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well.. TO GAZE UPON WICKED GODS, with its breathtaking cover and intriguing synopsis, became the first book i'm disappointed in this year, unfortunately.

not only did it got unbearably repetitive, with repeated phrases/descriptions, but it also suffered the case of "too much telling, not showing". it has such an interesting idea too, a pity it was not executed well. at the end of the day, i could not care less for these characters (that lack of depth) moreover the story.

and look, i'm not sure what the author intended while writing this, but the colonizer romance was not it. i'm out of words.. like i'm not sure how u want me to root for these two? i'm sorry but it's uncomfortable. this book read like an antithetical to anticolonialism.

perhaps the sequel will be better? one can hope.

a big thank you to Molly X. Chang and the team for providing an arc!

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A new story of the future of a world like ours, steeped in colonization and environmental domination mingled with a world with magic and a girl’s journey to find her place in the fight against Rome. By the end of the book I was looking forward to the next part of the story but it was a bit of slow start in this novel.

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What a cool power to have, as an assassin it’s perfect! The sci-fi of the rip in the realm/world/space was super cool especially with the difference of tech. Very much reminded me of Avatar.
I wish we had two different made up worlds instead of Rome being what I’m guessing is ours?
I can’t wait to further read into this world with the different powers and kingdom




Trying to tie in enemy to lovers here I didn’t enjoy any angst between them because he literally took her into slavery & then wanted to ‘protect’ her mehhh not for me.

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I'm going to preface this with the fact that I am still looking forward to book two.

That being said, this fell flat for me. I was immediately hooked by the cover and RAN to netgalley to request a copy (thank you!). I think this world and story has major potential for book two and three.

My biggest gripe was the amount of similies used right out the gate. I refuse to read Shatter Me for this same reason. It's just not my cup of tea. The other issue is the names of the two worlds, we made one up - why not the other!? Like pick literally fake name for Rome other than Rome. On the world's issue, I struggled hard to realize that Rome was in fact OUR world and Pangu was its own.

I'm intrigued by the magic system, our FMC's power is death. I can't wait to learn more about that and maybe get some more about how she became an assassin. The book skips over that and the lack of assassin training makes it unbelievable.

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Thank you NetGalley and Del Rey for allowing me to read an ARC of To Gaze Upon Wicked Gods.
Summary: Ruying is a girl blessed with the gifts of Death in an occupied territory. She hides her gift, longing to protect her family, but when a chance encounter puts her in the direct path of an enemy prince, she has to take charge of her own destiny. Will she give up her soul and life to protect her family and betray her nation, or will she take a stand against those who seek to destroy her?

Review: I gave this book 4 stars because it did draw me in and I felt connected to these characters, although I also had some problems with the book. First and foremost, the good things: the writing style, depictions of desperation, and the overall concept of the book. Molly X. Chang drew me in with her writing style and depictions of the worlds involved in the story. I wanted her to tell me more, and for me, that is a good sign. If I find a writer’s world building to be weak, I end up not finishing the book or I immediately forget what I’ve read. This is not the case here. The drawback is that I did want more, which is what I am hoping will be appeased in the next book. I found that Ruying’s desperation to help her family and save herself from Romans was also characterized very well. Each character has their own motives and it gets a little confusing, but Ruying stays constant in her need for their safety. Her desperation to steal, betray, and even kill for their safety, is what makes her an interesting character. I also enjoyed the overall concept of the book itself. A girl blessed by Death was what drew me in, and I stuck around because of the lore and the worldbuilding.
That being said, I did not find Ruying to be strong. I suppose that is what Chang was going for, to make the ending and potential set up of multiple books to show her character growth, but I still found her to be kind of annoying. She falls for another character, but it's not shown why she does, she just does. It's not fully developed. Her rage and her heartbreak over all the bad things that have happened to her, goes nowhere. There are also too many events happening in this book and it should have been edited down to have some things happen in the potential follow-up. Like I said earlier, I wanted more of her writing, but I wanted less of it in one go because it was a little hard to follow.
Overall, I felt that this was a good first book to set-up a series, but if this remained a stand-alone, I would like it less. I see its potential and the anticipation is what makes the less likeable things more forgivable.

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WHERE IS THE NEXT BOOK?! Molly X. Chang. I need it now. Immediately. Hot off the press. I'm not trying to pressure you, but I am trying to pressure you. It was horrendous that you would just leave this book on that monstrous cliffhanger. I'll admit, it's got me hooked.

I absolutely loved Ruying's insane powers. And it was just so incredible to watch her development throughout the book into a (potential) hero. I love that her power is Death because holy shit. If that isn't the coolest power there is, I don't know.

However. I'm not thrilled about the weird colonizer romance situation that's going on here... Ruying... You're telling me that Antony is part of the royal family that is FEEDING YOUR PEOPLE DRUGS in order to weaken your country so they can conquer your world and you just said "HE'S CUTE"??? If this series is going to be anything higher than a 3.5 for me, I need this redemption arc for Ruying to go crazy. I'm definitely going to hold out hope that Chang redeems Ruying because I really want this series to be a top star.

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Thank you for the pleasure of getting to read this arc! I really enjoyed this book however there were a few spots that left me wanting more and I don’t feel delivered the way I wish it had…however I feel like it set up nicely for the next books to follow and improve upon and I’m excited to read those and see where it goes.

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This debut is brilliant. The writing sparkles with a new voice that I can’t wait to read more from. The world-building is immersive, and perfect for a reader who enjoys escapism via fantasy.

A girl is blessed by Death, given the power to save the world, or end it.

Each character stands apart, and even after finishing the book, I’m still considering which is my favorite. Ruying, who says she would condemn the world to save those she loves? Baihu, who if you know, you know? Or this enemy prince that has sweet words that may be deceitful?

I know for sure I’ll be ordering a physical copy and immediately pre-ordering the sequel when it comes available. This is a debut to watch.

The line ‘heroes die, cowards live,’ has been on a repeat in my head for hours.

Thank you for the opportunity to read!

As stated by the publisher preferences, I will be posting my reviews of this book at the beginning of April (roughly two weeks before the pub date) and will be posting on tiktok (@bookwad__), instagram (@bookwad__) and Goodreads (bookwad).

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Huge thanks to Netgalley and Del Rey for approving my request to read this! I loved it so much and I’m so excited for the sequel. Definitely some heavy events/themes in this book, but they’re important and so relevant with real-life.

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3 stars. Ambitious and ultimately setting up what is sure to be a very compelling trilogy, To Gaze Upon Wicked Gods is a debut novel that leaves the reader off an exciting note that is hampered by prose and worldbuilding in need of refinement.

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Thank you to NetGalley and Random House Publishing Group for providing me with this eARC in exchange for an honest review.

Unfortunately, To Gaze Upon Wicked Gods fell flat for me in a number of disappointing ways.
To start, I didn’t understand why the author chose Rome as the colonizing force, but without any of the classic Roman qualities we might attribute to it. Instead, the book used Rome and Romans, but placed them in a modern-day society with machine guns and fighter jets, while still making references to the classic Roman gods. If the Er-Lang Empire was fictionalized, then why use a real empire as the antagonist? This really broke the immersion for me.

Following this, I didn’t appreciate or enjoy the forced romance between Antony and Ruying. I wasn’t sure if the purpose of this romance was to showcase a sort of Stockholm syndrome, and we as readers were supposed to recognize that it was only because no one had shown Ruying that kind of care and intention before… But even if the intent was to make this statement, it didn’t quite hit this mark. So, in reality, it fell in the lurch of not being believable and feeling icky as a reader. The random one chapter of Antony POV was also a strange decision, and I’m not sure if it was supposed to convince us that his feelings were genuine. But even so, if you need a POV chapter to convince us of this, then it means the books hasn’t done its part leading up to that point—it felt heavy-handed.

While I enjoyed the prose and historical parallels, I found the world building really clunky and it had a lot of info dumping through repetitive introspection. It was often telling us, as readers, how to feel, instead of letting us naturally experience the story and draw our own conclusion. Even the dialogue felt like heavy handed monologues.

I was fortunate to receive an eARC, and I hope they will proofread it again to catch grammatical errors and typos before it’s published. There’s also a part at the end where it says a character’s name before it’s supposed to be revealed in a plot twist/shocking revelation!

Overall, this book had such high potential and I was eager for another asia-inspired epic fantasy. Unfortunately it missed the mark for me in critical ways and I won’t be continuing with the series.

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I wanted to give this book a real fighting chance before I bowed out, but To Gaze Upon Wicked Gods is, decisively, not for me.

I could not survive Ruying's melodramatic and incredibly repetitive tellings. I was even more unconfortable with some questionable choices made in the narrative as a whole, and by Ruying in her relationship with Antony. If, by some inconceivable reasons, she was meant to come off as sympathetic but deeply flawed, or morally grey, in the author's words, I did not see them. I was too busy being drowned in the words soup.

As a person of Asian descent, it puzzled me that this book is being marketed as a romance at all.

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This was a great debut and a great start to a new series that I am so excited to eventually continue. I know there is chatter that Illumicrate will be featuring this novel this year and I am so looking forward to having an edition of this novel in my hands. I loved the characters and the way the world works is just so fun an interesting.

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I really, really wanted to love this. The cover was stunning and I was looking forward to the book.

The pacing was off, it dragged in some spots and was so quick and hard to follow in others. The romance was not believable, and the magic system was unnecessarily complicated.

Overall, I think there is a lot of promise here and I would love to read more by Molly Chang- I just didn't enjoy this particular book.

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This was one of my most anticipated reads of 2024 and I'm so excited to say that it lived up to my expectations. I loved the world building and the death versus life aspects. The characters felt well thought out with room to go as the series continues. I will say at times the YA is strong but I don't fault the writing as it *is* a YA book - I'm just not the target demographic. It didn't hinder my enjoyment at all, but it might not be for everyone. This was such a strong debut and I can't wait to see with what the author does next.

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I was really excited to read this story, especially for the folklore and after reading the little intro about her granddad. However, the writing did not meet my expectations. I felt that there was too much description of Rome bad, look at how terrible things are. I felt like the first half of the book could have been condensed because there was just too much description and not enough actual story.

I really wanted to know more about Ruying's sister and her activities. I wanted to know more on various side characters activities. I felt like Ruying was so frustrating and I understand it is probably due to culture and how ingrained things are, but I wanted her story growth to be so much more. Also, I hate the "love story" here or whatever is going on. I feel like if she's with one guy she wants him, but around her childhood friend she also may want him? The world is falling apart girl, and both guys are bad, and not even in a fun way.

What I do love: The whole story idea with the powers is intriguing. The folklore parts are good. The idea that there is a hole in the sky like a portal, the Romans come through. I love that visual. The halfway point to the end is where the story really takes off and gets me excited. Will I read the next one? Yes, the ideas are so good the execution could just be better. There have been times where I was like :the first book is meh, but I was hooked after the second one." So, I am hoping this is one of those times, too.

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Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for providing this eARC in exchange for an honest review.

To Gaze Upon Wicked Gods is about Ruying, a girl from the Chinese-fantasy-inspired Er-lang Empire which has recently been colonized by the evil, science-wielding "Roman Empire" from another world. As a magic-user or "xianling," Ruying has the unique ability to drain people's life force with a touch, making her the perfect assassin and catching the attention of the Roman prince Antony. I found To Gaze Upon Wicked Gods severely lacking in many departments. I'm usually against the prescriptive writing advice "show don't tell," but good lord, this book Tells nonstop, to its great detriment. It makes for highly tedious exposition as Ruying tells the audience over and over that Rome is bad and has done bad things and is evil. I found the initial conflict—Ruying's struggle to supply/wean her opium-addict sister Meiya and keep her revolutionary activities a secret—far more interesting than the rest of the plot. I think there are really interesting elements and perhaps through editing these will become more apparent.

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So disappointed. I don’t understand the hype around these colonizer x colonized romances. They just strike me the wrong way, so I can’t support the relationship due to the stark imbalance between them. The book itself has such good worldbuilding and a commendable portrayal of gray morals, But all of the good aspects are overshadowed by the principle of the relationship.

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I cannot tell you how much I wanted to love this book. The description painted such a beautiful picture of Chinese folklore and intriguing fantastical magic that I couldn't wait to dive into this conflict filled world. And when I first started to read, Molly Chang's personal author's note about her inspiration's origin for TGUWG made me that much more anticipatory to read this book that promised to combine my loves for Asian mythology/folklore with the fight against the modern day struggles of discrimination and animosity that we see in today's world.

I was immediately fascinated and drawn in by the opening of the novel. Ruying, though she has the gods given power of harnessing Death to take the lives of others, can only try to keep herself, her sister, and her grandmother alive in her home that has been colonized and taken over by outsiders. I appreciated that I was quickly able to understand the magic system in the book yet it didn't feel lacking or too simple.

But after this introductory period, I thought that the conflict between the Er-Lang Empire and the Roman colonizers was odd. Not because of the premise of the invasion and colonization itself but because the Romans are described as having modern day technology and weapons with modern day concerns. I totally understand the comparison that was trying to be made between historical conquerors and colonizers with current issues, however this aspect of the book fell a bit flat for me. I feel that the same point could have been made without leaning so much on the aspect of Rome, or instead by not placing Rome and the Roman people in today's time period. Additionally, I was a bit confused by the portal that connects the worlds. It seemed very glossed over which made the Roman society feel even less like the super hi-tech type of people they're supposed to be.

Throughout the book, one aspect that I did really like was the underlying problem of the Roman people getting the Er-Lang people addicted to opian. That secondary storyline felt very true to history without being an in-your-face allusion.

However, getting to the aspects of the novel that I liked the least: the main character and the romance. Starting with Ruying, I was so excited for a strong and powerful female main character to be the lead in this novel. In my opinion, she wasn't. And if she wasn't supposed to be, because not all main characters need to save the world to be cheered on, I think that Ruying still would've been unenjoyable to read. It wasn't even that I wouldn't have liked Ruying if she was morally-grey, I love a good morally-grey character! It's that it felt like Ruying had no morals other than the ones that other people told her to have. Which were, leading into the second aspect of the book that I didn't like, often the morals(?) of Prince Antony, Roman prince and Ruying's slowburn love interest. I just could not get behind their relationship. I didn't really get any hint that Antony actually meant well for the Er-Lang people but Ruying just went along with it, killing dozens of people in the sheer hope that, if and when Antony were to become king, he might be a bit nicer to them. It also bothered me that the entire story was from Ruying's POV except for one chapter from Antony's POV (in the middle of their romance). This look into Antony's perspective did give me a bit of a better idea as to why he was falling for her, but I could find no other reasons for her to be falling for him other than a hypocritical love for the first man that showed any interest in her. Though there was an occasional romance trope to move their relationship along, nothing about their relationship was doing it for me.

To wrap up, I thought this book had a lot of potential to be one of my favorites ever but it missed the mark in some ways that were too important for me to ignore. In addition to what I've already said, I would've loved to see some other character's perspectives like Ruying's sister Meiya (honestly, I think I would've loved if this whole story was Meiya's story), maybe Baihu, etc. After reading this book I would probably read a second book in this series to see if the characters grow at all, however I would definitely be reading with some skepticism.

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So,, the ending really made up for the story in my opinion. How did a story starting with the character hating her oppressors turn into,, basically falling in love with a main one.. It felt hypocritical? You spend the beginning making the main character shame her friend, the one she believes to have betrayed them,, and then does the same thing. She says she’s aware of her actions being bad,, but does them? Wack is all I’ll say about that!

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