First up, thank you for allowing me to read this book. Sadly, this book and I just didn't match! Normally I read around 10-20%, but after 45 minutes (with a few small breaks) and not getting further than 5%, I decided to just give up around that part. The writing-style just isn't for me. It is quite confusing to see what age-group this book is for. Given the few bits I learn of the MC I would say late YA/early NA, but the way it is written seems way younger. The descriptions of things are endless, some sentences just keep on going without seemingly ever stopping. It felt very much like a graphic novel in the way that you get dumped mid story, I actually was looking for an early chapter and wondered if I had missed something (which wouldn't surprise me given how ARCs at times are). The monster fight... I am not sure what to think, I thought she was able to do at least something given the hints we got.. but um she was pretty useless. And again, endless descriptions that made the fight/whatever you want to call it, long-winded. I do love the cover, I love that our MC is not afraid to wear the clothes she does (I would love to wear them, but sorry, not going to happen).

This was a fun read. Holly Roads was a break out character with her obsession of Harajuku fashion and the unfortunate position of having to fight monsters. Anime imagery was what I saw in my mind as I read this.

This was...an interesting read. I was really excited because it sounded like a quirky mix of superheroes and Harajuku...but it fell so so flat.

First of all, this is labeled as YA, but it read more middle grade in my opinion. Everything was very simplified and underdeveloped and one of the most distracting things was that pretty much every other sentence was a metaphor or a simile ... too much. I found myself getting annoyed at how many contrasts or details were added in and ended up skim reading the last 60%. The characters are young but their behavior and conversation skills were stuck in 7th-grade drama circles. Development between characters was bland and fell short.

Overall, this could have been a really amazing middle-grade novel, but in regards to it being a superhero-type YA book, no...no thank you. If there happens to be a sequel I don't think I"ll be reading it.

I ended up DNF'ing the book. No matter how hard I tried to get into the book I was unable to. I was hoping that this would be a fun book to read from the description. As for the star rating I wouldn't give it anything. But since I am unable to submit without a star rating.

**Thank you to Netgalley for providing me with a free e-ARC in exchange for an honest review**
“Magic Mutant Nightmare Girl” by Erin Grammar is the first part of the story of Holly Roads, a Harajuku fashionista who suddenly gains superhuman powers.
This was a great book, with unique characters and unexpected plot twists, I especially liked how Holly's style was brought up throughout the novel and the conversations her hobby brings up, you can really tell the author did loads of research upon writing her. I also absolutely loved how so many characters were part of the LGBTQ+ community.
It's a very campy book, which I enjoyed a lot, but might not be for everyone. I think this story has a very niche audience, but I would encourage anyone who likes superhero stories to read it.
However, of course, the story wasn't perfect. The ending escalates too quickly and the motivations of the antagonist are unexplained and cliché. Why does he want to do what he does? He seemed mostly evil for evil's sake, so I hope it's explored more in the following books.
The ages of the characters aren't very clear throughout the narrative. I mean, of course the author tells us the ages, but Holly and Brannon act the same age while Kyle, who is actually Holly's age, acts and is treated like a child by everyone, this kind of put me off.
The biggest problem in my opinion, is Nuñez's (the only Latinx character) past. It's stereotypical for Latinx people to be involved in organized crime, especially drug cartels, so it didn't sit right with me when he mentioned that was his past, and this was ultimately brought my rating down. And this was the only iffy POC thing I noticed, because I am Latina myself, but I've seen other people complaining about other representation.
I'm giving this 3/5 stars. I don't know if I'll be continuing with the rest of the series.

Sometimes you just need something a bit different and "Magic Mutant Nightmare Girl" was certainly that!

Fun, unique and bursting at the seams with Lolita fashion, this story is as bright and bubbly as it's gorgeous front cover. The pacing was slightly squiffy sometimes (technical term) and I was a bit confused at the beginning but I'm so pleased I pushed through to join Holly and her new N.E.R.D friends on such an action-packed adventure. I was entertained until the very end and I am now waiting desperately for book two after that cliffhanger!

Thank you Netgalley and Xpresso Book Tours for providing me with a free digital copy in exchange for an honest review.

Magic Mutant Nightmare Girl! Who wouldn't want to read this as soon as they see the title?

I have been discussing with quite a few Booksta friends lately about how important trigger/content warnings are for media/material and before I move further I want to say how absolutely impressed I was with the warnings present at the beginning of this book. Additionally, I have a great appreciation for the author, who handled difficult situations and tough topics thoroughly, but with a more sensitive approach, which can be vital to some readers enjoying written works. The artwork in this story is breathtaking and the characters match up and are just as impressive. The characters are genuine and all have strengths and weaknesses, making me really find parts of them to relate to and form connections with.
I will say the writing style almost lost me because I found it to be descriptive to a fault and very long-winded/overdone, normally this does not bother me, but at certain points it felt like it was pulling me out of the story. I also really appreciated the glossary in the back, but found it draining to constantly be flipping back and forth between the story and glossary - in future this story would probably benefit more from footnotes than a full on glossary.

While I don't necessarily think this story is for everyone, I really enjoyed it and would recommend giving it a chance!

I had very high hopes for this novel because the concept seemed so original. However, a great concept cannot save melodramatic circumventive language and niche poorly explained references. Magic Mutant Nightmare Girl is a love letter to Japanese and campy sci fi subculture, but it is one better left unsent.
My largest complaint regarding this book is the excessive language. Everything was written in a style that was unnecessarily long-winded and overly descriptive. Even the word choice felt superfluous at times; like it was a conscious choice to pick an obscure or uncharacteristically complex synonym, when something simpler would have been more appropriate. Due to this, the pacing of the entire novel felt off, especially between character dialogue and in action sequences.
In addition to the language there was a lot of brand name and lingo dropping. The unnecessary slang terms and associated branding from the Japanese fashion and anime subcultures were just inserted into the narrative with no contextual explanation. Meaning, that unless you are familiar with these subcultures, these references come off as alienating and make no sense. Admittedly, there is a glossary in the back, but requiring a reader to break immersion to constantly flip to the back pages in order to understand one-time situational descriptors is not ideal. Nobody actually wants that kind of required reading material for their fun fiction book.
In my opinion this novel is for a very niche market, but even within the targeted demographic, I would not recommend it.

I am so sad that I’m DNFing this. I think this is yet another case of too hard to track digitally. I feel like I am in a sequel, which is never a good sign. The characters were all over the place with almost no exposition which was so frustrating.

The truth is that I expected a little more from this book.
I'm a mega fan of fantasy and fiction, it's one of the genres I love the most. And since I saw this book, it caught my attention and I wanted to read it.
But when I was reading it, the book didn't catch me. And I tried several times.
I'm not saying it's a bad book, it has a lot of potential, but personally it didn't catch me, it didn't meet my expectations.

Unfortunately, I no longer wish to review this book as the first few chapters did not reel me in. Thank you for the opportunity.

Originally this book's idea was fascinating, but the characters and writing changed my ming -in the wrong way.
I did not enjoy the writing style or the narrative; it was extremely confusing sometimes and had so many unnecessary descriptions or reactions. I genuinely couldn't connect to any character and the plot ... wasn't there. I think if revisited, it could get better.

Magic Mutant Nightmare Girl by Erin Grammer is so deliciously hurtful and accurate in it's social anxiety representation that I had to spend several hours after I finished this just thinking over everything I just read.

This book follows Holly Roads as she is transformed from an awkward, shy heiress to a somewhat self confident mutant with overwhelming emotions. Every turn this book took was unexpected and perfect that I spent a lot of time with my mouth agape.

I can NOT wait for the next book to come out.

I’d like to take a moment to thank the publishers and netgalley for an arc in exchange of an honest review.

Unfortunately for me things didn’t start well for this novel and it didn’t improve. Almost every single sentence is worded in the most difficult and confusing way possible. Sometimes you won’t know what’s happening until the end of the paragraph. As such I didn’t see anything that redeemable about the novel. It wasn’t for me, it needs stronger editing. Maybe two of three revisions, as right now it’s a bit of a mess from a cool idea.

3.5/5 stars

🐻 Thanks to Netgalley and the publisher for providing this e-arc!


✨It was only fine. Not that good of a ya novel but i wouldn't mind reading more from the author

First off I love that the book starts with a content warning so readers can more easily decide if this is good read for them. I also thought the author handled the sensitive topics and violence in the book well everything felt important to the plot and not overdone. I loved the cast of characters in the book; I’m always down for a cast of misfits having to learn to work together. The way the author brought the characters together and highlighted their strengths was so well done. It really made them all feel real and likeable. I want to hang out with these characters and eat dumplings in the nail shop with them.

I am so excited to see where the series goes and felt like this was a great first book. The way the story unfolded was well done and felt like a complete story while also setting up the next book. I also feel very much invested in what is going to happen to all the characters and just all around really want more of their story.

A very fun book and very enjoyable but it was a bit confusing at time and not very well paced. It was exciting at times but other times it just felt boring

This book is my new everything. You know how every bookworm has at least one book that they just deeply relate to for no truly discernable reason, well I've finally found mine. I loved just about everything in this book but I have a hard time imagining that anyone I could possibly speak to would as well. This book was just so me, I need more books like it. This book was just nonstop action mixed with amazing characters. Thinking back over it I can definitely see some elements that make this book meld with me so well, and they go as follows. Lolita, magical girl, bisexual, badass, and social anxiety. That's it that's the book, what more could you desire. I wish I could do a better job explaining to you how much I related to and loved this book but it just feels too intangible. Just read it.

just wasn't able to get through this one. but the cover is STUNNING. just not the best writing, characters or plot it was lacking in many areas.

I liked this book a lot: Holly is an interesting protagonist, who's flawed, but likable. The other characters are overall interesting too, especially Kyle, who's a secondary character, but certainly one I'm invested in. I also enjoyed how normalized the LGBTQ+ representation is in this book: Holly is bisexual and she talks about her interest and type, regarding all genders. There are mentions of nonbinary people, mentions of girls Holly was attracted to, the introduction of some characters' pronouns, all that, and it was truly heartwarming to read (as a nonbinary person).

But, however... it didn't reach my expectation. Unfortunately, it was way too high for what the book actually was, as I didn't find the plot all that... good. I definitely appreciated the work with LGBTQ+ representation and lessons on Lolita fashion, which is something that interests me, but I've never stopped to read about, for some reason. While I did like the characters a lot, I also didn't get to feel deeply connected to them. It's something I can't quite put my finger on: I did care about them, but it didn't make me breathless or anything. It was good, but not a favorite. It's worth a read, but do not commit the mistake I did of setting the bar too high.