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This book was painstakingly boring. The FMC was so annoying, and behaved as if the world revolved around her. The cute cover and description of the book initially drew me in, unfortunately this one fell flat majorly. I was super excited to read this in hopes that it was something a bit different. Sadly I felt super confused as to what was happening at times, many many formatting issues with the book. That I hope are fixed before publishing.
Thanks to NetGalley and Avon Books UK for providing this ARC in exchange for an honest review.
Thanks so much Avon Books and NetGalley for an advance read in exchange for this review.
Gia has an embarrassing list of New Year's resolutions that somehow make it to the restaurant Ben works at. He starts to slip notes into her takeout each week. A love story?
I liked this well enough, but it was slow. I couldn't connect to the characters very well, but I appreciated the dual POVs.
Good. Even though I enjoyed the love story between the two characters their own stories felt a bit disappointing. As some bits felt rushed and didn't make sense.
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Gia moved to London from India five years ago. She has a job at a marketing company and her own apartment but despite having things together, she doesnโt feel like she fits in. She wears bright and sparkly and doesnโt believe in herself. When he resolution list In beautiful calligraphy gets stuck at the bottom of a take away bag from the Namaste take away, Ben discovers the list and starts writing back to Gia with each take away she orders. Ben feels like a failure and has kept his life small, but when they write to each other, they share and are able to appreciate the best in each other.
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This was a slow read for me, but I can appreciate that this lovely story unfolds little by little. When connections are made, co-incidences discovered, Ben and Gia edge closer and closer to each otherโs orbits. This story feels like it orbits a very British type of slow vibe, something I would expect from a Beth OโLeary type story. I enjoyed the epistolary aspects and the parts where Gia and Ben become their true selves, wearing sparkles, quoting Shakespeare, and encouraging those around them. โค๏ธ
I loved the premise of writing notes to each other, so I couldn't wait to read this. This is quite a slow burn read with lots of character background build-up. It did take a while to get into it.
On the whole, it was a fun and cute read.
3.5 stars
I want to say thank you to the publisher and author for granting me access to read this book ahead of its publication!
I really loved the concept and was hooked from the beginning. Once the story developed, I felt myself struggling to get through it. Gia and Ben had good banter back and forth in their letters but once they met in person it felt anticlimactic. There were a lot of characters and details in both of their personal lives that it was difficult for me to keep track. Ben seemed to be more into Gia in my opinion as well because he would think about her during his chapters. Gia often did not mention Ben and only focused on her work and her problems. In the end, I did like the general idea behind the story and I enjoyed the beginning but it left me struggling to finish it.
I so wanted to love this book, from the cover to the concept, but it was lacking "something" I didn't really connect to the characters and I think the author had a great idea but then couldn't follow it through, its a real shame as everything was there for a great read.
Thank you Netgalley and the publishers for the earc. While I found it sweet and comforting read, I do wish that it delivered something extra.
Thank you net galley for the advance reader copy of this novel. This novel was not for me. I didn't finish.
Sorry but I just can't get into this book and have had to abandon ship. Finding it all a bit slow and not really bothered about the characters. Sorry.
What a sweet wholesome story! It was exactly what I needed to read and the author doesnโt take themselves too seriously!
I just finished reading Love on the Menu by debut author Mimi Deb.
The story, told through a dual POV, revolves around Gia and Ben, and slowly builds their relationship from an accidental sharing of a list, to letters going back and forth with every takeaway from Namaste London.
It took me a couple of chapters to get into the story. The author does perhaps too good a job of conveying the general malaise (mean girls at work, crappy apartment, rather consistent drunken-ness, loneliness, panic around the job and visa situation) in Gia's life. Ben's life isn't great either, in spite of a close-knit chaotic family.... there are personal demons to be vanquished. After the first few letters between Gia and Ben, I found myself wanting to find out more about them. I found myself rooting for these two lonely individuals, who are trying to let go of the past and build a future with emotional support from an unexpected friend.
And there lies the problem. For me, friendship is where I see this relationship staying. After waiting for ages for Gia and Ben to meet, whatever sparks do fly, aren't even between the two of them. And instead of following up with a resolution and a focus on the main leads, there was (what felt like) an interminably long wedding and focus on a different one of Gia's closest relationships. In a romance novel, with such a promisingly title, this is a problem.
If you are looking for a slow-burn read, with a focus on individual characters and their journeys of self-discovery, give this story a try. If you're looking for a frothy, steamy romance... that's not on the menu.
Thank you to Netgalley UK and the publisher for a free ARC. This did not influence my review.
Oh dear. I feel out of step with other reviewers of Love on the Menu by Mimi Deb. I'm afraid I just found it slow and unconvincing. But that's fiction for you: very subjective.
I wanted to love this book. The mystery of a note passing plot is very Youโve Got Mail and Iโm here for it and the food based exchanges of this novel drew me in - who doesnโt love good food? However, I didnโt connect with the characters or the plot. There was too much going on, too many threads that werenโt tied up and just drifted off. Benโs relationship with Brandon seemed really complex but was never explained. What changed it? Did Kayla find out the truth about the wedding? Why did Ben act so callous after the video? How did he feel when he realised Gia had been at the gig? There was so much introduced to this novel that wasnโt explored enough for me and it would have been easier to understand what was happening if it didnโt lose its train of thought. On top of that, a lot of it went over my head. There were โjokesโ or insinuations we were meant to know, such as Kayla throwing the earth coloured lipstick, or Connor not getting over his jetlag and it just left me puzzled and frustrated.
The premise of this book was really interesting, and once I understood that Ben was not the delivery guy I liked that they hadnโt met but it would have been nice as the novel progressed, for them to interact more and to have some kind of chemistry. Iโm sorry to say their romance fell flat for me and I didnโt gel with this book.
DNF. This book was too slow at the beginning and aside from some formatting errors which will be fixed in the final edition of this book, I just think it needs a few more rounds of editing and taking out unnecessary info. I just found it too slow
2.5 stars rounded up. There's the bones of a good book here, but unfortunately they're obscured by erratic pacing, irrelevant plot points, and indistinguishable side characters who actually detract from the story rather than add to it. Maybe the author had a whole intricate tale in her head and didn't want to cut out any of it; maybe she started writing and it all got away from her a bit. I suspect my impression was not helped by the worst formatting I've ever seen in an uncorrected proof (and I've seen quite a few): most of Gia's letters contained multiplewordsruntogetherwithoutspacing which made them impossible to read (or perhaps she wrote them like that, considering she spent most of the book three sheets to the wind?), and that was but one of the problems.
I did like the epistolary idea with its very modern twist, and I liked many aspects of the main characters, especially Ben. It was rather a shame that they hardly got any time on the page together. I did finish it, but found myself skimming some parts; with better formatting and a damn good edit, there's plenty of potential here, but as it stands, not really for me.
I think there's a lot of potential and I appreciated the ideas. It could a rom-com but there's some very serious topics like alcoholism.
I'm not sure if like it or not, I'm more for the ok but not entertaining.
Many thanks to the publisher for this arc, all opinions are mine
"Love on the Menu" feels like a story full of potential, but unfortunately fell a little flat for me. I loved the alternating perspectives, the passing of sweet and encouraging notes between Ben and Gia, and Gia's work drama. However, the story overall felt clunky and hard to follow. The back and forth between Ben and Gia's perspectives was difficult, as, especially with Ben, I felt like I was being dropped in the middle of a story I missed a big chunk of...I would be interested to check out other Mimi Deb novels, as I felt like this one was hard to follow, so I'm unsure of that being her style just a one-off.
I did finish the book but got a little frustrated with it and the story. Not one I'd go back to.
The characters became a little annoying and I got cross with them!
๐ ๐ ๐ง๐ถ๐๐น๐ฒ: Drunk not Sober
๐๐๐๐ต๐ผ๐ฟ: Mimi Deb
๐๐ฎ๐ ๐๐ต๐ฎ๐ฟ๐ฎ๐ฐ๐๐ฒ๐ฟ: Ben + kids
๐ฅ๐ฒ๐ฎ๐ฑ๐ฎ๐ฏ๐ถ๐น๐ถ๐๐: Normal
๐ง๐๐ฝ๐ฒ: Novel
๐๐ฒ๐ป๐ฟ๐ฒ: Slice life, office drama, contemporary romance
4.4/๐ฑ
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If any of you read this book & drink, I need to know if people ACTUALLY consume this much alcohol & function. ๐ฌ
๐ฑTHE EXCELLENT
~ Well paced across various settings
~ Troubled characters that give glimpses of depth
~ Found family & sweet friendships
~ Two-fold British Asian perspectives
Gia is having a tough go of it, she needs to keep a precarious job, that becomes more so after a social disaster with her boss. Between her two-faced co-workers, abandonment issues and COPIOUS ingestion of alcohol, her life needs order hence, the list. What starts as a note to herself becomes a WHOLE relationship when she orders takeout one night from Namaste London & a man of privilege who needs direction in his own life, answers.
โจ๐๐ถ๐๐ฒ ๐ถ๐ ๐ฎ ๐ฟ๐ฒ๐ฎ๐ฑ.
๐ฑTHE MEH
~ Drinking, lots & lots of drinking - if itโs a trigger for you R U N
~ Consistent drunk choice making
~ Unsure of the necessary points were made
~ Dysfunctional & alcoholic families
~ TOO MUCH ALCOHOL ๐ฌ
โก๐ฑ ๐๐๐ ๐๐ต๐ฎ๐'๐ ๐ท๐๐๐ ๐บ๐ฒ ;)