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Similar to Lily Manning, this was my first reverse harem read, so I wasn't sure what to expect. Georgia is a confident and smart woman who has life goals. She goes overseas on a work trip but plans to mix it with some pleasure, and boy does she! She meets three brothers who treat her like a god, and each worships her in their own way. Georgia finds herself conflicted at the end of her work trip and has to make a decision.
I enjoyed this book and read it in one sitting. There was a small plot line, but the main focus was on how each brother worshipped her, so it was a bit unrealistic. The scenes were descript and arousing, but they were constant, and I found myself wanting Georgia to have an actual date experience with the brothers. I enjoyed the characters, but I fell in love with Knox. His dominating personality won me over. Finn was the fun-loving brother, and Lachlan was the sensitive one. Lachlan was my least favorite character as he seemed depressed and whiny.
Throughout the book, I found several grammatical errors and some things just didn't make sense, such as in chapter 9. There are a couple of instances where Georgia worries about her nail polish. These seem to come out of nowhere and have no context to the story at that time in the chapter. If you're looking for a quick read that gives you all the lustful feels, this book is for you.
Thank you NetGalley and Innes Field LLC for giving me access to this book for an honest review.
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This was fun! Nothing but spice and why choose, but if that’s all you’re after then this book will do! The story follows an American tourist who rocks up in Ireland and has insta-lust with 3 Irish brothers.
1 star deducted because the idea of sleeping with siblings at the same time is low-key icky.
I enjoyed the story but everything seemed so rushed and there wasn’t any conflict or anything they had to overcome. I loved the characters and the author did a great job of developing their personalities. Only thing that didn’t really add was Lachlan being described as somewhat of a recluse who really wanted a woman to love who would love him back, but then he so willingly shared a woman he was into more than he’d ever had before. Overall the story is good and the passion was captivating.
This one needs to come with some warnings. This is a mmmf insta-lust romance but the mmm are brothers. This may weird people out. There were a number of errors in the book that could use a good editor and there is a scene towards the end that broke way to many hygiene rules, gross. I think this one could be fleshed out into a better story but ultimately it was just a wallpaper erotica.
This book was amazing I read the whole book in one day . I know any dark romance lover would definitely love this book. If you like reverse haram and super spicy scenes this is definitely a must read.I love bonded love books and the connection each character created with each other and separately was beautiful. I loved the ending and can’t wait to read killains story.
Georgia is a hardworking accountant with a mind for maths. She's worked hard to get where she is today, and on a trip to handle an account, she meets three men who sweep her off her feet... But the clock is ticking; their days are numbered... Or are they?
This was the first ever NetGalley request I'd been approved for and I'll forever be grateful for this opportunity but as much as I wanted to LOVE this book... I just couldn't.
The writing felt awkward, the information we did get about the main characters' backgrounds felt undeserved and from out of left field, and honestly, quite a bit of this book was repetitive.
The premise of the story was there and is a good one, and the smut was well described and well placed.
The leading lady came off a little obnoxious in the beginning to me personally, however it was nice to see a hardworking woman at the front of a story! She'd given up countless holidays to succeed in her career and had a genuine love for what she did, but while this was amazing to see in a leading lady, it was totally mute by the end of the story.
As for the men, I found that they were just copy-pasted versions of each other, and it was hard to tell who was who when they were all together. Maybe this was a me issue? On top of this, they were AGGRESSIVELY mysterious, to a point where they didn't feel mysterious at all.
I really loved a few lines; some of them were really witty and funny, but they were overshadowed by the rest of the lines that felt way too forced...
This was the author's first RH and I have a lot of faith that as they continue to write them, they'll get better and better! She definitely has a good imagination for the storyline itself. We all start somewhere, and I'm excited to read what they come up with next!
Overall this was a 2/5 ☆ for me
Josie x
Overall not bad. The book felt kind of rushed. I feel like there should have been more of the relationship building between everyone, as well as more character building. I did enjoy the group scenes. I just feel like there was a lot missing from the book. There was just so much that could have been expanded upon. The building plans, her life in Scotland, their romantic relationships and how they develop. There was so much more that should have been in the book, in my opinion.
This book just wasn’t for me. I love a good smut book, reverse harem, who doesn’t love the idea of 3 hot men devouring one women but the actual story was so implausible, it sent me on the ick factor from the beginning and I couldn’t get off it.
Being jet lagged and needing a drink when you realise your rented accommodation has no furniture I get. Meeting hot strangers in a bar I get. Wanting to get off with them when dancing I get. But how did he get his hands down her jeans while on a dance floor and then somehow walk her out to the dark alley while he was still getting her off to strip her, then and there, while his brother then joined in.
To send her on her merry way where she was so tired walking home she had to grip on to the wall, realise she was locked out of her place and get help from the landlord who happened to be the 3rd brother who was offering her his bed, reciting his deep secret poetry and making her a cup of tea like we British drink because she had some Scottish historical DNA.
It just didn’t work for me and as an English person having lived in Scotland for most of my life it just read as Scottish characters written by an American, sorry.
Georgia Presley Henry is a shy, nerdy accountant who is sent to Edinburgh, Scotland for a ten-day business trip. She isn't expecting too much out of this venture until she walks into The King's Head Pub where she meets not one, not two, but three incredibly attractive brothers. Just her luck because they all have eyes for...her. 😉
Knox. Broody. Protective.
Finn. Joyous. Infatuated.
Lachlan. Tender. Devoted.
In this short reverse harem get to know the tragic backstory of three brothers and how each of them fit into a unique piece of Georgia's heart. Will she be able to leave them in 10 days and head back to Texas? Or has she fallen head over heels?
➡️If you enjoy why choose, insta-lust, Scottish men, multiple POV, super spice, reverse harem, and he fell first and harder...this is the book for you!
Why it missed the mark for me: I have discovered that I need more of a build up before the spice starts... insta-lust may not be for me. Further, the use of sarcasm in the beginning of the book held me back from getting into the story/taking the story line seriously. Maybe I wasn't supposed to? But I think I was. The author also used some phrases too many times, which is a pet peeve of mine. In the end, it was a very spicy book, but it was pretty surface level as a whole. However, I did start to invest in the brothers and would love more backstory on them!
I have to say this story wasnt really for me. I love reading a bit of smut, but normally it is entwined within the story. This felt like smut only with very little plot and very limited character development. I am sorry that it wasnt my thing but thank you for allowing me to read and review.
This is a super good book I Fell in love with the three men. Such a good reverse harem. They each loved her so different and was able to give her everything she needed and wanted. They all had such a good life story that helped you understand why they had so many walls built around their hearts, I would have to say out of Knox, Finn and Lachlan. Lachlan had my heart he was the sweetest man even from the moment he met her. I truly loved this book it gave me all the feels i cannot wait for the next book. I have got to know what is going on with Killian and Darcie.
This was an intense, insta-love, reverse harem and an enjoyable read. I felt that some scenes were rushed and would love to have seen them drawn out even further. Each character had different personalities and qualities and it was impossible to pick a favourite brother!
Ilość Jezusowania przekroczyła wszelką skalę 😬
Książki spod znaku why choose pochłaniam bez większego zastanowienia - widzę i biorę. W przypadku tej powieści żałuję mojej zachłanności. Nigdy nie mam nic przeciwko 90% smuta i 10% fabuły jeśli książka jest dobrze napisana lub osoba autorka ma świetny styl pisania.
Zgadnijcie co.
Niczego takiego tu nie było.
W całej budowie książka ledwo ociera się o rzecz poprawną - ile jednak można jezusować i do tego jeszcze przepraszać Jezusa, że się go woła w trakcie seksu (nie żartuje)... "Making her theirs" ma zabójcze tempo od momentu, w którym Georgia poznaje trójkę seksownych braci. Szybkie jest, dosłownie, wszystko. Serio, o czym nie pomyślicie, to dzieje się w przeciągu kilku chwil. I jak czasem strasznie potrzebuję fast burn, tak tutaj wszystko jest nieprzyjemnie fast foodowe, nie ma żadnej chwili na rozpracowanie uczuć, charakterów, czegokolwiek.
Cóż, strasznie się rozczarowałam, ale dziękuję NetGalley za egzemplarz do recenzji 😊
🌟received as an e-Arc🌟
Thank you Netgalley
"I can't believe it took me so long to find my home."
Oh to find love, peace and home not just in one person but three, it is like all the riches in the world. For an author's first RH sotry, this is quite okay, pure er0tica but there is a heart to the story. I love Lachlan so much, being an emotional person that I am, i hope i get to find my peace and safety too.
‼️One thing I dis not like that I almost DNF it and only pusged thru cause it is only a few pages left to their happily ever after. Pls author, don't do the A$$ to Vag to Mouth. Agh. Whyyyy. Hello, UTI and bacterias/ecoli. Pls bear safety even in fiction.
I read the arc of this book from NetGalley.
This is erotica. Was good for what it was, but I found the writing to be cringey at times.
Still a 3 star read though, because it is what it is.
This was a short novella that I absolutely devoured. The fmc goes to ireland for a job when she stumbles across multiple men who give her sensations she has never felt with anyone else. The men are all brothers and it is insta love/lust. The spice was so delicious in this book and I wish it was longer!
I wanted to love this book. I really did.. but it was more like 3.5 stars for me. I just needed a bit more from the characters. I mean, don’t get me wrong, I loved the men. Wish they were real lol. But something about this book fell a little flat to me.
This book deserves 5 star reviews. It was an amazing read and is worth the time. Lily does amazing work and I can not wait to read more of her books.
This book was fantastic. Every chapter was packed full of romance and love. Leaps and desire on every page. My only complaint is it wasn’t longer.
Thank you to NetGalley and Innes Field LLC for allowing me to read and review my first book!
Making Her Theirs was a fun, quick, and spicy read set in Scotland. The trope is a reverse harem which isn’t always my cup of tea, but I still enjoyed reading it!
Positives:
- Hot brothers set in Scotland
- Great steamy scenes
- Conclusive ending
Negatives:
- I was hoping for more character development and storyline before the characters got together. They literally met at a bar and hardly said a few words before booking up.
- The plot was barely there for me. There wasn’t much though in her decision at the end of the story.
If you are looking for a short and steamy RH read this one fits the bill!