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.Sorry, I just can't recommend this. It is neither funny nor well-written, Indeed, in the first chapter alone I found some fifteen grammatical and/or typographical errors, In other places, I found the writing unnecessarily convoluted in attempts to make jokes that just fell flat. And in other places, the writing is just plain awkward and clunky. More importantly, the characters are cardboard stereotypes. None of them are likable, much less believable. While I recognize this is supposed to be a satire, its treatment of racial and gender discrimination is clumsy and not credible. I found it far too unrealistic and heavy-handed to want to read any further than the first three chapters.

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