This came as a pleasant surprise, tbh. A futuristic, sci-fi dystopian story, it's a series of tales from a land across centuries where there are robots and AI around and humans are fighting to stay alive. And it's not as droll or basic as I managed to make it sound! It's action-packed and has some storylines and premises that are brilliantly conceptualized.

My only complaint is that it's very tedious to read and takes some time to get into because of the way it's written. It's so overwhelming, I lopped off a star for it. Otherwise, I can't believe I had this for YEARS and didn't read it. 🤦🏾‍♀️

WOW. What a collection! Starting in 2016, a time anyone reading this review at the time I write it is familiar with, to 3036, a time we're unlikely to see, these stories are absolutely fascinating. I loved the difference in narrators, I love that the stories covered a variety of topics, and speculated on things that may come to pass in our future. Highly recommend.

Having never been to Canada but having it high on my list, this book description drew me in with the setting alone. The stories were seemingly unconnected and it took me a long time to finish this book as I felt I was slogging through them. I did enjoyed the little twists, but for me this book was just ok.

Ben Berman Ghan – What We See in the Smoke

They say you shouldn't judge a book by its cover, and I guess they're right, even if covers frequently are following an optical/design code indicating what's inside. Because we Do choose books by their covers; or at least I do. So, this is one I picked up for its cover, because it put me in the mental frame of things I'd read in the past, and loved.
And you know what? I greatly enjoyed that one, too, after a few hard-to love initial pages.

Ben Berman Ghan is a Canadian author, editor, and MA student; with now 2 novels (and next year a non-fiction book) plus loads of short fiction and non-fiction articles to his name. His first novel, Wychman Road, is out of print, and next year's release is called Bruce Meyer: Essays on his Work.
What We See in the Smoke starts in realism with a social undertone, and heads from there into the future – all parts set in Toronto, even if you wouldn't recognise it at times if it didn't declare itself to be so!

But to start at the beginning – this is not a straight up story, but what I normally would term a patchwork novel, ie a collection of short stories which, whilst independent in actual topic and story arc, tell a larger story in combination.
He himself terms the book a fix-up novel, as he re-wrote the individual pieces, previously unconnected stories, to refer to each other and tie them together into some kind of single narrative (I don't think they would have created a larger picture otherwise). But terminology aside, this is a collection of short stories, in 3 larger parts of 5 or 6 chapters/stories each: These Memories of Us (2016-2026), These Violent Machines (2040-2280), and An Uncertain and Distant World (2280-3036). But if this sounds all very Accelerando to you then I have to tell you that the book at hand is a much looser collection of impressions.

But, before all that, there is a superfluous preface where the author explains the book, his approach, the genres involved as he sees them, the meaning of the various pieces, etc.
And I have to tell you (and him!): Just don't.
Some of this might have made an ok post-script, and some is entirely not needed.
Skip it, I would recommend.
Then we get long acknowledgments, and a Pratchett quote concerning memory, and the changeability of the world, to send us on our way into the actual stories.
This continues – every story start with a quote, either from a classic, both SF and literary (he studies English Literatures of Modernity, which might have something to do with this).

But let me give you a taste of what's in the stories, just for the first 5.
Chapter 1: Stranger Bedfellows
This follows a gay bookseller, in an old market which is earmarked to be re-developed/gentrified, and who refuses to sell up. We witness an escalating series of threads, attacks, intimidations, interspersed with relationships, inner life, and some fascinating non-sequiturs. Somewhat claustrophobic, and inwards-facing.

Chapter 2: Planet 58
Here the central protagonist is a cycle courier with Mental Health issues and a Shakespeare fixation (and a theory that of 58 planets, each of which have their own version of Shakespeare's plays). This is bleak, but also has glimmers of hope, and I rather enjoyed it

Chapter 3: Tenants
Told through the eyes (so to say) of a tenement building, observing its inhabitants, their loneliness and despair, without being able to help. Again claustrophobic, and inwards-facing, and again with a hopeful outlook.

Chapter 4: A Carnival World
The story of a Jewish inventor, and of the conflict between the Military/Industrial complex and the usage of technology for peace. The son of the inventor, kept away from the family fortune due to Mental Health issues, tracks down the murderer of his father. This displays an interesting contrast of helplessness vs target driven work when the ghost of hid dead father holds and guides the protagonist's hand. All told as internals – fascinating and touching.

Chapter 5: A Time-loop Tango
Depressing. Oppressive. A turn-off, on purpose? This is all part of a standard trope, of course – the protagonist is going through repeated loops of his life, knowing what is to come, but unable to make any major changes – and trying to work his way out of it through small ones instead.


I'm not gonna spoil more, though – but be assured that the middle third definitely ups the quality of stories and writing, with more engaging and believable characterisation (even for far-future AIs!), and the stories, by dint of moving off into the future, becoming more SF-nal. Which, if SF is not the purpose but purely incidental, as he explains in his ill-advised prelude, then maybe he should continue writing SF – freeing himself from contemporary strictures seems to do his story-telling much good!
But even without providing a blow-by-blow run-through of the stories, here are a few highlights.
So we see a world where we have mastered the growing of human tissue and organs in animals, leading, in classic human free-market style, to a blooming black market in human-grown human tissue. For consumption. Which does not help the dearth of organs for transplantation, or the protagonist's quest to obtain an (unaffordable) organ to save his child's life.
We see a man in love with an Android singer, trying to make her more perfect, and more human at the same time. Bit of a contradiction, if you ask me, but love and obsession move in strange ways.
And, special mention, we have the story Dreaming Darkly, set in a world where your dreams belong to others, where people don't dream anymore (chemically induced, with all the mental and physical damage this entails). Chock-full of IP, stores of belonging dreams, new types of crime, Monitors killing offenders dreaming unlicensed dreams, a resistance trying to restore human belief in free dreams...
“Dreams had within any Google-Appartment are the property of Google Inc.” Yup, indeed. A stand-out.

There are weaknesses here, too, though – for example, the plotting frequently struck me as transparent and quite simplistic, straight-forward. The same applies to the tropes he uses – they are frequently not all that unusual or special, or used in unusual ways or combinations. Yes, he deals with them well, does them justice, even if he rarely brings anything new to the table. What sets them apart here is that they are centred on Toronto, and are loosely linked, across very different styles, approaches, and story types.

One thing which I noticed was that somehow many more stories were ending in despair or dissolution, are fading to black, than there are which are projecting hope for a (better) future. Somehow the ones fading to white, with a more optimistic ending, worked better for me here. Which is somewhat surprising, if you know my outlook on life, and the future of humanity...
But the book is titled What We See in the Smoke; and this definitely was the smoke of destruction, and what we see are images of decay – the future proofs not to be what it was hoped to!
The elements which link stories feel frequently slight and inessential, propped on to glue stories together (which they are, by the author's own description). Yes, it ties the book together, but this didn't give me terribly much, I suspect this might just as well have worked as a collection of short stories. Although, some of the cross-links in the stories were rather neat, and put me in a frame of mind like RA Wilson's Illuminatus - “I'm sitting in the crowd twenty years before I was born on a campus at the outskirts of the city”.
“I'm living in a half-remembered account of memory told to me by an old man chose place I've taken”.

The author uses both foreshadowing the obvious to a borderline-annoying level, and reversals of expected developments in the final paragraphs – sometimes both, wilfully misleading the reader!

Overall an interesting and unusual collection/novel, and one I can whole-heartedly recommend!




More Ben Berman Ghan

Title: What We See in the Smoke
Author: Ben Berman Ghan
Reviewer: Markus
Reviewer URL: http://thierstein.net
Publisher: Crowsnest Books
Publisher URL: http://www.crowsnestbooks.com
Publication Date: Jun 2019
Review Date: 190719
Pages: 272
Format: ePub
Topic: Patchwork Novel
Topic: Futurism

Thanks to the publisher for the review copy.

Toronto Star, June 26, 2019
https://www.thestar.com/entertainment/books/2019/06/26/a-canada-day-reading-list-from-our-indie-presses.html

What We See in the Smoke, Ben Berman Ghan
Author Ben Berman Ghan steps back in his preface to tell us what to expect in the pages that follow. He calls it a “fix-up novel,” originally 17 unconnected short stories that he reworked as a single speculative narrative, the only constant being the central character, Toronto, its immediate past and its far-flung future (specifically, 2016 to 3036). But this kind of meta literature defies space and time, and it’s perfectly OK to read these story-chapters in whatever order one fancies.

Judging from the blurb, I was expecting a run-of-the-mill dystopian science fiction novel. I got something else altogether. This is not a traditional novel but a series of different yet oddly connected short stories. The stories are really linked by themes and ideas. I don’t read a lot of science fiction and this is an example of the kind of stuff I enjoy the most. Each story is a bit of a mystery as you don’t really know who the narrator is and if they have a bigger role to play in the book overall. No story is the same and the plot and narrators are wide and varied. One of the best stories is narrated by a building which shouldn’t work but really does. Each story was a pleasure to read. My favourites were Closing Time and The war with Space. This book is a rare treat.

This is the first review I have ever left without finishing the book, and I am only doing so because I am not sure I will make it all the way through. I have tried, and tried hard to get into this one, but I find it so disjointed and awkward that it’s a struggle to finish a section.
The stories are shallow, underdeveloped, and lacking cohesion. Maybe it all comes together later, and if so, I apologize for my comments, but I’m not seeing it. At 50% of the way in, you should be able to tell if there is some type of connection or central unifying theme.
Not for me.

The book is an ambitious and beautifully wrought collection of interlinked short stories. I enjoyed all of them, and even the few I found rather humdrum were by no means terrible.

The writing is clear, concise, but often lyrical. The tone was bleak throughout, which can be tiring in a short story collection, but I didn’t find it so in this volume as the stories were interconnected.

The characters were well-defined in each story – I understood their motivations and struggles. I enjoyed the non-binary focus as well as the equal page-time for men and women. The intersectionality of the collection was wonderful – there is a character with deafness, many people of colour, and a range of sexualities.

My one major issue was with the preface. I read the first paragraph and then skipped it. I can understand a preface or a forward in a classic novel or a translation, but in a new work it is a major turn off for me. It’s essentially a spoiler – I don’t want the work explained to me! I want to experience and figure it out on my own. Frankly, if you feel you must explain to your readers your formatting intentions, maybe you need to revisit it.

This ties to another reason I can’t give this book five stars – at times it felt like it was trying too hard to be somewhere between a short story collection and a novel. The links between stories were sometimes too heavy-handed or felt forced (Shakespeare, “it was enough”, colt .45s). Sometimes they were subtle and I enjoyed picking up on them (missing thumbs, aching leg wounds), but other times it was distracting.

I did enjoy the attempt at having all the stories exist within the same universe/timeline, but it got a little convoluted. There are too many existential themes (AIs, clones, death, suicide), social themes (human rights for robots, cloning for food purposes, gender, implants, government control), and then sci-fi science elements (teleportation, colony ships, AIs, clones, dream capturing). There’s just too much. I felt overwhelmed by the new concepts in each story, especially in a collection that’s supposed to be the same story. It made me wish each section only had 3 long stories with one single theme from each aspect.

Overall, it’s a beautiful collection. You could read each story as its own self-contained tale, but they also work as a linked set. Those from Toronto will enjoy the references to the city.

We have many questions about the future, such as whether artificial intelligence will take over, if we will be able to teleport one day, whether there will be enough jobs in the future, and whether another nuclear war will destroy our planet. Ben Nerman Ghan imagines a world where these scenarios have come true.

What we see in the smoke is a collection of short stories set in 2016-3036. Most are based on Toronto, Canada, while some follow the stories of people who originated from there. Each story was a mystery in itself - I was hooked because I wanted to know who was narrating it and what role did they play in the grand scheme of things. With elements from iRobot, and narration from a variety of perspectives (I found the one from the perspective of a building fascinating), each story is about identity and adjusting with reality. In some, the narrators themselves are struggling to understand who they are. In others, they are trying to understand what the world has become.

The stories touch on issues such as cannibalism, human organ trafficking, acceptance of androids as being alive, in a personal way, looking at how and why humanity will get there. Also taking a deeper dive into what an artificial intelligence might think like one day, struggling with its own identity and in some cases, to make sure that the humans it loves survive.

Ben created a world that I wanted to go back to, based on all the different narratives, piece together what really happened that all these events transpired. It is unclear why the musician was in an endless loop, and how with a click, humans were able to teleport and why everyone had to get implants… but those are the very elements of science fiction and realism.

My favourite stories were Closing Time and The war with Space. Ben says in Closing time,"The future can be as much as myth as the past." I really enjoyed this book because it is the only one I have ever read that tried to answer the big questions we have around data, automation and computers. Ben did this by showing the reader pieces of numerous lives that were affected by telling stories with unique voices. My tasks does not end here because I still want to go back and create the big picture I read about in fragments scattered over more than a century.

I am thankful for the free advanced reader copy from the publisher and author through NetGalley. If you like mysteries and science fiction, and are curious to know what the world might look like in the coming years, I highly recommend picking this book. Be patient though, because like all short stories, it will take some adjusting to the settings and the beings.

I quite enjoyed this but I would not call this a quick read. It took some time to get into and to keep up with the various characters and their stories. I loved how each character had a sci-fi twist too it and EVERY SINGLE ONE was an unreliable narrator. It made the book way more interesting and kept me along for more. The only reason this did not get 5 stars for me was the pacing of the book, like I said it took a bit to get into for the first half but the second half made up for it in regards to storyline.

What drew me to this was the Toronto setting being from Canada I always love reading about things set here. I loved this take and it was a cool twist on future life in Toronto.

A pretty unique approach -- a series of inter-connected but stand-alone stories that form a story that spans 1000 years. Kudos to the author for the execution of a creative idea. For expecting sci-fi, that doesn't kick-in until a few chapters in so be patient. Recommended for something different.

I really appreciate the complimentary copy for review!!

I'm a very patient reader but I do expect some payback early enough in the book to hold my interest. After three chapters and 20% read, there was not one bit of science fiction here. There were minor thematic elements that recurred, similar to Cloud Atlas but not as deft. The writing itself is decent enough but the content just isn't there.