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Girl and boy are betrothed, girl believes the world will be phenomenal as a result of this betrothal and has never dreamed of a different life until... INSTA-LOVE and BAM! The rest is history in this dystopian tale full of steamy romance and adventures.

Cassandra is happily living her life, preparing for her role as wife to the most eligible boy in Londinium (that's right, London + "inium") when she is trampled by her feelings for a boy she has never really paid attention to before, Devyn. She saves him from almost certain death thanks to possessing forbidden hacking tech and becomes obsessed with him, only to learn that he is obsessed with her in return. But why has Devyn been watching her? What is the world really like outside of the empire's stronghold in Londinium? Will Cassandra find her fate outside of her expected path and therefore outside of her impending marriage??

On several levels, this book is just okay. It is not an extraordinarily original plot, but does have some very interesting ideas about manipulation and how tech can be used to watch people with or without their knowledge. The characters are not particularly deep, nor does Cassandra seem to have a single purpose outside of her relationships with Devyn and Marcus, the boy to whom she is betrothed. Cassandra seems to only have interest in discovering more about herself when it becomes apparent she can't ignore it anymore. I didn't find her particularly likeable or, quite honestly, her motivation particularly believable.

All of that said, this book absolutely strengthened as it went along. The last third was compelling and interesting, and there were several twists I didn't see coming. I appreciated the ideas of how society manipulates us and how our acceptance or rebellion of this truth can be a blessing and a curse. The ending was compelling and surprising, so as long as you can stomach SO MUCH INSTA-LOVE and some recycling of plots we've seen elsewhere, I think it could be fun. I think the series will likely only strengthen as we learn more about the magic system (totally undefined throughout) and Cassandra becomes more of a person rather than something for Devyn and Marcus to react to. I won't dash out and buy the sequel, but would recommend this book to readers who enjoy a strong romance plot and some exciting possibilities for plots in the future.

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Thank you to netgalley.co.uk for giving me a free copy of this book in exchange for a fair and honest review.

This had an interesting premise that quite frankly I was a little disappointed by when I finished the book. I thought that this premise was all over the place, the author attempts to build a world were the Roman Empire never fell however, there were mentions of other historical periods which didn’t really much connection to the Roman era, as a history student, this ruined me for me.
Otherwise this book wasn’t completely terrible, it was decently written. The story at the beginning was good however, it appeared to drag in the second part of the book. The characters were well written and probably the only reason that kept me reading the book.

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Let me start with this book was okay but not perfect. The pacing felt slow and not slow like in Six of Crows were after the world-building we get a page-turning adventure. No, the pace is slow all the way through. The World itself was interesting but confusing a lot of the time. But what I disliked was the character romance, which seems from the summery to be a big part of the story. I hate the like/dislike/like/dislike romance style and believe that it was what really made the title not enjoyable to me.

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Thank you Harper Collins UK, One More Chapter and NetGalley for providing me with the e-arc for Secrets of the Starcrossed in exchange for my honest and unbiased review.

This book is set in a world where the Roman Empire didn’t fall, set in Londinium, Britannia – the last Roman stronghold. Our protagonist Casandra is betrothed to Marcus, the city’s golden boy but she meets Devyn, a boy with ‘midnight’ eyes who is on the search for a girl with with magic in her blood.

A mysterious illness begins to leach life from citizens with dormant Celtic power in their veins and the Imperial Council has plans that it begins to set in motion. What and Who will Cassandra choose?

Yes, this book does exhibit one of the most irritating tropes in my opinion, insta-love, and Cassandra feels a little two dimensional, almost happy enough to go along with anything that Devyn thinks or wants, but is this nature or nurture? This is a girl brought up in a Roman society where women are considered inferior to men and the Code defines how life should be lived by all.

The world-building for this book is extensive and it really works to bring together a number of elements to build a Roman /Celtic /Anglo Saxon /Magical world, but some knowledge of history will definitely aid you in understanding how it all works or this may encourage you to want to learn more about it.

As I’m sure you can tell, my feelings are mixed about this book. It definitely has some plus points, but for me personally there are some things that I just did not click with. I don’t believe that this is a dreadful book, it just wasn’t one that worked for me personally.

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2.5 stars

I have a lot of mixed feelings about his book. I really enjoyed it and at the same time it left me feeling frustrated. I have decided to split this review in things I liked and didn't like about this book

Things I liked about this book
• I love the writing style. It's very to the point, straight forward and gives you a good look into the feelings of our main character. I really liked the way Clara told the story and would definitely read more from this author.
• I enjoyed the characters in this book. It's true that the characters are all very stereotype characters we have seen in numerous books before. But they were still very likeable and I liked spending time with them.
• The story in the beginning had a great potential to being great. I was drawn into the story from the start and really enjoyed it. The story was exciting, it felt a little similar to other stories, but not in a bad way. I really felt I started a great book and was already getting excited at the prospect of it being the first book in a trilogy.

What I didn't like about this book
• Continuing on the story, I loved it until the second half of the book. The story started to drag and actually became repetitive. A couple of people try to get out of the city. So the story is being build towards them making plans of escape, trying to escape and getting captured. This is then repeated until the end of the book. It occurs, out the top of my head, about three or four times! When they tried escaping for the second time I was like "escape already so we can continue with the story." Because the story kind of got to an stand still in the second half of the book and apparently you have to wait for the sequel to know how things go...
• The biggest turn of for me was the worldbuilding. The world started off as something great and interesting. An alternate version of our own world where the Roman Empire endured and it is set in the future with technology. Great setting! But then the writer had to include more... The medieval times are being thrown into the story with the war of the roses and the Plantagenets. Oh and not to forget Arthurian legends like the Lady of the Lake are mixed into the world and story. If the Roman Empire had endured you wouldn't had have the medieval times... Why not use Roman legends and kings or emperors? Why medieval ones? And on top of this apparently they believe in Greek Gods???? Greek mythology is thrown into the mix as well. They keep using Greek Gods in the matter of speech. "To Hades with you... etc" Why? Why did this beautiful concept needed to be so confusing. As an historian I am just confused and find this mix unbelievable and weird. Especially since this is supposed to be an alternate version of our world where the Roman Empire endured. Why are the facts so weird?
I was super excited for this world, but I am left feeling disappointed. This world would have been amazing if it only concentrated on one element of history instead of several.

That being said, this is just my personal opinion. I do understand that other people will not get frustrated with the world, because they don't care or don't know enough about history to notice all the weird things. For me it was also the only let down of this book. Yes the story got repetitive, but I did not mind that as much as the worldbuilding.
Even though I am frustrated with the world the writing style, the characters and the beginning of the story show huge potential. This is also the reason why I want to read the sequel, just to see if the potential of this story will be reached. Because I believe this could be something really good.

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I expected to like this book, actually I expected to love it. All the elements I enjoy in fiction were there. Alternative history, Roman society, magic and technology, a love story. So why did I dislike it so much? I’m not sure. Maybe the pacing of the story never quite worked. Maybe everything being in the first person meant the whole story was from Cassandra’s point of view, leaving too much too be explained. There are lots of reasons it didn’t work for me but that doesn’t mean it’s a bad book or that other readers won’t enjoy it. It just means it wasn’t a good fit for me.

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Secrets of the Starcrossed, which I received for review from NetGalley, is the first book in the Once and Future Queen series by Clara O’Connor. The novel is set in Londinium, in an alternate history in which the Roman Empire never fell and exists in an uneasy relationship with Celtic tribes beyond its walls. Primarily a fantasy romance, it also features dystopian (most empires are), futuristic, and elemental magic elements. Cassandra, the cosseted daughter of a wealthy merchant, has been matched with Marcus, son of one of the city’s most powerful men. But after she connects with Devyn, a mysterious classmate with an uncanny ability to remain below the radar, she discovers truths about her Celtic past and future in the empire that change her forever.

Cassandra is the novel’s first person narrator, and her relationships with Devyn and Marcus drive the novel’s forward momentum. Her narrative is angsty and can feel excessively drawn out, especially when the novel’s concept offers so many other intriguing plot possibilities. At times, it can feel like O’Connor does not take full advantage of these possibilities, with the story going in circles rather than spiraling outward, though the plot does pick up in the final third, ending with quite the cliffhanger. In addition, readers versed in Roman and British history may especially enjoy the ways O’Connor weaves in and plays with that history.

What I found especially compelling and relevant is the novel’s chilling portrait of how a surveillance state justifies itself to itself and its citizens: entertainment, convenience, and even moral uprightness, e.g. if you have nothing to hide, then why do you want privacy? If you have nothing to hide, why would surveillance trouble you? The importance of the scenarios the novel raises and their potential for discussion about timely questions ultimately outweigh, for me, some of its structural weaknesses. I found this an interesting novel to think with.

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• 𝗥 𝗘 𝗩 𝗜 𝗘 𝗪 •⁣

I was very excited to receive a copy of Secrets of the Starcrossed, the first in The Once and Future Queen series. This has all the markings of a perfect fantasy for me. I love the idea of the Romans never abandoning Britain, the great Roman Empire still going strong in the modern day. ⁣

The story focuses on Cassandra, a teenager living a life of affluent luxury in Londinium, engaged ('matched') to the most eligible bachelor in the city, preparing herself for graduation and marriage, when a chance encounter with her classmate Devyn begins a series of events that will have Cassandra questioning who she truly is.⁣

I love the magic in this book, the idea of the Celts still remaining outside the 'safety' of city walls, magic being taboo. I also really enjoyed the way the lives of the city folk is controlled - from their marriages, their life choices down to their consumerism. ⁣

However, SPOILER HERE - although a pretty obvious one tbh...⁣

My main issue with this book was the insta-romance that happens just a few pages in and the very obvious love triangle (if you can call it that). Cass interacts with Devyn and, despite knowing of him from the same class for years, suddenly takes notice of him, sparks fly...and it's very obvious what is going to happen. In fact the story focuses very much on their relationship, and the more juicy plot of who the hell Cassandra is seems to be just a secondary story to this.⁣

The world also became a little confusing at times, some historical events remain, new ones are added, so it's sometimes hard to follow - but, the concept is a very intriguing one. Even if at times I was wondering how certain things would still be the way they are now, or how some historical events still occured....⁣

I will definitely be reading the next book,hopefully the focus shifts from the central romance to more about the magic and the power struggles of this new Britain (the juicy stuff)⁣ but that cliffhanger has me gagged!

𝘈 🌟🌟🌟.𝟻 𝘳𝘦𝘢𝘥 𝘧𝘳𝘰𝘮 𝘮𝘦, 𝘣𝘶𝘵 𝘐'𝘮 𝘥𝘦𝘧𝘪𝘯𝘪𝘵𝘦𝘭𝘺 𝘪𝘯𝘵𝘳𝘪𝘨𝘶𝘦𝘥 𝘸𝘩𝘢𝘵 𝘸𝘪𝘭𝘭 𝘩𝘢𝘱𝘱𝘦𝘯 𝘵𝘰 𝘊𝘢𝘴𝘴 𝘯𝘰𝘸 𝘢𝘧𝘵𝘦𝘳 𝘵𝘩𝘢𝘵 𝘤𝘭𝘪𝘧𝘧𝘩𝘢𝘯𝘨𝘦𝘳 𝘦𝘯𝘥𝘪𝘯𝘨!

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A fellow book reviewer made me aware that at one point in this book, the main character is drugged by her own mother to make her want to have sex with a love interest. Seeing as I have been drugged for sex, I have no interest in reading a book that takes 'romance' as code for 'including drugged sex where a character cannot fully give consent' ie, rape, as a plot device.

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I LOVE anything roman so this book should have been right up my street, but unfortunately it really fell short.

They refer to hades who is a Greek god which I found jarring, the pacing is too slow and the world building didn't make up for it unfortunately.

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I was very surprised by this novel - it was not what I expected it to be! At the start, I was confused by the setting, it read more like sci-fi than a fantasy. However, after a while, this changed and the fantastical elements came in and I thoroughly enjoyed it - the sci-fi was still there though! I thought the setting was a great backdrop for this plot and also the characters and its description was incredibly vivid.

The plot itself was the driving force of the novel - it was interesting, unique, and intricate. It was definitely something that you had to focus a bit more on at times but ultimately it was so rewarding when the cogs started turning and progress was made. The characters themselves were authentic and well-built. They truly seemed like real people and it was clear what and how their personalities were shaped. There were some characters however they seemed a bit redundant. The love dynamic within this story was also amazing - my only issue was that it could get repetitive and quite frustrating. I would have also liked to have seen more diversity and representation within this book because there was little to none. The ending also felt somewhat unfulfilled, but that’s likely to be because it is the first book in a trilogy.

Saying that though, the angst, the intrigue, the plot, the steaminess - it was all there, and I loved it. Very much looking forward to the second book in the series.

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I’ll be honest in that I had to DNF this book at about 40%. It was a really hard choice to make because there was so much potential here but I wasn’t feeling anything toward where the story was going or it’s characters and it was really dragging for me.

I think the author really knows her story and the history of this world where Rome didn’t fall. She knows it so well but it’s not coming through easily, it’s bursting through like a landslide of back story and information that isn’t particularly relevant to the current setting. Those parts felt like I was reading a history book.

The marriage of technology, history, and magic is also a little confusing here. I wasn’t sure if this was supposed to be modern times since all the old Roman terms are used (and I had to look them up quite often, thank goodness for the dictionary built into kindle). It just didn’t feel very specific as to the point in time and then magic was thrown in which complicated it further.

Pacing was also a problem with this book. One day would last a few chapters then suddenly four weeks were gone in a paragraph without much warning or detail. Surely something of note would have happened or there could have been a less choppy way to write that.

In the end I couldn’t make myself continue because my heart wasn’t in it and reading was feeling like a chore. I’m sure this story will speak to someone, it wasn’t terribly written. I personally just have so many books to get through that if I’m not feeling something I need to let it go and move on.


TLDR: The premise is there but the execution wasn’t engaging enough for me.

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A brand new YA fantasy series for the brand new year! Welcome to an enthralling fantasy world built on the premise that the Roman Empire never fell, walling themselves and their technology into Londinium in an effort to keep the Britons and their magic out.

Cassandra is one of the elite, a rich merchants daughter. Betrothed to Marcus, her one true match and the cities most eligible bachelor she has everything she ever wanted in life, and in her future. However, when what seems like a chance encounter with a mysterious boy in her civics class makes her question everything about the city she lives in, the code all citizens live by and her very own identity, all three become embroiled in a rebellion at the very heart of Roman government.

So I really, really loved the concept and the world building - not many books fuse modernity, technology and magic and I wish that they did - but I just could not get on board with the magic system, it just seemed a bit too nebulous for me. I also found the plot a little predictable, though still enjoyable. The twists just did not have the intended impact, because they were all eminently possible. I also did not find the romance aspect of the book all that convincing, with a little too much tell and not enough show going on.

However, I did rather enjoy it; this is one of those books that either like me you’ll find enjoyable and move on, or it will really speak to you and you’ll be clamouring for the next one, so do give it a go of a good YA fantasy series full of forbidden romance, oppressive states and imminent danger is your cup of tea! I can’t say how much I loved the world it is set in enough.

Secrets of the Starcrossed is out this Thursday, so do go order a copy from all the usual places!

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Imagine the Roman Empire never fell – now, imagine how different the world would be today if it hadn't. You can explore that unimaginable world in Clara O'Connor's book The Once and Future Queen: Secrets of the Star Crossed.

What I Liked

I not only liked but truly loved the world-building in this story. It is my favorite part of the book as a whole. I found the concept to be intriguing and the creation well-thought-out and detailed. I could never imagine the complexities of a society that existed as long as this one would have. How it would have grown and changed over time.

I also think the premise is original and compelling. Even the title brings to mind such wonders as Arthurian legend, not to mention Greek and Roman mythology. The Roman society in the novel is corrupt and, perhaps, even cruel, and that is in keeping with how it once was as well.
The Briton society is enigmatic and full of wonder and magic. And, together, they have the makings of the rich and vibrant story to be told.

I liked that it ended in a cliffhanger, and I have never said those words before. I generally do not like cliff hangers, but I thought it worked for this story. It made me want to find out what happened next, even though I have some concerns about theme development and the story's overall tone.

Lastly, I enjoyed the magic component. As a reader, one of my favorite aspects of fantasy stories is the inclusion of magic and how it is imagined. In this regard, The Once and Future Queen did not disappoint. The Roman's reaction to magic is very telling and so crucial to the plot as a whole.

What I Wish

There are some areas that I wish had been different, though. The first thing that was problematic for me was the tone. It took me a while to figure out what was hitting me the wrong way, but finally, I realized. The tone is too light and even social. There are so many bad things going on, but the tone doesn't reflect that. As a reader, I always felt up on the surface when I should have felt down underneath with the issue's enormity.

The central theme that should go throughout the whole trilogy needed to be incorporated into the story better. The story is told in the first person from Cassandra's perspective. Dev did not want to share with Cassandra who he thought she was and why that is important. And, since the story is in the first person through Cassandra's point of view, I, like Cassandra, didn't understand why it is essential to get her back to Briton and what will happen if he doesn't. This impacted my reading of the story immensely. Other themes are handled very well, like family, destiny, marriage, to name a few, but I never knew why this story is so important, and I needed to understand why this story is essential and what's at stake.

To Read or Not to Read
If you are looking for a fantasy story set in a creative and new world, this is a story that will whet your appetite for more.

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I requested Secrets of the Starcrossed from NetGalley because it sounded unusual. An alternative history where the Romans never left Britain, where Celtic magic exists? Sounded right up my alley.

And boy was I right.

The central character, Cassandra, is the daughter of a wealthy merchant in Londinium. She’s spoilt and pampered, but one day she chooses to help one of her classmates to evade arrest. From there, she gets drawn into a plot and world she never imagined existed.

I loved Cassandra. I thought she was the perfect mix of rich girl and fighter. She doesn’t whine or throw tantrums when things don’t go her way, but fights instead. She digs her heels in and refuses to give in. I can relate.

Devyn is the boy she saves from arrest. And over the course of Secrets of the Starcrossed they become close, and fall for each other. I loved their relationship too. Devyn is a mystery, but so far a mystery in a good way. He’s the wrong boy – but he’s not a bad boy, if that makes sense. There’s nothing weird or unsavoury about their relationship by normal standards.

But Cassandra is engaged to her ‘match’, Marcus. In this world, young people are matched with their perfect partner through their DNA. So cue a love triangle.

I don’t mind love triangles, especially when it’s pretty clear what the outcome is going to be. And neither Devyn nor Marcus annoyed me. They both seemed like good people, just caught in a bad situation.

The world in Secrets of the Starcrossed is intricate. Londinium is a little futuristic. Nothing extremely high-tech, but O’Connor has clearly extrapolated from the technology we have now, and just amped it up a little. For instance, in classes, Cassandra uses a tablet. So there is no mention of pen, paper, or computers.

But the most interesting thing about Londinium is the level of surveillance the citizens are under. They are watched almost everywhere, through cameras and the ever-present Sentinels. And if they are caught doing something against the Code (their law)? The city tries them publicly in the arena. Which is just brutal.

Outside the city, the lands are wild. This is where the Celts live. I loved this juxtaposition of future and past. We don’t get to see much of the Celts and their magic in this first book, but I have a feeling they’ll feature heavily in the next two books in the series.

I loved O’Connor’s writing. She hit the balance between simple language and beautiful descriptions in just the right way. I felt like I could float away inside some of her language. The characters felt real, and their reactions all made sense. The world building is clearly extremely well-thought out. I definitely felt like there was a whole iceberg under the ocean we aren’t seeing.

I have pre-ordered all three books in this series, and I’m especially excited because all three come out this year. Why the publishers made the decision to release the books this way, I don’t know, but I’m very glad they did. More publishers need to do the same.

Highly, highly recommend for any fans of YA fantasy.

This is the best book I’ve read in quite a while.

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I'm a bit torn. I might have expected something different and I don't know why. Is there magic? yes. Is there a dystopian world? Yes. Is there romance? Hell yes. But still I wasn't sattisfied after finishing the book. Maybe this, even though unwilling, Cass's change of heart made me feel cringy and angry more often than I wanted. Or maybe I'm not actually into dystopian stories as much as I thought I was.
Well, I'm not gonna decide right here and now. It was an interesting story and weirdly enough I might read the sequel. :)

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I thank the publisher and Netgalley for the free copy of the book. All opinions are my own.

The story is set in Londinium, in a version of the future in which the Roman Empire never fell. It follows Cassandra, an upstanding citizen of the city, who’s got her whole life mapped out for her. Until destiny throws an outsider at her feet. The story is a blend of technology and magic. While the people of Londinium thrive thanks to the so-called Code and technology, outsiders are known to possess magic. Two cultures, two societies, always at odds, balancing on a very fragile peace treaty. Of course, things go wrong.

Secrets of the Starcrossed was a 3/5 star-read for me. Besides the dubious consent, towards the end, it felt repetitive and predictable. The characters weren’t that memorable, and I can’t say I noticed significant character development over the course of the story. On the bright side, the worldbuilding is quite interesting and engaging. In the end, I have quite the mixed feelings about Secrets of the Starcrossed.

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An all new fantasy YA trilogy, Secrets of the Starcrossed is a story set in a world in which the Roman Empire has managed to retain a stronghold in Britain, creating the walled city of Londinium and an uneasy peace with the British kingdoms around it. The city has made great advances in technology and science and citizens live strongly by the code and rules in place. Cassandra is the daughter of a wealthy merchant and she is due to marry Marcus Courtenay, but when she helps her classmate avoid trouble for carrying a piece of illegal tech, she discovers there might be more to her past than she originally knew and she might be the lost girl he is searching for.

I really wanted to love this book, I thought the premise was a really intriguing one – what if the Romans had stayed in Britain? I loved the idea of a girl with magic in her blood that had to fight to survive in a city where magic is forbidden but unfortunately this book just didn’t click with me. I wanted to know more about the magic in the world and how it worked and less about the history of the Roman Empire. The story was quite quick paced but I felt at times things were glossed over when they shouldn’t have been and then too much focus was placed on things I was less interested in.

Our main character Cassandra is the spoiled daughter of a wealthy merchant and I found her really difficult to like. She spends most her time shopping and complaining about the love interest in the story. For this reason I really struggled to root for her as a character. The story is also much more romance focused than I would have like and I found the on again off again relationship a bit grating.

I think the premise of this one is a really clever idea and I would be interested to see where O’Connor takes the story but ultimately this book just wasn’t for me. If you love YA fantasy romance stories this could be just the book for you and I’m sure fans of fast paced romance will absolutely devour this one.

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I found this book quite unusual. I enjoyed it in a way, but there were some elements that were a little lacking for me.
The premise of this book is that the Roman Empire never fell and that they are in the last stronghold on the Romans left in Britannia. They are surrounded by ancient kingdoms that hold the old ways and have magic in their blood. It was nice to see references to Wales, I always enjoy seeing my country in a book. Londinium is a city full of new technology and the ‘code’ which is law, while outside the Britons hold their power through magic.
We follow Cassandra who is an elite citizen in her 20’s and preparing to graduate from the forum, until she stumbles across some new technology from a classmate. I found Cassandra’s character a little weak and naive at times. She felt like more of a teenager than a woman and I felt this could have been improved upon if she developed her strength. Her classmate, Devyn, is the one responsible for the forbidden tech and we see her develop a relationship with him. I found this quite difficult as there was a lot of frustration and questions that Cassandra was trying to figure out, however the answers were fairly obvious to the reader. There is also a strange illness affecting the citizens, Cassandra’s betrothed Marcus is trying to figure out. I think this was supposed to be a love triangle, however this felt a bit unusual to me and a little forced. There was plenty of action and suspense which I did find interesting. This book had a lot of potential, I would have liked to see more of the magic system and lore explained. I definitely enjoyed elements of this book, I would also be tempted to read the second one, however it wasn’t my usual style. I’m sure many people would enjoy this and I look forward to seeing how the author progresses in the future.

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3.5* rounded up.

I liked this book. The story has a lot of wonderful pieces and characters and I definitely want to know more.

The world building is very good, but a bit lacking. There’s all this talk about the Code but very little about what the rules are and why we should care. It’s pretty clear from the beginning that the ruling Romans (but are they? I’ll get back to that) are the villains. I had difficulty knowing what the heroine ought to be feeling about her behaviour because there was no loyalty build up. We are told she’s loyal and perfect on page one, but she immediately breaks what seems like a pretty big rule for a person she barely knows. That’s not even a spoiler. That’s the first chapter. Also, insta-love. Not my favourite. I may have rolled my eyes a bit.

And before the first chapter is a prologue that still doesn’t seem to belong. I’m not really sure what to do with it.

The characters are pretty good though. I hope they get better in the second book. Devyn is my favourite. My one complaint is they seem a little two dimensional. They lack depth that I hope will be sorted in the second and third books.

And the ruling class. They’ve got Romanesque titles but I still don’t really understand what and who is from where. The disgust that comes from “citizens” to outside, native peoples is very clear, except there’s intermarrying even in the past of the elites. Who’s actually in charge? Where did they come from and what’s with the connection to the Romans? It’s interesting I just wish it had a bit more background. There was a lot about hair colour but otherwise not much. I wanted to know more than just a brief (and confusing) alternate history of the wars.

My last complaint is that I still have little to no idea what the motivation of the villains really is. I’d really like more information on that. I assume it has something to do with subjugation of the natives but it’s ... vague.

So, I still have this 3.5* because this is a genuinely interesting story and I read it quickly because I wanted to know what happens! I still want to know. There was a disappointing lack of reveal in this book. I liked how this was paced and I think it was very nicely plotted. I’m keeping my eye on book two!

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