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Love kit and Tully. This is book 4, although can be read standalone you will want to know all the history and characters in previous books.
This is a fun quick read.
Absolutely adored it.

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Zero Chance was an interesting addition to the Kit & Tully series. It's book 4 and gives the reader a different perspective in the mix - Mac. I didn't know this POV would be so interested - not to say that made me like this character more, though. Interesting to see Tully come back and some of Kit and Tully interactions from a fresh POV. Now I'm curious what will happen next!

This one does stand well on its own but would definitely be more enjoyable if you already know all the characters. This is book 4 and I recommend reading the first 3 before this one.

A huge thank you to the author and publisher for providing an e-ARC via Netgalley. This does not affect my opinion regarding the book.

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"Zero Chance" by Mocha VonBee is a compelling and engaging story that seamlessly blends elements of romance, mystery, and the supernatural. The narrative revolves around the character of Mac Whitehead, a bad boy with a streak of bad luck, and Kit, who finds herself entangled in Mac's quest for redemption.

VonBee crafts a unique premise by incorporating ancient legends into the storyline, adding an intriguing layer of mystique to the plot. The tension between Mac and Kit, fueled by Mac's belief that Kit holds the key to solving his problems, sets the stage for a dynamic and unpredictable relationship.

The characterization is well-executed, with Mac's bad boy persona and Kit's reluctance to trust him creating a magnetic dynamic. The author skillfully explores the complexities of their interactions, keeping readers guessing about Mac's true intentions and Kit's potential involvement in his endeavors.

The incorporation of a supernatural element adds depth to the narrative, creating a sense of wonder and excitement. The pacing of the story is well-managed, with twists and turns that keep the reader engaged and eager to uncover the mysteries surrounding Mac's run of bad luck and Kit's role in it.

The dialogue is sharp and witty, contributing to the overall enjoyment of the book. The author successfully captures the emotional nuances of the characters, allowing readers to connect with their struggles and desires.

While the romantic tension between Mac and Kit is a central focus, the novel also weaves in elements of self-discovery and personal growth. The characters undergo significant development throughout the story, adding a layer of depth to the romance.

"Zero Chance" is a four-star read that combines romance, mystery, and the supernatural with finesse. Mocha VonBee's storytelling prowess shines through, delivering a captivating and well-crafted narrative. The book is recommended for readers who enjoy a blend of romance and intrigue, with a touch of the mystical to keep things intriguing until the very end.

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Keeping young love alive while fame and travel and rumors of betrayal bring Kit and Tully so many tests and threats. Another page turner in this series.

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Mac gets to tell his side of things, in this episode of the Kit and Sully story.
A different way to look at things, which made for a very interesting read.
I am really liking the journey Kit and Tully’s romance is taking (definitely not your run of the mill love story).
Looking forward to the next book.

I received an ARC from NetGalley and this is my honest review.

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Things getting more interesting in the series as we get Mac Whitehead -- the allegedly villain who almost taken Tully's dream and opportunities away! I think it's such an interesting choice to have Mac's POV for the fourth installment, as we get to see how Mac as the outsider of the four main characters circles views them and Tully's success as he trying to get the "abandoned" Kit's favor to help him regaining his popularity for his music.

Another well-written and captivating story from Mocha! While it doesn't really change my feelings towards him, it feels refreshing to read the perspective of Mac's life. It gives us new understanding for the characters, while not losing the grip on the main character's relationship. As things get more complicated, I can't wait to read the next one because I really have no idea what's going to happen next!!!

<i> Thanks to NetGalley and publisher for the e-ARC copy of this book</i>

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In this book of the Kit and Tully series, we get Mac's version of what happened. Self-centered and feeling wronged, Mac tries to get back at Tully and make a name for himself by himself. When he fails miserably, he threatens vengeance, which we will have to wait and see what happens in the next book. These are short stories but keep you hooked and wanting more.

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As with the rest of this series so far, I absolutely loved this one! I think I loved this one even more than the last one and I'm looking forward to seeing how the next one goes and whose side we get to hear it from. Now on to book 5!!!

Thank you NetGalley and Indie Ink for allowing me to read this ARC for an honest opinion.

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Although it was quite refreshing and intriguing to read a novel from the villain's perspective, I did not find myself sympathizing and overall caring about the protagonist which truly affected my enjoyment.

Thank you to the author and the publisher for this ARC through NetGalley in exchange for my honest review.

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We are back in the Kit and Tully world and boy was a I glad to be back even though we were following my least favorite character Mac. He reminds me of a fuck boy who thinks he should have everything. He has rock star personality but does not want to put in the work to be a rock star. Though I definitely don't like Mac and I don't think this book was meant to make you like him all that much I liked seeing his point of view. I can tell knowing his thoughts will be important later on.
One bad thing I can say about this book is I felt like I was missing part of the story from the last book to this book. Did I miss a part where Kit and Tully Broke up? I mean I am glad to see them back together but what.
I can't wait to see how this series goes though, I will definitely be keeping an eye out for the next book.

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Love or Music… Which should they choose and what price do they have to pay?

If bad boy, Mac Whitehead believed in ancient legends, he’d know exactly what to choose, no matter the cost…

Meanwhile, despite hot rockstar looks and a raspy voice, nothing is going his way. Mac blames Tully for his run of bad luck. And he’s convinced Kit is the solution to all his problems.
But Mac has never paid any attention to Kit before, not even when she had a crush on him.
She knows it can mean only one thing.
He wants something.

But what could possibly persuade Kit to help arch-enemy, Mac Whitehead?

Really enjoyed this story. Will recommend to others.

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As with the rest of this series so far, I absolutely loved this one! Told from what I thought would be a slightly odd perspective going into it, I thought the way it worked with Mac telling the story actually worked out great given where the story went in this fourth book. While I'm still not a particularly big Mac fan, I did love getting a short stay inside his head, seeing what he thought of everything, and he was the perfect person to be able to fill us in on both sides of the Kit & Tully relationship with where it stood during this one. I think I loved this one even more than the last one and I'm looking forward to seeing how the next one goes and whose side we get to hear it from.

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This short book is an interesting insight into the Kit and Tully universe. I haven't read the other books in the series, but this one can be read as a standalone story.

It's quite refreshing to read a story from the point of view of the bad guy, it's impossible to have much sympathy for the main character here and I found myself hoping everything goes wrong for him.

All in all, this was an enjoyable quick read.

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