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I was not a fan of this one. The MC was overly annoying and boring. I agree with a lot of other reviewers that it felt weird for her to be the MC. The book from a different POV would have been a better read.

The book itself struggled with a mega pacing issue. Everything felt extremely slow and was a bit boring to slog through.

This also struggled with the thing where everything is solved so easily that it's hard to believe any of it is even possible.

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Wow! This book was exceptional. I went into it not really expecting that much, but I was sorely mistaken. Loved it

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Fireborn is Jessa Graythorne’s fabulous debut! A real page-turner, and a must-read for anyone who loves contemporary fantasy and tales about demons.

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The plot had so much potential, but the execution needs a little more work. Too much tell with less show/feel. Unfortunately, I couldn't connect with the story. This was a highly anticipated book for me.

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I found this to be an enjoyable read, keeping me on my toes throughout. The storyline was written well and flowed seamlessly. I look forward to reading more by this author!

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I love reading new authors because I have no idea where their stories will take me. This book had me on the edge of my seat!!! I kept wanting to figure things out and more than once read waaayyyyy past my bedtime. You will love the characters in this book and it's a perfect read for October because of the demons and supernatural aspects. Creative surprises galore await you.

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Thanks to netgalley and the publisher for providing an e-arc of the book in exchange for an honest review.
Unfortunately this book was not for me. I found the protagonist to be very unrelatable. And for someone who's 25, she was also incredibly stupid. I might have understood if she was a teenager.
This book also did too much telling and not enough showing and realizations where there was absolutely no need for the term.

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DNF at 42%

his has the makings of a good book, but the execution fell somewhat flat. As others have said the pacing is off, with parts of the story dragging - particularly in the 25% or so. The story telling was nicely done but when it doesn't move the plot forward (or world build) then after a while it becomes tedious. Know what else is tedious? Azrael keeping all those secrets from Halley. How on earth is she meant to "save the world", or at least be of any use, if she's constantly kept in the dark. It's a very lazy writing technique that is probably meant to give an air of suspense but instead just gets annoying.


I did like that the author wrote a flawed heroine, one with a past and clearly used to being indulged. However I wasn't convinced that at 25 and training(?) as a doctor, one who worked in an emergency department, would have felt quite so immature - particularly in relation to her ex-boyfriend.


I'm at 42% and still have very, very little idea of what is happening or Halley's role in the book. I could tell you in two or three sentences what has happened so far and not miss anything important out. I may come back and try to finish this in a few days, but at the moment I'm shelving it as a DNF.

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Excellent story! Totally engrossing!. Looking forward to reading more by this author! Could not put this down!

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I read the blurb on this and thought it would definitely be up my alley. I want to start with saying that this is a dark urban fantasy with not a lot of action. The book is well-written, and it is extremely descriptive at times. The author doles out little bits of what happened in the past a tiny bit at a time I believe to build up suspense. Put all together, I wish there had been more action than there was. We learn a lot about Halley and almost nothing about Azrael, and while there were lots of description, I still feel like not much happened. Add to that, I don’t understand exactly why the information about Halley’s past were doled out in drips; nothing revealed was really relevant (what Fern made her do, her being shot at, etc.). However, I still mostly enjoyed this book, and I’d definitely read the next one. Recommend. I was provided a complimentary copy which I voluntarily reviewed.

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Give me demons, give me gore, give me the tension between the two main characters, give me well written characters, too, and a hella surprising plot and you'll have made my day.
Fireborn is a wild ride. And boy, what a ride.
I loved how each secret was buried so well it challenged my love for theories, some of which found a conformation, but always with a twist!
I can't say much without spoiling the plot, only that there are mysteries upon mysteries and you never know what you'll be facing next; it might start quite tame, just a paranormal book you see on sale, but there's so much happening, so much I still have to wrap my head around.
Halley. Hallow. Holly. Hal.
Hal.
Hal is a portent, a force of nature (but also incredibly dumb at times, gah), who takes no shit and is incredibly driven by love for the only person who never betrayed her.
It's her determination that sets her upon Azrael Falkov's path, and even when she doesn't trust him one bit, she's forced to work alongside him (and oh, the tension, y'all).
And Azrael, well, Azrael is as enigmatic as they come. He's the big question mark you can't decipher, and while I do have a theory, I've seen that nothing in this book is that simple.
By the end of the book, you're left hanging, but not in a literal cliffhanger way, more in the "there are so many unanswered questions I don't even know where to begin" way, which might be a tad more cruel than an actual cliffhanger.
Suffice to say, I will not so patiently wait for the sequel, because there is that bloody one million dollar question I need an answer for: what is Azrael Falkov?

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I have been trying to get into this book for a while but I just didn't like the heroine and the way it is written.

Halley is a doctor-in-training and at the start of the book she flies to Amsterdam to visit her brother, even when her father objects and her brother has some strange warnings. When she arrives, her brother is missing.. The heroine makes several dumb decisions for such a bright person. The best part of the story was the character of Falkov. Overall this story has a lot of potential but the way it is executed was not to my taste. But that is of course only my opinion so don't let me keep you from reading this book!

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The story follows Halley, a young doctor who visits her brother in Amsterdam only to find out he's in trouble and goes missing. Her adventures begin when she decides to find out what happened and has to rely on Azrael, a mysterious stranger.
Well-written, the prose is beautiful and dark. The story has an intriguing premise, generally good pacing, and immersive world-building. Fireborn begins slowly but after about 25% the pace picks up and it reads like a thriller. We get supernatural intrigue, adventure, revenge, and a hint of romance.
I found the main character inconsistent throughout the story. She's often portrayed as a strong, smart female lead (which I love) but she acts out of character and gets dumb when it's convenient for the narrative.
All in all, it was an enjoyable read that has a lot of potential.

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I enjoyed Fire born. It has mystery, excitement, and good characters. Interesting premise that I'd not thought of before, however the main character, Halley, was dumb at times when she should have shined. That was disappointing.

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Finally! If you loved KMM's Darkfever, then Fireborn is for you!

Pros:
- I've waited a long time for a similar story, and here it is. I loved the premise and the pacing. The settings in this novel are so well done; I felt I traveled with Halley to Asmterdam. Great job.
-The characters are also fleshed out. I know them and I love/hate them as I think I'm supposed to. :)
-And look at that cover!

Cons:
- My main problem was with the execution. Because I loved the story so much, there was no way I wasn't going to finish it. But there were some inconsistencies at the beginning that made me stop and think too much about them; some parts were extremely well written, but others seemed patched-up (I had no idea who talked or how they ended up doing something), and finally, -my bad- but I kept getting confused between Flynn and Fern... I wonder if there is a reason behind the author's choice for similar-sounding names. I couldn't see any in this book, and I hated the fact that I had to reread entire pages because I mistook Fern for Flynn or vice-versa, and nothing made sense. :(

Final words:
It's still worth it! Read it! :)

***Thank you, GenZ Publishing, for allowing me to read this first e-ARC by Jessa Graythorne. ***

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Thank you to NetGalley and GenZ Publishing for providing the arc of Fireborn by Jessa Graythorne in exchange for my honest review.

Fireborn falls victim to telling and very little showing, which makes at least the first 25% or so moves very very slowly. Way too slowly. I had to force myself to read a chapter a night just to get to the parts that sped up, the problem is, by the time I reached that point, I didn’t care. I just never connected with the story or the characters.
The world-building takes too long and it’s all spent telling instead of showing. So many aspects of the building could have moved along if we were shown rather than told. I mean there’s a full-on question and answer scene, what?

My biggest problem with the story was the main character, Halley Ashwood. She was infuriatingly annoying – the only reason she was there was because she was a doctor…The story from Azrael Falkov’s POV would have been much more interesting - let’s tell that story and I’ll give this one another go.
Overall, the plot was great and I’d love to see it done differently. The characters and slow pace just kept me from ever getting into it.

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"There are two reactions people have when they don't understand the world anymore. Half freak out.... That doesn't fly when you're a doctor."
I'm not a fan of demons' stories but this book made me realise how wrong I could be.
For everyone who liked "Kingdom of the Wicked" by Kerri Maniscalco , this book will give you the same adrenaline, mystery and revenge while also dealing with false relationships and secrets hidden in the depth of one's own family.
Brotherhood may be complicated but when you find your brother, your best friend, missing ... nothing will stop you from finding answers just like Hal does.
"... we shared a pet peeve: promises. The very word carried meaningless connotations. a vestige of a million other broken vows. We didn't make promises."
I absolutely loved each and everyone of these characters , trying to protect their good side while dealing with their dark one, suddenly arising.
For every fan of the mysterious and brooding dark male character... you will not be disappointed in this either!
I loved how the author decided to explore the complexities of familiar relationships while also following the inner development of the main character.
"The girl that opened her eyes in the corridor wasn't one I recognised. I could let this fire fuel me or I could let it consume me, and if I was going to be consumed, I'd be damned if I didn't go out in a supernova of my own."
I appreciated the fact the the book was written in first person because , given the flashback in it, it made it easier for me to follow the storyline and the plot.
In a magical picture of Amsterdam, betrayal and love unravel their secrets in front of the reader's eyes where everything is hidden and nothing is clear.
"The thing that doesn't kill us isn't what makes us stronger. The way we fight to go on is."

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I received an ARC from NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.

This had a very interesting concept but the writing felt very weak and I just couldn't get into it.

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This one i found alittle confusing at times. Maybe that was just me but the storyline didn't quite flow. Wasn't sure what was so special about Hayley and why she was being protected.
Great description and liked learning about Amsterdam.

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The plot that unfolds in this story is full of emotion, action and bends and turns that keep you questioning. The main characters allow for an easy immersion. The flaws though come in when too many questions go unanswered and it isn't until the very end of the book that we begin to get a glimpse at some of them. Still, we are left with wondering what one of the main characters is, and many unanswered questions regarding her brothers murder. It left me with confliction because on one hand, it makes me want to continue on to the next to receive some of those answers as I'm aware that most likely is the intention of the author but the other side of that coin is left with doubts because I read through hundreds of pages and really only got glimpses of what's going on. The flow was nice and I didn't want to put the book down until I finished. There were parts however, that didn't explain what was going on and I now believe that to be intentional and another way to get us to want to continue with the series but when we are left with feeling unsatisfied that much, it's hard to decide.

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