I want to thank Netgalley and the author for gifting me the ebook. Easy read. I don't know I just felt like it was lacking. The author repeats herself over and over that the main character has a limp, we get it! The main character thinks that everyone is treating her different because of it and yes we get it also that she is a woman and she makes is clear through out the story that she can do anything a man can do. I felt like there just was not a lot of story telling other then her cooking and serving and cooking and serving. I know what the plot is about but I would like to have had more story that involved other parts of the ranch, town etc.

I couldn't do it. This is the third book by this author that I have read. The author has great ideas and wonderful, string female characters. Her settings are described in subtle detail. I feel as if I am a member of the society in the boom and seeing it all happen.
But I couldn't do it. I couldn't finish this book.this is the third book where her male character is an un-emotional neanderthal who doesn't communicate on a basic level. They all do their feelings and conversations in their head. The heroine has no idea that the hero even thinks of them, nevermid, is in love with her. I find this so perplexing. Such wonderful stories, full of promise. And for the most part, very well written. But such a lack of interest from the hero and such a large disconnect..
I couldn't finish this book. The hero saw the heroine speaking with a neighbor and went off the deep end. He went punched the man, then screamed at the heroine that she didn't have to support herself on her back, and she didn't need to do questionable things for a living. That she didn't need to whore herself. So she slapped him across the face. My problem with this is that the hero k ow that his neighbor is getting married and not interested in the heroine in that manner. So the next day, the hero comes and apologizes to the heroine and they end up making out. This doesn't make any sense. If I was the heroine and this happened to me, I would pack my bags and leave because the hero is obviou@ly deranged. Don't read this book until the author has had a chance to re rite .

This is a 2 book compilation that I enjoyed reading although I did enjoy the first more than the second. Harrison ranch is a sweet story about a young single woman who leaves the city to become a cook on a horse ranch out West. Although sweet, this also has some surprisingly steamy scenes. I liked the characters, I liked the physical descriptions of everything but felt the story could use a more aggressive editing. One character’s name kept flipping from Ben to Ken. Editing should have caught the word “taught” for “taut”. I also felt that there were inconsistencies in Callie’s knowledge and lack thereof regarding the intimacies of marriage. I liked following Seth’s emotional growth but felt there was no transition between his questioning of what is love and then he was in love.
The second book was only ok for me. There were 2 romances going on but I found it difficult to follow whose voice was speaking. There seemed to be some scenes that didn’t seem believable for the time period. And while Mavis was noble with her convictions, I felt she was too dogmatic.

These were decent enough reads. The plots were fairly basic and straightforward. The characters were decent enough. They were ok.
**I voluntarily read and reviewed this book

There is two separate stories in this book.
The first one was ok. I loved Sully and Jamie they both had the biggest hearts and would do just about anything for anyone. I like Callie she was fierce and took chance and was super independent. I was not a fan of Seth he came off like a jerk and arrogant and he didn’t seem to truly care for Callie he just didn’t want anyone else to have her.
In book two I felt like there was too much going on and in the beginning and it was hard to figure out who was the person talking and who was what. This story was very predictable. You do follow four people, you have Jamie, Mac, Mavis and Emily. I did like Emily she was a pretty strong headed person and would do anything for those she loved and cared for. I felt like with Mac he was more of a "caveman" type guy and I seem to roll my eyes with him then anything. Jamie was fun but immature. Over all both stories were ok. Both stories did have sexual content in them so it may not be suitable for all readers.

I loved these stories and the interconnections between the different characters, which despite many, I never felt it was confusing. On the contrary, I felt curious to know their stories.

A lovely moment of leisure.

I enjoyed reading these two books because they were easy to read and enjoy. I liked the setting and the characters were interesting. If you want light hearted easy to read books then do read them

First sentence from Harrison Ranch: Dearest Mother Superior, I know you worried over my loss of position in St Louis but I assure you, I have found myself in a much better situation. I am cooking for the ranch hands at the Harrison ranch outside the small town of Sweetwater, Kansas.

Premise/plot: Harrison Ranch and MacGregor's Mail Order Bride by Susan Payne offers readers two novellas set in Sweetwater, Kansas, in 1873/1874.

In Harrison Ranch, our heroine, Callie, an orphan raised by nuns, takes a job as a cook on Harrison Ranch. She loves, loves, loves, LOVES to cook. But will she also love to be loved? Perhaps. Seth Harrison, her boss, is super-handsome (and knows it) and begins taking liberties kissing the cook. But are his intentions honorable? Does he have marriage and family in mind? Or does he just want to claim her as his?

In Macgregor's Mail Order Bride, readers have two heroines. Mavis Miller has agreed to marry Joseph "Mac" Macgregor. But she finds herself irresistibly drawn to his younger brother, Jamie. Meanwhile, her best friend, Emily Johnston, finds herself drawn to her friend's fiance. The book ends in two marriages--but who will marry whom?!

My thoughts: I want to start with some positives. It is so easy to see a low star rating and assume that my intentions are mean or snarky. So what did I like about these two novellas? I liked a few things. I like the setting up. The characterization of the heroines in the first few chapters of each novel shows potential; I wouldn't go so far as to say fully realized potential.

I loved Callie's arrival at the ranch. I loved Sully. I loved seeing Callie being friendly with the ranch hands and the sense of finding family and belonging. Callie's tender care for one of them, a stammering (stuttering) orphan that is too young to be a ranch hand, felt right. I really got a sense that Sweetwater would be a series that I loved. (I ended up disappointed in the end, but, I'm sticking with the positives right now.)

I enjoyed Emily and Mavis' arrival and settling in. I was curious about both MacGregor brothers. I had a feeling that Emily would fall for Mac, and that Mavis would fall for Jamie. I have a bias for mail order stories. I am drawn to them--that and marriage for convenience stories--so I really wanted to love this one.

There were a handful of relationships established in the first novella. This was a nice touch. Often romance writers ONLY focus on one relationship--the hero and heroine. And if there are side characters, well, they are barely fleshed out and overall insignificant. Perhaps slightly villain-ish if there needs to be a kidnapping or a rescue of some sort. It was nice to see the many relationships presented in the first novel.

The second novella was weaker perhaps on this--probably because there were two romances.

So what didn't I like? I'm going to distinguish between my personal preferences--which I'll mention in case your taste aligns with mine, but knowing all the while that the things I don't like may be what you like best--AND between weaknesses in the writing.

I'll start with weaknesses in the writing. She needed a proof reader. Not an automated spell checker, but a real life, flesh and blood proof checker. I didn't highlight everything I saw. But when you're in a "romantic" scene and instead of kissing her shoulder and neck, he's kissing her SHOULD, well, that's just awkward. At another point, Callie tells her hero that she can't "abandon all my principals and beliefs." Principles, dear. At least once the author uses an apostrophe to show plurality. "The mare's do not miss..." "Finely, after supper one night, Seth..." Finally. There was a point where the hero heeled off his boots. I'm not sure if heeling off your boots is a legit thing--or if she meant peeling off???--but it would be a lot easier for the scene if he just took off his boots. And then there's the drinking of EGG NOD. (Egg nog). In the second novel, there was an awkward scene where a train disgorged its passengers. This isn't wrong--it's one of the listed meanings of the word--but it felt like she was trying to use the thesaurus to make her story more sophisticated.

The second novel perhaps because it has two heroines has some awkward narration. Like she couldn't decide between first person and third person. "Oh my, she has to warn Mavis before she sees Mac. Mavis will need to be more collected than Emily was when she first sees him."

Complement when compliment would have been more appropriate. He complemented the meal.

"There was a bottle of Champaign on the table with two glasses and a note from Abby telling them to enjoy it." Champagne.

Then there was that awkward unto the sheets...instead of onto the sheets. I'm not completely sure about the distinctions between onto and unto. So she could be right in using unto. But it stuck out when I read it.

This next is a possible-possible weakness. I felt she RUSHED into the physical in both novellas. It's like, hello my name is...and then BOOM let's make out against a wall for no reason. I felt this was a bit out of sorts for a historical novel set in the 1870s. It felt very modern-day hook-up-ish. I needed more than an instant physical attraction. Some readers might not want there to be a journey of attraction and romance--focused on spending time together talking or doing non-physical activities together.

Also in the second novella, she has her two new heroines meeting some of the women who live in town--and though they've literally just met--they start talking about SEX. Granted I've never time-traveled to the 1870s, but, that too felt a little modern to me. Maybe that kind of talk between good friends would be believable and legit. But a total stranger that you just met???

The last is complete personal preference on my part. I felt the novel was out of balance with the amount of smut. Yes, I prefer completely clean, nearly clean, off-scene/off-stage/implied smut to actual actual what-goes-where smut. But the ratio of smut to actual story is off. This was disappointing because the opening chapters showed such potential for actual romance. But instead it's like, well, let's just write a LOT of physical descriptions and forget about the rest of what makes a romance a romance.