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It is a supernatural based mystery with an 'x-files'esc department investigating. The basic concept and ideas were great. The conclusion of the plot however does not suit the build up.

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The Underground Mystery was a disappointment to me. The writing seemed rushed. There were too many short, blunt sentences. The plot was not compelling. Thanks, NetGalley, for the ARC.

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Honestly I read about 4 pages into this and had to quit. There. Were..
No complete. Sentences in the. Pages I. Read. Basically, what I just typed is exactly how this book reads.........absolutely no complete sentences. The spacing issues were horrible as well. I sincerely hope there is much editing in the future for this book. In the meantime, I just can’t do it. I can’t figure out if there was some sort of issue that occurred in the transfer of the book or if the writer actually writes like this. If so, bless his heart. I really hate to give this book a rating since I didn’t read it but net galley requires me to do so. It’s quite possible that this may be a good read but I’ll never know.

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I received this ARC via netgalley. Normally the ARCs I read are almost identical to the finished product. I am hoping that this book has more edits coming to it before release. I am therefore ignoring the numerous typos, spacing issues, and so forth in my review, hoping that the final copy will not contain them.

Honestly this book was okay. It is a supernatural based mystery with an 'x-files'esk department investigating. The basic concept and ideas were great. The conclusion of the plot however does not suit the build up. I want to be able to give this more stars, however it felt like the author needed to maybe take a walk and then do some final tweaking to the story to smooth the rough edges together.

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