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“‘I will not die tonight,’ I say aloud once, then again and again, my voice getting stronger and louder until I'm shouting. I turn my face toward the night sky, hoping my words carry across the tombs, over the wall, and into the ears of Hamala and anyone who's ever helped her hurt others. ‘I will not die tonight!’"
Recommended for fans of “The Gilded Ones” and “Children of Blood and Bone.”
“Waking Fire” has potential to be the next big YA fantasy saga, and for good reason. Naira and Nez are seventeen years old when their world implodes; zombies attack their hidden desert village under control of The Mistress who is looking for a child just their age…
The novel has an interesting and very thoroughly thought out world which unfolds in increasing detail, immersing you in a land of long dead dragons, desert catacombs, and harrowing battles against the undead. I felt overwhelmed at times by the intricate backstory and continuous descriptions of the unique setting. I was impressed by the writing overall, especially when it came to character development.
As a narrator, Naira felt well-developed and didn’t fall into the trap of being too hotheaded and stubborn to be likable. She’s well-balanced by her easygoing brother, Nez. I think it’d be cool if book two gives us Nez as a primary narrator; I’m interested in what he has to say.
There’s a bit of romance that unfolds, and it’s the most realistic and healthy teen romance I’ve seen in a YA fantasy series, probably ever.
Overall, if you’re a fan of epic fantasies set in a unique world with thoughtfully created protagonists, you should pick up “Waking Fire.”
Thanks for a free ARC, Inkyard Press!
Quick summary: While I didn't connect with the main character, I still enjoyed this book's arid setting, compelling plot, and unique magic system. 3/5 stars.
Full review: Jean Louise's debut novel, Waking Fire, has a lot of passion and research packed into it. I can tell the author spent a lot of time creating this fantasy world. However, the brash main character and confusing family history affected my enjoyment of the story.
It isn't easy to like a book if you can't connect with the main character. I've always preferred characters who are kind, smart, and actually have a brain. Naira lacked every one of these qualities. She continuously made dumb, unrealistic decisions that had me rolling my eyes in frustration. Her poor decision-making skills were also used as a crutch to move the story along, and there were several moments where I was tempted to put this book down and not return.
Despite being tempted to DNF, I soldiered on to the ending. I'm proud of my decision to continue reading, but I'm not sure if the final climax was worth my struggle. The author dumped a lot of revelations about Naira's family history, and the conflict seemed choppy and rushed. Naira never matured as a main character, her love interest remained bland, and her twin never got the recognition he deserved.
Despite problems in characterization and pacing, I still enjoyed this book. Jean Louise did an excellent job painting the setting. It was easy to visualize the sweltering desert, the chaotic market, and the sandy catacombs. I also appreciate the thought that went into the religious system. It helped add depth to their village's culture and way of life.
Before I list my concluding thoughts, I want to mention that this book had several swear words and graphic depictions of violence/death. Readers who are sensitive to detailed descriptions of blood, intestines, and decapitations may want to know in advance before diving into this book.
Concluding thoughts: Waking Fire is a unique fantasy with memorable worldbuilding and a unique setting. Despite my inability to connect with the main character, I'd place this story at 3/5 stars. I'd recommend it to readers who enjoyed Tiger Queen by Annie Sullivan and those looking for a light, easy read.
I voluntarily read and reviewed an advanced copy of this book. All thoughts and opinions are my own.
Thank you, Inkyard Press, for allowing me to read Waking Fire early!
Exciting, action-packed and simultaneously moving and inspiring. I can't wait to read how this story ends.