⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️,5/5 Wow, that was good!! I would even say REALLY good! I just loved the characters (Will and Jen💙) and the plot was pretty fast paced, it never felt boring or too slow and just the overall idea was very original. This reminded me of those action movies you watch on Netflix or Prime and you enjoy them a lot, and they have this plot where the hero has to find out what’s going on and discovers dark secrets, etc. Really recommend it, especially if you like the Mission Impossible movies, I feel like they’re kinda similar in a way.

Good, quick read with interesting characters and plot. The writing would have benefited from editing to take it to a more sophisticated level. It was written with too many simple sentences.

This was a quick, entertaining read for me. I like that everything was from Jen’s POV. Sometimes, the writing was really good with excellent imagery. Other times, it felt a little clunky. There was a lot going on at all times and not a ton of time for things to develop naturally. It felt very “telling” instead of “showing” the reader. I definitely think it has great bones to be a solid story, but for me, it’s not totally there yet.