I was very intrigued at the beginning, but the plot didn't show up until 40% in -- at which point, it had better been a freaking good plot, and it wasn't. I was intrigued by the two main characters, but pretty bored by everything else. Plus, the writing was so purpley (who the hell uses the word "nadir" 3x in 106 pages??) that I felt like the author was trying to make up for the lack of development everywhere else.

This author seems to be incredibly hit or miss for me. I'll def check out more from them in the future, but I don't recommend this one at all.

I absolutely loved this book and I wasn't sure what to expect. I loved the relationship between the two main characters and the entire book had this amazing creepy atmosphere.

This book was much better than her other novella! I loved the characters and the premise. It made me want more from these characters. I would love for her to write a full blown novel about these two specifically!

Cassandra Khaw writes such beautiful prose and has such intensely creative ideas. She has a way of transporting you to a world parallel to our own where fantastical and terrible things are possible in a very visceral way. I enjoyed reading The Salt Grows Heavy far more than Nothing But Blackened Teeth, though I do feel that it suffers from some of the same issues. Particularly, I feel that both books needed to be longer and given more room to grow and breathe. Overall, however, I would call That Salt Grows Heavy a triumph and look forward to the possibility of Khaw one day tackling longer forms of fiction.

Thank you to Netgalley for providing me with an advance reader's copy of this book in exchange for an honest and fair review.

I absolutely loved The Salt Grows Heavy! It's a great fairytale horror novella that blends The Little Mermaid, Frankenstein, and something all its own. It has unique fairytale subversions, a subtle queer vibe, and just a great feeling for the impending spooky season. Their writing style is very flowery, but I honestly think it's perfect for fairytale horror, and it really makes the scenery feel like part of the horror. If you read and enjoyed Khaw's short story These Deathless Bones, you will definitely enjoy this one! Highly recommended.

TW: torture, dismemberment etc

Oddly charming for a story about vicious little mermaid and her travelling companion, a Plague Doctor who’s more than he seems. Like the Plague Doctor, I wanted to know more of the mermaid’s story: her past, her home. Short in length in gives the reader a taste of these two characters while leaving them wanting more.

First and foremost, I would definitely recommend/use this novel in my AP classes as a mentor text. The writing is poetic, revolting, and absorbing. For me this book was all vibes and atmosphere. I didn’t really focus on the plot of this novella because I was so enamored with the writing. Khaw is a master of imagery and literary devices. The descriptions were so vivid I could see the horror that was happening. This is a masterclass in imagery.

The Salt Grows Heavy is a good novella. The writing is gorgeously-dark, with a lot of solid body horror, but it was just a little too abstract for my tastes.

That is 100%, my opinion though, so take it with a grain of salt ((pun intended)). If this sounds intriguing to you, definitely give it a shot. In fact, I want to be clear, I did enjoy this. I liked it. It's a solid novella. I just could not tell you the point, or really what happened at all.

I think it is a fresh, yet horrific, take on The Little Mermaid, but I'm only pulling that from the publisher's synopsis. Honestly, I would never have guessed that while reading this story, if I hadn't been prompted ahead of time.

I think Cassandra Khaw is an incredibly smart and creative human. Khaw is most likely too smart for me. I do really appreciate their horror imagery though. It's always a bit body horror, always a bit wildly-detailed and it never fails to make my toes curl. I am going to continue picking up Khaw's stories. Every time I am impressed with the creation. Some aspects hit, some aspects miss, but it's always intriguing.

This is a bit of a short review for me, but this novella is just over 100-pages and I really didn't understand 98-of the pages, so not sure what else to say.

Writing = beautiful; concept = over my head.

Thank you so much to the publisher, Tor Nightfire, for providing me with a copy to read and review. As mentioned, I find Khaw's stories captivating, if a bit confusing. I definitely look forward to seeing what they deliver next!

Thank you to NetGalley, publisher and the author for this ARC!!!
This book was confusing and I disliked all of the pompous big words she used throughout, it felt like she was trying to show off instead of tell a story.

Really good folk/fantasy horror short story, I liked if a lot more than Nothign But Blackened Teeth. I really love Khaw's prose as always, she writes in such a beautiful way and I also end up learning more words as a result.

The ending of this novella is also very open ended but satisfying in the same breath, which I personally think is hard to attain.

I was ambivalent about this author's previous work but I was entirely on board with this - I loved the fractured-fairy-tale feel, the vicious mermaid protagonist, the Frankenstein's monster plague doctor, the whole thing. Devoured it in a day.

The Salt Grows Heavy was dark and engrossing. I couldn't put it down and it definitely gave me some funky dreams! I highly recommend this book not only for the amazing story but also for Cassandra Khaw's sparkling prose that brings the story to life.

I ended up DNFing. The vocabulary used through out was just above me and having to look up the meanings of things so often just made for a poor reading experience.

I'm really happy to say that I enjoyed this novella far more than the previous work I read by this author, Nothing But Blackened Teeth. The dark fairy-tale romance was atmospheric and interesting, and there were many moments in the story that I felt really showed off the talent Cassandra Khaw has as an author. They are obviously a very creative writer and there were points in the story where I did in fact have to pause just to appreciate the beautiful prose and I would love it if they came out with another dark fairy-tale story in the form of a full novel as I would love to see what they could do with a more established plot and fleshed out characters in that genre. That being said, this novella did have a few flaws, mainly in how the characters felt pretty one-note and how the story felt like a race to reach the ending. I wish we got more page time to delve into the backstory of the two main characters including their first meeting so that their relationship was better fleshed out and developed. The plot itself needed a bit more expanding as well and at its short length to me felt like a lot of beautiful writing used to describe gore and not enough used to actually flesh out the story. I ended up deciding on three stars since the writing was genuinely beautiful and lended the story the feeling of a frighteningly realistic fever dream, there were just parts where that felt more like a hinderence than help. I look forward to whatever the author has coming out next and I hope that they end up releasing more of these dark fairy-tale stories in the future.

This is my first time reading Cassandra Khaw, and I had gathered (based on other Goodreads reviews) that they were a divisive writer. Having finished this novella, I can certainly see why. The subject matter was gruesome and fantastical, while the language used was often bizarrely highbrow and obscure. I'm thankful to have read this on Kindle, so I could highlight words for their meaning. It certainly enriched my experience, because I think much of the story's details would have been completely lost without knowing the definitions.

I recently came across a Library Journal interview with Khaw, in which they explained how obsessed they are with the English language and how they find meaning behind the use of complicated words. They explained that the richness of the English language is what draws them into stories in the first place; if a story is told using commonplace words, Khaw mentally checks out. I was thankful to come across this information, as it made me appreciate their writing more than I originally would have.

Overall, I would recommend this to literary horror fans (it does have a truly sharp, biting feel all throughout) and those interested in prose stylistics. While this was just an "okay" read for me overall, I am intrigued enough to give other Khaw novellas a chance in the future.

Thank you to Tor Publishing Group, Tor Nightfire, and NetGalley for an Advanced Reader Copy (ARC) of this novella in exchange for my honest review!

The Salt Grows Heavy fell short of its potential, offering a confusing and disjointed reading experience. The lack of a cohesive plot, flawed characterization, and inconsistent pacing prevented me from fully engaging with the story. While there may be elements that some readers appreciate, I cannot recommend this novel to those seeking a well-structured and immersive literary experience.

The Salt Grows Heavy cements Cassandra Khaw as one of the modern masters of the horror novella. Tonally, the book is very different from Khaw’s magnificent, ethereal 2021 novella Nothing but Blackened Teeth, which just proves the author’s range, as both books kept me engrossed through very different means.

Salt is narrated by a mermaid who married a king, but this is no happily-ever-after tale. The King has tortured his wife (including cutting out her tongue) and forced her to bear his daughters who, just prior to the start of the novella, have devoured their father, his court, and most of his kingdom. Among the survivors are the now-free mermaid and the court’s mysterious non-binary Plague Doctor, who flee the castle in search of safe haven. Which, this being a horror novella, they do not find, encountering instead a group of nearly feral children and the men they worship as gods. And this is when the story gets really disturbing.

The mermaid’s narrative voice is lush and detailed, bordering on archaic, while still being relatable to the modern reader. The weight of her experiences at her husband’s hands, the pride and fear she expressed about her daughters, inform every sentence. The developing bond between mermaid queen and plague doctor as they learn each other’s secrets, is the beautiful core of an otherwise horrific and bloody story; the fits and starts of awkward mutual attraction are so real that I recognized myself in each moment. But fair warning: this is not a cozy romance. The mermaid also narrates, in visceral detail, moments of brutal body horror that disturbed me even while I was unable to look away. The mermaid and the Plague Doctor each have experienced debilitating trauma at the hands of people who should have cared for them, through which the author explores the abuses of power endemic to so many fairy tales.

In The Salt Grows Heavy, Cassandra Khaw comingles threads and themes from fairy tales both famous (The Little Mermaid) and less-so (The Three Army Surgeons), along with works as seminal as Frankenstein and The Lord of the Flies – a combination which in lesser hands maybe would not work, but in Khaw’s hands becomes a vessel for exploring othering, outsidership, and the myriad ways in which we find ourselves controlled and confined.

I received an electronic advance reading copy of this book for free from the publisher via NetGalley in exchange for an honest review. This does not affect my opinion of the book or the content of my review. The Salt Grows Heavy was published on May 2, 2023

WOW! For being so short, this one packs a solid punch. It's gory and gross and brutal. . .and beautiful. I like that it gave two different versions of belief - belief in someone to love versus belief in a religion or god(s) and their promises.

The deaths and repeated body consuming was pretty gory. If you can stomach the details, the stuff in between is just beautiful. There were so many lines I wanted to write down, so many little moments that held my breath. The use of "they" was so good too. I loved this little story. I definitely see myself visiting it again. And what an ending. I loved it!

A huge thank you to the author and publisher for providing an e-ARC via Netgalley. This does not affect my opinion regarding the book.

"Ash sleets from the firmament in soft handfuls of black, gathering in gauzy drifts around my ankles. The sky is ink and seething murk, whispering secrets to itself, the clouds snarled like long, dark hair."

Cassandra Khaw is an auto-buy author for me, and their latest novella The Salt Grows Heavy is just as dark as their other writing. I love mermaids and absolutely adore how Khaw took the legends and shaped them into something wholly and horrifically unique.

Beautifully written with every word in its place, the prose is descriptive and all encompassing. Some readers may struggle with the purple prose or depictions of gore, so be sure to check the content warnings.

"Man mistakes his own experiences as the canvas on which all truths are drawn. He is rarely correct in this respect."

This is a difficult novella to review because it's kind of something to be experienced, but this was a read I won't forget anytime soon.

Content warnings: blood and gore, death, dismemberment, murder

eARC provided by the publisher via NetGalley for an honest review. This does not affect my opinion nor the contents of my review. Quotations are from an unfinished proof and subject to change upon final publication.

Well this was deliciously delightful and dark! 4.5 Stars and i'd give it a 89/100 WGB Score. Perfect to read in one sitting by the beach or a lake or even just curled up under the blankets in the dead of night. I enjoyed Khaw's prose a lot more in this novella then their previous one that I read. Perfectly spooky and weird and that cover art is just sublime.