Every once in a while, you need a light, quick read and Hot to the Touch fits the bill! I love the camaraderie between the 'brothers' and the steamier aspects of the story, but it felt a bit one-dimensional. I would have liked to have had more depth to the story, but it was enjoyable none-the-less.

There was a lot I liked about Jackson and Becks, but unfortunately overall I wasn't really engaged with the story.

I am interested in reading the 2nd, as I do like the author and I have a suspicion that part of the issue I had with this is that it's the 1st book in the series so there is a lot of exposition and less time to focus on the story.

I don't really recommend this title, but for fans of the author who will likely read the other books, this is likely going to have a lot of the foundation for the story.

Firefighters and Jaci Burton - Yes, Please!

However, once I got started I struggled with the heroine, Becks. She was simply too wimpy...her feelings were too easily trampled; it drove me crazy. So although, the story featured Becks and Jackson -- it was the bond between Jackson, Rafe and Kal kept me entertained.

Jackson is adorable, even when he gets all grumpy with Becks. Cannot wait to read about Rafe and Kal finding 'the one'.

4 1/2 STARS!

HOT TO THE TOUCH is first book in a new Brotherhood by Fire series by Jaci Burton that revolves around a trio of brother firefighters. This book reunites the eldest bro with a blast from his past in a twist on a friends to lovers type story.

Rebecca AKA Becks is quick to catch the reader's sympathy when she is about to hit rock bottom when her tattoo shop is damaged due to wiring problems left unattended by a no-good landlord and she's suddenly without a place to earn money, or a place to live. Fate seems to be looking out for her when she's suddenly reunited with some old friends who offer her a place to crash.

Jackson is sullen and brooding when it comes to dealing with the subject of that past, so he's less than thrilled to have this person his brother's are fawning over suddenly interfering with their quiet life. He doesn't want to reminisce about the old days ... he lived them up close and personal and wants to forget it all.

I recommend this book to anyone enjoying a good firefighter hero, along with a close knit family and a drama filled past to delve into as the book plays out. I'm looking forward to more to come in the trilogy.

3.5 stars

Hot to the Touch
Brotherhood by Fire series Book 1
Release Date: May 7, 2019
Review Copy Provided by the Publisher

I love me some smokin’ hot firefighter books, so when Jaci Burton announced this one, I was super giddy about it!

Jackson. Man, he is exactly what I love in a hero. He’s broody and kinda a jerk, but redeemable. He is also vulnerable, even if he doesn’t show it, and he has an amazing heart.

Becks is a fun heroine. She has her own issues that she’s dealing with, but she’s sassy, smart, resilient, and an all around kind person.

Both of these characters had crappy starts to life. They’ve both worked hard to make something of their lives. However, they still struggle to truly let people in.

I really liked the relationship that Becks had with Jackson and his brothers, Rafe and Kal. Even though Jackson resists at first, there’s a real feel of camaraderie despite not seeing each other for years. Their friendship was easy and I liked the chatter between them

Jaci Burton has a knack for burning up the pages with sizzling chemistry between her heroes and heroines. Jackson has a way with words that would make plenty of women drop their drawers! I may have swooned once or twenty times!

One of the things that I was a bit disappointed with was the lack of ugly cry moments. This book does have angst, but I expected more. There was so much potential to really grab the reader and make them feel all the feels. It just kinda fell flat in that area. I was like, oh that sucks for them, but I didn’t even get a lump in my throat or have a single sniffle.

All in all, I liked this book and I’m looking forward to book 2 in 2020!

Hot to the Touch has been on my TBR for some time now but something just didn’t work for me with this one. When I was reading the book I felt more like it was being told at me and not to me and that really rubbed me wrong. I also didn’t find any chemistry at all between Jackson and Becks so I had no interest if they were a couple of not. His personality changed so much I just didn’t like him at all. Plus the pacing felt a tad off. Honestly, I have been struggling with Jaci Burton books for sometime and I think this was the one that finally has made me believe this author just isn’t for me anymore. This book just didn’t do it for me.

Jaci Burton starts off her newest series of books with a bang! Hot to the Touch opens when Jackson and his 2 brothers Kal and Rafe were homeless kids who are rescued from a fire in an abandoned beach house. All 2 boys were lucky enough to be adopted by Laurel and Josh Donavan and all 3 follow in their father's footsteps and become firefighters. As the story opens to present day, Jackson and his crew are sent to a fire where he rescues Becks Benning, who happened to be another homeless kid that ran with their group all those years ago. I love a reunion story, even though Jackson didn't originally remember Becks when he rescued her from a fire. Luckily for Becks, Kal and Rafe do remember her and jump in right away to offer her a place to stay.

I loved that Becks had a crush on Jackson when they were kids, and she was totally still attracted to him as an adult. I have to say Jackson wasn't really my favorite character when the book started. He was such a jerk to Becks in the beginning I really didn't know if he could redeem himself. I loved when his brothers gave him hell about how he was acting and the fact that Becks didn't cower to him and called him out on his actions.

I loved Becks and how she continued to give back to the homeless community after she was lucky enough to find a family, a job, and a home. Even though Jackson wasn't comfortable going back around that community from his past, I loved that for Becks he not only did, but connected her with his mom who was a social worker and eager to help out.

Jackson stepping up to really help Becks because he wanted to went a long way to making him a much more likable character. I got that Becks was part of the past he really didn't want to think about, as it wasn't really that great. Honestly I even understood him blocking out parts of his past as surviving a house fire is a very traumatic experience. I did like the more time Jackson spent with Becks, the more I liked them as a couple. They had a bit of an instant attraction going on and I was so glad when they finally got together as their chemistry was HOT! Even though they both promised to keep their relationship casual, I questioned either could as Becks had real feelings for Jackson, and he just didn't seem to be a casual sort of guy. Yes they had a few dark moments along the way thanks to Jackson's failure to talk about the past, I ended up really liking them as a couple.

Hot to the Touch was a great start to a new series from Jaci Burton. I love a story that centers around a family and the Donavan brothers each stole my heart. I can't wait to see where Ms. Burton takes us with this series. I'm super glad we will get both Kal and Rafe's books, and hope we get to spend more time with the various firefighters on their crew as well.

Rating: 4.5 Stars (B+)

I am so in love with this series. I really hated him in the beginning. So judgey. I loved her. I loved the job, her attitude, just her!

4 stars!
Who doesn't love a hot firefighter?? Jaci Burton is kicking off her new firefighter series with this book. Jackson Donovan was on fire !! I really enjoyed this book!

A fire nearly destroys all of Becks work in her tattoo shop, how will she pick up the pieces? When the sexy firefighter that rescues you is willing to save more than just your job, you know it's going to be a fun read.

Tension rises as this second-chance romance ignites. I absolutely loved Jackson Donovan and hope you do too.

Sometimes the family you make is what matters most. This sexy, fast-paced read is sizzles. A great beach read!

Hot to the Touch kicks off a brand new firefighter series.... Brotherhood by Fire. Jaci Burton certainly knows her firefighters and can write a sexy, steamy novel like no else. Hot to the Touch gives us just that... HOT firefighter Jackson Donovan the leader of the "brotherhood" and his journey towards letting go of the past and falling for the right (for him) girl. The story kicks off in the midst of a fire rescue and gives us the background for the Donovan Brothers. It sets the tone for the book and keeps the reader wanting to know all about the three boys that were rescued.

Present day brings us to Jackson and Becks... and while I was expecting a completely different story, I was still very much entertained. Hot to the Touch has a very heavy tone to it and at times it was bit depressing to read. I have mixed feelings about the story in general, but overall I enjoyed the push and pull of Becks and Jackson's relationship. They had some series chemistry which they brought to their sexy times for sure. I also enjoyed the family dynamics of the brothers who all followed in their father's footsteps (refer to prologue/excerpt below). This turned out to a good series starter and I can't wait to read more about the Donovan Brothers in the future.

Jackson is one of 3 firefighting "brothers",all formerly homeless, who are now sharing a house with Becca, another from their homeless years.. They'd reconnected with her after many years when they were called to a fire at her tattoo shop. Becca had had a crush on Jackson way back when, and to now be living in the same house... well it was almost too much! It was fun watching the interaction between the three brothers -- they'd all been adopted by the same people and worked together -- and Becca, and watching both Becca and Jackson work through their feelings for one another.

It's a good start to a new series.

Hot to the Touch is the first in a new series by Jaci Burton and has all the makings of a good trilogy. The focus of the series is on three men that have bonded together being homeless as teenagers, that now live and work together as firefighters in Florida. 14 years ago, they were saved from a house fire by a firefighter who later would adopt all three boys. When Jackson, Rafe and Kal go out on a call, they run into someone from their past, which for Jackson should be left in the past. Becks, short for Rebecca, loves that she has reconnected with the brothers from long ago but doesn’t understand why Jackson doesn’t want to think about it. There is an attraction between them but is it enough to build something more together?

Becks was a heroine one can easily like and her thoughts and actions felt genuine. She made something of herself as a tattoo artist and now that the fire has displaced her, she can expand her business at a new location. Things are good for her now but she’s never forgotten where she came from and helps other homeless teenagers in the community. Jackson and her didn’t see eye to eye on this subject and she just couldn’t figure out why. He wasn’t forthcoming and she didn’t know if it was worth the effort. When things heat up between them and move to an unfamiliar place, she’s unsure of these feelings and how Jackson might react to them. Love isn’t something she is familiar with and it’s hard to be vulnerable. Can she rely on her new feelings for Jackson or will she be in this relationship alone?

Jackson was a character I had a hard time understanding and liking for the majority of the book. He ran hot and cold with his feelings. One minute he is nice and giving and the next he is angry and indifferent to Becks. I was getting whiplash with how quickly he switched. That being the case, I didn’t feel a connection between him and Becks. I don’t think Jackson was developed enough as a character throughout the story to get me to like him, especially to like him with Becks.

Jaci Burton is one of my favorite authors and her writing keeps me coming back with each new story she puts out. Her writing is enjoyable, her storylines are genuine, her characters are 3 dimensional and her sex scenes are hot and steamy. Somehow Hot to the Touch had a hard time smoothly transitioning from friends to lovers, then to being in love. I missed Jackson’s reckoning and I thought that should have been highlighted better in order for me to feel he was worthy of the heroine. The story was good but I felt it could have been better. I’m not giving up on this series because I’m thinking that this was a fluke and the others will be better. Hot to the Touch had potential but only felt lukewarm in the end.

As a fan of Jaci Burton's contemporary romances, especially her Play by Play multi-sports series, I'm always happy to see her name on an upcoming new release. So when I saw that she was starting a new series featuring firefighters, I quickly added Hot to the Touch - the first in her Brotherhood by Fire series - to my to-read shelf.  I'm happy to say that it's an enjoyable read, delivering a sexy romance that touches on some serious subjects but still maintains a lighthearted feel.

Jackson Donovan grew up quickly when he was a homeless kid on the streets after his parents died and the foster system did him no favours. But things changed for the better when he and his two brothers by choice, Rafe and Kai, were rescued from a fire in an abandoned home where they'd set up camp. Their rescuer, a firefighter - and their guardian angel - not only saved their lives that night, he and his wife took the three boys in as foster sons. Their lives improved immeasurably, and all three are now fully-fledged firefighters themselves, working under their father, Battalion Chief Josh Donovan. Jackson has recently received the rank of Lieutenant and his eye is firmly on the future, not the past.

When a call brings Jackson and his crew to a smoking strip mall and the door of the tattoo shop Skin Deep, Jackson finds himself rescuing a woman from the shop, one who is desperately trying to save as many supplies as she can as Jackson drags her out to safety. Becca - Becks - Jenning knows the fireman  was right to get her out and away from the danger but she still laments the loss of her rented shop and despairs at the thought of having to start over, especially since her living quarters were on the second floor. But fate has actually been kind, because it turns out that she knows these men. At one time, Jackson, Rafe and Kai had been part of a group of intrepid homeless kids that she credits for helping her survive those tough days when she herself was on the streets. When the three boys disappeared one night, no one knew what had happened to them and the resulting scattering of their group brought Becks into a new and decent foster home. From there she'd made something of herself, advanced her artistic skills and made a credible career as a tattoo artist.

When Rafe and Kai, delighted to see Becks alive and well, offer her a room in the house they share with Jackson, Becks can't refuse; after all she has nowhere else to go. Jackson is less enthusiastic about their houseguest for two main reasons; one, he finds her attractive which he feels is inappropriate considering how they just met again, and two, he has no interest in rehashing 'the good old days' when they were all homeless on the streets together. But under the same roof, it's hard to maintain much distance. Soon, a mutually agreed upon no strings attached affair is heating up their nights and anytime they can get the house to themselves. But with Becks firmly involved in helping homeless while looking for a new place to set up shop and Jackson avoiding anything that reminds him of his past, can there be a future for them?

It's not that surprising to have a plot that involves a group of foster kids that end up employed together and often in some kind of service to society. What makes this series idea unique, however, is having Jackson, Rafe and Kai start out as homeless kids, as well as the discussion that ensues later resulting from Becks' work with a new group of homeless kids who live in the area where the four of them once lived. It's a stark truth that there will always be circumstances that leave children vulnerable, whether it’s the death of parents with no surviving relatives to take the children in, parents addicted to drugs or alcohol, foster homes ripe with abuse that leave children on the run and banding together for safety. For Jackson, the death of his parents at the age of six is what led to him eventually being on the streets and once he was rescued from that life, he put a lot of effort into forgetting those days ever happened. He can't completely forget because he has Rafe and Kai still in his life, but everything else, including Becks’ existence has been forgotten.

When she re-enters their lives, Jackson is forced to come to terms with things he'd rather forget. This is especially true because he likes and admires Becks as well as being attracted to her physically, and she tries to make things better for the homeless kids whose situation she fully understands. She knows they pride themselves on their independence and ability to survive on the street but aren't going to reject help offered with sincerity and not out of a place of superiority. Coming to terms with those days and how they've made him who he is now, and realizing that he can take pride in being a survivor is a slow process but one helped by honest conversations with Becks and his brothers.

While the background of homeless children is definitely a grim one, the work Becks does and the fact that the main characters survived life on the streets and made something of themselves gives the story a hopeful air and prevents it from being too depressing. And as always, the author delivers a sexy and passionate romance with some steamy scenes and strong, likable characters who have to compromise and hash things out to get their happy ending. Secondary characters Rafe and Kai add those scenes of teamwork and brotherly camaraderie that make for some humorous moments and give some hints for stories to come. If you're looking for some unique character backgrounds and a sexy and interesting romance, Hot to the Touch is definitely worth checking out.

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2 Wine Glass #Review of Hot to the Touch by Jaci Burton
Kimberly's Thoughts:
The first in a new series following three firefighting brothers, Hot to the Touch was a steamy fast paced read. After his parents were killed in a car accident, Jackson was sent into the system, only to become a teenager living on the streets. He finds himself a sort of leader trying to take care of kids younger than him but really bonds with two other boys, Rafe and Kal. When a firefighter ends up rescuing them one night, they finally find themselves adopted and in a happy home but Jackson still bears the scars of those early years.

Rebecca “Becks” had a crush on Jackson when they were homeless kids and missed him when he and his “brothers” disappeared. When fate brings them back together, she finds herself attracted to the man. With some matchmaking brothers, healing old wounds, and sexual tension, two former homeless kids may just get their happily ever after.

I enjoyed the set-up of Jackson and his brothers being rescued by a firefighter only to be adopted by him and grow up to work along side him. In order to create some tension between Jackson and Becks, the author had him being unnecessarily rude and short to her. His poking at her for cleaning and cooking while she stayed at their home (she loses hers after a fire) was forced and had him coming off more of a jerk than grumpy teddy bear. His supposed reluctance to love anyone (he seems to have no problem loving his brothers and parents) was dragged through the whole story and only overcame/worked through at the very, very end (90ish%). I'm not even sure I understand the big deal about him not wanting to discuss and/or wallow about his past as a homeless kid.

Becks was a positive character with her raising herself up to become a business owner. However, I felt like her character was never really delved into. She ended up being adopted by a good family but there's no foundation felt from that and her journey from doodling artist to tattoo business owner delivers no emotional impact. She still visits her old stomping grounds and brings essentials to homeless kids but they are such short scenes that they never fully make an impact.

The romance between the two definitely had their steamy moments but since the emotional components weren't fully there for me, I had a hard time connecting. I got from both of them that they found the other sexually attractive and some emotional carryover from Becks' childhood crush but I was never able to feel their connection. Jackson's “don't ever want to talk about the past” dominated the story and it kind of felt like we were spinning our wheels for the majority.

The writing style had a lot of short sentences, which I think hurt the flow for me. The characters also felt very surface, their issues are stated but never expanded on, delved into, or flushed out, making this feel a little dry. There was also an inclusion of a secondary character that is probably being set-up to be a heroine in a future book and her actions felt over-the-top and forced to try and create some friction. The outline and character issues were there but the depth behind them wasn't, this was a fast read but not particularly engaging.

As a fan of Jaci Burton's contemporary romances, especially her Play by Play multi-sports series, I'm always happy to see her name on an upcoming new release. So when I saw that she was starting a new series featuring firefighters, I quickly added Hot to the Touch - the first in her Brotherhood by Fire series - to my to-read shelf.  I'm happy to say that it's an enjoyable read, delivering a sexy romance that touches on some serious subjects but still maintains a lighthearted feel.

Jackson Donovan grew up quickly when he was a homeless kid on the streets after his parents died and the foster system did him no favours. But things changed for the better when he and his two brothers by choice, Rafe and Kai, were rescued from a fire in an abandoned home where they'd set up camp. Their rescuer, a firefighter - and their guardian angel - not only saved their lives that night, he and his wife took the three boys in as foster sons. Their lives improved immeasurably, and all three are now fully-fledged firefighters themselves, working under their father, Battalion Chief Josh Donovan. Jackson has recently received the rank of Lieutenant and his eye is firmly on the future, not the past.

When a call brings Jackson and his crew to a smoking strip mall and the door of the tattoo shop Skin Deep, Jackson finds himself rescuing a woman from the shop, one who is desperately trying to save as many supplies as she can as Jackson drags her out to safety. Becca - Becks - Jenning knows the fireman  was right to get her out and away from the danger but she still laments the loss of her rented shop and despairs at the thought of having to start over, especially since her living quarters were on the second floor. But fate has actually been kind, because it turns out that she knows these men. At one time, Jackson, Rafe and Kai had been part of a group of intrepid homeless kids that she credits for helping her survive those tough days when she herself was on the streets. When the three boys disappeared one night, no one knew what had happened to them and the resulting scattering of their group brought Becks into a new and decent foster home. From there she'd made something of herself, advanced her artistic skills and made a credible career as a tattoo artist.

When Rafe and Kai, delighted to see Becks alive and well, offer her a room in the house they share with Jackson, Becks can't refuse; after all she has nowhere else to go. Jackson is less enthusiastic about their houseguest for two main reasons; one, he finds her attractive which he feels is inappropriate considering how they just met again, and two, he has no interest in rehashing 'the good old days' when they were all homeless on the streets together. But under the same roof, it's hard to maintain much distance. Soon, a mutually agreed upon no strings attached affair is heating up their nights and anytime they can get the house to themselves. But with Becks firmly involved in helping homeless while looking for a new place to set up shop and Jackson avoiding anything that reminds him of his past, can there be a future for them?

It's not that surprising to have a plot that involves a group of foster kids that end up employed together and often in some kind of service to society. What makes this series idea unique, however, is having Jackson, Rafe and Kai start out as homeless kids, as well as the discussion that ensues later resulting from Becks' work with a new group of homeless kids who live in the area where the four of them once lived. It's a stark truth that there will always be circumstances that leave children vulnerable, whether it’s the death of parents with no surviving relatives to take the children in, parents addicted to drugs or alcohol, foster homes ripe with abuse that leave children on the run and banding together for safety. For Jackson, the death of his parents at the age of six is what led to him eventually being on the streets and once he was rescued from that life, he put a lot of effort into forgetting those days ever happened. He can't completely forget because he has Rafe and Kai still in his life, but everything else, including Becks’ existence has been forgotten.

When she re-enters their lives, Jackson is forced to come to terms with things he'd rather forget. This is especially true because he likes and admires Becks as well as being attracted to her physically, and she tries to make things better for the homeless kids whose situation she fully understands. She knows they pride themselves on their independence and ability to survive on the street but aren't going to reject help offered with sincerity and not out of a place of superiority. Coming to terms with those days and how they've made him who he is now, and realizing that he can take pride in being a survivor is a slow process but one helped by honest conversations with Becks and his brothers.

While the background of homeless children is definitely a grim one, the work Becks does and the fact that the main characters survived life on the streets and made something of themselves gives the story a hopeful air and prevents it from being too depressing. And as always, the author delivers a sexy and passionate romance with some steamy scenes and strong, likable characters who have to compromise and hash things out to get their happy ending. Secondary characters Rafe and Kai add those scenes of teamwork and brotherly camaraderie that make for some humorous moments and give some hints for stories to come. If you're looking for some unique character backgrounds and a sexy and interesting romance, Hot to the Touch is definitely worth checking out.

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When I saw that Jaci Burton was starting a new series and it would be about firefighters, I was super excited. I feel like I haven’t read enough firefighter romances and Jaci Burton can always deliver on a sweet and sexy story.

There were several things about HOT TO THE TOUCH that I enjoyed, but others felt a bit forgettable to me. I loved all the characters we were introduced to in this first installment. The two main characters as well as the side characters, who I’m excited to read books about. But probably my favorite aspect of this story is the found family bond. The hero has 2 brothers but they are brothers by choice. They met as children on the streets trying to survive and formed their own little family since then until they were adopted all together. Ms. Burton writes families and friendships so well and this was another perfect example of that.

What I think was a bit lackluster for me was the conflict. While I enjoy that Ms. Burton’s stories tend to be low on angst and sometimes low on conflict, I couldn’t help but feel this one felt like a made up conflict that I just couldn’t quite comprehend why it would be such a big deal keeping them apart. So I was missing some of the real tension throughout this story.

That being said, I did enjoy the chemistry between our two main characters. I liked the heroine most of all because she’s made something of herself without forgetting where she came from and wanting to give back.

If you’re in the mood for a sweet and laid back story that will introduce you to some hot firefighters, be sure to pick this one up. I for one can’t wait for the next installment in the series.

Sexual chemistry? Check. Great storyline. Nope. If you're looking for a well thought out plot and well developed characters this is not the book for you. If you're looking for a quick steamy read and have a thing for firefighters, this is for you.

Growing up homeless, Jackson has taken on the role of protector to his ‘band of brothers’. As the self appointed head of this group of homeless children, Jackson always tries to make sure everyone is fed and has a safe place to lay down their heads at night. One fateful night in a storm would change the course of Jackson’s life, leading to a change for the young guardian and his brothers. An epic event that would change the course of their lives forever.

Living life in the line of fire is the course that each of the siblings has chosen. Jackson is still their leader, but dives into each fire like he must save those closest to him. During one of their calls the brothers run across an old friend – Becks. After losing her tattoo shop and the only income she has, Becks finds herself bunking down with the guys that use to keep her grounded during her time in homelessness. With tendrils of a past crush, Becks finds her attraction to Jackson just as strong as it was in their past. The feelings may or may not be mutual, but Becks is determined to succumb to her feelings once and for all. The only obstacle will be breaking through the barrier that Jackson has placed on his heart.

A brand new series by Jaci Burton centered around firefighters? Count me in!! Hot to the Touch is the first book in the Brotherhood by Fire series, and it centers around the history behind the main characters. The storyline was original in how the brothers found themselves to this place in life and their journey to becoming firefighters. I found their history definitely believable and was very interested in the connection the brothers had with Becks. What I did have a hard time believing was the ‘disconnect’ in Jackson and Becks. There was never really any explanation on the issue(s) keeping Jackson and Becks apart. The tension between them seemed forced and didn’t really appear to fit with the plot that well.

Overall – Hot to the Touch is a convenient beginning to a new series. The ties of friends and family in the book will definitely be a driving force in upcoming novels. As with all Burton books, you can definitely depend on the writing to give that laid back feel to traditional romance novels. It doesn’t hurt that readers will be able to meet some really hot firefighters while delving into these books!!

I enjoy Jaci Burton, so I enjoyed this book. I thought that the hero was a jerk sometimes though and the heroine forgave him too easily. There were also a couple of threads that I thought would turn into something, and maybe they'll be picked up in future books, but maybe not. I wonder if they were things that could have been explored, but had to be cut for space or if they'll just be extrapolated on in the future. There's also something, earlier in the book Burton made it seem like part of the hero's past that was bugging him was that he wasn't able to take care of all of the little kids in the homeless camp, particularly once he got back into foster care and then adopted. But then, his trauma ended up all being about the fire. I really thought it would be about guilt and abandoning all the other kids in the camp. I just thought that was where it was heading. Those are just minor quibbles though. It was a fine book.