our protagonist Aurelia is so brave and has a heart of gold throughout. Definitely a character you can get behind. Plus, Zan was not a character I expected but I absolutely loved his role and what he eventually becomes to Aurelia.

The world building in this story is also fantastic. I always love an older setting with royalty and magic. There were also a couple twists I didn’t see coming until right before they were revealed. I absolutely love when an author can build a story and hold on to a surprise like that. Bloodleaf is absolutely one you want to pick up!

Hi, hello and happy what ever day it is at this point. I’ve lost track since I’ve stayed up late into the nights to finish books. My story with Bloodleaf begins in fall of 2018 when I was first approved for a copy of it. I devoured this magical and beautiful novel in a matter of hours. My boyfriend, who wasn’t yet my boyfriend asked me what I was reading and I recounted this story to him with so much love and fascination that I’m sure I created the world for him without him even reading it. I never wrote my review, I got distracted and then I simply didn’t feel I could write the review months later. Fast forward to February 2019, a month before publication I decided to dive into this world for the second time and adored it even more then the first. As life gets hectic and busy, I was working full time, going to school full time and managing to find to spend with the boy who asked me about this book several months prior, who was now my boyfriend. I never got around the writing that review the second time. Now we are in April of 2020 and I’ve read Bloodleaf for the third time to prepare for Greythorne which I received a copy of. My love for this book hasn’t changed and I’m finally to share that love with all of you.

Crystal created an intricate world of magic, deception and sacrifice that will stay with you long after you read the last line. I don’t even know where to start with my thoughts and feelings. For length purposes and because I don’t want to spoil anything for anyone I’m not going to recount the story in my own words like I typically do. The actually summary does it quite well.

Aurelia’s story is told in a single point of view, which is hers. I think the story benefited from hearing this journey from her perspective, especially since the journey was one of her own. Learning to hone and understand her magic, learning the history of a foreign country that was bent and twisted in her home country of Renalt, learning the deception she and her country has faced and the unexpected alliances she made along the way.

Aurelia’s character is one I admire because of her strength and resilience. There was so many times she could have bent to those who were out to get her and she put up a fight every single time. She walked into a country she barley knew, with a name that wasn’t hers but a memorial to the girl who sacrificed her life for her. She made an uneasy alliance at first that blossomed into something so much more and honed her magic. Aurelia finally learned to true secrets of her past, the ghost that has followed her her entire life and the significance of that. But never in all that wrongness did Aurelia loose her compassion or empathy for people and those she loves.

Though the romance wasn’t my favorite, I did still enjoy it. It happens at an important time in the book and plays into the climax of the story. I’m excited to see what it’s going to blossom into in Greythorne, especially on the foot the novel ended on the actions leading up to the ending.

As I said earlier that Crystal’s world building is magnificent. She built two countries, both that have deep histories, a magic system and complex characters to add to this world. Though there is a lot of information to learn about this world, it isn’t hard to understand it in the least. Crystal did an amazing job of spreading out the details and not giving the reader the dreaded info dump. I can’t wait to see more of this world and what Crystal is going to have for readers next. Bloodleaf is a retelling of The Goose Girl and though I’ve never read it, the research I’ve done and the information I’ve dug up, there are so many nods to this stories inspiration.

This review ended up being a lot longer then I anticipated. But as I said I love this book and it has a special place in my heart, plus I’ve read it three times. It just shows my love and how I keep falling in love with the story over and over again. If you have made it this far thank you for reading it and I hope you get an opportunity to read Bloodleaf at some point or another.

Interesting characters wrapped up in intrigue!
Thanks to NetGalley and Houghton Mifflin Harcourt for the opportunity to read and review Bloodleaf by Crystal Smith!
Witchcraft is forbidden in Aurelia’s kingdom and the story opens as she’s sadly watching two women hang for performing witchcraft. Aurelia has performed her share of magic, even though she’s the princess. She’s being sent away to Achleva to marry the prince. In his kingdom, magic is allowed. Along the way, a plot is revealed and she escapes on her own. She disguises herself as a maid and meets other commoners, befriends them and helps them. Someone is trying to break seals and release dark magic and they finally discover who has been breaking them, only after they’ve lost a wonderful friend. I love the part when the prince stands up to the king, speaking the truth about the seal breaker. The king’s reaction raises suspicion. Some of the transitions could be more clear between reality and Aurelia’s visions but for the most part, the visions add a depth to the plot. Aurelia loses people she loves and she discovers her true origins. Unpredictable and entertaining, Bloodleaf kept me riveted to the end, 4 stars!

Lila at Hardcover Haven posted these trigger warnings on Goodreads, which made me decide I did not want to read the book for myself. I thought it would be useful to paste her warnings here for those interested:

Trigger Warning: Blood magic/self harm, loss of a loved one, violence and gore, brief instances of ableism

This is the first book I've read by Crystal Smith. It is the first in a new YA fantasy trilogy. A princess trying to hide her ghostly magic! A very interesting premise and takes time during witch trials as well. Do you accept a new life or fight for the one you've always known?

It took me forever to write a review for this book even though I read it a while ago. I must admit that this is one of the very few books that I did not finish. I stopped halfway and could not get myself to pick it up again. The whole premise seemed so promising: blood magic and kingdoms. I think that’s why I wanted to read it and so wanted the book to be entertaining. Instead, the beginning was slow (although that’s necessarily a bad thing – it did introduce the world), the characters seemed dull and as the story progress, I felt like the author picked up on all the YA clichés and just threw them anywhere and everywhere. However, despite my personal dislike for this book, I will still suggest it to students because I know they would appreciate a story with magic.

This was such an amazing story. It was dark, full of romance, and hand had plenty of twists and turns I loved how it started and how it ended and I can not wait until book two that comes out next year. Everything worked in this books favor, the setting and world, the characters, and the magic. The world building was so beautiful and the character development was spot on.

This one works great as a stand alone but I am so happy to know that it is a series. I am excited to know where this one goes.




Go Into This One Knowing: Darker Story, Romance, No Cliffhanger, Magic

It's been a long time since I truly DNFed a book and I don't do it lightly, but wow did I struggle to get into Bloodleaf. I wanted to give it as much time as I could so I ended up listening to the audiobook and I think that's the only reason I made it as far as the 40% mark.

I had a feeling the book wouldn't work for me after the first few chapters. Aurelia, the heroine, annoyed me from the very beginning with her naivety. And it wasn't the kind where the person grows and changes over the course of the book, she's just like that in general. She never grew as a character, never really learned from her mistakes, and it felt like those mistakes are what the entire plot was based on. Add to that the fact that there's far more telling than showing in the book and I just didn't care one bit about Aurelia.

Which made liking the book overall pretty difficult too.

The writing was just the "icing" on the cake. Nothing about it hooked me. The dialogue felt stilted (and I was listening to the narrator SAY the lines, not even reading them!) and all the info-dumping at random was too much. The magic system isn't terribly unique (blood magic is a fairly common thing in fantasy) and the idea that one faction hates magic and another doesn't is boring for me. I want to see something new!

I'd say starting around the 25% mark I was ready to scrap the book entirely and move on. The only reason I kept reading was because I listened to the audiobook while I was cleaning for a bit but I couldn't stick with it for long before I called it quits for good. There are so many other fantasy books to read and not enough time to waste on ones that just aren't working. 

As a side note, I heard somewhere that this is a re-telling of The Goose Girl and, if so, it's not a great one. If you're looking for a better re-telling, I HIGHLY recommend Thorn by Intisar Khanani. I read it when it was self-published and now it's being re-published by HarperTeen!

What a wild ride! I feel exhausted after finishing Bloodleaf. It was invigorating and thought-provoking with interesting characters that kept me engrossed from the start.

I really wanted to love this book. I thought the magic system and the premise were great. But the characters were flat. The writing was all action with no space for emotional growth, or even the paving to allow us to care about character deaths or appreciate the stakes. It reminded me a lot of SJM, which is to say, it wasn’t for me.

Good . . . in theory

I should start by saying that this is not going to be a gushy happy review. So if you loved this book, you will probably disagree with me on every point. It just really, really didn’t work for me. A lot of other people thought it was absolutely wonderful and perfect, so it’s another case where I feel like I’ve read a different book than everyone else did. [[There will be some spoilers. I tried to confine them to the first third of the book, and to be much more vague about the rest, but you’ve been warned.]]


BLOODLEAF is one of those books that sounded brilliant in theory. Blood magic! Runaway princesses! And it’s based on one of my favorite fairy tales? Even better! Instead, I wanted to DNF it after a few chapters—and probably should have, because I just found myself reading resentfully onward with no change in sentiment. Part of the problem is the marketing (editing?) department, because the cover copy has no relationship to the book’s plot. We are told that: Aurelia wants to escape her fate as a hated witch, so she goes to a new land and disguises herself as a commoner; then she discovers happiness and freedom, perfects her magic, falls for a man who can’t rule beside her. But she finds a nefarious plot only she can defeat, and must choose between the crown and her new life.” Um, yes. So, this isn’t really what happens at all, and the stakes outlined in the second sentence are totally not the stakes.


Let's just throw in some Latin

The writing feels unpolished. This could be a case of personal preference, of course. But it read to me like some of the less polished fanfiction you’d read back in the day. Clunky phrasing, wooden/heavy-handed dialogue, and excessive explanations. The worldbuilding is fairly hand-wavey. We have two kingdoms founded long ago by rival siblings. Aurelia’s kingdom is full of boring puritanical magic-haters, and is largely influenced by the Tribunal, who prosecutes witches. Achleva is magical and fun, but a magical wall keeps them totally separate from the outside world. There’s Bloodleaf, a magical plant that only occurs when someone has died on a flower. Which is kind of cool.


And then magic, which generally requires blood to function, which is a solid premise. Unfortunately there’s a lot of really poorly-rendered Latin, which is a personal thing because I’m sure most people didn’t take Latin and won’t be bothered. But what bothered me even more is that we’re introduced to the magic system with the caveat “incantations are actually totally unnecessary” and then Aurelia continues to use these incantations for the rest of the book. Aurelia can also see spirits, which becomes important later.


What is this even about?

The biggest issue was the plot. The pacing was off throughout, which made it difficult to connect with the story. It was really choppy at the beginning. You just aren’t really sure where it’s going. Aurelia is at a witch execution. Then she is exposed as a witch! Cool. She’s sent away for her safety, with a spell: three drops of blood from her mother, friend, and the new random guy, so that if she is mortally injured, they’ll die instead. In the process of escaping she’s intercepted by her former friend Lisette and L’s dad, who kidnaps her brother and tries to kill her so that Lisette can go to Achleva, pretend to be Aurelia, and marry the prince, which Aurelia was supposed to do. Still okay.


Then that sort of becomes unimportant for a while. Aurelia gets to this place and is taken in by these people (Zan, Nathaniel, his wife Kate). There’s very little mystery because Zan immediately tells her that someone unknown is planning to use blood sacrifices to destroy the gates of Achleva’s wall, which is bad because (1) it will let anyone come into the city and (2) it will cause magical chaos.


I’m honestly not sure how he knows about this. But he needs Aurelia’s help, because she is a blood mage. Conveniently, she masters her magic very quickly with very little help. Lisette and her dad are still off doing things, I guess. They basically vanish, except that Aurelia leaves some little signals for her brother so he knows that she’s watching over him. So much was revealed, discarded, revealed, it just felt very uneven and there was little suspense.


Attack of the instalove

Tell instead of Show is a rather common theme in this book. We’re told what to think, who loves who, what we should care about. But often briefly, superficially, and with very little buildup. The romance was a great example. I saw someone (I apologize, I forget who) mention that we don’t hate Instalove for itself, we hate it when it’s not justified by the text. This was one of those times. Aurelia has known Zan for about two days by the time she’s in love with him, and then shortly after is ready to die for him.


I actually scrolled back through all their scenes together trying to figure out when they shifted from “I have seen your face” to “Please marry me,” and came up empty. He’s stolen her horse, she’s run away from him, then she needs his help and suddenly she’s afraid of how much she’s attracted to him. I didn’t buy it. I just felt like I was being told they were in love and expected to believe it. It was extra confusing because at the beginning she’d had a clear attraction for her friend Kellan, except when he professes his love for her she rejects him. And then he dies.


You just did what now?

There are also some elements I’m surprised I haven’t heard more about, because they struck me as rather problematic. First of all, she kills off the only POC character (a black guy) within the first few chapters. I later realized upon seeing the character art (which is honestly beautiful) that Nathaniel is also black [WAS THIS EVER EXPLAINED]. But he plays such an incidental role that it hardly makes up for losing the only POC of importance.


Also, Aurelia expends a lot of breath on complaining about the Prince of Achleva because he’s “weak and sickly.” She’s betrothed to him to unite their kingdoms (hers, the witch-hating one, and Achleva, the one that’s run by magic) and she’s annoyed because he’s sickly. This is basically all she knows about him and she bases her entire judgment of him on it. No one corrects her, and by the time it’s corrected in text, she hasn’t actually learned that her comments were wrong in principle; she just met the guy and decided that he’s not actually weak, even though he has a heart condition.


This is the central issue with Aurelia’s character. She never seems to learn. She’s constantly making the same mistakes and misjudging the same people in the same ways. I had a hard time scrounging up any sympathy for her. The other characters also seem to exist basically to be props in her life. Some of them are introduced and then vanish within the first couple chapters. Others are there to die, and we’re supposed to care because we’re told that it’s sad.


And here I bow out

I didn’t mean for this to become so ranty, but this book just frustrated me on so many levels. It’s meant to have a sequel, but I have no idea what that will be about. It just read more like a first draft, with flimsy plot points and throwaway characters. The last third was actually pretty interesting and the villain reveal was clever (if not expected), but by then I’d stopped caring.



My thoughts overall

An uneven, overly convenient fairy tale that leaves the promises of its plot unfulfilled.

There were some really interesting aspects to this book, but ultimately I think that this book wasn't for me. It was definitly a product of "it's me, not you". I can see how people would love it and I would recommend that people who love retellings that aren't just retellings a go.

I appreciate the effort that was put into this book, but it didn’t work for me. The pacing of this book was SO distracting and way off. It made for a hard reading experience and took away from character development.

Loved this one. The Goose Girl is one of my favorite fairy tales, and this was a fresh take on it. The magic was unique and well-developed and it's impossible not to root for Aurelia.

So, the beginning of the book was sooooo slooooow. But it picked up and got SO MUCH BETTER. I greatly enjoyed this book and cannot wait for the rest of the series. I feel like this will definitely be the next Throne of Glass.