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It took quite a bit of time for me to get into this book. As interested as I was, I was also very put off by the first 75 pages of this book. The world building in the beginning did not lend itself well enough to the story for me to grasp what was happening. A third of the way through this book though, everything took off and I really began to enjoy the story. It became an incredible journey that highlights friendships, embracing your own strength and listening to your own conscience. I was impressed by the way things came together in the end. Forna weaved a path through this story that led to a pretty great finale. I love when a story is unpredictable and I find myself shocked at the end.

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This is an epic fantasy that is lyrical, adventurous, and filled with bad-ass girls/women!!!

In a world where girls are taught that they must make themselves "smaller, weaker than men", a revolution is brewing.

A mighty band of outcasts has no idea the power they hold, but when the right person gives them the opportunity to fight (even when they're not exactly sure what for), their lives and their world will never be the same.

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It usually takes me a week or two to finished a book because I habitually am always reading a couple at the same time but that was not the case with The Gilded Ones! All of my other current reads were promptly pushed to the side because I just couldn't put this down.

It was very well written, the pacing kept me engaged, and the characters were wonderfully diverse. The world-building was just right and never felt overwhelming or lacking and I'm honestly surprised this is a debut. Fair warning, it was a little graphic and gruesome at times but not unnecessarily.

This is going to be a must read in 2021!

Thanks so much to Netgalley and the published for an e-arc of this wonderful book.

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Okay...first of all, this might be the most beautiful cover I've ever seen. And, in what seems to be a bit of an anomaly, the writing and story are just as wonderful. I was definitely caught off guard by how much I enjoyed this book and how much I keep thinking about it and the way it's lessons apply to real life.

This is a strong commentary on so many social issues: patriarchy, prejudice, classism, racism, sexism, and so many other human constructs that serve only to further divide us. The story is feminist and strong, with characters from a bevy of backgrounds who are fighting to survive despite having lived through some horrendous situations. I love how well the narrative embraces multiple life pathways, elevates the characters above prejudice, and displays several cultures and ideologies, focusing hard on the fallibility and inconsistency of humans.

Deka's character is incredibly well-written, showing the change in her as she struggles to accept who she is, reconcile that with how she's been indoctrinated, and eventually rise to discover her own truth. This is such a great work for YA readers because of this display of character growth and serves as a great teaching tool via analogy.

The writing is beautiful, but blunt and captures heavy emotions in a plot with a well-moving pace. There is a blend of character driven and plot driven narrative that balances well and just kept me moving swiftly through the pages. The book is not perfect, but it still deserves a five-star rating. There are some places of awkwardness and a few instances of falling into the writing trope trap ("she released a breath she didn't know she was holding"), but it was still such a fantastic read. I can't wait for the sequel and already see this being a reread in the relatively near future. I just can't stop thinking about it and all the internal implications. A masterfully interwoven work of fantasy and realism. Gah. It's just beautiful.

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The Gilded Ones starts off as an epic fantasy with elements of The Handmaid's Tale in a rich world full of political/religious intrigue, injustice, and an ongoing war with a race of creatures only known as deathshrieks. The first 100 or so pages were super intriguing, easily sucking me in as a reader, and making me care about the characters. Unfortunately, once we got to the bit of the book where things were going to become even more interesting, the author dropped the ball and never picked it back up.

This story falls under the habit of telling rather than showing, and for a fantasy novel, I feel like it hindered the story wholeheartedly. Right as Deka arrives at the training school, we start getting a sped up timeline and storyline. We barely get to see any of the training, schooling, or growth on the page. Instead we're given little recaps of what happened off page. For me, this seriously hindered the story because it stopped me from really caring. I didn't get to go on the journey with the girls, I just got to hear about it.

There's also instalove in this story as well. If it's done well, I can get behind instalove but this one was not done well at all. You could see it coming a mile away and rather than being sweet, it felt contrived. The love interest himself also just didn't have any personality. He was just there, imo. I wasn't rooting for them, I didn't feel any connection to them, and since this book suffers from 'tell, not show', I didn't get to see a relationship bloom but rather spring up out of nowhere.

The ending itself wasn't all that impressive either. It was extremely predictable and just a bit too on the nose for me. I could see every move coming before it even happened and because of that, I just didn't enjoy it as much as I would have liked. It was too fast and short for me to really feel any kind of impact. Even Deka gets blind sided by a major reveal and she just kind of rolls with it. One minute she’s doing one thing and the next she’s doing something else with no reflection, inner turmoil, nothing. It was just weird.

The story idea itself is spectacular. The characters, especially Britta and White Hands, were written very well and were greatly fleshed out. While the world building itself was a bit lackluster, I can see how it can be expounded upon to a point where it could be breathtakingly original but again, 'tell, don't show' and I was left with the feeling of being let down. There was so much original history that us as readers are missing out on and I feel like that does a huge disservice to this story as a whole.

Wonderful story, but I don't think it's done. I really think it could be edited one more time to just expand it a little bit more and add more bang for your buck, otherwise I feel like it will just blend in with all the other YA fantasy releases being put out now.

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That cover is gorgeous and so vibrant! It immediately caught my attention. The story itself is original and flows. I had trouble putting it down. This will definitely find a home in the library!

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This was such a great debut! Magical world building without seeming impossible, honestly. Rich in culture and goddesses, that sucked me in. It was both tragic and uplifting for girls and women! Thoroughly enjoyed the fight for power and not being undermined. Gorgeously descriptive and beautiful.

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What an incredible book! I loved reading this one - the setting and world building really sucked me in and I was hooked from the start. The plot and stakes were also a high point for me - I felt really invested in the storu outcome. And, of course, the main character was soo compelling! All in all, a really enjoyable #ownvoices read!

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Thank you to NetGalley and Delacorte Press for the eArc in exchange for an honest review!

The Gilded Ones was one of my most anticipated releases of 2020 (now pushed back to February of 2021). Namina Forna’s debut novel follows Deka, a 16-year-old whose blood runs gold, the color of impurity. She is given a choice: accept her death, or leave to fight for the emperor in an army of girls just like her. Deka chooses the latter, and so the adventure begins.

The story was what I had hoped it would be: fiercely feminist, a celebration of sisterhood, and about embracing what sets you apart and makes you different. The novel deals with complex issues like racism, xenophobia, trauma, sexism, and gender violence.

However, the execution of the writing was simply not for me. It’s written in first person narrative, which I find difficult to get into. I felt the world-building and descriptions were not as strong as they could have been, and so I never felt truly immersed in the world Forna created, There is an exposition dump and power creep at the end of the novel, which works to slow down the action and makes the ending feel rushed.

I still am going to recommend this to those who have had it on their TBR - different writing styles for different people, and the story is definitely one worth reading.

TW: violence/gore, abuse, sexual assault, trauma

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Thanks to Netgalley for providing an ARC for review.

I am very pleased to say that this one lived up to the hype for me. Plus it has that gorgeous cover!

There's so much this book has going for it. Fierce, diverse warrior girls who are nearly un-killable with golden blood, unique lore, a shapeshifting cat-dragon pet/companion, a precious love interest that doesn't distract from or take over the main plot, and a satisfying first book ending. Plus, masks as part of the world! Always a personal bonus for me. Being marked by dipping their forearms in the cursed gold was also a beautiful and cruel image that spoke to me. There were a few scenes or images like that, that were so well put but too cruel to say I enjoyed them. For example, remembering past scars before their bodies healed, and how they got there.

My biggest complaint was that the first chapter or two were very info-dumpy and a little clunky, as there's a lot of world-building to get across. Also I think I counted the phrase "barely noticed" 3 or 4 times in a very short span, which was kind of distracting and annoying. But that's easily fixed and once the story got going, I really enjoyed it. The length and pacing felt good, and I liked Deka, the main character.

The warrior girls, called alaki, were both so cool and interesting and so tragic. I won't say more because spoilers and the actual release is a long time away, but there's just so much there. I can see a lot of people really loving them and connecting with them. And it never felt like pandering or patronizing to have this amazing group of all girls and women, which I often see happen in media with groups like this, so that was a relief.

I definitely recommend this one and very much look forward to more.

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Wow, this was incredible. If the pub date hadn’t been pushed back a year, it would have easily been my top YA fantasy of 2020. But maybe it’ll end up being a good thing, having The Gilded Ones debut in 2021. There will be time to build excitement and get the word out on this brilliant start to a series. That’s going to be the biggest drawback to this book, waiting for it to *officially* come out next February. Maybe Namina Forna will have the next book in the Deathless series ready by then? Possibly? Please??

I’ve read a loooot of fantasy books starring young female heroines, ones who fight against an oppressive system. This story still feels new even in the face of all of those. It follows Deka, a young woman from a small, religious village in the northern province of the country Otera. Every year a new crop of 16-year-old girls has their blood let to prove “purity”; if they bleed gold they are sentenced to death. Deka ‘fails’ this test and is given a choice: subject herself to further torture at the hands of her former community or leave to fight for the empire. It’s not a particularly difficult decision.

“Never forget: the same gift they praise you for now they will kill you for later.”

The Gilded Ones grapples with a lot, colorism, tribalism, religion, racism, etc. But the greatest struggle the young women in this book face isn’t the monsters they have to fight, the Deathshrieks, but an overwhelming amount of misogyny. Women are forced to wear masks in public, they cannot go anywhere unaccompanied. Girls are the only ones who are tested for ‘purity’ and have little to no options for their lives besides marriage and children....and those are the ones with non-magical blood. The alaki are little more than fodder for the Empire, a government that instituted the blood ceremony and Death Mandate that condemned them to this fate.

The author, Namina Forna, writes in a letter before the start of the novel how both her experiences in Sierra Leone and the United States informed her depiction of Otera. I’ve grown tired of excusing “dEePlY pAtRiArChAl” societies as anything other than ingrained sexist bullshit seeking cover under the guise of tradition, both in the US and abroad. Forna does an excellent job writing within one of those societies, while expertly critiquing it. Sometimes it can be exhausting having to read about institutional trauma over and over again, but here it’s handled in a way that doesn’t feel gratuitous or glossed-over.

“Legend is what humans call the things that they do not understand.”

The world-building in the Otera is exceptional, and this is a great foundation for the Deathless series. It was easy to read and almost impossible to put down. I honestly don’t know how I got approved for an eARC before the quarantine forced the release date back, but I’m incredibly grateful that I did! The characters are vivid and both their triumphs and pain is palpable. It’s an amazing story and I’m calling it now—in eight months The Gilded Ones will be published and it will be a revelation.

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Such a great start to a series. I don't want to give anything away, but the author does a fantastic job world building. We should all be gifted an "Ixa" of our own. It's an adventure that tells girls they are worthy, and the hard path often leads to your truth.

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The Gilded Ones follows 16 year old Deka who is grieving the loss of her mother, but also coming into "womanhood". At the start of the book Deka is preparing for the ritual which will determine if a teenage girl is "pure" and therefore can continue on as a member of their village. The ritual consists of determining purity through the color of blood, red being pure and gold being impure. Deka is desperate for red blood as her white counterparts ostracize Deka for her brown skin and curly hair. On the night of the ritual her blood runs gold, a sign of impurity, and Deka taken by the religious leader to be bled dry is saved by a mysterious woman visiting the village.

The Gilded Ones is a book encompassing a lot of what I love about solid YA fantasy. It was well paced, action-packed, but got to the root of many systemic issues we face in society but within a "different" world, one full of magic. This book presented Black women as strong, complex, and the hero of the story, rather than the side-kick. It was beautiful to be immersed in a world that fought against the norm of YA fantasy.

Deka was an incredibly believable and refreshing character and I enjoyed the plot more because she was so strong yet vulnerable. I often finds in books that the female lead tends to come into her own by hardening to the world and while this happens a bit, Deka never loses that softness that makes her human and young and hungry for change and hopeful that change is possible.

I really enjoyed this book, but I will say it understandably could use a few edits. Had I read this with the first publishing date in mind, I'm not sure I would have been able to recommend this book as highly as I am now. That being said, I feel like with the pushback this will easily become readers favorite read of 2020!

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The Gilded Ones by Namina Forna

All Deka ever wanted was to be pure in the eyes of society. When girls turn sixteen, they are subjected to a Purity test, where they are bled to prove their place in their community. Instead of seeing the deep crimson, she’s stunned as she begins to bleed gold—a mark of a tainted monster. Everyone she knows and loves turns against her, and she faces the ultimate penalty—death.
Lately I’ve been focusing on reading more YA fantasy and fiction by POC, since I feel that they rarely get the attention they deserve. I was immediately drawn to the beautiful cover, and then the description. It is described as a feminist fantasy—and immediately I could see it. In this society, women wear masks to hide their sinful faces. They belong in the home, unseen and unheard. But for Deka, she and others like her—the alaki—are regarded as subhuman demons.
Without giving too many details away, I was so captivated by the entire story. There is a major build-up and mystery to it. In most cases, these mysteries are often predictable, and you can typically see what the outcomes will be. However, with The Gilded Ones, I was constantly guessing and finding myself surprised with every revelation.
I highly recommend this book for anyone who loves rich fantasy, with a strong female lead. This is definitely an empowering read for young girls, and I thoroughly enjoyed it.

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I loved this story. I will be purchasing it for my library and promoting it to my state YA book awards, literature circles and book clubs.

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This book is so beautiful, destined to become an instant YA classic, and I already can't wait for a sequel.

The book starts with our heroine, Deka, anxiously awaiting the ritual that will finally allow her to be accepted by her community. But things are not what they seem, and Deka soon has to face the violence and oppression in her world.

Forna brutally attacks the patriarchy, and deftly handles extremely traumatic experiences known by far too many girls. While the pacing is occasionally a bit off, and I wish I had a bit more description of the various creatures in Otera, the world she's created, these are minor complaints about a truly amazing book. We need more YA like this.

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A book that will receive a lot hype and some of that is certainly justified. I thought this was a rather decent read and could have been better. The characters for me were likable enough but still seemed very flawed in some ways. They are in need of growth and development which should happen later in future books hopefully. The story itself I thought was rather readable and straightforward at the beginning and there were a few twists that did happen. These twists were not bad and can't say I dislike how it all ended. The story needed to padded out with a little more detail in some areas I think or maybe it was written this way to keep a good pace for the book. The social issues in this book are ones that you can find in the real world and there are other things that you could find parallels with this book and reality. I did not particularly care for this world but the way the world used to be and the one they will fight to make again would be a better place to live. I can only look forward and wait to see how the story will told in the future. One reason that I also wanted to read this book was the gorgeous cover. A great cover alone will probably make people curious enough to give this book a try and it will well worth their time time I think.

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<b>3.5 out of 5 🌟Girl Power Fantasy</b>

<u>Full disclosure:</u> I used to love fantasy books and I know if I'd read that book ten years ago, I would've given it 6 out of 5 stars. But after reading a lot of fantasy I couldn't stop cringe seeing yet another <i>chosen one</i> that proven herself/ saved the world/ fulfilled her destiny. That book is redundant to all classic YA fantasy topics but at the same time, it makes it sounds so much better. If I could forget all other titles about girls with extraordinary abilities and know only this one, I'd do that without hesitation.

Let's imagine the world driven by patriarchy where young women need to prove themselves pure in a sacred ritual when entering adolescence. The ones that fail, are condemned to death and their families are disgraced. It wasn't hard to imagine, was it?
The word created by Namina Forna resembles real people's experiences, therefore it feels personal to readers. Deka, the book's protagonist was notoriously ill-treated, disgraced, and violated only because she was born different. I fiercely rooted for her and other mistreated characters the whole book, and despite I knew how it'd end, I enjoyed the reading.

'The Gilded Ones' shows that even when you feel abandoned and fighting & killing is your whole life, it doesn't make you a monster. You are still able to love, care and you deserve to be loved and cared for. There are plenty of battles and blood-shedding in the book and the same amount of deep friendship and loving community. I loved the positive undertone of the book, whereas I didn't enjoy some aspects of the story that much.

I recommend that title to everyone who loves fantasy books and to all young girls, as the story teaches some important life lessons, plus it's really entertaining.

<i>Thank you Netgalley and the publisher Delacorte Press for the ARC in exchange for an honest review. Opinions and feelings are my own.</i>

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Deka hopes to be pure. She hopes that the blood ceremony will prove her to be everything she wants to be-normal. When her blood runs gold instead of red, she finds herself to be an outcast-hated by all. A mysterious visitor gives her the option to stay with those who would exploit her, or go with her to fight with her kind. Little does Deka know when she accepts the visitor's offer that her life will never be the same...and what surprises are in store for her about her kind.

I don't usually read books that lean more towards fantasy, but this book grabbed my attention because of the idea of warrior women kicking butt, while overcoming the fear and stigma attached to being a woman. I was not disappointed!

The beginning of the book was a bit difficult to get into, at first, mostly because there is a lot of information about the society and world that Deka lives in that is being described. That's not a bad thing, for sure, as I love worldbuilding and The Gilded Ones does not disappoint. Once I became more familiar with the world, I became more invested in the book and couldn't put it down!

What I ended up loving most of all besides the primary story in the book was how The Gilded Ones portrayed female relationships. While there was general mistrust at first between the girls, they became like sisters, swearing to protect each other against the world. This is such an important thing to teach girls-to stick together instead of tearing each other down. So much of media would have you think that women are all cut throat and horrible to each other, when that's simply not the case for the majority of women.

I also appreciated that while there is bit of a love story happening during the novel, it's not the primary focus. The primary focus is Deka, her heritage, and her bond with her sisters-in-arms. I was relieved that the love story didn't end up consuming the plot. It was just a nice bonus for Deka!

As someone who doesn't usually read fantasy, let me say, don't let the fantasy aspect keep you from this book.

Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for allowing me to read this book in exchange for an honest review!

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I loved this debut from such a talented author. This fantasy felt both familiar and fresh in the best way, with the comfort of the “chosen one” narrative told in a new way. The main character, Deka, is strong and vulnerable and honest. I loved the female bonds of friendship, the ties to our modern world, the beautiful romance, and the unique worldbuilding. I can’t wait to share this book with teens.

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