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A magnificent world of magic, detailed narration and unique magic system. I love books revolved around books and writing. However I hope I can dive deeper into who Ivy really is, I barely know her by just her action, decision and other characters' describing her. There's a distance between the me (the reader) and Ivy. Since it's the first book, I think it's okay that everything seems randomly summoned, like some unrelated things being told one after another which don't really connect to the end of the book. Also, I feel that everything is being overpowered by the great world building, including the characters and the plot.
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I was not able to get into this book, so I will not be reviewing at this time, since I have not finished it. If I end up reading it at a later date, I will review at that time. Thank you!
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This middlegrade was a fun read. I really liked the magic system and the world-building (the parts that weren't copied from HP).
If you are a hardcore HP Fan, I would not recommend this, since you certainly will see a lot of similarities.
The plot is a bit cluttered, there's a lot going on and that feels confusing sometimes.
The writing style was not quite my thing, everything seemed a bit abrupt and choppy, but this was a debut book and I see a good chance that might have improved with later books.
The ending was a mix of surprising and foreseeable, so overall I thought it was good. Would be interested in picking up the next book in the series.
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Book review: The Crowns of Croswald – D.E. Night
Ages 8-14
My thoughts:
This book is perfect for younger readers who love stories set in interesting and whimsical worlds involving a magical boarding school and a unique main character! D.E. Night has mastered the skill of world-building. Every description of the town or school was so vivid it felt like I was actually standing there! This was definitely a highlight for me! I’m a sucker for atmospheric reads.
I really enjoyed Ivy’s character. She’s a girl who wears her heart on her sleeve and has an adventurous spirit. I think she is definitely a character that most can relate to. I enjoyed learning about this magical world and discovering Ivy’s magical abilities throughout the book. However, I wish there was more information on the magic system and some of the characters like The Dark Queen and The Selector.
The story is action packed and includes an interesting mystery that will keep you intrigued to the very end. I also loved the imaginative elements included in the story. For example, I found the cabbies and their travelling system quite interesting and humorous. I also absolutely adore Humbolt! Definitely the VIP of the story for me.
Overall, The Crowns of Croswald is and enjoyable middle grade fantasy novel that will whisk you away on a magical adventure alongside Ivy Lovely. You will discover the Halls of Ivy and learn all about scrivenists, quills, ink and more. This book ends with a cliffhanger but, it’s the first book in a series so the adventure continues!
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👑The Crowns of Croswald👑 by D.E Night
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This book totally blew me away and transported me back into childhood as I went on this adventure with ivy lovely.
It felt like a mixture of Alice in wonderland and Harry Potter! It was magical to say the least!
I loved it and would definitely recommend it if your looking for a fantasy world to dive into!
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A superbly written fantasy world that completely immersed me in the sounds, smells and sights of the world of Croswald. I felt like this book was a cross between Harry Potter and the Morrigan Crow series, both of which I adore. I felt the character of Ivy written younger than 16 and so would classify this as a middle-grade as it did not have the features of a YA book. The story was evocative and had me wishing that they would just tell me already what I had suspected. The book rushed a bit at the end to answer these questions, but understand that it was leading up to the next book in the series. Overall really enjoyed the reading experience and look forward to finding out what happens next to Ivy.
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This has a great premise and a beautiful cover. I think this is a book that I’d need a physical copy to actually have the motivation to pick up as I can’t seem to find myself gravitated towards it. This isn’t a problem from the book that’s just that my interests aren’t swayed towards it anymore.
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This book was so fun. It started out little bit slow. Not in the sense that I was bored but in that I felt a little lost, almost like I started a series in the middle. It took me a little bit to get a handle on it but once I did, I fell in love with Ivy and her friends. I got quite emotional at the end and I would love my children to read this book.
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Initial thoughts:
The Crowns of Croswald was a magical read. It’s the perfect fantasy book for younger readers - I can imagine myself at that age wishing to attend the Halls of Ivy and be a royal or a scrivenist! The magic system was interesting and I loved the idea of the gems in the crowns having different powers - I thought that was really unique and fun. I liked all of the characters, I think Ivy was a very strong protagonist, and I enjoyed her interactions with the other characters.
All in all, this is a fantasy book that is perfect for middle grade readers.
Full Review:
Overall: 4/5
Overall, I enjoyed the book. I wish there had been a glossary of some of the magical terms, as it took a while to understand some parts, which could be a struggle for younger readers. The world building was solid and believable, and I loved all of the little details sprinkled throughout.
Plot: 3/5
I thought the plot was very steady throughout, with some interesting twists and turns along the way. I spaced out my reading of this book more than I usually would, and each time I read more it was easy to get back into the plot and what was happening. I wish we could have seen more of Ivy's time in classes as I felt those scenes were really strong and dove into the magic system more. I also would have liked to get to know some of her classmates better.
Characters: 4/5
The characters in this book are all interesting. Each character has their own unique backstory and motivation. I really enjoyed Winsome as a character, and the mystery surrounding Derwin Edgar Night from the first chapter.
Writing: 4/5
The writing was a lot of fun, and I enjoyed some of the more lighthearted scenes a lot. I found the dialogue to be slightly stilted in places, but overall that wasn’t a major issue. I really loved the world of Croswald, and I’m sure I’ll be recommending this book to my younger relatives!
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I really wanted to like this book. I liked that it promised a strong female lead and a fun-and-peril-filled fantasy world. Several reviews I read before agreeting to review it assured that all "lovers of Harry Potter" would enjoy The Crowns of Croswald. And while I am sure some Harry Potter fans have also enjoyed this book I found that the similarities were so great that, rather than enjoying this book on its own merits, I was constantly comparing and contrasting it to J.K. Rowling's magical world. I also sometimes found that the nuances of this magial world were difficult to follow. Because D.E. Night thrusts readers directly into this world of scrivens and scaldrons, rather than slowly building a magical world from the regular human world (as Rowling does) I found as a reader I was playing catch-up to the characters and their environment. While this was challenging for me (I don't read a lot of fantasy) for die-hard fantasy fans this may not be a concern.
What I did like about this book, however, was that it delivered on the strong female lead. Ivy was a delightful character, and I found myself cheering for her from early in the story.
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This was the first fantasy novel I have read in a long time and I really enjoyed it!
The Crowns of Coswald by D.E Night (the first in a series) was a completely magical and whimsical adventure that followed Ivy’s journey with her two closest friends. With its own uniqueness, this story was about the realisation of the possibility to be more than people say you are.
A HUGE thank you to Stories Untold and NetGalley for providing me with an eARC of this book to read in exchange for an honest review and following of the author’s account!
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I was offered a copy of this book on NetGalley by a publicist in exchange for a review and for follows on social media sites. I was excited to be asked and excited by the book’s description, as well as a glowing review left by a Goodreads account that I follow.
This is the first in a series, with three books already published and a fourth and final book expected in January 2022.
D. E. Night is both the author’s name and the name of an important character in this fictional world. I struggle, I admit, with this seeming self-insertion because it is so frowned upon by those who think that they write “better” fanfiction, but I endeavor to look past my biases. Self-insertion has a long and glorious history, and while we might laugh at, we still revere Dante Alighieri as a writer.
There are many parallels to be drawn here between the Harry Potter series. I KNOW and am perpetually annoyed that people say that so often in reviews, but in this case, I actually think the comparison is warranted. There is a hidden village beside a large castle for magical education, hidden from the eyes of the general non-magic, un-invited folk by magic and reached by a caravan of flying carriages, hidden too by magic, the insides of which resemble houses (as with Rowling’s Knight Bus). There are unusual, magical animals, tamed and used by magical people and non-magical too, and fairies for lights (here called “hairies” but conceptually very similar to the live fairy lights seen at Hogwarts over Christmas). There is even a small, aged, male professor so short that he must sit upon a pile of books to see his class (Professor Filbert Fenix and Professor Filius Flitwick) and a Jester who wears clothes similar to and fills the same role in the castle as Peeves the poltergeist (although the Jester seems also to be part of the kitchen staff). I am trying not to be too nitpicky in pointing out that the Keeper of Keys and Grounds of Hogwarts is Rubeus (meaning “red”) and at the Halls of Ivy the locksmith is Ivory. Most of the characters in similar roles are gender-swapped though, with a female protagonist, a female head of the school, a female locksmith, and a pompous, rich, female bully.
I am currently reading Keeper of the Lost Cities by Shannon Messenger, and finding similarities between these two books as well. Adults around Ivy, protagonist of The Crowns of Croswald, and Sophie are obviously hiding information about the girls themselves from Ivy and Sophie. Ivy crushes on Fyn, a class facilitator in charge of helping first years. Sophie crushes on Fitz, an older student who excels in his classes and who introduces Sophie to the world of elves. There were moments reading these two books simultaneously that I got confused whether a misadventure had been Ivy’s or Sophie’s.
Really, “special” child at a magic school is its own genre of literature, and obviously a subgenre that I enjoy, and these three all fit in there nicely.
Unique to this world is the magic system, and that is immense and likely to be covered in even greater depth in later books in the series. Scrivenists have natural photographic memories that they hone in school while learning to control their quills (porcupine quills it seems rather than feathered ones, “porcupels”). Alongside the budding scrivenists (“sqwinches”) in school are the royals, whose magic comes from the crowns that they receive when they turn 16 and specifically from the stones set into those crowns. Scrivenists are eventually assigned to castles to live and study and aid the royals.
Night struggles with pacing, and I empathize because I struggle with exactly the same. There are elements of her story, introduced fairly early, that the author knows are significant, and Night keeps reminding the reader about these elements, though these mentions, these paragraphs of Ivy’s thought straying to those objects and ideas seem forced and unnatural and out of place. Night, this is SUCH a struggle for me too! I really, truly do empathize!
The POV is mostly limited to Ivy, but slips several times into omniscient or to another character without warning. Usually, I was able to quickly correct my POV to match the story’s though, and I know that I am biased towards a single, limited POV because it is so important to my story that I stick to that single POV to preserve the secrets that the protagonist doesn’t know.
I find that I struggle to keep the vast cast of characters in The Crowns of Croswald straight and that the wider cast is not as fleshed out as I would like them to be. This is another common struggle, a mark often missed in even the most lauded writers who try school fiction (I am thinking particularly of Delia Sherman). The characters that I do feel familiar with after reading The Crowns of Croswald are extremely likeable or unlikable as the story calls for them to be. Rebecca is one of the more fleshed out characters, having her own family and struggles with her identity. I would like for Fyn to be more than a tool for Ivy’s story, but I like him quite a bit. Damaris the bully I dislike as I am supposed to do. The Dark Queen was a nebulous threat until she was inches from Ivy, and then I was properly repulsed by her intentions even as I found her an intriguing villain, a more fleshed out character than I was expecting frankly.
But the story is exciting, with several turns, although I saw at least one of those coming from very near the beginning of the book.
I am interested in the larger story of this world, of the Dark Queen’s transformation, of how she will be vanquished, of Rimbrick, the Wandering Family, and the murdered Isabella. I wish to learn more about glanageries and how the different scrivenist and royal magics work. I want to know more about the world. I need to know more about the Selector and the Forgotten Room.
I do recommend this book, especially if you’re looking for another “chosen one” in a magic school story, unique magical beasts, or a story of curses and curses broken. I enjoyed the magic, the creatures, and the invented words especially, and I enjoyed the plot that let me explore such a clever, unique world.
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I loved this book. I haven’t read a fantasy book in a while, and this book was exactly what I needed. It’s magical and whimsical world was a delight to read.
The book is about a girl named Ivy, who is thrust into the world into the world of magic, whereupon she realizes her true potential, her history and heritage. The magical creatures, the secondary characters and the plot are all so intriguing.
This is a definite re read for me. What a spectacular read!
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Thank you to the publisher and NetGalley for the chance to read and review this novel. This was a fun magical world and I enjoyed the storyline and the characters, there were magical creatures which all middle grade books need.
Ivy’s story is one of learning who she is and what she can do, friends she makes along the way and her history she may or may not learn about. Fans of magic schools, friends and foes will enjoy this book.
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Synopsis: Ivy Lovely is 16 and she has no idea who she is—or what her powers could be. When she crosses a magical boundary, she discovers a whole new world of enchantment and mystery. Making friends that will last a lifetime—and save her life—she steps into her own abilities and discovers more about her hidden past, magical blood, and the power of Croswald’s mystical stones. But all is not well: a dark history and an evil Queen threatens all that is good. Will Ivy’s bravery and wit be enough?
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My thoughts:
•This is a mid grade fantasy book so its intended for readers 8-14 years. Because of this, I had a certain level of nostalgia while reading because it reminded me of the books I read at that age.
•This book is very similar to Harry Potter. Because of this, I think anyone who likes books with a magic school storyline would enjoy this book as it feels like an extension of a super similar world that also has its own spin.
• I thought Ivy Lovely was just as her name suggests… lovely! I thought she was a fun female protagonist and I was interested to see how her story progressed. I also think it would be super empowering for a little girl to be able to see herself in such a strong character.
•I will say that at times parts of the story felt a little slower, or awkward than others but this also very well could be because I’m an adult reading a children’s book.
Overall: I think this would be a book that would be a fun read for a younger audience who loves fantasy! I thought the scrivenist aspect was really unique and made for an interesting story!
✨Thank you to the publisher @storiesuntoldpress for gifting me a copy of this magical book in return for an honest review✨
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3.5 stars rounded up to 4. I really loved the world and the magic in this book. The world was so interesting with a wonderful magical school setting and mysterious towns and places. I was so interested in the worldbuilding and just kept wanting to know more about this world. The magic system, which is based on a system of quills and crowns, was really intriguing. In particular, I was really curious about how the crowns worked.
The plot was also really interesting! It went from a story about a girl finding out she was magical to strange and mysterious things happening to the main character, Ivy. It ended in a way that answered some of your questions and resolved the main problem of the book while also leaving you wanting more and opening up the world and the plot for the sequel.
I found Ivy to be an interesting but somewhat reckless character. She always seemed to be finding herself in trouble but, rarely actually had to deal with the consequences of the rules she broke. Rebecca was probably my favorite character. I am really interested to know more about her. I also liked Fyn but wished he was a bit more developed as he tended to just pop up whenever Ivy was getting into trouble.
I did feel like the middle part of the book jumped around a bit too much. It would go from one plot point to the next with very little in between to show the passing of time or to build up the characters and magical school setting. I was actually surprised when at the end of the book the characters said that the entire school year had passed. But, I did feel like the beginning and end was better in this regard. The beginning really set up Ivy well, as an orphan who didn't know about magic and her first few days at school.
I have to disagree with other reviews that have said this is to similar to Harry Potter. I am a huge fan of Harry Potter and have read it multiple times. I can see where some of the similarities are. Ivy is an orphan who didn't know she was magical until she was whisked away to a magical school. But I believe the author did a fantastic job at adding their own creativity to a commonly used setting. The world and magic system weren't like Harry Potter aside from the fact that they had a magic school. This isn't the first time someone besides J.K. Rowling has had a orphan go to a magical school.
Overall, I really enjoyed the plot, world and magic system. I hope in the sequel we learn more about the world and magic and have a bit more character development and natural flow to the book.
Thank you to NetGalley and Stories Untold for reaching out to me to receive an honest review.
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This is a magical and whimsical story filled with adventures and endeavours. We start by meeting our main character Ivy who is suddenly thrust into the exciting Halls of Ivy. A major difference from her usual day to day life of a caretaker and maid in the kitchens.
The plot is fast paced and greatly described which enhances the reading experience. D.E Night is fantastic at world building this universe with creative and unique creatures, names and descriptive designs.
The characters of this book are written well. The characters who we are meant to favour are charismatic and charming characters. The characters who we are not meant to like contain elements of classic dislike aspects, such as rude, vain and mean. This added to the reading experience with the descriptive scenes and feelings.
Overall, I would recommend this book to perhaps middle-grade or younger teen readers who are into magical, adventurous and exciting tales.
I was asked to read this book by the publicist. These are my opinions and my opinions only.
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This book is nothing short of whimsical. People who miss the nostalgia of the Harry Potter world will gobble up this books, mystical creatures, quirky characters, and magical atmosphere.
I went into this book not expecting much honestly, and I think that is what made the experience better! The author does a great job introducing you to this new world without overwhelming you.
It was fun and a quick read.
My only real complaint is that it seemed like the author was REALLY inspired by Harry Potter. There were a lot of similar situations that just seemed to be a name change.
Also, it did seem like everything just kind of happened to our character conveniently when she needed something/someone. It only took her one try to get whatever she needed and there were hardly any road blocks. And if there was a problem, something magical happened and it worked itself out with no hard feelings or confrontation.
Overall it was a quick and fun read!
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I absolutely loved this book even though I prefer YA books, it was totally amazing! The plot was unique and so much better than Harry Potter. One of the many reasons I liked this book is because of the found family trope! The author did an amazing job and I cannot wait for more!💖
4.5 stars!🌟
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Wow such an amazing read! I could definitely feel a Harry Potter vibe and yet it still had its on uniqueness. I would actually give this book a 4.5 star because it was a little slow for me at the beginning but once the story got going it was really exciting. And at times, it was hard for me to imagine exactly what was happening maybe because of too much detail but I did get the overall gist of things. Overall, I think this is a very exciting fantasy for readers to immerse themselves in the magical world of Croswald.