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Thank you to NetGalley and St. Martin's Press for the arc! I really, really enjoyed this book. It has everybody's favorite tropes! Dark academia, enemies to lovers, AND fake dating. Sounds a little too ambitious for one book, but it was so well done. I loved Doe's group of friends and Wells and even Three. There were so many interesting character dynamics and I was surprised to get invested in so many different people in a book this short, but it happened and I'm so happy it did.
When Weston and Winfield announce that they will merge and become co-ed, Doe is overwhelmed with feelings of anger and denial. Weston has been her home for the past three years and merging with the boys of Winfield could destroy everything that she loved about the school.
Her nemesis at Winfield is Three. When his cousin, Wells, offers her the chance to mess with Three, while also getting him an heirloom that Three has, Doe takes the chance.
Even as she fake dates Wells, Doe works on pulling off the most legendary pranks against Winfield. This prank war has gone on for generations and Doe has pulled off many against Three and Winfield in her time at Weston and Doe hopes that maybe the prank war can stop the merger.
But the prank war and the merger aren't the most important things that Doe needs to focus on. There is a darkness lurking within Doe and within Doe's precious school.
Final thoughts: This was a pretty well done story. It was solid and Doe has a strong point of view. My only real complaints were that everyone and everything had a person's name (even the parents were referred to by their first names, making it often difficult to keep all of the characters straight) and one of the pranks was extremely dangerous but there were no real consequences. Otherwise, the story is solid and I believed Doe's growth over the course of the book.
Rating: 4/5
Thanks to NetGalley for the ARC.
Thank you so much to St. Martin's Press for providing me with an ARC in exchange for an honest review!
Reading this book literally made me feel like I was watching an A24 film or something. I feel like it’s a really good coming-of-age story about feminism and inclusivity while also dealing with new love and friendship. I know that this is pitched as a YA rom-com and that Doe and Wells are literally on the cover, but I think I liked the friendship aspect of this novel the most. Doe, Shawn, Jade, Gemma, and Sumi remind me so much of the friend groups in books like The Baby-Sitter’s Club or Sisterhood of the Traveling Pants and it was so much fun watching their dynamic. I loved how inclusive the ensemble cast was and seeing all the Weston (and Winfield) students come together in solidarity against Tully at the end of the novel was so amazing.
As for the actual romance aspect of the novel, I think the fake dating aspect of the novel could have been more played out, but at the same time, I think it would have taken away from the main theme of the story. The way that the fake-dating relationship deflated at the end of the novel plus the reveal about Three and Wells’ relationship was also a little disappointing. Wells was super cute with Doe, though. I mean, get you a guy who will read your favorite mass-market paperback romance novels. They were adorable.
Overall this was a cute read! Although it’s marketed as YA, I’d probably recommend this for upper YA readers (readers 16+). While there are no explicit scenes, there is explicit language and the story involves some more mature/adult themes (check TW’s).
very cute ya gave very much gaslight gatekeep girlboss energy and i love that for them.. amazing friendship between women and striving for female power PLUS a cute relationship is all i ever want in a book. amazing. 4/5
Thank you to the author, publisher, and NetGalley for an ARC of this novel in exchange for an honest review.
This is a well-written, and overall fast-paced enemies-to-lovers YA romcom. The beginning was slow but once the story picked up, I couldn’t put it down. The characters are well developed and you root for Doe as she comes of age.
My only hesitancy with the book is the handling of a predator. Being an educator, I would have liked to see girls become more empowered to fight against a predator at their school long before becoming seniors.
Other than that, I truly enjoyed the novel.
A beautiful coming of age story filled with all of your favorite YA tropes, this novel is set at two single-gender boarding schools embroiled in a decades-long prank war. Doe and her friends are the latest group leading the charge for the Weston girls school, and they face off against Three and his Winfield boys, with each group of seniors dead-set on winning the war once and for all in their senior year. When the administrations drop a bombshell that will change both school forever, though, things start to escalate very quickly. Soon, though, they will all face a new threat that changes everything again.
The greatest strength of this book, and what makes it a five-star read for me, is the characters. Markum write Doe's coming-of-age story and personal growth with subtlety and accuracy, and she is a protagonist you quickly end up rooting for. The Winfield boys, too, grew on me quickly, and I liked the multiple dimensions that they all seemed to have. The shift in antagonist added urgency and gravity to the story, and I was on the edge of my seat as I watched it play out.
I would highly recommend this book to fans of young adult fiction and coming-of-age stories.
Thank you so much to NetGalley and St. Martin's Press for providing me this free advanced reader's copy in exchange for an honest review!
SAM. How did you write this piece of pixie dust wonder and beauty?!
SO WHOLESOME AND AMAZING. Doe + Wells 4ever + ever + ever. Also, I find it difficult to find books with positive DIVERSE female friendships and here we are. This book makes me want to rewind to high school and go to a school like Doe's and have friends like hers. I also think that the creepy/pedo teacher plot line was handled really well, and this kind of manipulative toxic behavior happens in real life, so I enjoyed how it was in the book, and seeing how the characters handled it, especially given how this is a YA book. 10/10!
All in all, this was an incredibly fun yet realistic book. Filled with prank wars and all <3
I swear that if I didn’t work during the week I read this that I would’ve finished it in one day by pulling an all nighter but lol being an adult sucks. I can’t wait to buy this when it comes out and to read everything else you ever write <333
TW: Predatory behavior, sexual and verbal harassment/assault.
All my love and thanks to NetGalley and St. Martin's Press for sending me a digital ARC copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
Thank you to Netgalley and St. Martin's press for an arc.
This is the perfect fast paced enemies to lovers book. I love how strong and independent the main character was. Although I didn't cry, I went through every emotion from laughing out loud to sad.
I love banter in books. It makes it so much more enjoyable to read, and this had exactly that. I loved the pranks, and in a boarding school setting was amazing.
I pre-ordered right after finishing it. I need to get a physical copy of this book as soon as it comes out, and will definitely recommend it to anyone who likes to read romance books.
*I received a free copy in exchange for an honest review*
This book started off really slow for me. I know it was meant to help build the rivalry and establish the characters before any of the major drama started, but I felt that it could have been sped up a bit. This book was extremely well written, and when Doe was conflicted I could feel it to. I celebrated with her wins and got teary eyed when it all started to go wrong. That's a sign of great writing! The characters were so well written that even the background friends/friend groups didn't feel flat, and I did enjoy that Doe was eventually able to see past her desire to see Weston remain unchanged and how others might feel more comfortable in a coed school.
I did appreciate how the situation with Tully was handled, but I wish we'd had more of a build up of that section as it felt a bit rushed towards the end. I was really hoping for more but it was over and handled so quickly I felt that Doe wouldn't just let him go quietly. No spoilers, but I wanted more from that section of the book. Overall, I really enjoyed the "enemies/rivals-to-lovers" aspect of the story (and thank god that Three was not placed as Doe's love interest! That made it way more interesting to me), and the book in general. It was fun to read and I didn't feel the need to put it down (even to sleep!). Definitely going to recommend to people looking for a fun rivalry romance.
This is going to be one of the best YA romance book for 2022, I can’t wait for everyone to read this book. It was perfect in every sense of the way, Samantha did such an amazing job with the enemies to lovers trope and I love that we have a strong, independent and amazing female main character for this book. This book was sweet, funny a little bit sad in some parts but it definitely was an incredible ride!
It's set at a boarding school, so I was going to love it regardless. In spite of me being programmed to enjoy it because it's set at a boarding school, I enjoyed it on its own merits. This was really fun and I appreciated how much Doe matured during the book. I will purchase this for my library.
This was a cute, quick YA romance. The boarding school romance stories always make my heart happy. The pranks and banter were funny and engaging. The fake dating trope is very obvious from the beginning, but it does not make it any less heartwarming.
A YA romcom with a twist. Evie has become a cynic about love. After all, her dad cheated on her mom and upended their lives, so how could she believe in love? Here comes the twist - as Evie is donating her romance novel collection, she comes across a book that changes her life. Suddenly, when she sees people kissing in public, she sees their love stories (good and bad). WTH??
As she tries to break this curse, Evie stumbles upon a new hobby - dancing - and a new partner, X. What ensues is a story filled with humor, emotion, love, and life.
I so, so enjoyed this! I haven't read a lot of YA recently, but this one was a reminder of the way I love contemporary YA, especially because it had so many things I love: faking dating, boarding schools, shenanigans... It managed to feel fresh and funny and actually current. The main character, Doe, and her friends are so fun to read, and her relationship with Wells was very charming and won me over quickly. I also really appreciated Doe's confidence and humor contrasted with her flaws and challenges. Unsurprisingly, it reminded me of how much I loved The Disreputable History of Frankie Landau-Banks a decade-plus ago, but updated to today's world, especially with the conversation around single-gender education and predatory teachers, not just feminist leads, plus layers for the friend group and the boys.
WOW!! This book was amazing. I was engaged right from the beginning and simply could not put it down
What I liked:
- the setup (historical rivalry)
- the relationships between characters
- the MC (SO FUNNY)
- the trope! (fake dating >>>>>)
Overall, I recommend this book to anyone who loves YA! Even if you don't, I would give it a try.
I really enjoyed this book, even though at the beginning I was reading it rather slowly because I was convinced that Doe and her friends were going to get caught and in trouble for their pranks and I knew I wouldn't be able to deal with the secondhand embarrassment of that. Once I got into it and got invested, though, boy was I in it. As frustrating as Doe could be, Wells was incredibly charming, and I lost track of how many times I slapped my hand over my mouth because of something he said.
I was anticipating a bit of a love triangle between Doe, Wells, and Three, and was convinced that the reason Doe and Wells "dating" got under Three's skin was because he had a crush on her (and the tension between the two of them was INTENSE), so I was just a little disappointed when I was wrong and Three wasn't secretly in love with his arch nemesis. Perhaps it's a story I'll have to write, myself, one day!
Besides the romance, my favorite part of this book was Doe coming to realize that the merger would actually be beneficial to trans and non-binary kids, and her realization that just because Weston was a haven for her didn't mean it was that way for everyone. My biggest complaint, however, is that the summary of the book includes a spoiler: a teacher engaging inappropriately with a younger student, which didn't even happen until around the 75% mark of the book. I knew it was going to happen, and so I kept waiting for it, and when Noelle was introduced, I knew she would be the victim immediately. I feel like this detracted from my reading experience somewhat, even though I still thoroughly enjoyed the book.
This wasn’t the book I expected, but I mean that in the best way possible. A lot of YA prep school books follow a very specific formula, but I really loved the main character Doe. It was refreshing to have a confident, strong female lead who didn’t deal with the typical teenage problems we have come to expect. Doe is unapologetic without being annoying, and her confidence in herself and her abilities was a refreshing change from having a girl who only sees her self worth once the popular boy loves her.
There was a subplot about a sexual predator of a teacher that felt weird. Doe was so strong and confident the whole book, and was unafraid to go against anyone…but somehow didn’t want to “give in” and show weakness by complaining about a creepy teacher? That part was rough and out of character, and using that to drive forward the main story was…I don’t know it wasn’t my favorite.
This was a very enjoyable read. It was light and fluffy but still entertaining. The banter of the characters were witty and fun, and it made it easy to connect with them.
Quick read full of witty banter and a decades old rivalry. This was so fun to read! I chuckled and fist bumped the air as I went along. Fake dating with a dash of enemies to lovers. I kept waiting for the next prank and the next interactions between the Weston girls and the Winfield boys. I really enjoyed reading this.
Review of This May End Badly by Samantha Markum
Thank you NetGalley and St. Martin’s Press for providing me this eARC in exchange for an honest review. All thoughts and opinions are my own.
This book is phenomenal. I’ve warmed up to the fake-dating trope ever since I read Jenny Han’s To All The Boys I’ve Loved Before series, and let me tell you, Samantha Markum delivers the goods in This May End Badly. Markum’s story is full of clear world-building, high-stakes, fake-dating-turned-to-oh-no-there-are-real-feelings, strong friendships, and divorced parents who actually treat each other with respect. Our protagonist, Doe, has friends who are ride-or-die, but they will call her out when she’s wrong about things. Markum created a protagonist who must question whether or not she’s making the best choices for her life which is a fantastic writing-decision for a coming-of-age novel. This is highly recommended for readers who enjoy snarky protagonists, fake-dating, and school rivalries.
5 out of 5 stars