Member Reviews
This one is set in England, it follows a football player (soccer for the US) Alfie, and his ghostwriter, Mable. Alfie has a history of being a closed off grumpy and Mable is trying to make it as a writer. I really enjoyed the beginning of this one, it had me turning pages to keep reading. Itโs a quick, fake relationship read, with - spoiler alert- a bit of grumpy/sunshine. ๐
Typically I love the grumpy/sunshine troupe, but this one was not it for me. The story was a bit hard to follow and after the 6th eye roll due to the dialogue I had to DNF this at 40%. There's cheeky and silly and then there is just plain ridiculous, this fell into the latter category for me. Thank you to NetGalley for the ARC, but this one wasn't a grab for me.
Alfie, a grumpy retired (UK) Football player finally agrees to write his memoir and finally decides to have Mabel, the sunshiny, curvy ghostwriter as his partner in this venture.
There are some laugh out loud moments - like when Mabel uses her pepper spray or when she attempts to get into the car and ends up showing more than she wanted to the buzzing press. These are coupled with witty banter, a tension filled slow burn and some very high-heat open door bedroom scenes.
There are also tender moments and a shared understanding between two people who suffered from having pretty awful fathers. In some of their conversations it seemed like Mabel and Alfie revealed things they never intended to but felt so comfortable with the other person they felt safe in sharing.
I did struggle a lot with the single POV 3rd person narrative, which I think made it hard for me to connect with either character. This was my first book by the author but I would like to try some of her others.
Engaging with cute banter! Love the tropes. Just fell flat to me for some reason, had higher hopes! Very cute cover though! Thanks for the copy in exchange for an honest review
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Wonderful story, great character development, great writing! Highly recommend this book. I thoroughly enjoyed it
What a cute book! I enjoyed this book and the characters! The character development was great. I had never read this author before but I will for sure be reading it again in the future!
Iโm just a sucker for cinderella story, though I think Allie might be as much of the Cinderella in this story as Mabel is.
Mabel an aspiring author has been ghost writing biographies to get experience under her belt. Which makes her, in her editors opinion qualified to write for the notorious bad boy of football, Alfie. Alfie a gruff retired footballer is ready to tell his side of the story, but after a disastrous first meeting itโs unclear if they can ever get on the same page.
After accidentally being photographed together they decide instead of admitting heโs hired a ghost writer to fake date. The only logical conclusion if we are honest. The problem is, Mabel is a little on the curvier side and not in the same tax bracket as Alfie. So while social media is having a meltdown around them, they are trying to navigate their increasing attraction.
True life isnโt a romance novel as Mabel and Alfie unfortunately find out.
Thank you SMP for the chance to read and review this book.
When Grumpy Mets sunshine is a sexy romance with a grumpy football player and an upbeat writer. Former football player Alfie is convinced to sell him memoirs but he doesn't think he can handle writing time. Insert Mabel a ball of sunshine ghost writer. The two of them do not get along well and argue about everything at first. Eventually they realize their chemistry is more than they thought. This story is full sizzling moments and cute dialogue. I did enjoyed this one!
The author couldn't have been more obvious they're a fan of Ted Lasso if they tried. This was clearly a Roy Kent-esque character with very little room for imagination. I DNF.
I received an advance copy. All thoughts are my own.
๐ARC Review ๐
I have been in a book slump for what feels like weeks and this book truly helped bring me out of it. Alfie and Mabel are Grumpy/Sunshine perfection and the title rings 100% true. This book crosses laugh out loud moments with fake dating which I really truly enjoyed.
I recommend picking this up if you need a quick read that makes you laugh!
Thank you to the author, St. Martinโs Press, and NetGalley for the ARC.
I loved this book!! It was fabulous and well done. The characters were on point and I thought the plot was well developed. I would recommend this book to others.
I wanted to love this book! Grumpy/sunshine is one of my favorite tropes but this one didnโt work for me.
The dialogue was all over the place and confusing at times. I love a good steamy book, but I honestly found myself skimming the book by the time we got to that part.
It definitely had potential but it missed the mark for me.
Excellent, hilarious banter + hot fat lady rep + some interesting backstory explanations of why our characters feel compelled to be grumpy/sunshiney AND some **EPIC** smutty business. This book was an utter delight from start to finish* and I need to get to reading Stein's backlist ASAP! Highly recommend!
* except for the requisite third-act breakup, which I hate in ALL romance books.
I received an Advance Reader Copy from the publisher, via NetGalley. This in no way impacted on my view.
In When Grumpy Met Sunshine, the lovely ghostwriter Mabel Willicker has just met her match in super negative footballer Alfie Harding. When his agent tells him he needs to write a tell-all memoir, Alfie is adamant he will not do it. Every ghostwriter who has been sent to him has run away with their tails between their legs, but Mabel is made of harder stuff. Yes, she may be sweet, and like a permanent ray of sunshine, but she knows just how to get under Alfie's skin, and isn't about to give up on him. But Alfie is more than just his grumpy persona, and if anyone can discover the real man, it's Mabel.
I just loved this book! Like just about everyone, I adore the grumpy/sunshine trope, and Alfie and Mabel embodied that perfectly! Alfie was a retired footballer, who had been at the top of his game, but with a reputation for being a hothead, both on and off the pitch. He's a private man, so the idea of telling his story, in all its gory detail, is horrific. Because of this, he's brash and abrasive when he meets Mabel, but she knows that working with Alfie, as hard as it'll be, will be her big shot. Mabel wants more than to be a ghostwriter, but until she makes her break, this is the perfect job for her. Somehow, she can bring out the best in Alfie, and though they have to pretend to be a couple, they form a true friendship first. It was great to see that Alfie was a softy at heart, and he fell for Mabel, hard. A truly great book!
I did DNF however I read enough to have an opinion. I want to start by saying I started this as an ebook but couldn't get into it so I tried it as an audiobook. Honestly, there is nothing the narrator could have done to save this book.
There's is nothing that makes giggle like a school girl like great banter. In this, the banter gives me the ick. To add more damage to injury it was too wordy. The inner dialogue did leave me confused at times.
"๐๐ต'๐ด ๐ฃ๐ฆ๐ต๐ต๐ฆ๐ณ ๐ต๐ฐ ๐ฃ๐ฆ ๐ค๐ฐ๐ฎ๐ฑ๐ญ๐ฆ๐ต๐ฆ๐ญ๐บ ๐บ๐ฐ๐ถ, ๐ต๐ฐ ๐ฅ๐ข๐ณ๐ฆ ๐ข๐ฏ๐ฅ ๐ณ๐ช๐ด๐ฌ ๐ข๐ฏ๐ฅ ๐ต๐ข๐ฌ๐ฆ ๐ต๐ฉ๐ฐ๐ด๐ฆ ๐ค๐ฉ๐ข๐ฏ๐ค๐ฆ๐ด, ๐ต๐ฉ๐ฆ๐ฏ ๐ต๐ฐ ๐ฅ๐ธ๐ฆ๐ญ๐ญ ๐ช๐ฏ ๐ฅ๐ข๐ณ๐ฌ๐ฏ๐ฆ๐ด๐ด. ๐๐ฐ ๐ฐ๐ฏ ๐ฎ๐บ ๐ญ๐ฐ๐ท๐ฆ ๐ข๐ฏ๐ฅ ๐ญ๐ช๐ท๐ฆ ๐บ๐ฐ๐ถ๐ณ ๐ฃ๐ฆ๐ด๐ต ๐ญ๐ช๐ง๐ฆ. ๐๐ฆ๐ต ๐ช๐ต ๐ฃ๐ฆ ๐ฃ๐ฆ๐ข๐ถ๐ต๐ช๐ง๐ถ๐ญ, ๐ญ๐ฆ๐ต ๐ช๐ต ๐ฃ๐ฆ ๐จ๐ญ๐ฐ๐ณ๐ช๐ฐ๐ถ๐ด, ๐ญ๐ฆ๐ต ๐ช๐ต ๐ฃ๐ฆ ๐ธ๐ช๐ต๐ฉ ๐ด๐ฐ๐ฎ๐ฆ๐ฐ๐ฏ๐ฆ ๐ธ๐ฉ๐ฐ'๐ด ๐ข๐ญ๐ญ ๐ต๐ฉ๐ฆ ๐จ๐ฐ๐ฐ๐ฅ ๐ต๐ฉ๐ช๐ฏ๐จ๐ด ๐ต๐ฉ๐ข๐ต ๐บ๐ฐ๐ถ ๐ฅ๐ฆ๐ด๐ฆ๐ณ๐ท๐ฆ. ๐ ๐ฐ๐ถ ๐ฌ๐ฏ๐ฐ๐ธ ๐ต๐ฉ๐ข๐ต ๐บ๐ฐ๐ถ ๐ฅ๐ฆ๐ด๐ฆ๐ณ๐ท๐ฆ ๐ต๐ฉ๐ฆ๐ฎ. ๐๐ฐ๐ฏ'๐ต ๐ฆ๐ท๐ฆ๐ณ ๐ต๐ฆ๐ญ๐ญ ๐ฎ๐ฆ ๐ฐ๐ต๐ฉ๐ฆ๐ณ๐ธ๐ช๐ด๐ฆ."
So, like other books recently, it has taken me a bit to finish this book... not because it was a bad book, but because of life circumstances and such. Things have not been kind the last 2 weeks.
That being said, I finally finished this ARC last night, and overall, I did really like it! I always love a good plus sized MC who gets her happy ending! And our MMC is absolutely just Roy Kent from Ted Lasso and I loved that so much!
And while it was definitely on the spicier said, there was a point where I was internally screaming JUST HAVE SEX ALREADY! ๐
Oh... and EFFING TALK TO EACH OTHER!
That is all LOL
Thank you to @stmartinspress and @netgalley for the advanced copy in exchange for this review!
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This book has very confusing start. It's hard to grasp who the characters are because the writing is choppy and almost hyper. She starts by getting mortally offended by an insult that he never even said. I feel like I'm reading the internal dialogue of a self obsessed crazy person. And why are they making it our like the guy is mentally handicapped?
I didn't like how judging the author is about body positivity. It comes across as fat-shaming and from the description the character isn't even above regular weight.
Annnnd she just wrote the words "it was like an angel had farted". This does not deserve publication.
The MMC in this book is grumpy and misunderstood in a way that directly evoked Roy Kent from Ted Lasso vibes. The FMC on the other hand is a bubbly sunny person. Both of them have demons that they keep in check but what if they are forced to work together ? Can they come together and create something good? For all those booklovers out there, the FMC is a writer, a ghostwriter tasked with helping the MMC write a memoir. This was fun to read, a light hand was used to touch on the underlying problems that both main characters had and experiences that had shaped their grumpy and sunny personas.
This is incredibly silly (and I mean that in the best way); the grumpy-sunshine dynamic works well here in that Alfie is not a toxic alpha-male and Milly is not a vapid doormat. Their chemistry is solidโthough the plot points propelling their relationship forward are tenuousโand I found myself rooting for them. Also, the Ted Lasso homage is a fun bonus.