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This was a fun and fast-paced thriller. It's not my favorite and not very realistic, but I think teens who like this genre will really enjoy it.

The mall has closed and now is the last night for Tempest Theaters. Several local teens prepare for their last shift and start to close up, when their volatile jerk of a boss starts heading off the rails. With all of their keys and cell phones locked up in a safe they all have to try to fight to survive the night, when their gun-wielding boss is hunting them down in the boarded-up mall!

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Four Found Dead
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Author: Natalie D. Richards

I requested a digital advanced readers copy from NetGalley and Sourcebooks and providing my opinion voluntarily and unbiased.

Synopsis: Tonight, Tempest Theaters is closing forever, the last remaining business in a defunct shopping mall. The moviegoers have left, and Jo and her six coworkers have the final shift, cleaning up popcorn and mopping floors for the last time.

But after an unexpected altercation puts everyone on edge, the power goes out. Their manager disappears, along with the keys to the lobby doors and the theater safe, where the crew's phones are locked each shift. Then, the crew's tension turns to terror when Jo discovers the dead body of one of her co-workers.

Now their only chance to escape the murderer in their midst is through the dark, shuttered mall. With its boarded-up exits and disabled fire alarms, the complex is filled with hiding places for both pursuer and pursued. In order to survive this night, Jo and her friends must trust one another, navigate the sprawling ruins of the mall, and outwit a killer before he kills again.

My Thoughts: As a Young Adult thriller, this was not a bad read, I was just expecting more from the blurb. The premise gave a slasher type thriller vibe but with too much divulged early on, it kind of lost its slasher luster. The writing tended to be repetitive with the flashbacks limited. The story was a bit predictable, which is not a bad thing, I love both predicable and unpredictable thrillers. Jo is our narrator for the story. We follow a group of teens/young adults closing the mall’s movie theater for the last time. The killer was revealed early on, while the motive was not. I think if the killer was revealed towards the end, the story would have followed much better. While the characters were developed, the backstory and history of the characters is lacking. It was really hard to connect to the characters. The audiobook may be easier to follow. I do recommend picking up the audiobook as it is not relatively long.

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In Natalie D. Richards new novel Four Found Dead, the mall isn't the only thing dying. This horror/thriller hybrid follows the employees of the Tempest Theater, the final anchor of a now defunct shopping mall as they literally fight for their lives. With the killer hot on their heels, these teens flee through a boarded up mall, unable to escape. Four will be found dead ... but who will make it out alive?

Four Found Dead should have been a book that I loved. With there being so much mall nostalgia these days, a book set in a mall going under is not only relevant to today's society, but it also pulls on the heartstrings of all of us who grew up in the 80's & 90's heyday of mall culture. Unfortunately, this book, which could have been great, is not without major problems.

For such a simple setting and plot (killer loose in a nearly abandoned mall) Richards sure had a way of overcomplicating things. To start, we are introduced to way too many characters with nearly zero distinguishing characteristics in a very short period of time. This does not allow the reader to get a grasp on their personalities or even form an opinion about them before they are hurled into the mall alongside them trying to remember who is who.

Furthermore, for a book where people are actually getting murdered, there is zero tension involved. When reading a slasher-style book where people are being killed, I should feel my heart beating out of my chest; I should be on the edge of my seat; I should actually care who lives or dies ... I felt none of that with this novel. For that reason, I have to downvote this book because when a thriller is not thrilling, you know it has missed the mark. So disappointing because this plot had so much potential.

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"Four Found Dead" by Natalie D. Richards follows Jo and her six co-workers on their last shift at the closing of a theater find a body and must escape with a killer after them. I love books with a locked room concept, and this taking place at a mall was right up my alley.

I loved the concept, and I felt the tension. There were a few surprises, which I appreciated.

However, this would have been more enjoyable if I had felt more invested in the characters - more character development. There was a LOT of running, hiding and chasing. This was a 3.5 start book (abover average) rounded up to 4.

I would like to thank #netgalley for the ARC of this book. This did not impact my review.

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𝐹𝑜𝓊𝓇 𝐹𝑜𝓊𝓃𝒹 𝒟𝑒𝒶𝒹 by Natalie D. Richards is a book that I was looking forward to reading. I enjoyed the concept of a locked room mystery and suspense story that is set in a mall. I was anticipating the fear and shock of the opening scene from the Fear Street miniseries shows of 2022. Unfortunately, this story was mostly running...like a lot of running. Instead of experiencing the suspense that the story was intending to convey, I was reading it and being told that it should feel like suspense. I'm sure some people would enjoy that, but that's not my type of story. Also, the characters lacked depth and needed more development. I found myself not caring about any of them. Another disappointing feature was that the killer was obvious very early on which made reading the rest of the story pretty lackluster. Overall, it was a decent book.

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Overall, I really enjoyed this! The setting being in a shut down mall made it really creepy and kept me on the edge of my seat basically the entire book! I would actually love to see this one as a movie because there was so much that I could picture and I think it could have a fear street vibe (without the witchy aspect)! There were parts where I got a little confused trying to keep up with which character was which and I think the story would’ve been better if we didn’t know who the killer was from the beginning 🤷🏻‍♀️ but overall, I had a good time with this one!

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2.5, rounding up because it’s YA. Thanks to NetGalley and the publisher for the arc.

There were a few things I liked about this: the writing was good, I enjoyed the way the author wove in Jo’s backstory, and the ending was nice and tidy.

That said, I think it did a lot of things that I just don’t like in books, namely the constant running. The “chase” before a climax in most thrillers is typically my least favorite part of a book because I find it boring; Four Found Dead was 95% chase. It didn’t have much of an exposition an led almost immediately got into the action, which isn’t necessarily a bad thing, but then the rest of the book was just teens running around a mall trying not to be found by their maniacal manager.

I’d recommend it for people who like both YA thrillers and action, for sure.

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Overall it was good and the writing was enjoyable. The aspect of who actually committed it was revealed early on, which took away the excitement from a thriller, and it was quite disappointing.

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This was one of the most fun murder mystery books I have ever read. The characters all had something to hide and as it slowly was revealed, so were the characters true intentions/

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I sat down and started reading this book and just kept reading until I finished. This was a fast paced thriller set in the creepiest setting! I was holding my breath through most of this.

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Many thanks to NetGalley and the publisher for an advanced reader's E-ARC.

I had to DNF this book at 45%. I was bored. I didn't care about any of the characters. The overall concept was great. Eight people are in a rundown mall with an attached movie theater and a killer begins to take them out one by one.

The areas of the book that needed improvement were the character development. I was unable to distinguish the characters apart and finally had to make a list of their names with small, physical attributes. The personalities of the characters were never developed and so I had to go by height, hair color etc. This lack of back story told from a different timelines with multiple POVs really would've been affective to pull the reader in and make us care.

The plot of the book reads like a manuscript. We're told what is happening vs having it described to us. The reader is told what each of the people is initially cleaning with light dialogue back and forth.

I also didn't like knowing who the killer was at about 15% into the book. The changes I would've made as an editor would've included a good back story to establish each character. Short condensed and straight to the point. When the drama starts have one final girl who is hiding who mistrusts everyone. Finally we should've had an unknown killer. Not knowing who to trust with a mistrust of everyone would've lead to intense feelings of teenage angst.

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Why is the killer revealed so quickly?!?!?!? The whole point of a horror/Thriller book is to GUESS the KILLER... Not to find the motive. I also hated the FMC's dialogue... "They've never seen a dead body.. I have..." SO?!

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Thank you NetGalley and the publisher for an advanced copy of this book in exchange for an honest review. I kinda of forgot about the entirety of the book while still reading it. It wasn't revolutionary or innovative. I wish it would have done something a little more.

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This book was OK. I loved the premise of the book but found the book a little disjointed. I didn't really like many of the characters and just didn't really care what happened to them. Thank you to NetGalley and the Publisher for an ARC.

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Loved this book! You get the intense feeling of suspense and claustrophobia. I stayed up to read it, each chapter telling myself one more…and then it was done. Will definitely be picking up more from this author.

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Honestly - I read this back in March and must have forgotten it was an ARC and never wrote a review for it. Just realized it’s still on my shelf. I enjoyed it but don’t remember it well enough now to give constructive feedback. I’m sorry!!!

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One of my favorites for YA thrillers has always been Natalie D. Richards, no matter what book she has released I have loved them as they all have a feel of the 90s/2000s slasher film styles. This book starts with Jo and five of her colleagues finishing work at the cinema. It is all their last night as the mall is being pulled down and made into condos and apartments. It is closing time and all they need now is to get their cellphones off the boss but tonight, their boss is on edge and acting more creepy than usual. The lights go out and the group hears screaming. They discover one of their co-workers is dead. She was the first to go and now locked in the mall complex, the group must survive the night. As they are hunted one by one, can the remaining members of the group manage to escape? One of them is a killer, two have a secret, three just want to survive and four are found dead. Four Found Dead was a fast-paced read and fans of movies like Scream, Idle Hands, and any horror slasher film will love Four Found Dead.

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Everything you need to know is in the blurb. No more, no less.

There is not a lot of mystery in this YA slasher, but plenty of locked-room action. If that's your thing, have at it.

Thanks to NetGalley for providing a copy of this book in exchange for my honest review.

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In a word: absurd. Pass on this one. Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for the arc in exchange for my honest review.

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This book was a really good thriller. I totally did not expect that twist at the end. I find the ending was a little rushed, and just ended so abruptly. There were moments I find that could’ve been left out. Did we have to hear that the main character was going to be a doctor every other sentence? Overall, this book was quite good. Thank you.

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