I was left a little bit disappointed with this one - the first half had so much promise and I was absolutely loving it, but then the second half felt a little bit like a longer novel had been cut down rather then the story feeling natural. There were a few loose threads left over and I feel like it would have been better as a full length novel rather than a novella.

Thanks to NetGalley and the publisher, Tom Doherty Associates for the ARC copy of this book. This is my second reading of the book, and I found that the concepts embodied in the book as well as the writing to continue to be as intriguing as they were when I first read it. The protagonist, Fellian is a servant mage because the current ruling class has decided that people born with magic are lesser (because they were born with a wraith inside them that gives them their magical abilities) and meant to serve those without magic. Her living conditions are horrible and when a group of soldiers come with orders to take her to perform a task because of her ability to make light, she goes with them although she knows they are something other than what they appear to be because they promise she will receive travel papers and money upon completion of her task which will allow her to look for her remaining family members. The book explores issues of class, prejudice and doesn’t shy away from complicated topics.

The best part about the book was the world-building, I think what we got was very interesting and I can see it expanding easily into a full novel. The way the world was explained is also very smart because it was done gradually and not in an info-dumpy kind of way.

I really liked this dragon fantasy. Kate Elliott can successfully write fantasy and sci Fi. I wish Jatan was in print, I lost my book from 30 years ago.

I've been a big fan of Kate Elliott's work for quite some time! She's always solid and good for a fantastic new fantasy setting. And, of course, this one had dragons going for it, which is also always a win for me! Per her usual standards, I appreciated the complicated and interesting world-building that went into this book. Given how short it is, I was also impressed by the difficult choices that Fellion faced were. This is a world that has been plagued by colonialism and is facing revolution. As such, there is no good choice to be found, simply better ones than others. In the face of this all, Fellion was an excellent main character to follow as she tackled these situations.

My biggest struggle came down to the fact that this was only a novella. While the story is resolved essentially, there are still a lot of loose ends left hanging. Beyond that, by the end, I was still wanting to spend more time in this world. And while I liked Fellion, here, too, I feel like she would have benefitted from a longer page count where more time could have been spent more fully fleshing out all the nuances of her character. The pacing and plot were all good, but this is a situation where sometimes good things lead to one simply wishing for more beyond the end, and thus slightly tinging the reading experience with a bit of disappointment.

I hope the author decides to revisit this world sometime in the future, as I'd definitely be interested in more of what this started!

I am sorry for the inconvenience but I don’t have the time to read this anymore and have lost interest in the concept. I believe that it would benefit your book more if I did not skim your book and write a rushed review. Again, I am sorry for the inconvenience.

This was a really interesting and compelling story with an expansive world and good magic system, but I felt that the scope of the narrative and story would have worked better for me in a full length novel. I just felt that there was so much more to be explored that I felt a bit short changed by the novella length. I wanted more about the conflict between the monarchists and liberationists and more about the mage hierarchy and more about the baby and just more overall! I really enjoyed all of these elements and would happily read a full length novel set in this world with these characters.
I received a free copy of this book from the publisher in exchange for a fair and honest review.

A fast one! Elliott doesn't give the reader much time to breathe, spinning up an entire world with fascinating political dynamics and magic systems and then taking a big plot and running with it. I liked so much, even if it felt like a perfectly servicable summer blockbuster kind of book that I started to forget shortly after reading.

This was a good read, with some clever world building even though we don’t see much if the setting in a book this short. I wish we had gotten more depth to the characters, though.

I enjoyed this, I liked the characters and world building. There's an overthrown monarchy and new regime and I liked how the fire mage protagonist's story illustrated for the average person there's no easy path or answers when it comes to taking sides. For a novella fantasy it packs a lot in, although I do feel there's more story to tell and at the moment it appears to be a standalone with a loosely linked companion novel.

It's been a while since I've read this and I'm tempted to re-read now I've read the very different 'The Keeper's Six' to compare and see if I've missed anything portal/dragon related...

(ARC provided by publisher via NetGalley)

Thank you to Netgalley and the publisher for giving me a free advanced copy of this book to read and review.

I enjoyed this story and felt that the characters were carved out really well. I enjoyed the worlbuilding too.

Short but enjoyable. The world took a bit to get into, but once immersed it was easier to follow along. I was still a bit confused by the names of the characters (which is slightly problematic in such a short book). I liked the world and thought Elliot did a good job with the larger thematic message (not too heavy-handed). When the ending came, I flipped the page hoping it wasn't over. The story was contained in one book but the world and what comes next were much larger.

I actually read this twice, and each time I felt like this was a piece of a story plucked out of a larger world. While it it is a standalone, there was this strange undertone that it was part of so much more, and if Elliott ever decides to go back and expand on it, I would jump right to it.

The Magic was extremely interesting its all elemental based and very well thought out, plus easy to understand, and that to me is a plus because lately I feel like a lot of magic systems are difficult to follow.

Its easy and a really quick read, I personally just wish it had been the start of a longer series, it just felt like there was more to be told.

This book is fairly self-contained, and its 164 pages are exactly enough to introduce FELLIAN and her world, but the journey is too brief and the potential for further adventures clear to see. Elliott ties this story up neatly, but most definitely sets up future entries whether continuing the story of Fellian or continuing on to highlight others and tell their tales.
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I went into this novel expecting some high fantasy about dragons and stars and felt that everything was not fleshed out and under-depicted. I did not finish this read.

Unique, intrigueing and engageing. Even though it was dazzling, the story felt too short to me. I feel like a lot more could have been brought into this one, but everything was twisted into a short novel.
I think this book would have done good as the beginning of a enchanting series, and definately not a standalone.

This book kept calling to me ever since Limecello assigned me this month’s TBR theme, which is “after the war.” This book is not a romance, but I think it does a wonderful job of exploring the nuances of what comes after a revolution and how it isn’t as clearcut as we might expect. It is set in a fantasy world, where there is magic, and where a revolutionary war recently took place. The main character, Fellion, has magical abilities over fire, and is working at an inn when the book begins. A major issue I had with this book is that while there are clues to Fellion’s background and motivations, we don’t fully understand them until almost the end, so that the tension between the choices she has at the end of the book hadn’t built up enough for me to be fully invested either way. I think you could say this is a coming-of-age story, though Fellion’s age was never entirely clear to me, other than young but not a child, so I hesitate to stick the book with that descriptor. Lest you be misled by the blurb, this is not going to be a rags to riches story.

Fellion’s values are consistent throughout the story, even when she learns new details about the stories that shaped her world. She values access to education, which is evident in the first chapter of the book. She sneakily teaches fellow servants how to read and write while she is supposed to be cleaning the fancy privies at the inn where she is an indentured servant. She values respect. She tries to address almost everyone by name, instead of by their position or title (unless she is being observed or is being sarcastically compliant). The stories that shaped her world have to do with how some people have magical abilities and others don’t. The two main factions have differing explanations for this occurrence, and also for why some people can do more with their magical abilities than others. However, the monarchists—the people that take Fellion hostage and at the same time free her from her servitude—didn’t make this kind of information available to everyone, just to the elite. This is partly why Fellion makes the choice she does at the end of the book.

The other reason is why I struggled with this book on my first reading and why it went back on my TBR pile. We don’t know most of Fellion’s background until the very end. She alludes to it throughout the book, but she doesn’t put the pieces together, even in her own internal musings, so unless you as the reader want to take some wild guesses in the middle of this book, you don’t fully understand what moves Fellion until the point where she explains her backstory to the monarchists, which is near the end of the book. I did not like this authorial choice. Like I said at the top of this review, the delay in revealing this information felt like it diminished the build-up of tension between the choices Fellion is faced with, and so I was less emotionally invested in these choices as a result. Of course, your mileage may vary.

I think this is a lovely book and offered some food for thought in these fraught times we live in (I would still like not to live in the middle of a dystopian novel, personally).

Grade: B+

I appreciated the concept of a protagonist getting swept up in a counter-revolution with a wide enough perspective to realize that both sides actually suck, but I don’t think a novella gives enough space to explore the idea. Or at least not if the fantasy-adventure is going to take up as much space of the plot as this one did. Interesting but maybe not Elliott’s strongest work.

I started Servant Mage a while ago and fell away from it - not because I wasn’t enjoying it, but it didn’t grip me and something else came along I was more invested in. I did come back to Servant Mage, because I think it’s an intriguing concept and magic system, however I felt like so much more could have been done with the story.

Fellini is an interesting main character, and one whose attitude and steadfastness I loved. Discovering the more of the world through her eyes was enjoyable, as I like stories where we learn along with the character, and I was happy to see her discover there was more to her magic than she had previously imagined.

The book was a good start to a story, but I don’t feel like the short length did it any favours. It felt more like the beginning of a book than a complete story, and the ending - which I think is entirely in character for Fellian - felt like a bit of a waste of such intriguing world-building and such a wonderful magic system.

I hope that we might get more books in the world of Servant Mage in the future, because I would be delighted to read them. Unfortunately, this one fell a little flat for me, so although it was enjoyable, I can only give it 3.5 stars.