Member Reviews
'Steel Crow Saga' is a fun-packed magical adventure following four main characters. The best parts of this book are the Asian and LGBTQ+ representation, deep character growth, and intricate world-building. Coming in at over 500 pages, this adventure is rather lengthy and involved.
This book was quite long and didn't feel like everything that was in it was necessary for the development of the characters or plot. I did enjoy some things about this book, while there were other parts that I didn't care much for.
There are four different point of views that are included: Lee, Tala, Jimuro, Xiulan. Each has their own chapters and we also get a prologue from an entirely different character. At first I was confused by the prologue and a chapter for one of the characters because there wasn't any mention of a timeline. Besides that part, it was easy to understand how the characters fit together.
There were a couple fascinating concepts that were included such as the "shades" and metalpacting. Although the concept of a "shade" was similar to other things that have been done like pokemon, it was still cool to see this. The concept of metalpacting is to bind your soul to metal, such as cars and weapons. I don't think I have read anything that included something like this so it was refreshing to see.
When it came to the characters, they were diverse in backgrounds/representation. They were interesting but some of the scenes between them felt unneeded. I never felt a connection towards any of them which is something that I need especially for such a long book.
Overall, there were unique concepts used and I feel like many will enjoy this book but unfortunately it just wasn't a book for me.
4.25/5 stars
This book took me a bit longer to read than I expected, but the end was so worth it!
When I first started this, I immediately noticed that we'd be having multiple POVs. I'm usually a fan of these as it gives more depth to the story-line and character imo. Each character had their own unique voice and the development was literally amazing. I only had issues with some pacing inconsistencies when switching from POVs. That usually made me have to reread pages to figure out where I was or what plot-line to focus on. It all comes together in the end, but it did cause me to have to take a few mental breaks here and there. You actually do end up caring for all the characters, which was a pretty great accomplishment. Usually when a book has multiple POVs, I only end up liking about half the characters and then wanting to skip the others. This one didn't do that. Each character was interesting and just grows on you throughout the book.
The story-line itself was on that interested me before I started reading, but it wasn't my favorite. It's still has a strong plot and holds itself together well, but I've read a ton of books with similar stories. I truly think the characters themselves add a lot more to this book, making the story one you want to continue reading. If I hated the characters, this might have been a book I wouldn't have enjoyed at all. The characters make this book, and honestly that's not a bad thing at all.
Overall, I'd seriously recommend checking this one out! It's quite long, and I certainly couldn't focus on it for long periods of time. This is one I think people would enjoy more reading it in chunks. Luckily for us, the book is divided into sections. If anything, you could get this at the library and test it out first if you feel it might be better for you.
ARC provided to me by the publisher in exchange for an honest review. All thoughts and opinions are my own.
This is a complex review for me to write, because I was really looking forward to reading this, but I’ve had to push myself hard to finish it. There are the bones of a really good book here, and since there’s a three book deal here, there’s a chance that this can be taken into mind for the rest.
The good:
-Krueger does amazing world building here. You can tell where the real world/historical parallels are for countries, but he also takes care to build each nation’s culture and magic system by itself and in relation to each other.
-The characters are great. From our POV characters, I’d love to see Lee and Xiulan get their own book, and maybe more of Tala if he decides to go that way.
-A lot of people have described this as “anime as fuck”, and you definitely get that vibe throughout. When it hits its stride, it’s amazing.
-The sheer diversity of the characters in terms of sexuality and gender is great.
-What I regard as the core plot (Tala, Diamangan, and the splintersoul) is an exceptional story.
The not so good:
-Pacing troubles.. Lee and Xiulan’s story, however good, sticks out in this regard. (Perhaps make their story its own novel?) I lost patience with Jimuro as a POV character when we found out it wasn’t actually him the Big Bad after. I felt the bloat about at the 40% mark and it continued until the end of the novel.
-References. The riffing became grating in the second half of the book.
-The road to the climatic fight. Too long, and while I understand the setup must be done, the set up wasn’t helped by the bloat. If we’re continuing with the anime references, it began to feel like Dragonball Z, complete with filler.
There is a core of a really good book here, but it gets weighed down by overreliance on reference and committing to too much overall. Krueger apparently has a three book deal for Steel Crow, so I hope the next book he’s able to trim it down a little and not be afraid to save something for another book.
I enjoyed this book a lot. The characters all grew on me, and grew themselves during the course of the story. The interactions and relationships that developed were plausible and interesting. The whole story takes place in a somewhat modern (guns, phones, trains) setting with some substantial differences, most significant being magic. Certain people are capable of one type of magic or another seemingly based on nationality. The nations involved are very thinly disguised Asian countries. I'm not actually sure how thin that disguise is. It was easy to identify the countries based on the food, architecture and furnishings, but I'd have to be better informed about the historical and current dynamic between these countries to understand if the author is making political statements. In any case, as pure fiction it stands up perfectly well on it's own.
I was able to read this book early thanks to #NetGalley.
Holy Moly am I glad that Paul Krueger wrote another book, and that it will be a series! His debut book was one of my favorites the year it came out, so I was STOKED to see something new from him! This book is fantastic, the characters are are well rounded, the world buiding is impressive, and the dialogue is fun. I can't wait for the next book!
#ARC
Creative idea, interesting characters. Pacing and plot could use a little work, but overall enjoyable read.
YES! I think it was Fonda Lee saying that this was like a mix of Pokémon and Avatar (well, at least Pokémon) but it totally gives me an Avatar the Last Airbender feel. I could not put this book down and loved all of the references to the real life cultures that the in book cultures are based off of. As a Korean married into a Filipino family, the references made me smile and feel incredibly at home with the characters themselves.
I actually felt that the prologue was a good introduction to the book! I don’t want to spoil the story, but I thought it added to the overall story and helped to give some insight on shadepacting and the Sanbunas. It was interesting to read about the characters and their relationships, as well as the shadepacting aspect of the whole thing. I would highly recommend this book.
The author is also a Filipino, which was cool to find out!
Fantastic fantasy book! The main countries were/are a bit hard for me to keep straight for some reason, but I love the concept. Shadepacting and metalpacting are super unique and I hope to read more from this author!
I really enjoyed this book, even though it was kind of slow in some areas. The characters really drove this book and it was fun getting to follow all of them and learn about them. I liked the animal aspect, I thought that added a extra umph to everything! All in all solids read.
A soldier, a thief, a detective, and a detective from different backgrounds must band together against an enemy determined to destroy them all. Unexpected bonds and alliances are formed as the four fight for their lives and their peoples. The world Kreuger has built is a magical one where human can enchant metals and bond with animal companions and one that deftly holds a mirror to our world’s history of imperialism and oppression.
For fans of R.F. Kuang’s The Poppy War and Roshani Chockshi’s The Gilded Wolves.
This book was amazing! I loved characters and the magic system. Some from Sanbu and Shang can pact, or soul-bond, with an animal’s shade. The shade can live inside the person, but can create a deadlier version if needed for battle. It reminded me of an anime with how everything built up to the final fight scene. The relationships between the characters really made this story for me. Definitely a must read!
I received a copy through NetGalley for reveiw.
This one gets a 4.5/5 for me. The only reason I can't give it a five because of the 4 days I spend infuriatingly waiting for the story to pick up 40% into it. I came so close to putting it down.
I have a weird relationship with this book. Because it is so good. On and unbelievable level of good.
It switched off it at least 4 standard POV's. I think total there were six.
It also does a big jump in the beginning of years but doesn't initially explain anything until later, but when it does. oh.. hoo hoo. It takes off running.
The world is set up in a sort of fantasy/ modern version of Asia.
Each character is from one of the 4 major nations that have just ended a massive war. And these are its survivors. All trying to wrap up and work towards peace or to better their country for the future (or themselves.. cough Lee). Shadepacting (the act of breaking a fragment of your soul, to share with an animal partner) and in Tomoda metal pacting (the act of transferring once essence to power metal objects) are common place in this universe.
Out main characters are Tala an army Sargent from Sanbuna, Prince Jimuro from Tomoda, Princess Xiulan from Shang, and Lee a crafty thief from Jeongson.
They are complicated characters with heavy pasts and secrets. They have all been through a lot.
And there's a lot of prejudices, and hatred between then even though they have to mutually learn to work together.
I wish the early chapters had been easier to get rolling and get into. The writing style is meaty, and very descriptive, and each cultural way of acting, the formality does tend to get a bit in the way of getting into the story.
But I was super impressed by the end!
What an amazing, richly detailed world the author has created. My only gripe (other than no one ever seemed to have to go to the bathroom, but that's a problem w/most stories innit?) is that evidently NO ONE in this world knocks on a door before opening. C'MON, MAN!!
This is a story of countries at war, humans who can bond with animal spirits that fight alongside them, LGB representation, family bonds and betrayal, and love.
I usually complain about the ending of novels. THIS ending was Mary Poppins: practically perfect in every way. Even the possible sequel setup was not annoying.
I loved this novel SO HARD. I can't wait for book #2!!!
Recommended for fans of fantasy (epic war fantasy, not dragons fantasy).
I’m not a girl who writes very well, but I’m in absolutely AWE of Steel Crow Saga! This story of four completely different people trying to survive a world full of politics, magic, and love made me laugh and cry so much! Paul Krueger wrote another favorite of mine, Last Call At The Nightshade Lounge, and I’m just as in love with Steel Crow Saga.
This book has much to commend it. It is set in a diverse universe with a very diverse set of characters--diverse ethnically, diverse in terms of sexual orientation, and diverse in terms of gender identity. The characters are generally likeable, interesting, and fairly well-developed. And the book has magic and animals. But, I felt that overall the universe was a bit confusing and not well-developed at the beginning of the book. I felt the same way about the magic too, the whole magic system left me a little confused.
I would also note that this book has a decent amount of bad language and romance. I felt that the bad language was pretty gratitious. So, I would place it on the older end of the young adult range.
Thanks to NetGalley and the publisher for the eARC in exchange for my honest review.
This was not a book that pulled me in immediately, it probably took me 3 times as long to get through the first 1/3 of the book as it did to finish the rest. That being said, once the world building/character introductions were made it really found its stride.
The magical system was interesting, though I did find it curious that most peoples had a different "branch" of magic but there were two distinct groups with the same style. I did not find it entirely off putting, but I would have preferred to avoid the romantic entanglements that popped up. Fortunately they were not major plot driving features for the most part.
The pacing was well done, and once the action started I found myself churning along through page after page. The characters were distinct, and the story was engaging.
Overall, not my top book of the year but absolutely enjoyable and worth checking out by anybody looking for their next read.
"This band of rogues and royals should all be enemies, but they unite for a common purpose: to defeat an unstoppable killer who defies the laws of magic. In this battle, they will forge unexpected bonds of friendship and love that will change their lives—and begin to change the world."
Stop what you are doing, put this on the top of your TBR!
[This review first appeared at https://fictionistmag.com/}
★★★★☆ // ★★★★★
(4.5 stars)
I got an ARC of Steel Crow Saga from BookCon this year. Though I hadn’t actually heard of SCS and it hadn’t been pitched to me for review (yet, at least), for some reason I still decided to read it first, and that was such a good decision.
Please don’t sleep on this book. Don’t think to yourself “huh, I haven’t heard much hype about this, it isn’t YA, I’m not sure what to make of this premise” and read something else instead. Read this book. Read it because it’s great and I’ll tell you why.
1. The Characters
Paul Kreuger manages to create characters who are believable, who make predictable-yet-unpredictable decisions, who deal with trauma and anger and sadness and betrayal and still move the story forward. I love the multiple POVs. I love the way he writes all of his characters, the way each one feels unique. They aren’t just pieces in different places on his storyboard; they are unique, individual characters who drive their stories in different ways. I love that I can tell who a character is just by their dialogue. I love that I have favorites. That means Kreuger has done a great job.
2. The Plot
It feels like the plot and the characters are equally important, as opposed to most extremely plot-driven fantasy novels. I love that. The plot does stand on its own, though, and I definitely said “oh, shit” once or twice. It kept me invested, to the point where I would read on my commute and refused to put the book down until I was sitting at my desk and signed into my computer. I read at lunch, while I ate. I couldn’t stop, and it was made even better by the fact that Steel Crow Saga is just long enough that you can really lose yourself in it. It’s the perfect length.
3, The Setting & Worldbuilding
This is really the only part that didn’t immediately charm me, but it wasn’t a lasting issue. I love that Kreuger takes different Asian cultures and uses them for each different country/culture represented in Steel Crow Saga. One is obviously Japanese, another is obviously Korean, and so on. They use the same languages, too — there are Korean and Japanese words in Steel Crow Saga, the most obvious of which are references to food or clothing, which was a bit jarring. The countries have different names, though, and different histories. This threw me for a loop at the beginning; it was so obviously an exact copy of a specific culture that I had to kind of reprogram my brain’s expectations — this is a fantasy book, after all, so I just wasn’t expecting such direct pulls from real life. But I also love shows like Avatar: The Last Airbender which are also (slightly less direct) pulls from specific Asian cultures, and have seen countless fantasies “inspired” by different aspects of Asian cultures that (rightfully) get flack because they blend multiple cultures together and further the myth that Asian cultures are interchangeable, which they absolutely are not. They vary widely and each deserve respect. In this way, I think it’s great that Kreuger differentiates these cultures and makes sure the reader gets a sense of the individuality of each of them. By the end, the direct pulls from the real world didn’t bother me as much, and I still absolutely adored the characters, plot, and “pacting” magic. The worldbuilding was fleshed out and felt purposeful. Also worth noting that I am not Asian, and thus my opinion here should absolutely be taken with a grain of salt.
4. The Rest
I think of Steel Crow Saga as kind of a mix between The Legend of Korra (for the uninitiated, LoK is the sequel series to Avatar: The Last Airbender), Children of Blood and Bone by Tomi Adeyemi, and something very unique. In a Tweet, Kreuger mentioned he was going for the same YA crossover space as A Darker Shade of Magic by VE Schwab, which is also an adult fantasy but gained a huge amount of popularity with YA readers. I think he’s done extremely well, and I hope the numbers prove that when the book releases. It was a lovely ride, and I’m kind of annoyed that I got to experience it so early, because that means I’ll have to wait even longer for more. It officially releases September 24, 2019.
Overall, I highly recommend Steel Crow Saga, and I’m glad I had the privilege of creating the very first meme of the series. Here’s to many more — and thank you, Mr. Keruger, for sharing this story with us.
OMG WHAT DID I JUST READ???
If you’re looking through these reviews wondering whether you should pick up & read this book, here’s your sign: FUCK YES PICK IT UP AND READ IT!!!
I just finished reading it 2 seconds ago and came RIGHT to review it while I still have tears in my eyes from the ending, so if my thoughts are completely jumbled please forgive me!!
So let me break it down for you, try to make this understandable because there are a LOT of moving parts in this story. We are dealing with 5 ASIAN INSPIRED nations/races:
1. Tomoda - METAL PACTING, any metal or steel moves, bends, warms & cools, at their will. Metal control is their “superpower”
2. Shang and Sanbuna - both separate nations with separate cultures, but both ANIMAL PACT. They pair with an animal and then the animal is like a cross over between a companion & slave. The animal is at the person’s will, but also still keeps its individual personality if that makes sense.
3. Dahal - INTERNAL PACTING, makes them faster and better fighters and healers. Very merchant based country. We don’t get too much of them in this novel, but I have a strong feeling we will see a lot more of them later on in the series.
4. Jeongson -the minority, the underdogs. They can technically animal pact but their people were stripped of that privilege. They are sort of the scapegoat for the other countries, it seems everyone kinda hates them for no reason other than racism.
The Tomodese hate Shang & Sanbuna because they believe animal pacting is slavery and evil (which I honestly kind of see their point, even though the animal pacters we meet aren’t inherently evil, there is something very dark about a living thing being at your will). So the Tomodese invade Shang & Sanbuna and try to squash their culture and heritages while stealing all of their metal resources. They win the first wars and occupy for a little while, but then a revolution comes and Shang & Sanbuna free themselves of Tomoda. And that’s about where the story starts, the negotiations between the nations after those two wars.
Alright so then where do the characters fit into this setting?
Tala and Mang -Sanbunas, both animal pacters. Brother & sister. This isn’t a spoiler bc you find out within the first 10% of the story: but Mang dies and Tala, in order to save him, does something very bad and pacts with him as if he was an animal (so now he’s more or less at her will). Tala is a respected Sanbuna soldier & Sergeant and HATES the Tomodanese, but is ironically sent on a mission to deliver the Tomoda Iron King, Jimuro, safely back to Tomoda for peace negotiations between their nations.
I personally loved the two of them.
<i>“At the end of the world, there would be the cockroaches, and there would be Tala, their fearsome warrior-queen.”</I>
Tala was a favorite, she is a warrior at heart, she loves the fight and she lives FOR the fight. She blurs the lines between good & bad, her hate for Tomoda and love of violence often blurs her vision, but throughout the novel we can see that she’s genuinely trying her best not to be a force of evil. You grow to really like her despite the shades of grey she shows morally, and she was just a fascinating and REAL character to follow.
Jimuro - prince of Tomoda, next in line as the Iron King. His ruling family gets murdered, he’s the last royal bloodline member of Tomoda, and he gets captured by Sanbuna after the revolution. He’s put on a ship under Tala’s command to return home for negotiations for peace.
Jimuro is the most important piece of the game board in this story.
<i>“‘You’re the most valuable beating heart on this shitheap of an island,’ Lee said. ‘I could take you to any street corner in the country, start the bidding at ten thousand masu, and someone would offer me twenty.’”</I>
Jimuro has the BIGGEST FUCKING CHARACTER ARC EVER!! When I first started reading this story I HATED HIM, I thought he was an annoying little shit. But his character grows SO damn much that by the end of the book he was genuinely one of my favorite characters and rulers of all time. I love that at the beginning of the book he constantly throws himself in dangerous situations and you’re led to believe that it’s because he thinks his royal ass is invisible, but you later learn that there’s just so much more to him:
<i>“I thought a dead hero would be worth more to the people of Tomoda than a living fool. I thought the world would be better off without me.”</I>
He truly cares about his people, he’s truly open minded; and i loved his vulnerability and how hard he tries to overcome his fears, his past, and his losses to be the ruler that he dreams of being.
<i>“I never even got to say goodbye to my family, and now I have to carry on their legacy all by myself. And if I fail, my whole country pays the price for it. What if I can’t be the Steel Lord they need? What if everyone at these peace talks is just setting me up to fail?”</I>
Xiulan: princess of Shang, animal pacter. She wants her sister’s throne, so she sets out on a personal mission to capture the Iron King Jimuro to deliver to her father so that she gets bumped up the line of succession.
I identified most with Xiulan of all the characters, she’s the one I hold closest to my heart. Not only because she absolutely loathes mushrooms as I do, but because I truly relate to her. She reads a lot, and she dreams of going out and being like the characters in her books, which is how she becomes entangled in the book. She’s very hard on herself, she sets very high expectations for herself and often curses & degrades herself when things just don’t go her way. She talks a LOT... me too Xiulan. She always plans out how conversations might go, (I call them “scripts”) like one talks to themselves in the shower and plans out arguments, same.
I just love her. She’s the least well equipped of all the characters, not particularly strong or powerful, but she keeps her wits about her the entire book and claws through every problem she faces.
<i>“This was merely something else to be overcome, just as she’d clawed through everything else in her way.”</I>
I also like that Xiulan is not inherently a GOOD person, but tries her hardest to be.
<i>“Xiulan had already worked so hard to undo her prejudices just by taking the woman on as her partner, and this choice had rewarded her in all the best ways. She refused to regress now.”</I>
I really related to this as well, I sometimes have my own prejudices & not so nice thinking, but I try my hardest to undo them. It feels good to read of someone fighting like I am to be a force of good, despite everything.
Lee - Jeongsonese, thief & criminal. She gets tangled up with Xiulan, in which the two of them embark on the journey to capture Iron King Jimuro from Tala & Mang.
Lee was very entertaining, though she was my least favorite character of the bunch. I didn’t NOT like her, she was funny and witty and brought good diversity in the story. She’s Jeongsonese, part of the oppressed nation I’ve mentioned, and everybody treats her like shit.
<i>“‘Jeongsonese? I thought you people killed all those dogfuckers.’”</I>
But, she doesn’t use this as self pity, she uses it to her advantage. She’s very dynamic and is constantly fighting the part of herself that is telling her to just run away from the problems at hand and hide, but she always ends up staying to help Xiulan (who, bless Xiulan’s heart, refuses to back down). I love that she felt real, not everybody is keen on fighting and being in the middle of things, but her loyalty abides all else.
This is really like an Asian Game of Thrones, but with hella lot more magical aspects to it. You get these characters, all different races and countries and powers, all with motives and goals, and their storylines interweave PERFECTLY and EPICLY.
I loved the writing style as well!! I always think of myself too picky when it comes to writing style because I love metaphors and imagery, but in a careful balance. Stories with TOO many details jumble my brain; and that’s why I enjoy metaphors & comparisons, not only because they’re beautiful but they make descriptions short and to the point.
<i>“And while Xiulan bobbed and bounced like the lid on a boiling pot of rice, Ruomei moved through the world with the calculated grace of a surgeon’s knife parting flesh.”</I>
There is such BEAUTIFUL imagery throughout this story, such thorough descriptions it feels as if you’re rolling in the grass of Tomoda. Each character has their distinct thoughts and views on the world that you always know which point of view you’re in.
I’m truly fangirling over this because even though you have so many moving parts in the story, you still have AMAZING characters and writing! They are all unique, all flawed, all distinct, and I loved/hated all of them. You really get to see this new world from a bunch of different eyes: the oppressed Jeongsonese, the self righteous Shangs, the rebel Sanbunas, the power hungry Tomodanese. It was sooooOooOo epic from start to finish!!!!
Highly recommend, CANNOT EFFING WAIT FOR THE SEQUEL!!!!