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Will I read anything that Racquel Marie writes? Yes, I will. Why? She knows how to write fantastic queer ya romance books. They are so addicting. I was obsessed with her previous book, Ophelia After All, and I was beyond grateful to read her newest book, You Don’t Have A Shot, early on. And I have so much to say about this book.

Let’s list why everyone needs to pick this book up:

-rivals to lovers trope

-forced proximity trope

-slow burn romance

-queer romance

All of these romance tropes make for an awesome ya romance read. Let’s explain why:

Rivals to Lovers romance tropes are top-tier in any ya genre. It makes the read so much better with its sparking banter between characters. And the slow tension between the characters means that you can tell how much they despise each other yet they are slowly falling deeper in love with each other. That’s what Vale and Leticia are dealing with when they compete with each other on the soccer field.

The forced proximity trope builds up the character tension between them. It makes them testy yet feisty with each other. And Vale and Leticia will be testing each other's patience when they have to co-captain together. It’s funny to say, but I love their banter with each other. You can tell that they are resisting their attraction for each other, but it’s ultimately failing.

Slow burn romance brings the characters closer together because it gets them to know each other better as they progress into their non-relationship/relationship. Vale and Leticia may be rivals with each other, but that doesn’t mean they didn’t know a few bits throughout the years. And they will get to know more of each other as they bond together in their co-captain journey.

If you haven’t already noticed, this is a ya queer romance read. It gives the best representation. And it’s a diverse read as well!

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One day I'll figure out why as a person who consistently refers to any and all sports as "sportsball", I almost always love queer sports romance books. I don't get it. I have no idea what any of the sports stuff in this book refers to. The only thing that I know about most sports is the vague coloration and shape of the ball and maybe if it's played on grass or not. When I tell you that 100% of the sports references went right over my head and it did not affect my absolute love and adoration for this book I mean it.

I loved everything about this. I love the asexual representation and the sapphic rep and the enemies to lovers and the growth as a human being angle. We love character development here. I have no thoughts besides "yay good go read".

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Racquel Marie did it again! Gosh, I was beyond excited for You Don't Have a Shot after absolutely adoring Ophelia After All last year - and the book blew way past my expectations!

In You Don't Have a Shot we follow Vale who decides to spend her summer at a soccer camp after she ends her junior year disastrously when it comes to her soccer career as a captain. There she is forced to work as co-captains with her years long soccer rival, Leticia. But as somber as things look at first - enemy as a co-captain, a group of girls who don't live and breath soccer like Vale does, and tense relationship with her two best friends - Vale soon realizes that a summer like that might be exactly what she needs. Far from her father's rigid expectations about her and her game, she starts falling in love with soccer again - and maybe someone unexpected as well.

I truly loved this story about found family, finding your passion for the things you (used to) love, familial expectations, and of course a showstopping rivals to lovers story! Vale's character development was one of the best I've ever seen - she went from cold and harsh due to all the baggage and expectations her father set on her (plus still mourning her mother's death from years prior), to slowly mellowing out, letting herself be happy playing soccer and trusting the girls she was teamed up with. You could literally feel her slowly uncoiling. My favourite part was definitely the soft found family that formed in between these players - and of course the truly beautiful love story! (so many great tropes all rolled into one! Rivals to lovers, forced proximity, caught in the rain together, childhood infatuation/first love, just all the good stuff!)
I could read about Vale and her girls for forever (the biggest shout out to Marley who stole the show on so many occasions and to Valencia for being such an MVP! They added a lot to the revolving plot and Vale's character development (I dare say most!) and I really loved how they both helped see Vale that she was sometimes wrong and had to apologize for her actions.

We had so many beautiful types of rep in this book - be it a main one (like Latinx and sapphic rep of course, plus ace rep - absolutely LIVED for that! It was a part of Vale and it of course coloured her experiences but it was the kind of rep I still think we are lacking sometimes. Casual rep but rep that is definitely there wholeheartedly! Just a part of who Vale is and there is that, accepted), or the side one (trans rep, mental health rep through Vale and her anxiety, and more).

I will absolutely be recommending this book to anyone and everyone and I can't wait to see what Racquel Marie writes next!

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Racquel Marie is my absolute favorite YA author, and this book just cemented that. Her writing is fantastic. These characters feel real, lovable, flawed, and above all else have a depth that is rarely explored in YA romance. I will most definitely be posting about this book in the future, and have already done so a couple of times.

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4.5 stars. thank you to netgalley and the publisher for an eARC of this book, all opinions are my own.

racquel marie delivers again with a beautiful sapphic sports romance that had me at times crying, at time kicking my feet and squealing. rivals to lovers is done so well here. the development was supremely placed, and the third act "break-up" was so earned and cathartic that i wasn't even mad at it. vale's flaws were so deliberate and believable given her backstory, and her growth as a character was incredible to witness. the only reason this isn't a full 5 stars is because it slightly fumbles the "rivals" part when vale and leticia talk about their past, but any more than that would be spoilers. overall, a great book.

trigger warnings: emotional abuse (from a parent), bullying, sports-related violence, prior death of a parent

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After loving Ophelia After All, Racquel Marie came up with a strong sophomore novel. With You Don't Have a Shot, the author was able to personify the main character as someone who you can easily root for.

I liked how the portrayal of Vale's angst is presented and I totally understand where Vale is coming from - knowing the pressure and expectations that is getting thrown her way all the time.

The central theme of this book is on friendship and living life as a young adult and I really appreciate how the author wrote this book for girls playing sports, including a trans girls, where they all know how to be a good support system for each other.

Definitely a gem. Looking forward to more Racquel Marie gem.

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After initiating a fight during the playoff game against her rival, Valentina aka Vale decides to go to summer soccer camp with her two best friends. They've all signed up to be captains for the summer and are hoping for a relaxing time, but when they find out that college scouts are coming to the final game between the top two teams the pressure is on. Each team is captained by two girls and, of course, Vale gets assigned to be a captain alongside her archnemesis Leticia. Over the course of the summer Vale will attempt to overcome her perfectionism, learn to love soccer again, and maybe fall in love.

You Don't Have a Shot was such a fun read! I absolutely LOVED the banter between Vale and Leticia, their chemistry was incredible. If you're in the market for a YA sapphic rivals-to-lovers romance, this is the perfect read for you!

P.S. I have this thing with sports-centered books where I just really want to play the sport after I read it. Anyone else? If someone wants to teach me how to play soccer, please let me know.

Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for providing an ARC in exchange for an honest review.

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I loved this soccer romcom, I think that it had amazing characters, sweet plot lines. The way they became fast enemies and their relationship developed, I loved the rivalry.

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I am in love with Racquel's writing especially when discussing the paternal emotional abuse. We also need to discuss how great soccer rivals to lovers really is.

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YOU DON"T HAVE A SHOT navigates queerness, grief, familial expectations, and how to relearn to love something (in this case, soccer). It is a hugely impactful story for anyone who has lost a parent, who is angry at the world and feeling so strongly. It shows how when you become talented at something that was one a joyful hobby, it can become something you dread and something that fills you with even more anger. Racquel Marie balances all of this while interweaving an ace=spec romance, powerful friendships, and intercultural family dynamics wonderfully.

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Okay, so, I’m not a very sporty person. It’s just not something I’ve got real natural talent in, so not something I’ve personally pursued, though I think it’s cool. So the soccer is not what drew me to this book, is what I’m saying. I read Racquel Marie’s debut, OPHELIA AFTER ALL, and absolutely loved it. The insightfulness of the characters’ emotions. The movement of the story. All of it, so good. I was so moved by that book that I wanted to read Marie’s next book pretty much no matter what it would turn out to be. So… soccer.

Y’all. I cried over soccer in this book. More than once!

Again, the characters are so deep and complex. I loved the relationships between them and the growth that Vale experiences as she begins to bond with her team and see them and herself in a new way, and through that, to see soccer in a new way. It is an incredible book. I loved it so much.

I felt like the soccer parts of the story were all really accessible and easy to understand, even for someone like me who doesn’t know much about the game. (Knowing the positions of the players probably would have helped a little bit, but I feel like I picked up enough from the context of what was happening to be clued in to what I needed to know.) It was so easy to invest in the characters and to want them to succeed. I also loved the banter, especially between Vale and Leticia. So perfect! So much fun.

I also just really enjoyed the theme about learning to fall in love with the game again and learning that you get to define success for yourself. Great stuff. I think fans of Racquel Marie’s first book will definitely enjoy this new one. And rivals-to-lovers fans will get lots of satisfaction from the snappy banter and romantic tension. All in all, a perfect summer romance.

Note: I received a free copy of this book in exchange for my honest review. All opinions my own.

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You Don't Have A Shot was such a fun and quick read for me.

We follow Vale who is the captain of her high school soccer team and it starts during their playoffs and goes through summer camp. Vale is under a lot of pressure from her dad to always do the best and always win, because of this she is hyper-critical of herself and her teammates making it so she doesn't really enjoy playing anymore. This at times doesn't make her the best captain and it isn't until she is at camp and see's how her 'enemy' is as captain that she realizes that she needs to change and that soccer is supposed to be fun.

Overall this book is a lot of fun. Vale and her 'enemy' Leticia end up working together after awhile and they learn that they might have more in common than they first realized. We also see Vale come to terms with certain things and realize things about her family dynamic that she hadn't noticed before. My personal favorite part of this book though was seeing Vale learn the different captain style through Leticia and how to encourage and have fun again with soccer. They had some difficult moments but at the end of the day it worked and they ended up helping each other out by the end of the summer.

Review going up on my blog towards the end of May.

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This book was lovely, even as it was so different from the author's debut. Watching Vale slowly realize the reasons why she is the way she is--her obsession with winning, always expecting both the best and worst from herself--and figure out she can change her ways while re-falling in love with her sport was heartwarming. And the sapphics!! I loved just how many queer characters there were in this book (basically at every opportunity!) and how normalized queerness was. I love a good rivals-to-lovers arc, and I loved how this was done--the steady-build up that never overshadowed Vale's personal growth, which I would say is the main focus of the book. Overall, I just really adored this and I know this will resonate with readers!

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You Don't Have a Shot made me cry. I never expected to from a soccer rivals book, but there you go. What makes this book so special is how Marie infuses vulnerability into each page. I may be more alike to Valentina than I'd like to admit - quick to react, slow to apologize, easy to blame others - so You Don't Have a Shot was like looking into the mirror. One of the major themes is the idea of winning at any cost. Even if it's the ones we love. Or ourselves.

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4 Stars

I gave the book four stars because of Valentina. Initially, I really did not like her. As the book progressed, she grew on me because she began to grow as a person. The writing is solid, so that is what helped me power through the first 30% of the book. I'm not a big contemporary YA reader, so this book has convinced me to give this genre a chance. I loved Leticia's banter; she was my favorite character in this book. Vale had some fun barbs, but Leticia's retorts were so great. The book also delved into some hard topics, such as grief and an emotionally abusive parent. Racquel Marie wrote this book with such care that I'm excited to see what she does next.

Thank you to Turn the Page Tours for an advanced copy of this book for my voluntary review.

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racquel marie’s first book, ophelia after all, had me in a literal chokehold. this one is proving to be no different. i am in love with the sapphic and beautifully queer relationship. and never did i imagine that i would actually care about sports in a novel!

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I love soccer and I love queer romances, so I was really hoping to love this book. Unfortunately, that was not the case. Right away, I did not love or even like Vale, and it was not very fun being in her head for so long. I understood what she was struggling with, but I just couldn't get behind her as a character, especially with some of the actions she took. I also felt like the pace was off, and I wanted more from the romance. I think this book could've done well narrating Leticia's perspective as well, but it is what it is--and ultimately, it was not for me.

(Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for providing me with an ARC in exchange for an honest review. Any quotes are taken from an advanced copy and may be subject to change upon final publication.)

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There will never be a time where I’m not extremely excited for a sports fiction book. When sports rivalries gets thrown in it really seals the deal that I’m gonna gobble up the story.

Knowing I go wild for sports fiction I knew I would enjoy you don’t have a shot but I was entirely unprepared for how much I did. My copy has a thousand notes in it and I have no regrets about it.

The characters and the storyline were so human that I had no chance but to love them. Vale’s growth throughout the book was realistic and even though I wanted to shake her a thousand times I also wanted to hug her. Each of her family members showed different ways of how they grieve and it was done so well. Sometimes there’s this belief that theres only one way to grieve but there isn’t. Grieving is messy and complicated and Racquel really captured that.

Overall, there’s really not enough words to talk about my love for this book. The banter changed me as a human being. Then the storyline changed me but the banter rewired my neurons first. I am a Leticia apologist until the day I die! She has never done any harm. Like I said I am a changed human being. I might MIGHT join a little soccer team just to find someone to willingly push me into the dirt. It’s becoming a dream and problem. Anyways! Read the book!

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Racquel Marie is one of my favorite authors - I fell in love with her writing in Ophelia After All and I am just as, if not more, in love with her sophomore novel!

Following soccer star Valentina ‘Vale’ Castillo-Green as her soccer dreams seem off-kilter and close to falling apart and her rival, Leticia Ortiz, as they work together as soccer team co-captains at summer camp, You Don’t Have a Shot is an incredible rivals-to-lovers romance that is witty, sharp, and deeply emotional - a classic sign of Marie’s craft.

My favorite thing about Marie’s writing is how she writes flawed protagonists that you can relate to and root for. I saw a lot of myself in Vale’s inner turmoil, and the way she expresses that stress and anguish, while not healthy, makes sense considering how much pressure she and her father put her under. Her character development throughout the novel is well done!

Leticia’s character was great! I loved her from the moment she came on the page. Their rivalry was also *chef’s kiss*, and I was living for the tension! Especially once the teasing started.

As always, Marie touches on important social issues, including xenophobia, homophobia, and transphobia in sports. THE ACE REP! It made me cry, because I related so much to Vale, and having this rep in a character I feel seen by was just incredible. I also appreciated that this story, focused on girls soccer, includes a trans girl who’s valued and beloved by the rest, like any player would be.

All in all, another incredible novel from Racquel Marie! She is a force to be reckoned with in the YA contemporary world and I’m grateful we get the chance to read her magic.

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Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.

This book was everything I wanted a sapphic soccer romance to be. Rivals to lovers? Heck yes! A "who did this to you scene"?! OMG, thank you to the author for that one! Asexual MC representation? We love to see it!

This book honestly just had so much heart and character growth. And fluffy, slow burn romance, let's not forget that. And this may be a controversial opinion, but I actually like books where the shitty parents don't necessarily miraculously see the error of their ways, because it makes it feel more believable to me, because sometimes shitty parents will remain shitty parents, and that's life.

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