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While the book has a slow start and Xingyin comes off as very naive and flat, as the story progresses, we get some amazing character growth and I end up falling for her stubbornness. It was so good that I ate this up in one sitting (who needs sleep anyway). The imagery is beautiful, many of the characters sweet, and the action is amazing! I felt like I went on a journey with Xingyin, and maybe I'm a bit heartbroken, but that's ok. Really this book reads more like multiple books, which was satisfying. The pacing just felt very well done.

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Though I found the story slow to start, once I got to part two and the action started to come to the fore, I really got sucked into the story. This is a very rich, beautifully crafted retelling of the Chinese mythology story of Chang'e. I was drawn to Xingyin and Liwei's entwined story, digging their friendship which blossomed into something more, but I really felt myself pulling away at the introduction of a love-triangle. As much as I found Xingyin to be a strong, powerful, inspiring figure, it's always a little disillusioning to see people fall so quickly and easily for a YA main character, it takes the believability of the character down a few notches. I felt like this was just a huge plot device for most of the story and it continued to feel that way until the end.

Now, the story itself is very strong. I loved the worldbuilding that Tan has crafted within this book. I am a big fantasy fan, so learning about the world of the Celestial Kingdom and the magic system was so fun and made the book very enjoyable. I also enjoyed seeing the time spent in showing us Xingyin's growth from nothing into a powerful warrior, which often gets glossed over in these kinds of stories. She didn't become strong overnight, she works for it and we get to see her learn and take on new challenges, conquer those, and take on even bigger and more difficult challenges.

While I think that the writing is okay, it's the story that truly makes this work shine and I am looking forward to seeing where it goes next.

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This book is.. a lot. I mean, a lot a lot. We have romance, we have action and adventure, betrayal, a mystery, and interwoven in all of that is a plan for freedom. It’s such beautiful writing though

Not that this book is bad BUT it doesn’t work for me: the entire second and third half of this is full of
Battle scenes and lost love and while I’m not against any of that, it’s not something I particularly enjoy reading. Especially the fight scenes, my eyes just glaze over things like that.

I got incredibly bored at the 80% mark and had to really force myself to finish. Like I said, this book is full of a lot of things and I just lost the overall plot of this story when we got to that part, I couldn’t actually see where anything was going.

I can see this book being very loved by some people but it was definitely not the book for me.

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Daughter of the moon goddess was a whimsical tale, and I feel so connected to the protagonist.

Xingjian is the protagonist; she’s the daughter of the moon goddess through her childhood; she was shielded from the company of other people. She learns that she is a secret from the Celestial Emperor and other people since her mother steals the elixir of immortality. Resulting in her mother’s exiled to the moon, our protagonist learns that everything she knew isn’t what it seems. After her magic gets the best of her, at that moment, the life of Xingyin could never be the same as she needs to flee her home to save herself and her mother from the wrath of the Celestial Emperor.

Xingyin embarks on a journey to trying to keep
true to herself and trying to find a solution to free her mother from her exile. While growing into ranks, Xingyin feels love, hope, betrayal, heartbrokenness & deception but thanks to her clear values and her personality; she befriends others that help her in her journey. Even when Xingyin makes and shows her flaws, I root for her because the most important thing for her was family and her friends, to which I can completely relate. The romance of this book was good, but I love that it wasn’t the main focus entirely, and our protagonist always put herself and her mom above Liwei and Wenzhi. Her needs always come first, and her pride which I love.

The plot was fun, but sometimes it felt a bit slow because of the detailed description of our protagonist's places. The writing was beautiful and unique. And don’t even get me started on the plot twist. I didn’t even visualize that coming at all it punches my guts. The ending of this book feels like a standalone book, but at the same time, some of the plots didn’t get resolved by the end of the book.

Reading this book made me feel like a child again watching my favorite fantasy/ anime show. And I recommend this book to people.

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I loved the attention to detail, but it does mean the book is slow to get off the ground; the first third especially feels like it could be better paced. Still, who doesn't love a daughter trying to save her mom plot? I wish we got more of these. Xingyin is easy to root for, even if she does take awhile to grow into a fully-fledged character.

The book has a great mood and I like the fairy tale vibe. Looking forward to the sequel.

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I’m not exaggerating when I say Tan’s debut novel blew me away. Daughter of the Moon Goddess is bursting with enchanting worldbuilding, flourishing with lush imagery, and brimming with heartfelt emotion. Between the gorgeous descriptions, the lyrical writing, and the riveting plot, it’s impossible to not get swept up with Xingyin and her glorious, magical journey, filled with legendary perils and mythical obstacles, and infused with the essence that makes these tales of old still as impactful to this day.

What I loved most about this book – and made it truly such a joy to read – was how loaded the story was. There was never a moment’s rest or an unnecessary passage. Every single sentence of this book was intentionally and purposeful. Some in the most surprising of ways!

This is not a book you can passively read. It’s chocked-full of so much content – important details despite their size, and threads to storylines woven together so adeptly you don’t realize until exactly the right moment – that if you look away for just one minute you’ll miss out of so much lore, action, and foreshadowing.

But don’t fret! This book is so gripping you’d be hard-pressed to find your attention wandering.

If you’re a fan of YA fantasy this is one book you won’t want to miss out on. Filled to the brim with so much excitement and feeling, it’s hard to believe it’s only the first of two installments. I cannot wait to read its sequel and to see what’s next in store for Xingyin. It’s sure to be just as captivating.

Thank you to Turn the Page Tours and the publisher, Harper Voyager/Collins, for sending me an ARC of this book. All thoughts are my own.

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Daughter of the Moon Goddess is inspired by the story of Chang'e, the Chinese moon goddess, who was banished to the moon after taking an elixir of immortality intended for her husband. It follows Chang'e's daughter, Xingyin, who has to flee the moon to remain hidden from the Celestial Emperor, first working in a household in the immortal realm and then becoming the learning companion to Liwei, the Crown Prince. As she learns to fight and wield her magic, growing close with Liwei, she begins to focus on how to gain respect in the realm so that she can free her mother, going on a variety of quests and facing betrayals and hardship as she tries to do what's best for her family.

Everything about this book is amazing. I cannot recommend it enough for any fantasy fan.

Xingyin is such a wonderful heroine; I absolutely adore her. Her character development over the course of the book as she grows stronger and more confident in herself is so compelling to watch. She faces numerous moral quandaries over the course of the book, always trying to find a balance between what's best for her family and what's best for all of the other people that she cares about. She's absolutely amazing.

The other characters are all really well-written as well. I love Liwei, even though he's very frustrating sometimes. He's caught between his relationship with Xingyin and his duties to his kingdom for much of the book, which is interesting to read about. Wenzhi, a captain in the army and another love interest, is a compelling character as well. Xingyin's friends, mentors, and all of the other characters feel complex and three-dimensional too.

In addition to Tan's skill at writing her characters, her world-building is spectacular as well. The magic system is well-written, and I really appreciated the inclusion of elements of Chinese mythology and folklore, such as dragons and the story of Chang'e. Additionally, despite there being a complex hierarchy and relationships between different kingdoms and beings in the book, Tan always weaves in that history in such a natural way that it feels like the reader is simply discovering those stories alongside Xingyin. The world is beautiful and magical and complicated, but it never feels like Tan is infodumping or like she is saying too little. She strikes a natural balance between the two.

The plot is wonderful as well. It's a bit more on the character-based side than the plot-based side, which is unusual for a fantasy novel, but that doesn't mean that the plot is underdeveloped or unimportant; it just feels less important to the reader than Xingyin's personal journey. I did really enjoy her quests as she gradually learns more about history that has been relatively hidden in her kingdom by the Celestial Emperor, as well as the growing tensions among the kingdoms in her world. Tan weaves all of the different threads together skillfully, never letting one plotline drop for too long, and bringing them all together in unexpected ways.

The love triangle trope in this book is really well-handled. Both of the love interests are compelling, and Xingyin's relationships with them are deeply woven into the plot, rather than it just being a random side plot as romance can often be in fantasy books. I was truly as deeply invested in that aspect of the book as I was in all of the other plotlines. It is skillfully and realistically developed, and I throughly enjoyed it.

The prose is simply beautiful to read. There are beautiful descriptions, and the writing is simply so well-crafted that reading this book is a joy. It feels like a fairy-tale in both its plot and its writing, and is truly just so well-done.

I honestly cannot rave enough about this book. It is a stunning debut, and a must-read for any fan of fantasy. Xingyin is a compelling heroine, her development is enthralling and believable, the worldbuilding is stellar, and every aspect of the plot is entangled so skillfully that one can't help but be invested in every aspect of the book. Although marketed as adult fantasy, I would say that it probably straddles the lines between that and YA, though I truly believe that anybody could enjoy it. I would recommend this to absolutely anybody and anybody who likes fantasy, mythology, or is simply willing to give any exceptionally-well-written book a try.

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Thank you so much to NetGalley and Harper Voyager for the early opportunity to read one of my MOST anticipated 2022 releases! Daughter of the Moon Goddess is a YA retelling of the classic Chinese myth that follows the secret daughter of Chang’e as she seeks a way to free her mother. Over many years, we follow Xingyin as she goes on the run in the Celestial Kingdom, competes to enter the Celestial Palace, and finally becomes a warrior in the immortal realm.

This book was easily one of the most vibrant and luscious fantasies I’ve ever read. I usually have trouble visualizing while I’m reading but with this book I felt like I could step right inside its world and smell the peach blossoms. The imagery was incredibly vivid and detailed. It really felt like a tv show come to life and the plot followed a similar pattern with many unique quests, mysterious royals, and magical objects. I was entranced by the world-building.

However, I did have several issues that keep me from rating a full five stars. I’m just so tired of love triangles! I think the accelerated timeline added to my confusion as Xingyin seemed to go from saying xyz with love interest #1 to doing xyz with love interest #2 in just a few pages. This book really could have been 2 or even 3 books alone with the amount of plot crammed in. I must confess after the whirlwind of this first book I have no idea what the next chapter of the series will hold but I’m excited to find out!

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First, let's talk about this book cover. It is absolutely gorgeous! I'd be lying if I said it had no impact on my interest in this book. Sue Lynn Tan tweeted in her cover reveal that Kuri Huang did this edition's stunning work of art. They say to never judge a book by its cover, but guilty as charged in this case.

I really enjoyed reading this Chinese mythology-inspired journey about Xingyin, daughter of the moon goddess, Chang'e. This is a very character-driven book, though there is enough action that one could argue it's also quite plot-driven. Tan's writing allows the reader an exceptional view into Xingyin's thoughts and goals. There is no ambiguity regarding what matters most to Xingyin: freeing her mother from the Celestial Emperor's exile. From the moment she finds herself in royal company she plays the long game. However, Xingyin is not duplicitous by nature. She struggles inwardly with the secret she harbors about her identity. As she works towards her end goal, she reminds herself to deeply bury the yearning to share who she is with those she loves. The timing must be right.

Tan does a wonderful job describing Xingyin's world. As someone who's not very familiar with Chinese mythology, architecture, or dress, I found this very helpful. Conversely, I also felt, at times, some scenes and inner monologues were overly described. However, that nitpicky critique is more personal preference-based and only applies to a few passages. Overall, I greatly enjoyed the amount of description provided by Tan.

The miscommunication (or lack thereof) trope frustrated me, though. (I'm learning that this trope isn't my favorite.) Xingyin suddenly finds herself on the run because her mother never fully explains why she's forbidden to do something. Xingyin is almost a young adult, yet her mother holds back information. Personally, I'd find it more compelling if a character has a moment of weakness and "disobeys," despite knowing what it is they're doing.

However, I did enjoy the love triangle. The love interests develop realistically, that is, over time and through mutual trust and joint experiences. I can't express enough how much I appreciate that; clearly instalove is not my jam. There is jealousy, but court decorum helps to tamp down on displays of dominance. Xingyin's inner monologue serves to show the nuance of her feelings between the two male love interests.

There are a lot of quests in the middle portion of this story. These showcase Xingyin's personal growth and her devotion to her mother. There are a couple of scenes where Xingyin's decisions surprised me, though. Given her extensive training, and the number of times the story mentions she learns quickly, I expected her to react differently during a couple of fight scenes. Then again, who am I to judge or know how someone might react during a battle? No one is perfect, immortal or not.

In short, feel free to judge this book by its cover. It definitely lives up to book cover-induced expectations. This book is perfect for those who love mythology retellings, strong female protagonists, quests, forbidden love, and betrayal.

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The writing and use of language in this book is absolutely whimsical. The plot of the book was also an interesting concept. Unfortunately, however, all I can say for the rest of the book is that it was fine. It wasn't particularly memorable for me, personally, and was a bit of a slog in some places.

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This book has the most beautiful cover and the colorful swirls and flowers are so magical.

The story is set in three parts where Xingyin the daughter of the Moon Goddess, she discovers her heritage and tries to redeem her mother once she discovers she had been outcast and imprisoned on the moon. In order to protect her, her mother had sent her away and she ended up in the Celestial Kingdom. Her journey taking her to the palace then to the army. Where her bravery and skill at the bow and arrow earned her the heart of two very handsome men. It's not quite a love triangle though.
I loved how strong Xingyin is and how through her pain and betrayal that she learned, she decided she would make her own decisions on her missions and campaigns in the army.
I adore strong female characters and precision skills. And the monsters she fought were horrendous.

This book is so beautiful in it's prose so lyrical and I loved how descriptive the world was.

I loved this book! Definite 5⭐ from me!!

Thank you Avon and net galley for my gifted copy for my honest and voluntary review.

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Daughter of the Moon Goddess is a lovely debut with prose that is nostalgic. It feels like reading a never-ending fable in all the best ways, with turn after turn, adventure, danger, betrayal, friendship, and love. The characters are overall likable and nuanced, though I did find myself exasperated by Xingyin at times. I was surprised to find this was actually a duology, since so much is packed into this one book, but I'm excited to see what comes next!

Thank you to the publisher for an e-ARC through Netgalley!

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Thank you to NetGalley & Avon and Harper Voyager for an ARC of this book. All opinions in this review are my own.

This book is absolutely captivating. It is the start of a duology, but this book on its own is three parts, each one an epic in its own right. This story is inspired by the legend of the Chinese moon goddess, Chang’e, in which a young woman’s quest to free her mother pits her against the most powerful immortal in the realm, but it is so much more than that. I grew up with a lot of Japanese folklore & fairytales, with a few other East Asian stories thrown in here and there, so the ability to read a fantasy debut that bridges the line between YA and Adult based on a Chinese legend I had never heard of before was really exciting. I now want to learn the original legend and see where the differences lie, because this book was beyond anything I could have expected.

Each character is not only well developed but nuanced. Good and bad are not so clearly delineated for some of the characters (some are pretty clear in my opinion), which I think brings depth to the story. I was never quite sure where the story was going to go next, and I had a hard time putting this book down as things progressed. While it is a duology, I do appreciate that the ending was not so painful that I am going to be counting down the days for the sequel; I appreciate when a book can stand on its own even when I know what loose ends can be tied up, and where the story might continue to go in the next book.

I appreciate the opportunity to have read this book so much and I cannot wait to read the second one. I also cannot wait to read anything else Sue Lynn Tan writes. Easily 5/5

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Daughter of the Moon Goddess is a sparkling story filled with love, hope, and magic. The beautiful prose draws you in while the plot and characters keep you coming back for more. This along with the lush world-building made this story unforgettable. While it starts out a bit slow, by the end, Sue Lynn Tan will have you at the edge of your seat.

My one complaint is that at times, I felt like the pacing was off. But the fairytale-like prose, well fleshed out characters, and heart-stopping action made up for it. Overall, if you were a fan of Circe or Six Crimson Cranes, I think you will really enjoy this story. And it is the perfect book if you are looking to branch out into more adult fantasy.

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I award this book eight million stars. This read absolutely blew me away and I refuse to believe that this is the author's debut novel. There's just so much to love here.

First of all, Tan's writing is stunning. It's very atmospheric and leads to a very immersive experience. She perfectly balances descriptive writing with allowing the reader's imagination to take over and provide the rest. I couldn't get enough of her descriptions though - tell me more about flower blossoms and how the moon shines and how the wind blows someone's hair to brush against another person's cheek. Give me more towering pillars and spicy smelling cinnamon wood and cool jade tiles. I could read her writing forever and never tire of it. It's beyond beautiful.

The same delicate hand she uses when writing descriptions applies to the lore in this book as well. This book has A TON of mythology, political history, rival territories, and much more, but as a reader I never felt it bog down the story. Tan sprinkles in little pieces here and there and trusts the reader to put the overarching bits together on their own and it's very effective. I found myself wanting more and more tiny tastes at times when I would normally be feeling taken out of the story.

She's also crafted some really great characters. They perfectly walk that line between being believable people and being too fantastical for this world. Their motivations and reactions are very human and relatable, while still maintaining that untouchable, powerful aura of immortal beings who wield magic. Xingyin's journey is especially compelling. Tan does a great job making her a protagonist that you really want to root for.

I also really enjoyed the romantic angle to this book, which is surprising coming from me. I can usually take or leave romance elements in fantasy reads, but this one is so well crafted that not only did I find myself deeply invested, I found myself caring for BOTH love interests. I spent most of this book without picking a favorite in the love triangle, swapping back and forth between the two depending on where we are in the story. Not sure if I will be alone in feeling this way, but to me, that seems like a huge credit to Tan's writing that I spent so much time invested in both love interests and having as difficult a time choosing between them as Xingyin herself.

Although this is the first in a duology, I deeply respect Tan's choice to wrap up the primary arc within this story. It was nice reading something and having a sense of resolution while still getting a hint of where the sequel is heading. It looks like this sequel is scheduled for later this year and I absolutely cannot wait.

Summary: beautifully written, incredibly immersive fantasy chockful of lore, political drama, magical combat, a swoonworthy love triangle, and a monumental quest. Still can't believe this is the author's debut (so talented!!!). Cannot recommend highly enough. Already want to read this again and cannot wait to read the second one.

Special thanks to NetGalley and Harper Voyager for an advance copy in exchange for review.

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This was a very beautiful book to read. Lush descriptions and great world building, I would recommend this to young adult readers who enjoy a fantasy novel. This book however was not for me in particular as I prefer more adult fantasy, overall I would still say that this is a fantastic debut that will keep young people reading.

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First off, look at that cover! I chose to read this book 100% based on the beautiful cover. I’m just sayin’ it’s gorgeous.

I enjoyed the story a lot too. I liked the mythos, the characters, and the emotional turmoil as people tried to do the right thing in difficult situations. I thought the writing lyrical and the descriptions arresting.

I did think Xingyin suffered a little bit from ‘special girl’ syndrome. She was strong, loyal, honorable, and willing to fight for herself and her own betterment. I liked her a lot. But so did almost every powerful male of comparable age. At least that’s what it felt like. With almost no resources she managed to get herself into circles of power and then, once there, attract the most powerful men. I also thought the book longer than need be.

But, all in all, I’d call this one a winner. I look forward to getting to read more of the series.

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True Rating: 4.5 stars
First off, the cover design for this book is STUNNING!! Hats off to the talented artist who created it.
Now, on to the book. I have to be honest and mention that I haven't been enjoying much YA fiction recently. I was so surprised by this beautiful story.
This spin on the classic Chinese tale about the Moon Goddess being separated from her love was refreshing. This did not read like a debut, and that felt really nice.
I found the writing to flow well, and I stayed engaged the whole way through. The stakes felt high enough, and I felt that anyone, not just the target audience could enjoy this one.
This book was near perfect for me, and I can't wait to see what else comes next!

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Oh wow... I am speechless. Just wow. Sue Lynn Tan's debut novel is absolutely breathtaking. I was flown away to a beautiful, vibrant and magical world. Reading Daughter of the Moon Goddess literally felt like floating on an ethereal cloud and I am certainly not ready to come back to real life. Her writing was vivid and captivating, and for a debut novel I am blown away by how unique her authors voice was. And the story...I will not spoil any part, but let me say this tale is an epic of epics. Xingyin's tale is inspired by the legend of Chang'e, the Chinese Moon Goddess. Tan takes us through a gripping and memorable journey of Xingyin's quest to free her mother (the Moon Goddess) from eternal imprisonment. Along the way we see palaces and battlefields. We meet an endearing prince, a brooding army captain, celestials and mythical creatures. Magic is woven throughout literally and figuratively. I know it is one week into the new year but I am confident this book has taken its place on best books I'll read this year. I cannot recommend this enough, I wish I could give it more than 5 stars! Do yourself a favor and read this asap, you will thank me after.

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Wow, wow, wow.
What a stunning Debut novel! @suelynntan has created such a beautiful world!
Based on the Chinese folk lore of Chang’e and Houyi, this book follows the journey of their daughter Xingyin. She begins as a true underdog and we get to see her come into her own and fight for a place in the world. I love a good badass female protagonist, and Xingyin fits the bill!

This story had action, love, pride, ambition, injustice, hope and so many twists and turns. Oh, and there’s dragons! Who doesn’t love dragons??

Thank you @netgalley for sending me this ARC!

This is book one of The Celestial Kingdom Duology, I cannot wait for book two!

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