Not being a big fan of series, I don't normally ever get to volume two even if I started volume one. In this case, I skipped the first in the series because I was unaware of it until I saw this one and was attracted by the fact that it involved Charles Darwin. You don't usually see his name in this kind of a story. It would have been nice to have seen a little bit of education slipped in here and there regarding his scientific Theory of Evolution, which is the bedrock of modern biology, but there really was none of that, and worse, there was some seriously misleading science. So while I initially began reading this favorably, I can't commend it after finishing it and realizing there were far too many problems with it to overlook them.

I wasn't expecting much from this middle grade novel, but it proved to be an engaging read to begin with, if annoying at times. The story is very much of the Dan Brown category: someone who is speedily following a series of clues to solve a mystery, while being chased by evil-doers. I don't use that comparison as a compliment since I'm not a Dan Brown fan, but it will give you a broad idea of what's going on here.

After her adventures in Charlie Thorne and the Last Equation, Charlie has evidently been hiding out in the Galápagos islands seeking anonymity. She's surfing and otherwise generally doing nothing save read a book here and there. She has money, presumably somehow obtained during the first novel, so working isn't a necessity, and it's just as well since she's only twelve - but apparently looks older. That was the first slippery slope proposition in my view, since it's often used as a lousy non-excuse when a guy is charged with statutory rape ("Well she looked eighteen"), so while I let that slide for the sake of reading on, it's nevertheless a problem for me.

The main problem with Charlie though, is that she was much more of a Mary Sue than a Charlie. She never got into any real difficulties, and effortlessly effected escapes worthy of an animated series. On top of that, she was constantly reminding us, that is, when the author wasn't, that she was a genius - probably the smartest person on Earth. That was irritating as hell. For example at one point I read,

"Of course I’m right," Charlie told him. "I’m me."

Seriously? Even if it were true about her being so smart, it's a stupid mistake for an author to keep slapping his readers in the face with it, but the fact is that it's not true.

The confusion is a common one. The author conflates knowing a lot of trivia with being smart. The two aren't equivalent and the sad thing is that though we're reminded of how smart she supposedly is with metronomic tedium, the truth is that Charlie's actions prove her to be other than a genius. She wouldn't do dumb things that make little sense if she were indeed as smart as she's so often claimed to be.

Maybe she's hiding her light under a bushel, you think? Bushel is an archaic term for a bowl, hence its more modern use as a measure as opposed to the use back there as a shade. But knowing that trivial item doesn't make me super-smart. The thing is that we really don't get a lot of Charlie as an actual person. She's more like a place-holder for a real character, or more like an android (or given her gender, I guess a 'gynoid'!). We never see her around kids her own age in this story, so she's constantly dealing with adults who never seem to like her at best and at worst, want to kill or to capture her, so maybe this influences how she presents. Or maybe they just knew her better than we readers ever will?!

The thing is that if Charlie truly wanted to stay off the radar as we're told she did, she would have kept a much lower profile than she had been doing where she was hiding. Instead of being a star of the surfing circuit, she might have found a quiet cove to read or to snorkel? And making her brilliance known by volunteering at the tortoise rehab centers was a poor choice. This is what I mean about her not being as smart as she claims, because she ought to have known better, and she doesn't. Better yet, why not move her idle carcass to a large city where it would be a lot easier to hide? And where she could actually do some good helping other people instead of indulging her every whim? She doesn't seem like a nice or a thoughtful person to me.

But her dwelling on that island and volunteering is how she comes to the attention of Esmerelda, who seeks her out for help deciphering a code that was, we're told, etched onto the shell of a tortoise by Darwin himself, the better part of two centuries prior to Charlie finding out about it. In an era where we've discovered a certain ex-president's name scratched onto the back of a manatee, this sounds a bit inappropriate to say the least, but I'll let that slide. Tortoises in the Galápagos islands are very long-lived unless the animal has been hunted for meat or died from some other cause and rotted away prematurely. So Darwin etching the underside of the tortoise is problematic with a message for the ages. It seems like he would have been smarter than that.

Darwin was studying change both in the planet's crust, and in the lives of plants and animals and it seems very doubtful to me that knowing how impermanent things are, and how living things can also change so readily, he would have recorded the various clues he left in a form where such inevitable changes could easily erase or destroy them, and in only that one way given that he lived a long life after his voyage and had ample opportunities to record it elsewhere or share it with people he trusted. For the undiscerning middle-grader, these things might seem convincing, but if subject to any thought at all, they're so far-fetched.

That same rule applies across multiple clues, others of which I'm not about to reveal in any great detail here, but I have to say that in one case, a stone used to build something tends to be a rectangular block, and if something were etched on it and later that same stone was carved into a different shape to be used for another purpose, any original etching would be long gone! And if you're trying to hide a clue in a natural setting by using fire to mask it, you'd think a genius would make it look like a natural forest fire rather than a deliberate attempt burn off a clue! This is what I meant about Charlie's actions not really mirroring her billing as a genius.

There were some writing issues which I shall mention because there were so many of them. One or two here and there are not an issue, but so many do tend to distract from enjoyment of the story. At one point, for example, I read how a stick of dynamite behaved when kicked off a boat: "It sailed off the boat and exploded a second later, close enough to knock her and Dante off their feet. A piece of red-hot shrapnel nicked her arm, while others whistled past her head." Shrapnel is named after a British army general and initially referred to what in modern times might be a pipe bomb or something similar. Dynamite itself contains no shrapnel - typically metal fragments, or ball bearings or something like that. The way dynamite would hurt would be from a compression wave, especially if experienced underwater, and would result in a concussion and ear-bleeding, so this rang hollow, but again, maybe middle graders won't think twice about it.

After a certain person (name redacted) had literally tried to kill Charlie, and she makes this observation about that person's mood: "XXXXXXX sounded as though they really wanted to kill her." That's a bit much given that the person really was trying to kill her! At another point I read, "...it would swallow up any evidence of the cities within decades, if not sooner." Well, the 'within decades' covers 'if not sooner' so it seemed a bit superfluous. At another point in the story Charlie and another person were searching for some food in the jungle, and I read this: "They had tracked down a moriche palm full of aguaje fruit within only a few minutes-and then spent another two hours trying to retrace their steps." This suggests again that Charlie isn't so smart. Had she not thought of calling out to the person they'd left back at the boat, in order to follow their voice back? If they were only a couple of minutes' walk away they could surely have heard each other. It felt like it betrayed the girl's smarts.

At one point I read, “The most famous spot was Yellowstone National Park, which was located in the largest volcano caldera on earth,” which simply isn't true. The largest (as of this writing!) is the Apolaki Caldera in the Philippine Sea. If you're talking 'on dry land' and 'square area', then Yellowstone caldera gets it, but it's actually four overlapping calderas, and the park isn't in the caldera, it's the other way around. By the same token, the Amazon basin isn't quite the same size as the entire United States, but once you start seeing errors of fact, it's hard to stop! I don't agree with those people who claim it's just as easy to get it right as get it wrong. It's much easer to get it wrong, but I think we owe children a better education than this, so when they call out a 'fact' from your novel in an argument or worse, in school, they get it right, not wrong, and they trust you as a writer.

One of the annoying and anti-scientific facets of this novel, and which does Darwin a grave disservice is talk of 'proof' of evolution and of 'missing links'. First of all, science doesn't talk about proof, it talks about the preponderance of evidence and that's a bit stodgy for young children, but not asking too much for them to understand if a bit of foundation had been sown through the writing. But to talk of a definitive 'missing link' in hominid evolution is pure bullshit.

Human evolution is complex and it's replete with links, so there's nothing critical that's still missing. In Darwin's time there was, but he barely mentioned humans (in terms of evolution) in "On the Origin..." brushing it safely under the carpet with a "light will be thrown on the origin of man and his history." It wasn't until over a decade later in The Descent of Man that Darwin tied humans into the mix. If he'd found anything concrete he would have mentioned it there, and he would not have spent the time he did studying an orangutan named Jenny at the London zoo. The fact that he had the chance to mention this fictional 'discovery' without giving anything concrete away about it in 'Descent' yet did not undermines this whole story's premise. The fact is that finding a fossil, or for example, something like chimpanzees in South America wouldn't 'prove' anything. And there is no way he could find any such thing there because it South America never has had apes and no evidence of there ever being any such thing has turned up there.

One last problem was this animal that Charlie befriended. It had earlier been terrified of this helicopter, yet later it's depicted sleeping soundly onboard while the chopper is flying, and while you can argue it was sedated, when it awoke it showed no sign of fear or panic whatsoever. It wasn't realistic. Again most kids who read this might not think about these things, but that doesn't mean an author ought not to be aware of them and get them right - or re-write! We all screw up; there's no escaping it, but a little more attention can reduce these incidents to a negligible level.

The only other issues I ran into were the usual Kindle formatting ones. I detest Kindle because it slices, dices, and juliennes everything that's not plain vanilla and pure text, so I wasn't surprised to see a numbered list appear like this:

There were three reasons that might be true:
1) Darwin had traveled faster than she had calculated, so they had not reached the right spot yet.
2) She had misinterpreted what Darwin meant. 3) The river no longer turned to blood.

Note the third item is on the same line as the second instead of on a line of its own. This is one of many reasons why I will do not business with Amazon. But that's just me, and it doesn't reflect on the content of the novel itself - just on the editing and checking. Clearly this is another novel written as a print novel with little to no thought given to the ebook version.

Another such issue was where the page headers got tied right into the text because of the incompetence of the Kindle process, predictably turning everything into kindling, so I read:

“...archaeolog CHARLIE THORNE AND THE LOST CITY • 263 ical sites”

That happened in more than one place.

But I'm judging on content, not on kindling, and by that measure alone I can't commend this as a worthy read. The main character was at times obnoxious and her situation was just too Mary Sue and simultaneously too improbable. As a Saturday morning TV cartoon, this might have sufficed, but as a middle-grade novel it needed more. I can't see any promise in a series that pretends on the surface to honor great scientists, but in practice does them such a disservice by making up improbable stuff and treating real science so cavalierly.

Charlie Thorne and the Lost City was written by Stuart Gibbs and is book two in the Charlie Thorne series. You do not need to read book one in order to read this book, but I would recommend it for the backstory.

Summary: Charlie Thorne has been hiding out. The last thing she wants is for someone to find her and try to get her to reveal Einstein’s secret formula.

But when clues come to light that could lead her to Charles Darwin’s lost treasure, she decides to go after it. After all-who could find her anyway while she is searching the jungle?

It turns out…..quite a few people.

My Thoughts: I really like the premise of this series. Charlie is a super-smart girl that is one step ahead of everyone, and having her traverse the world to find clues hidden by some of the smartest people in history is a pretty fascinating storyline.

I like the characters in this series, the intricate plot twists and turns, and the overall fun of the bad guy vs. good guy chase scenes. And if you have read my blog at all, you know we are HUGE fans of Stuart Gibbs around here!

Unfortunately, I cannot recommend this book. It is written from the point of view that evolution is scientific fact. As someone who believes evolution is as far-fetched at they come, I really don’t like that evolution is touted as a fact and not a theory in this book-especially when impressionable children will be reading it.

That being said, the next book sounds really good, we do like Stuart Gibbs a lot, and we will read that one when it comes out. I would just skip this one due to the content.

I would like to thank Simon and Schuster for providing me with a free digital copy of this book in exchange for my honest review. Thank you!

Charlie Thorne is becoming one of my favorite fictional characters. She is brilliant, funny, and clever. This book is action packed, fast-paced, and full of historical detail. That is one of the really cool things about this series. It weaves in all these interesting facts so that you are learning something without realizing it. It is impossible to put down from start to finish. I can’t wait to read what’s in store for Charlie in book 3! I don’t know how Stuart Gibbs keeps writing fabulous books, but keep them coming!

I will definitely be recommending this series to any J or YA reader looking for something really cool.

The Charlie Thorne series is my new favorite for middle grade reads! First, a strong female character - which is something all middle grade girls can benefit from. Second, although Charlie is a female, the boys love her as well. Third, what a FUN mystery/adventure! The historical aspect of Charlie's adventures are an educational experience as well. In book one, it was Einstein's Pandora equation. Book 2 is Darwin's hidden treasure. There are so many cross-curricular ties (history, geography, science, math).

Thank you to NetGalley and Simon and Schuster Books for Young Readers for the ARC in return for an honest review.

As always, an adventure with Charlie Thorne is exciting and unpredictable and this book certainly proves that. Gibbs has a knack for knowing just how to tap into this readers' imaginations. as his previous series' portray. I especially enjoyed the introduction of Darwin and his explorations into the unknown. From the very beginning, I was caught up in his mysterious mission. At the same time, I learned so much about history as well as the science of the Amazon. I couldn't stop reading this book and know my elementary school students will not stop until the end either. Hope there are many more to come in this series!

This is such a fun action packed adventure for middle grades. I was impressed with how much wonderful background information is included in this book. I learned a lot about South America and its culture which was great. Charlie is a great strong character that doesn't back down on her smarts and skills and stands up for what she believes is right. This book focuses on Darwin with a secret treasure and lots of science knowledge so be ready for a lot of evolution information. I'm looking forward to reading the next installment and I think middle grade students will really enjoy this adventure of a book.

Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for an ARC of this book in return for an honest review. All spelling and grammar errors are totally my own.

I can safely say that I have never before read a children's book that I couldn't put down. This one, I couldn't put down. I was absolutely pulled into the ending of the book and I had to know what was going to happen more than I had to go to sleep. It took me longer than usual to read the book because I kept having to stop and look up some of the plants and animals in the book to see if they were real. (They were.) I liked the first book in the series a lot, but I probably didn't breathe through the last fifth of this book. Just when you thought maybe things would settle down, they took off again. It was an amazing book.

I fell in love with Stuart Gibbs' writing when I found myself laughing out loud while reading Belly Up. While this book is a far different read, it did not disappoint. As a middle-level teacher, I was tickled at the amount of background knowledge students could pick up as they read. In addition, Charlie Thorne is a strong female character celebrated for her brain, not her appearance. While in the last third the story veers a bit into what some may feel controversial, the fast-paced adventure will keep the most reluctant of readers turning pages.

Charlie Thorne again finds herself following clues left behind by a great mind of the past, this time investigating a hidden treasure discovered by Charles Darwin in the Amazon. Fast-paced, great for kids who like adventure, science, or a good treasure hunt. I love the revelation that there are more famous people that have hidden away their discoveries- I think it has so much potential and is a great famework for a middle-grade series! I can't wait for book #3!

This is fast becoming my new favorite young adult series! It includes a young heroine who is much more capable of taking on the world alone than the CIA agents who she is "assisting." In the first book of the series, we discovered Einstein's secret. (While you don't have to read it first, you'll miss a couple of things here and there by not having read it. But no biggie.) In this second installment, we're tracking down an earth-shattering secret that Darwin hid in South America!

(Spoiler insinuation - The ending tells us that there will definitely be more mysteries to track down.)