Member Reviews
Tried to read this book, but struggled to follow the writing style. Seemed to jump around a bit too much for my taste. Dislike giving a negative review, and may just be me, but couldn't finish this one, which is rare for me. Sorry.
There's a lot of potential in this book but I think it need a good editor as sometimes the style of writing seemed garbled.
Not my cup of tea.
Many thanks to the publisher and Netgalley for this ARC, all opinions are mine.
I tried to start this book but I just could not get into it at all. It seemed very disjointed to me and I couldn’t figure out or find the plot at all.
This work shows sparks of creativity and is potentially promising, but ultimately is too garbled to be enjoyable or coherent. Desperately needs a good editor. The grammatical and narration issues made it very difficult to follow the storyline; the plot is as mangled as the sentence structure. Every single page has composition issues. I got the sense that perhaps English is not the author's native tongue, which is why a strong editor is even more critical. I would love to revisit this once it's been edited and re-worked.