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i’ll go for any women-in-stem related book so i was very excited to read liz’s story! i really like the enemies-to-lovers trip combined with a workplace romance but i couldn’t wrap my head around the fact that liz and tom’s widowed parents are dating each other. combined with all four of them living under one roof, i felt like the most chapters had too much tension and didn’t flow to my liking.

to me, the chemistry between liz and tom was on and off. most of the time they were cold towards each other and the moments they were flirting, one of them was always drunk at a party. i didn’t like the fact that tom continuously lied and manipulated liz’s personal life. sabotaging her house-hunt is one thing, but going into their phone and logging onto her dating app is too far. most of the time, i’d forget that he’s actually almost forty! i was really hopeful for the side characters - i especially loved how all the phd students gathered together outside of the lab. but the mini love triangle between liz and her best friend felt out of place to me. he seemed to pop up in the middle of the novel and then disappeared until the ending

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Fun entertaining book, like the work setting and science background . Adore grumpy sunshine trope so this was definitely made for me . If you loved the Love Hypothesis this book is for you, it has all the perfect ingredients for a good STEAM rom com.

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I have a lot of feeling about this book. I’ll start with the whole book felt very surface throughout the entire thing the character interaction outside of the first chapter were very superficial.

It took forever for the characters to get so get together at the beginning which had me constantly putting the book down and not wanting to pick it back up.

The middle was pretty steamy and paced well. And the last 10ish chapters made me want to burn the entire thing.

I am not typically a fan of miscommunication story arcs cause I spend the whole book yelling at the characters to TALK! But this drive me crazy because they claimed to love each other but never want to talk about anything and actively decide to lie to their loved one???

Then after a very anticlimactic reunion they profess their love for each other and then spend 5ish chapters attending a wedding and not talking!? FFS the last few chapters should never have happened. I was on the fence of giving this a better rating but the last 10ish chapters sealed its fate.

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Thank you NetGalley, Macfarlane Lantern Publishing, and H. L. Macfarlane for this arc in exchange of my honest review.

I think I’ve just been having bad luck lately because this book is another let down for me. Tom and Liz had little to no chemistry outside of the bedroom. Don’t get me wrong I love spice just as much at the next person but without the romantic chemistry, it tends to fall flat. There did not seem to be a lot of depth in the characters or their story and as I’ve seen others say, it read a lot like a fan fiction. The parents planning to get married added a weird twist that I was also not here for. I’m sorry but I would not recommend this book.

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Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for the advanced copy of The Unbalanced Equation.

I have mixed emotions about this romance. On one side, the two main characters clearly care for each other as demonstrated through the ways they serve each other with so much thoughtfulness and care. On the other side, holy crap they were ridiculously immature and awful to each other while they got there. Honestly, I struggled because of all of the manipulation involved.

In the end, I was pleased they got their HEA, but for two adults, they sure didn’t act like them.

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Overall this book was ok but not great. Enemies to lovers trope with some secrets that cause problems when they do finally get together. I just thought some of the character's decisions didn't make sense. It could have been funnier and more heartfelt. I just didn't feel very invested in the characters.

Overall, just ok.

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I really liked the STEM aspect of this book, but struggled to like Tom’s character. The book kept me engaged throughout, and I would definitely look at reading more from this author.

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oh boy this is gonna be an ugly review so if you are really into this book you might want to keep scrolling.

tw // toxic relationship, sexual harassment, gaslighting

when i first heard about this book i was SO excited about it, women in STEM???? enemies to lovers?? sounds like a W to me. well while skimming through the synopsis i failed to realize that uhhh they are soon to be step siblings? which was weird enough to me but, sure, i was already reading it, might as well continue cause maybe something will happen about this until the end of the story cause its not possible they are gonna make fun of them for being siblings and tell them to get together in the same sentence right? RIGHT? Silly little me didn't know that it was about to get much weirder. To be completely honest i only finished reading cause i had hope that this would all be solved and i actually wanted to give it a shot, damn was i wrong.

With terrible chemistry (no pun intended) Liz and Tom have to live together — after she gets kicked out of her apartment — and work together — after his lab caught fire. — Oh yeah and their parents are getting married 3 years after they met, very deus ex machina but sure, here is the real issue of this book: Tom is an asshole. Not only did he treat her like shit and humiliated her for 4 years he did it because he likes her! Isn't this romantic? Yeah he is also almost 40 too, acting like a child, just a quick fun fact to ya! They both do act like they are in kindergarten to be fair, the problem is that Tom is actually abusive and here we enter my ted talk!
Considering i quoted a lot of his lines with "ew" you can imagine that Tom has the personality of every average looking white cishet man. He screws up, he even acts all elitist and judges her for working on a bar cause obviously he forgets that not everyone has the same privileges that he does to be born in a rich family and be able to go drink in a bar with your misogynistic friends without worrying about tuition, he gets another chance (cause he can get away with anything) and he screws up again. Wanna know why Liz continues to live with someone she hates for 3 months? Cause he sabotages her flat-hunt. Wanna know why she doesn't go on dates anymore? Cause he goes through her phone and blocks the guys interested on her, which isn't surprising considering he hates any guy who even remotely thinks about breathing the same air as her. Did i mention they are basically step siblings?

Here are some quotes that made me wish that the undergrad set me on fire instead of Tom's lab.

When Liz tells Tom about her experience with getting harassed at conventions, he makes a joke, when she calls him out he says "Sorry, but you walked into that one"

"Because I'm jealous of all the men who touched without permission" I'm sorry you what?

"If you're touching without permission then I'm gonna do the same." What's up with these two and these gross consent jokes?

"Tom said, clearly enjoying how uncomfortable he was making me." This was in a workspace btw.

In a work conference he sees a guy walking to Liz WHILE SHE IS WORKING and he "turned her in the opposite direction from her desperate suitor" SHE. WAS. WORKING. BITCH.


"Clearly Liz was one of those special people who was allowed to indulge in her childhood interests without anyone telling her to grow up" Not only is this ridiculous cause bestie just wanted to watch high school musical without hurting anyone, but it is also ableist, i'm not saying Liz is ND, however, a lot of "special people" — read neurodivergents — cling onto their childhood hyperfixations because it makes them feel safe, so yeah fuck you tom counter: 264638902

"I almost felt bad for making Liz so self-conscious but in all honesty, it was too entertaining watching her squirm because of me"



Overall, the technical aspects of the book were all mid, the pacing was mid, the characters were all mid, the tropes were mid, the storyline was disastrous though so hey! That's something? The romance/banter part was also mid cause I kept thinking about how they are about to become half siblings and also because it is SO insta love. They meet > fall in love > Tom is an asshole oh no > but he is hot! > he fucked up > but he is hot > he fucked up > but he is hot > he fucked up > but he is hot > he fucked up > but he is hot > he fucked up > but he is hot. You see where im getting at? It's a never ending cycle and it was extremely Boring because the actual romance was very undeveloped, most of if was actually just sexual tension.
We should never romanticize abuse even in fiction cause whether we like it or not, art always reflects in real life.

So yeah, uhhh, awkward review to match the awkwardness of dating the son of your step mom! wooo ok bye.

ps: also fuck you tom for everything but also for not liking high school musical

thank u netgalley for providing me an arc in exchange for an honest review.

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I loved the concept of this book but unfortunately there were a few things I just couldn’t get behind. First the age difference. Tom acts like a brat but is almost 40. And a professor. 2. The parents. No way the parents would be getting married before meting the children. Sorry. Don’t buy it. 3. Lots of coincidences. 4. The manipulations.

I loved reading a book set in Glasgow, I could imagine the settings and ambience well. Unfortunately I couldn’t get past the items noted above.

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⭐⭐⭐⭐
The Unbalanced Equation,H. L. Macfarlane
BooksGoSocial, September 15, 2022

Thank you NetGalley and BooksGoSocial for the ARC in exchange for an honest review.

For fans of @alihazelwood and books about women in STEM, The Unbalanced Equation hits the spot.

Elizabeth thinks she's finally free from her diabolical PhD assessor Tom, until not only does his lab have a fire -- but his mother and her father announce they are soon to be married.

A true enemies to lovers romance, where circumstances force them together both romantically and professionally.

If you dig books about chicks with brains, who doesn't, this is the perfect fix.

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I loved this book! Has some of my favorite tropes of "enemies" working and living together". Two leads who are so oblivious to each other's attraction, STEM fields, university settings, lots of steam, and great secondary characters.

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Elizabeth Maclean is glad to be free of her hellish PhD assessor once she graduates and can finally begin her postdoc. However, a freak fire in Dr. Thomas Henderson’s lab leaves him working right next to her in her new lab, and to make things worse, Liz’s dad and Tom’s mom have just announced they are getting married, when neither knew their parents were dating. To top it all off, Liz’s landlord tells her that she has to move out, and the only place she is able to stay is with Tom and their parents. Can the two finally learn to get along, and will either mention the sparks they felt the first night they met?

I enjoyed the STEM and nerd aspects to the book/characters; however, I was not a fan of so many of the things Tom did that it was hard to root for her to end up with him, not that she wasn’t without her own problems. He was a decade older than Liz, and yet he did some really childish things to manipulate her. As someone who is childfree, I did like the fact that neither Liz nor Tom wanted children. So many romance stories end with a wedding/engagement and/or pregnancy in the epilogue, and that wasn’t what these characters wanted for their HEA. It was an entertaining story, so if characters making terrible choices doesn’t put you off a book, check this one out.

Many thanks to NetGalley for providing me an audio ARC of this book.

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Steps siblings? Sorry but no that’s not for me. The characters were annoying too. Tom is an absolute immature ass like he fucking sucks.

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I AM SO HONORED I GOT THE CHANCE TO READ THIS NOVEL. It hooked me immediately and I love how much we focused on all the side characters as well.. I really enjoyed the storyline and wow my heart melted so many times.

Tightly written, earnest, laugh-out-loud funny at several parts—one of the best romance books I've read in ages

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Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.

This was a cute romance novel and it was a fun read.

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This story is an enemies to lovers rom com with forced proximity and extra spice!! I loved Liz so much as she is an independent woman who works extra jobs to afford her education. Her only fault is that she falls hard for Tom (who also has a big crush on her) who becomes a big a**hole and seems to keep ruining her life.

I will say that it was kind of weird for me since their forced proximity was mainly caused because both of their parents were getting married. First, you have a crush on your professor and now he is becoming your step-brother?? Poor Liz! Add on to her woes, she gets kicked out of her place and irritatingly for her Tom has an extra room in his house. The irony is too much not to be funny. Liz constantly claims to hate him, but fate and Tom have other plans.

One thing I love that's not talked about enough is that both don't plan on having children. It's so nice to read a story where the happily ever after doesn't suddenly become them having babies. Albeit, I do love reading them, it is a nice change to see the mc not change her convictions and stick with them.

Overall, I loved this story and the manner in which our characters met. Oh, did I add their banter? Literally, I loved them and Liz's ability to make Tom act so foolishly in the name of love.





*Thank you Netgalley for a free e-book in return for an honest review.

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I was really excited about this book but maybe the fact that I read it after I'd read a very similar book made the plot kind of boring and predictable.

I really don't like the step-brothers trope so I felt a bit uncomfortable because i believe without that, the "i like you but we can't be together bc i'm your teacher" could have had TONS of potential.

Overall it was super cliché and in my opinion if the step-brothers thing wasn't so forced (it felt heavily forced), the reading wouldn't be as awkward as it felt it was.

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Thank you NetGalley for an ARC of The Unbalanced Equation. I tried to love this book, it was hard to keep my attention. Normally I love long books but this plot took a long time to develop. I'm also not a fan of an age gap, theirs was about 12 years, professor student relationship was a little iffy to me also. He sabotages their potential of romance because he is her advisor. I'm not a fan of the protagonist being ultra feminists, basically not wanting marriage and family with the love interest. It leads to the question, why is this a romance book if they just want to date. Also the story is very similar to the very popular book The Love Hypothesis., which I was also not a fan of. This is a good book for readers who like age gaps, enemies to lovers, and professor student relationship.

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⭐️2.5 Stars ⭐️
okay. so i have a lot of thoughts about this book so i’ll just jump right in.
First off i would like to say for the most part the writing and story are great! i just can’t get past my hatred for Tom.
He uses his ignorance as a crutch to treat people poorly and i have a difficult time believing he only treated Liz like crap and everyone else loved him. Unless it’s just his manipulation tactics that make him so loved by many.
I have no issue with age gaps as long as the relationship is consensual (as with any relationship). i just want to make it clear that that is not my issue here.
This man is nearly 40 years old and he acts like a middle school age boy throughout the majority of the book. He manipulates Liz the entire time he knows he and i truly am upset that they end up together.
I would’ve been happier with her learning to love and respect herself enough to not stay with Tom or her with any other man mentioned throughout the story.
It is hard to say fully that i would leave a situation where i’m being manipulated so i understand how she forgave him but it just still annoys me.
i hate writing reviews that aren’t 100% positive but i had to be truthful. That being said i would try to read more of this authors work if i get the chance. #lizdeservesbetter

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𝑇ℎ𝑒 𝑈𝑛𝑏𝑎𝑙𝑎𝑛𝑐𝑒𝑑 𝐸𝑞𝑢𝑎𝑡𝑖𝑜𝑛 | 𝐻.𝐿. 𝑀𝑎𝑐𝑓𝑎𝑟𝑙𝑎𝑛𝑒
☆☆☆/5

First of all I would love to thank NetGalley for this ARC in exchange for my honest opinion.

When I first read this book's description I thought it would be similar to The Love Hypothesis but the whole plot was a lot different which made me happy.
I really enjoyed the first half of the book but then I started losing a little bit the interest due to some reasons.

1) I just couldn't connect much with the characters...I wish they would have a little more depth and development throughout the book;
2) Many of the situations around this book just seemed to be childish considering the characters ages;
3) The age gap (10years) was too much in my opinion.

Overall the story was good but I just felt like many things were missing in it but it definitely had potencial to be better!

Some of the tropes:
✼ Insta Love
✼ Workplace Romance
✼ Age Gap
✼ Parents Dating
✼ Forced Proximity

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