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Wherever a story goes with a different country or scenery, it’s important to tell the story with a detailed description of the area. This book does that with a remote island where a house sits and Zoe from America arrives to live there. With her arrival all sorts of strange happenings start to happen. I really enjoyed this book and it was a welcome change from the ho hum scary stories you sometimes read. Try it out and enjoy!
I'm not typically one to pick up a thriller. However, throw in a ghost story and I'm interested.
While You Sleep started well. Zoe, an American, is fleeing from the confines of her failing marriage. You see, the best thing to do when your marriage is on the rocks is go rent a spooky house on a remote Scottish island, especially when it's on a sea cliff and none of the locals will stay there themselves. Great idea! Let's go!
From there, we see the typical haunted house vibe: strange noises, disembodied voices and singing, a watchful presence, strange visions, and dreams. Then we get some midnight ghostly sexy time and BDSM, which felt awkwardly out of place.
As the book progresses, we learn more about the island and its inhabitants, including the story of the original owner of the house. A widowed woman living alone with a mute child, of course, HAS to be a devil-worshiping witch or worse, possessed. Needless to say, the characters were pretty cliched from the dippy American to the all-knowing Professor. They all managed to completely fulfill their designated stereotype to the fullest.
I was disappointed that the author didn't capitalize more on the location. The house was such a manifestation itself. Creaky, old house sitting on a windblown cliff above the tattered waves. Some of the unease and tension were very well done throughout the novel but mainly centered in and around the house.
While You Sleep had potential but began to lose its luster halfway through. While there were some twists and turns, especially at the end, it wasn't enough to merit more than a "meh" from me.
While You Sleep is an intriguing and eerie present-day ghost story and thriller, and I thoroughly enjoyed it. Books like this aren't my usual genre, but Stephanie Merritt did a masterful job of pulling the reader deeply into the story. She is a skilled writer and excels at creating atmosphere.
The story is Zoe Adams, who is escaping her life and marriage in America by renting a house on an isolated Scottish island where she plans to paint. The house is in a very small village, inhabited by some really interesting, well-written characters, and soon Zoe is having some really disturbing dreams. Or are they?
All in all, a sexy, psychological thriller. I would definitely recommend reading.
Atmospheric ghost story wrapped in a murder mystery that was hard to put down. The explicit sex scenes are not for the feint of heart and if you can get past them, this is well worth the read.
I received an advanced reader’s copy in exchange for an honest review
The book starts out with ghost sex, which normally would put me right off, but I have to say they made it work
Thank you to NetGalley for a free ebook in exchange for an honest review. Wow! If you are looking for a thriller this is it! This book is non stop from the beginning. My heart was racing at so many different times in this book! After the ending, I have so many questions though. I certainly hope Ms. Merritt writes a sequel. I will be the first to read it! One word of advice- don't read this book before you go to bed! :) Loved it!!!
While You Sleep is an atmospheric Gothic thriller with so many surprises towards the end that I felt riveted. There were many times I felt goosebumps rising on my flesh as I was reading and even more times I was looking over my own shoulder. I was deeply engaged in the story and devoured it as much as I could in one sitting- I simply didn't want to miss a thing!
Thanks to NetGalley for providing an ARC in exchange for an honest review.
4.25 out of 5 stars.
Zoe feels stifled in her marriage to Dan. Against his wishes, she leaves America for a remote Scottish island where she plans on spending some much needed alone time, unplugged and free.
As with any small town, the locals are curious and suspicious of Zoe, but she manages to make a few friends. She also manages to make some enemies.
There's a lot of local legend and lore surrounding the house she's renting,and though she tries to ignore it, it becomes harder and harder to as the strange happenings at night escalate.
Scottish gothic tale available for grabs on NetGalley? Yes, please!!
I can't say I was in love with all of the book. Although the steamy scenes did end up being necessary to the plot, it irked me that there were a few times I was reading 50 Shades.
However, aside from that the writing was beautiful. The ghostly happenings we're enhanced by the weather and atmosphere.
Don't be deceived. This is no regular old ghost story. While the author keeps you guessing about what's happening until the end, and of course there's moments you think you know what's going on, but you don't realize all of it.
A devastating story of what humans are capable of, and a brilliant story of what might be but isn't understood, or has been forgotten.
Right off the bat I observed that this author crafts exquisite sentences. Beautifully descriptive without being overbearing or verbose. Phrasing and word choices are brilliant. The author turns words into works of art! I actually stopped many times throughout the book to re-read sentences because they were so strikingly perfect to me. Very impressive.
Using this amazing talent to craft words, the author also did a fantastic job of setting up a creepy, uneasy feeling throughout the story. Every time Zoe went to the house alone I kind of wanted to stop reading! Whether the events Zoe experienced were real or not real, the sense of foreboding and fright was tangible. From tiny events that invoked minor jumps to major occurrences that invoked sheer terror, the author delivered a truly atmospheric and unsettling story. And the tension increases at a perfect pace in my opinion – and you are never truly sure of what is happening until the climax at the end. Sadly, I predicted the twist at the end (which obviously lessened the impact for me), but I still enjoyed the story. This is one of the creepiest books I have read in a long time.
I did have a little irritation with the main character Zoe. She seemed to be a tad unrealistically brave in constantly returning to the house alone, considering what was going on. While I understand that ultimately it was important to her backstory, Zoe was too easily offended when people offered to help her. She reacted as if everyone assumed she was “just a woman” and couldn’t do anything for herself, rather than realizing people were just being kind and offering a newcomer assistance in what was a crazy and scary situation. So she kept putting herself (unnecessarily) in potentially dangerous situations just to prove she was capable. The impetus for this behavior was ultimately a fundamental part of Zoe’s psyche and impacted how she reacted and experienced everything around her. But thankfully the instances of her negative reaction to offers of help wasn’t an enormous part of the story, but it was annoying to me nonetheless.
I also wasn’t quite expecting the nature of the nocturnal visits. They weren’t terribly graphic, but it is not the type of detail I tend to read. As someone who loves a good ghost story and psychological thriller, but not erotica, I think it is prudent to warn readers that this type of storyline exists in this book.
This is the first book I have read from this author (who also writes under the name of S. J. Parris). I will read more of her work. I love gothic horror/romance novels and this one was really good.
Thank you to Netgalley and the publisher Pegasus Books for a free copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
On a remote Scottish island, the McBride house stands guard over its secrets. A century ago, a young widow and her son died mysteriously there; just last year a local boy, visiting for a dare, disappeared without a trace. For Zoe Adams, newly arrived from America, the house offers a refuge from her failing marriage. But her peaceful retreat is disrupted by strange and disturbing events: nighttime intrusions; unknown voices; a constant sense of being watched.
The locals want her to believe that these incidents are echoes of the McBrides’ dark past. Zoe is convinced the danger is closer at hand, and all too real—but can she uncover the truth before she is silenced?
While You Sleep was an intense dark horror story that I couldn't get enough of! It reminded me of an Anne Rice novel. Excellent characters and interesting plot, I think a lot of horror/thriller fans are going to enjoy this one.
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Pub Date: 05 Mar 2019
While You Sleep by author Stephanie Merritt is a beautifully written ghost story that is full of character and mystery! The feel of the book overall was awesome, I really enjoyed it!
Thank you Netgalley and the publisher for an arc copy of While You Sleep in exchange for an honest review.
Fleeing from a bad marriage, Zoe Adams takes refuge in a house on a remote Scottish island. The fact that the house comes with a sinister history that includes the death of a woman and her son, and more recently the disappearance of a local boy, does not sway Zoe from moving in. But almost immediately, her peace is disturbed by strange noises and sinister occurrences. The locals would have her believe that the ghosts of those lost at McBride house are to blame, but do they have ulterior motives, or is Zoe truly living in a haunted house where she may be the next victim of the curse? A must for those of us who love intelligent gothic fiction
I received a copy of this book through Netgalley with approval from the publisher in exchange for an honest review.
I’m deeply impressed! I absolutely loved the gothic atmosphere of the island and the McBride house; the sinister idea of living alone in a haunted house on the ocean that is isolated and steeped in history.
I may have picked up on some of the clues that explained several mysteries a little too easily, but there were other twists in the story that still got me!!
I would highly recommend this book if you like haunted places, gothic mysteries, whodunnits and a good thrill!!
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Thank you to net galley and the publisher for letting me giving me this opportunity to read this a really good scary book it had me from chapter one, couldn't but it down
I like supernatural scary stories, but While You Sleep was disturbing and depressing with too much debauchery. The whole book was dark from start to finish with nothing positive about it.