Então, eu achei o livro divertido e bonitinho, mas ele não me pegou, não encontrei um diferencial que me fizesse ficar pensando sobre a leitura dia e noite

I requested this thinking it would be a manga based on the cover and it... isn't? I would suggest changing up the cover as while I understand the relevance to the game, it sends a comic-y vibe. Perhaps this will be different if it's sold in stores where people can look, but online I wouldn't want somebody to buy this and be disappointed.

As for the book, I really couldn't get into it because the writing was so poor quality. I would suggest another round of edits.