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I couldn't finish the book because I couldn't get interested in it. it doesn't mean other people shouldn't read it. I think it was one of the books I picked for valentines day. I do like the names of the characters and the story line but It was missing the romance part.

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The cute cover and the synopsis got me intrigued! Honestly, seeing Mr Darcy in the title I knew it was something I thought I’d really enjoy. Unfortunately this one didn’t work for me. I couldn’t finished it.

I did read an advance copy in exchange for my honest review so this was not a finished copy. Hopefully, some changes will be made before the final book is released. Best of Luck!

Thank you Netgalley and to the publishers for an advance copy.

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I confess: I saw the book name including “Mr. Darcy” and I screamed: “Yessss!”

Only this magical name and beautiful illustration made me click the request button and of course after seeing it at my library, I applied my regular routine when I get a book that I really want to devour!

First base: Screaming

Second base: dancing on the chair

Third base: dancing in the street

Fourth base: catching the happy hour for grabbing house margaritas to celebrate!

So after my routine, I was suffering from a little tipsiness but I was still okay to start my reading. But as I start to flip the pages and pass the chapters after chapters, I started murmuring: “What? Really! Ha? WTH? Nooo! Nooo! Nooooooooooooooo!”

Hara is half Japanese and half African American, (she also has Greek goddess name) a small company sports author but as I read the terms she uses for her articles or talk with the colleagues, she seems like she has no idea about sports. Even though she has friends circle with basketball players’ wives and dated with too many players. (Nobody taught her enough and I’m so sorry for her boss, arranges her limo, fancy hotels and flights for her gig.)

I have to admit I hate the guts of the heroine and romance parts definitely failed for me! This book is not retelling of “Pride and Prejudice”! Hara loves this book and mentions about quotes and passages and names are familiar but that’s it!

The story progression made me dizzy because too many dramatic, traumatic, angsty things happening at the same time. Miscarriages, perfect storm, flight cancellations, sexual harassment, parent at the jail! Oh boy! At some I waited for alien or zombie invasion. I could happily pay them to kill heroine to save us from the misery!
So characters, romantic development and story-telling, semantic mistakes didn’t work for me!

This is a big disappointment because I was so ready to enjoy a soft, sweet, entertaining romance. You cannot always get what you want as the song says. I want to change the name of the book as :”Wrong Mr. Darcy Book”
So unfortunately after a long time, I’m giving two solid stars and chasing better books by climbing up to my MOUNT TBR.

Special thanks to NetGalley and St. Martin’s Press/St. Martin Griffin’s to share this ARC with me. I wish I could enjoy it but unfortunately this book didn’t fit with my expectations.

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*I voluntarily received a free advanced copy in exchange for my honest review and thoughts*

2 STARS

Ms Jane Austen would roll over in her grave...

Things that I didn’t jive with in this one:

-No real chemistry between the MC’s. They basically fight and disagree 95% of the book, and make out and hook up the other 5%.

-The pacing was off and the dialogue felt stilted.

-The situations became more and more unbelievable as the book went on (like telenovela/soap opera unbelievable)

-It felt like the author put little to no effort into research and just threw things on a page. For example, our female MC is named Hara, and she tells our male MC that her name is Japanese and she was named after the Greek goddess Hera... First off, Hera and Hara don’t even sound the same. Second Hara in Japanese means ‘belly’ or ‘stomach’ Why would anyone name their daughter belly?

-Very little of the story reflected Pride & Prejudice at all. Only a few vaguely similar character names and two MC’s who disagree with each other a lot.

-And finally, the extremely crude language- multiple uses of a man calling a woman a c***, and other sexually crude references towards females.

Overall I don’t recommend this one.

CW: miscarriage, gun violence, suicide, blood and gore, language

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I have mixed feelings about this book. I was expecting more of a retelling of Pride and Prejudice, but all there was were some of the same names. Also, some of the behavior of some of the characters was unacceptable. I did enjoy reading about the "backstage" part of pro basketball, but it's hard to know just how much of that is fact vs. fiction.

It was a quick read. 2.5 stars rounded up to 3.

Thanks to St. Martin's Press and NetGalley for the ARC of this book in exchange for an honest review.

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I received a free E-Arc of this book in exchange for an honest review. All thoughts and opinions are my own. This book is a modern retelling of the Jane Austen classic "Pride and Prejudice." The story about Hara, a woman aspiring to be a sports reporter, and a famous basketball player. Both characters were not very complex or given much depth. There was some family background given about Hara, but I felt too much emphasis was placed upon her multi cultural heritage. Darcy was too willing to jump to conclusions and people's supposed intentions without really having the much needed conversations with the individuals. I did not really like how fast the relationship developed between the two main characters. It felt really rushed and more lust and not a deeper meaningful connection. The writing was good and appropriate for the age of the various characters as well as the setting. The events of the story moved along well, but were not really believable and seemed too convenient. Overall, this was a nice twist on a classic, but fell short in drawing me into the characters and the story line. I would like to read more by this author and I would recommend this book to those who like modern twists to the classics.

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Ms. Eva is on to something writing this sports romances.
The Wrong Mr. Darcy was a sweet story of a reporter cutting her teeth on a big story and unearthing a story bigger than the one she went in for.


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Thank you to Netgalley & the publisher for granting me this free ebook in exchange for an honest review.

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A young women is trying hard to be a reporter. But being a young women in a mans world is tough. What she thinks is a stroke of luck turns around the other way when she stumbles into some bad things going on. Does she continue to try to further her career or let it go, and first impression are not always right!

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I had high hopes for this story as it sounded like a modern re-telling of Pride and Prejudice with a sports twist. While I think that basics of the story are here I think that the execution leaves much to be desired.

I liked few aspects of this story, like the idea of a sports writer finding her love with a basketball star, I liked the diversity in the story and characters, I liked the way the main character Hara was presented and detailed (with a few misunderstandings), and I liked the development of the romance as it felt fluid and true. Also for a sports story there is a severe lack of sports knowledge that went into the story, even just the basics like what a specific sport is called.

I didn’t like the way the character traded perspectives within the story without any clear delineation; it caused me to get confused at times with who was speaking. I didn’t like some of the choices the authors made in regards to furthering the plot; they simply did not make sense in a realistic way. I didn’t like the lack of respect for the other woman in the story. I didn’t like the way the authors seemed confused over their own characters and story ideas. For example: Hara is from a small town but gets first class tickets to fly, stays at high end hotels and the like all paid for by her boss, even thought there are only two employees (small business), the fact that Hara doesn’t know the origin of her name or cultural aspects of her linage. That didn’t jive for me.

This story read to me more like an outline and not at all a final version. I hope the authors take some time to revisit their story and fix a few of the issues to make the story smoother. It has great potential but was not one I enjoyed. This is not Pride and Prejudice, not even really a re-telling. I think the only thing in has in common is the use of the Darcy name. I received an ARC via Net Galley and I am leaving my honest review.

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This was...not my cup of tea. I thought the premise was good and I enjoyed the basic storyline, but I did not enjoy the writing. A lot of religion and it didn’t flow for me. Very choppy?

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I’m sorry to say that this book didn’t hold my attention. Partly the writing, partly the formatting, and lots of repetition means three stars from me. I imagine the authors know about basketball, but they need to work on their writing ability. For me, wring inthe first person is preferable, but not a deal breaker. The third person writing was awkward.

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I liked the premise of the story, as it gave a different twist an many of Austen's characters from Pride and Prejudice. However, the writing didn't flow well and seemed blocky.

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I thought I would give this author another chance since I had many issues with her other novel, The Perfect Date. Yet, I found myself unable to read this novel all the way through. It was choppy at best and just not anything that I would consider Austen inspired.

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Great beach read! I love modern re-tellings of Jane Austen's classics and The Wrong Mr. Darcy told this story with a brand new angle of Pride & Prejudice where a journalist falls in love with an NBA star despite her desire to avoid him at all costs. This fun rom com is an easy entertaining quick read that you'll breeze through quickly. Fans of re-tellings of any of Jane Austen's work will enjoy comparing this take on the tale to the original and others like Eligible, etc.

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I didn’t really see this as a Pride and Prejudice retelling. I had high hopes, but I don’t feel the book is as advertised. Other than some character names and chapter quotes I didn’t really see the Jane Austen novel. I love a good rom com but this was light on the comedy. Not something I would recommend.

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This was pretty good! I liked the relationships and the story line! I would definitely like to try out more from this author!

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The Wrong Mr. Darcy is a retelling of Pride and Prejudice set in the world of professional basketball’s reporters and wives and players. Player Derek Darcy represents the elite with both his pride and prejudice set against reporter Hara Isari. There’s even a dastardly Bingley sister! Other characters such as Hara’s mother and father are true to form while the sinister aspects of basketball and gambling are new. Written by an insider wife the book is clever, fun and suspenseful.

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The write up (which is very brief) on this is very misleading. When you first read the description/ see the cover you think a modern day Pride and Prejudice with a basketball twist. Something light and fun. The story needs either a major overhaul to match said “charming multi-cultural P&P inspiration” or a new marketing campaign.

Trigger Warnings: Abortion, miscarriage, sexual harassment, attempted suicide, death by gunfire, near drowning, blackmail, cheating...there were more but that’s what I can presently recall.

Not what one would expect in a contemporary romance.

There is little connection to the classic novel save for the names of a handful of characters and a couple scenes, outside of the quote in the chapter header. The characters themselves are more like caricatures then believable people. Some of their speech patterns, thought processes, and behavior are generally too much or not enough.

The story itself, is not at all what was expected. The first couple chapters help a lot of promise. Hara as a journalist working the story, catching the eye of a pro athlete and going from there ok. It was the execution that did not work. They have a “hate/misunderstanding/annoyance to hop into bed to this is the one” relationship that transitions very quickly. Less then a week quickly. It really bothered me that she has the impression that this man shes getting into bed with has had hundreds of one-night stands but there is no talk of any kind of safe sex practices, none. In this day and age that’s just encouraging bad choices. That’s just one of several examples that left a bad taste in my mouth as a reader.
When it comes to the plot and over all feel of the story...again, not at all what was expected. This as a Romantic book doesn’t work. Steamy scenes aside. Your antagonists are so callous and intense that they do not belong in this kind of setting. The last 40% of the book where Hara is uncovering all the scandals (bet rigging, forced blackmail abortion, threatening of harm to persons or loved ones, deviant sports managers, etc) was a good concept. If you’re going to go this route, plug the story as suspense and tie it in more throughout the story. Not so much from Hara’s POV but from the other characters involved.

This was an advanced copy so it is possible this could be a completely different book by the time it is released. As it stands it is not a book I can recommend.

E-Arc kindly provided by St. Martin’s Press via Netgalley in exchange for an honest review. All thoughts and opinions are my own.

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I received an uncorrected digital proof for review.
A unique concept - linking Pride and Prejudice with a sports romance. Derek Darcy, rising basketball star is the “other” Mr Darcy to Hara Isari, Pride and Prejudice fan and struggling newbie sports writer. While anticipating reading a sports romance there was a lot of suspense in this novel. I did not care for how there was no clear separation between the POV of the main characters which could easily be fixed with better formatting before publishing. While the storyline seemed just a tad fantastical at times with the authors throwing every sports cliche in here, overall, I enjoyed the read.

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This book was described as a Pride and Prejudice inspired and with the name Mr. Darcy in the title I was expecting a modern retelling of one of my favorite novels. However, I was disappointed in this book from a retelling standpoint. There were some character names taken from the original story like Mr. Darcy, Charles, and even a passing mention of a character named Kitty but beyond a few name commonalities most of the characters didn’t have much in common with the originals. I kept finding myself trying to decide which characters here were inspired by which Pride and Prejudice characters and it distracted me from the story itself. If I hadn’t been making those comparisons I think I may have been able to get into this book a bit more. I also had some issues with the pacing and the romance felt rushed at times. Sadly, it just wasn’t what I expected.

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