So while this story is fast paced and constantly moving along, which is awesome however there were a few parts that were blah.
Every time he gets close to her in the first three chapters it’s the smell of him over and over and over again. It’s so redundant and I just skip over it. There is also a spelling error in chapter one, the small of fresh, salt air and something masculine, it should be smell not small. But here we are again with the smell thing.
Another part where I was just like what? They are sitting in the diner and the waitress asks her: “You work at the library, don’t you?” Katie asked. Tabitha nodded. “I moved to town about a month ago and started there.” This response makes no sense at all. It makes her seem flighty and air-headed that she can’t answer a simple question. When we know she must be educated and well read since she works in a library.
There is a bunch of redundancy with her being so timid and shy it really gets boring to read. I just started skimming because I wanted more conversations between these two.
The kitten is a cute addition and makes for a nice way that they get to taking and interacting with each other.