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Cinderella Retelling with a Bachelor spin that has a plus size main character? COUNT ME IN! The main character Cindy who has lost both her parents- just graduated from college as a design (but her passion is mainly for shoes), heads home to live with her tv show executive step mom. When she gets the opportunity to join the Bachelor like show called, Before Midnight she jumps at the chance! Whats better than 100k and exposure for her future career. But it quickly becomes more than that. I loved that this retelling steered from the unbearable step mom and step sisters and Cindy truly has the most supportive second family. The twists and added drama really made this an enjoyable and easy read for romance lovers. The only issue I had with this book was the somewhat of an abrupt ending.

Thank you Netgalley for this ARC in exchange for my honest review.

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This book snuck up on me. Cindy, a recent Parsons graduate and spiring shoe designer, twenty-two and fat. She’s also orphaned and unemployed, and she agrees to go on a version of The Bachelor called Before Midnight. But it turns out she’s already met the Bachelor, when she was flying home after graduation.

Murphy jumps in and I kept feeling like this was a book in a series where I hadn’t read the other books and wasn’t getting all the references. But as I got settled, and as Cindy goes on the dating show, the book finds its keel. And then it becomes kinda great in parts, when we get to see both the machinations of reality tv and how Cindy stands up to them. And she figures out who she is and what she deserves.

I ended up liking this book much more than I thought I would. 3.5 stars. But this is a book that sorely needs an epilogue.

I got a free ARC in exchange for an honest review.

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I am a total secret reality tv show lover. There’s just something fun about turning the tv on and investing an hour of your day into someone’s love life...even better??? All the juicy gossip and drama that goes on. It’s a guilty pleasure.
I absolutely loved this play on reality tv and the ties to Cinderella. This is probably one of the cuter Rom coms that I’ve read in a really long time and I love the main character Cindy. I also love that she represented a fierce and fashionable plus size woman.
Light to medium steam level!

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If the Shoe Fits is a cute rom-com, mash up of the Cinderella fairy tale and the other recent release about a plus size fashion icon on a reality show, One to Watch.

I blew through this book, it was hard to put down. I was rooting for the characters I was supposed to, on the fence for the characters that were indeed on the fence, and riding the rollercoaster of emotions trying to decode Henry's actions with Cindy.

With that said, like One to Watch, this is a preachy and heavy handed book for the whole spectrum of "awareness". I wish it could just be a plus size romance without being a sermon for every minority group. It's also an "insta-love" story which I had to suspend my disbelief for throughout the whole book. Obviously, I was here for a plus size girl getting the prince, but like, why did he fall for her? It's never made clear.

The Cinderella retelling is beyond brilliant! The author presents a realistic picture of life with the step family that I love-love-loved as well as Cindy's journey to process her grief. The Cinderella names that were sprinkled in were very clever, and obviously, the shoe-addict plot is fun!

I pictured Beck as British Bake Off's beloved Sue Perkins.

Thank you NetGalley and Disney-Hyperion for a copy for me to review!

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Cindy has just graduated from Parsons School of Design with the dream of being a shoe designer, but after a disasterous last year of school, finally dealing with the death of her father, she is left with no job prospects and has to return home to LA. On her flight, she sits next to "Prince Charming" and immediatley has a connection with him. Upon her return to LA, she moves in with her step mom, two step sisters, and triplet half siblings. Cindy quickly gets cast on her step-mom's reality dating TV show and her plane "Prince Charming" is the show's bachelor. The spark between the two continues to burn, but will he pick her? Read this fun, romance novel to find out!

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First let’s acknowledge the elephant in the room; this book is very similar to last year’s One To Watch. They are both Bachelor-retellings with a plus sized lead. However that’s about where the similarities end. This is also a Cinderella retelling under Disney’s Hyperion imprint. Cin is a recent design school graduate who moves back home with her Stepmother whose the Executive Producer of a Bachelor-style reality show. What I loved about this book is the relationship between Cin and her Stepmother Erica, and her step-sisters Drew and Anna. It wasn’t a negative relationship; in fact it was a very loving one. I did feel that it could have played up the stepmother angle more but the relationship between all three sisters was wonderful (hoping the next book in the series is one of their stories).

Another positive thing regarding this book was the portrayal of Cin as plug sized. It’s specifically mentioned in the book that she’s at least a size 18. Unlike some previous plus-sized lead books that have smaller dress sizes. The author has turkey portrayed some issues faced by people of a larger size including designers not making clothes in larger sizes, the way members of the public treat them, etc.

In the end I loved this book and didn’t want to put it down. I would absolutely recommend it to anyone. 5 stars.

I was given a copy of this book by NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.

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DNF at 54%. Just not for me! I love romances, I love Julie Murphy, I love the main character Cindy. The problem is that this is just not the type of romance I go in for- I like to watch the nitty gritty of the relationship forming and growing, and at over halfway here I have seen almost no interaction between the main characters, and I know next to nothing about the love interest. Plus I hate shows like The Bachelor.

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This is the first book in the Disney adult adaption of the beloved fairytales.

I am a huge Julie Murphy and Disney fan so when I heard that she would be writing a modern day adult adaption of Cinderella, I was so excited!

I love Julie Murphy’s writing style and she draws you in! However, I just found the storyline to be kind of flat and there was no real climax. I also never really felt really invested in Cindy, other than the loss of her parents she was kind of meh. I’ve never watched the Bachelor/Bachelorette however, I loved the insider view of the show and how it is orchestrated and perceived as “reality”.

Still, I would be interested to see how the rest of the series plays out!

Thank you to NetGalley and Hyperion Books for an ARC in exchange for an honest review.

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Rating: Absolutely LOVED It!

I heard about this title, that it was going to be an adult romance retelling of Cinderella, and I about hit the ceiling I was so excited. I was absolutely thrilled that I was approved on NetGalley, and I read the entire book in one sitting. It was a pure delight!

It took two things I absolutely love: Disney movies, and the Bachelor, and combined them into a super sweet, feel-good story that just left me grinning like a fool by the time it was over! It was such a good time, with so many great moments, some that even left me crying.

In this story Cindy is an aspiring fashion designer who has had a really rough senior year of design school and is now leaving New York to return home to her step-family with no job prospects other than to nanny her triplet half-siblings. Her step-mother is the executive producer of the wildly popular reality show Before Midnight, and contestants dropping out means that Cindy, and her step-sisters Drew and Anna have the opportunity to throw their hats into the ring. Cindy, mainly in order to take a shot at getting her name and shoes some exposure and to take a stab at winning the grand prize of 100 grand. She shows up at the chateau only to find out that the suitor happens to be the handsome Prince Charming she met on the plane from New York., and that she may find the reality show is a little more real than she expected.

This story had so many things going for it. I think that my favorite was that Cindy has a great relationship with her step-family. She loves her step-mom and her step-sisters. They support each other and it was so great to see. I also really loved that Julie Murphy dealt with Cindy's grief over her parents on the page and not just something that was half addressed.

I thought that the relationship between Cindy and Henry was incredibly sweet and lots of fun! I cheered them on, and honestly it did feel kinda like watching a season of the Bachelor, which is a favorite "guilty" pleasure of mine. This is a very chaste love story for an adult romance, but it felt very appropriate for the story that was being told. It was just very sweet.

Cindy is also a fat heroine, and I think it was one of the better portrayals that I've read recently. It didn't focus on the fact that she was a fat woman, but it was just one more thing about her. I thought it was rather tasteful, and she seemed very comfortable with herself.

Overall, this was a really fun read, and I highly recommend. I'm grateful to NetGalley and Disney-Hyperion for this eARC, which did not influence my opinions. This book releases on August 3, 2021!

I will post a shortened review to my instagram @jemofabook in the two weeks before publication.

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If The Shoe Fits (Meant To Be #1) by Julie Murphy



Synopsis: After graduating with a degree in fashion, and no prospective job offers, Cindy decides to head home to her stepmom’s house and nanny her three siblings. Erica is an executive producer of the popular dating show “Before Midnight”, as the show has openings, after some discussion, Cindy decides to volunteer. Cindy soon realizes that being the only plus sized woman on a reality dating show, has positives and negatives. The positive, she becomes a body positivity icon for women! Cindy decided to go onto the show to further her career in fashion however, she soon realizes her objective has changed.



Review: As a fan of reality tv dating shows, I loved this book. Cindy is an amazing female protagonist, she’s at an important time in her life and handles it confidentially; she’s rational, caring, and a great person. Her character was a serious breath of fresh air to me. I loved the plot, a background look at a reality dating show, with an incredible male lead? SOLD! I really enjoyed most of the characters minus one of the other contestants (I don’t want to spoil it), she is the definition of a horrible person! I definitely prefer this twist on Cinderella more than the original.



Thank you Disney Publishing Worldwide and Netgallery for this ARC in exchange for an honest review.

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This was a cute, retelling of Cinderella. I really liked some of the changes that were made to the original source material, especially that the stepmother and stepsisters were kind and lovable. Our main character, Cindy, is so easy to fall for and I found myself rooting for her throughout the whole book. Overall though, the love story didn't work for me. Since the story is told through a Bachelor-style TV show, our main characters don't actually get to spend that much time together. I never felt like I fully bought their love story and was rooting more for Cindy's professional success than for them to get together. Reading this book, it was obvious it was the author's first adult novel. It read more like YA to me, just with adult main characters. If you are looking for a very PG contemporary romance, you may really appreciate that aspect. I wish I liked this more, but since the romance didn't work for me, the whole book just felt a little lacking.

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I loved this book, once I started I couldn’t put it down! It’s definitely a book I plan on rereading! I’m so thankful to NetGalley and Hyperion Avenue for the advanced ebook.

“If the Shoe Fits” was one of my favorite reads of 2021 so far! I laughed, cried, and just really enjoyed the story. We follow Cindy on a journey of self discovery and she meets cute and charming Henry on the way. It is definitely one of those books I’d reach for on those hard days when you just need a pick me up. I can’t say enough good things about this book! I will definitely be picking up an actual copy in August!

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This book made me so happy. I finished it in one sitting! I love a good retelling- especially about princesses. However, If the Shoe Fits feels so modern and different from Cinderella, it’s easy to forget it is a modern take on Cinderella. It isn’t overtly obvious it’s a retelling; there are some references, like the tv show being called “Before Midnight” and there’s a healthy amount of pumpkin and shoe references. But other than that, it’s unique. Dare I say, even a better retelling than The Lunar Chronicles (and I adore TLC!)

One of my most favorite parts of this retelling is that the stepmother and stepsisters aren’t evil. They aren’t out to ruin Cindy or hurt her- quote the contrary! They love her fiercely, if bumbling. Her older stepsisters, Anna and Drew, see her as one of them, referencing themselves as a trio more often than not. Even when they’re all contestants on the show together, they aren’t catty and low, but supportive and loving. And her stepmom, Erica, is trying her hardest; she has real worries about Cindy and how others will treat her when the show airs. They all might stumble but they all have good hearts, and they’re trying. One scene that really struck a chord was when Anna and Drew took Cindy shopping and Anna and Drew were faced with what fashion is like for fat people; “extended sizes” are often found only online, and even then they’re questionable items at best. Anna grows frustrated that her sister can’t shop like she can. It was a small moment, but Murphy is good at sliding those in and still making the real-life impact and experienced notable. As fat people we experience it all the time, but when it’s pointed out in action, the impact of these micro-aggressions really resonate with people who aren’t fat.

Additionally, since this has a Bachelor / The Selection type plot, you’d think all the girls are catty and horrible to each other. This is not the case! Of course, there are characters you dislike simply because there will always be people like that, but the girls are all really sweet and concerned for one another and their feelings. Despite vying for the love of the same man, they’re all very aware of the other and her feelings- by the end even the top three contestants remain close friends.

Not to mention, there was a level of diversity I wasn’t expecting from this book. While the main characters are cis, straight, white people, the supporting cast is more diverse than I thought we would see in a Disney series: there’s a pansexual contestant who speaks often about her girlfriend, an alternative, butch lesbian who serves as an executive producer, as well as a non-binary fashion executive. And it’s all worked very well into the story so it’s not like an attention grab, but rather a moment like when any other character is introduced.

Also, while there was some angst- this is a Disney retelling after all, so Cindy’s parents are dead- it isn’t in your face, and it doesn’t take away from the fun, rom-com vibes. It follows a lot of tropes you’d expect from a story like this (think The Selection and its “plot twists”). I also really wish illustrations were included because I’m a visual person and would have loved to really see Cindy’s designs to get the full effect.

The ending left some things to be desired, but I think the overall direction was good for Cindy’s character, even if the romance ended up taking a small step back.

I’m probably going to buy this and reread it when it finally comes out in August just to see if anything, even the smallest thing, is changed. And just so I can add this gorgeous cover to my collection. This book was so good and comforting, even if it had no spicy moments. I really can’t wait to read more from this series! I hope all the princesses are fat.

But, in the mean time, if you want more fat princess content, the movie Red Shoes and the Seven Dwarfs is a good place to go next.

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Loved this book! It was everything I didn’t know I needed. Light read with just the right amount of family drama. Highly recommend for a nice summer read.

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Cute Cinderella inspired story by the author of Dumplin, this story has great body positivity as well. and is modern enough to feel fresh and new. This is Julie Murphy’s adult debut, which I can highly recommend as somebody who likes reality television I really enjoyed this one.

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Crazy cute and clean story of a plus size girl vying for a handsome contestant on a bachelor TV reality show. All the characters you think will be there certainly are and there is a raging competition to win the prize. It is a fun novel.
I voluntarily read and reviewed an advanced copy of this book. All thoughts and opinions are my own.

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Thanks netgalley for an early copy of this! I adored every single thing about this story. The characters were perfection and I didn’t want to put this down!

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Can a plus size woman succeed in the TV reality world and the fashion world, specifically in the shoe designing department ?

Cindy has just graduated in fashion school and hopes to become a shoe designer. Before finding a job, she heads back home to help her stepmother, Erica, with babysitting duties for her younger siblings. It happens that Erica is the producer of “Before midnight”, a TV reality show like “The Bachelor” and that the show needs more participants. Being plus size, Cindy is not the usual typecast. But luck in on her side and she accepts to participate, hoping only to get visibility for her shoe creations, which she wears on the show. Even more things could come out from the show : new friendships, job opportunities, social media success and a possible love interest.

Read up to see if she gets the guy, the shoe designing job and all those extras. Funny, light reading. I really enjoyed it.

Thank you to Disney Hyperion and NetGalley for an Advanced Reader Copy.

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I liked this book! I really enjoyed the main character and her motivations. The Cinderella motif was great and made me smile. I wasn’t totally sold on the TV show aspect, but that could be because I am a huge bachelor fan and had trouble with letting go of the differences.

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If the Shoe Fits is a perfect summer read (or for that matter, a perfect read for anyone wanting a happy ending). Julie Murphy's journey into adult lit is destined to be a success with her usual humor and charm entwined in a romance made for TV, or at least those who watch a lot of reality TV. For those who can't get enough of The Bachelor or similar series, this book will keep you happy while you await a new season. Meant to Be is a new series by Murphy, whose Dumplin' and Puddin' books have made many a YA reader swoon and laugh, and these are going to be based loosely on fairy tales. If the Shoe Fits takes the Cinderella tale and transforms it just enough that it's recognizable, but it has it's own flair. Cindy, the main character, has a love for shoes that goes beyond just a hobby, because she wants to make a career designing them. However, since her father's death, she has had designing block, and she just can't seem to get past this issue. An unexpected meeting with a cute stranger on a plane as she's moving back home to be with her step-family is a fun distraction, but when her step-mother (who happens to be the producer of the dating show Before Midnight) uses her as a fill-in on the show, the shock at finding out said stranger is the show's bachelor looking for a wife seems like a magical opportunity. Being a plus-size contestant on a show filled with petite and sometimes heartless other women is a challenge that Cindy has to power through, but a little encouragement from her Prince Charming and viewers who want to see her succeed might just make this fairy tale become reality. This was a clever and creative story, even if it did seem to get a little long towards the end. I found it a quick read, and I enjoyed the story, but I did feel like despite her best efforts, some of the scenarios and characters were a little cliched at times, and I didn't end up as invested in the characters as I would have expected from her other novels, Still, it was a fun story, and I enjoyed relaxing and laughing through it. I will look forward to seeing which fairy tale Murphy will write about in her next Meant to Be title.

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