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First off, I love Falon Ballard’s books, but this one wasn’t quite as strong as her other work. Right on Cue is a fun and light rom com read that you will get through quickly. Unfortunately, a couple of weaker points made it slightly less enjoyable for me. The dialogue was a little saccharine and cringey at times. The use of a miscommunication trope twice in the book was a little much. I will say certain scenes were quite steamy and I enjoyed those. Overall it was a quick fairly enjoyable read, but this one is a miss for me, but any book by Falon Ballard is a must read for me!

Thank you to G.P. Putnam & Sons and NetGalley for an advanced copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.

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RIGHT ON CUE by Falon Ballard is a Hollywood enemies-to-lovers full of metareferential trope tributes.

I kind of love when characters are like "if this were a movie" or "if we were in a book". Like, at one point she says she's waiting for the other shoe to drop in their relationship, literally waiting for the third act breakup (it's coming for you, girl!) or that she'll never look at the only one bed trope on the same way or that she releases the breath she was fully aware she was holding. (Although surely the romcom screenwriter should have know upfront the futility of "let's get it out of our system" lol.)

One thing I noticed and thought was great, even if it is totally unrealistic, is that she was eating cinnamon rolls for breakfast all the time with absolutely no body shame or weight anxiety. Yes please!

There is miscommunication that drives the breakup, which I know is not everyone's favorite, even if real people do it all the time!! But there's also caretaking and overcoming insecurities and a cute round of the Newlyweds Game and overall it's just a lot of fun!

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I adored this book from start to finish. It seems Hollywood romance novels are all the rage right now (I can think of 5 that came out recently alone), and I should be tired of the costar tropes by now, but Falon Ballard blew me away. This is sweet, steamy (the on-camera sex scene had me squealing I tell you), and the perfect one-sitting read for anyone wishing to date a Marvel hunk.

Was it revolutionary? No, not really. But I loved each moment. Harper, you're my new favorite nepo baby. Thank you Putnam and NetGalley for the ARC!

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I absolutely loved this book!! I'm not sure if it was a case of right book right time, but for me it was fantastic! I was a little hesitant going in because I really disliked Ballard's Lease on Love, but I'm so glad I gave this one a chance. I would recommend this to anyone looking for a lighthearted read.


Thanks to Putnam Books via NetGalley for allowing me the opportunity to review this book.

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This was an adorable enemies-to-lovers/second-chance romance story that was also a celebrity romance. It had all of the elements of a good rom-com. The writing was entertaining and relatable.

Emmy was an interesting FMC. Being a "Hollywood Nepo Baby", she's not new to the biz, and it shows. She's a consummate professional who will do what it takes to get the movie made. Except... When it comes to Grayson.

Grayson was a worthy MMC. He was quick to admit his fault and learn from his mistakes, and he challenged Emmy like no one else did. And isn't that what every girl is looking for?

The chemistry between these two, on-screen and off-screen was written so well. Seeing their push and pull was incredibly entertaining. It was also pretty funny to see how they weren't fooling anyone else, and their feelings were obvious to everyone but them.

My least favorite trope is the miscommunication trope and from what I'd read up until around ~70% of the story, it did seem like Grayson and Emmy had grown out of that possibility and would handle their budding romance like mature adults. But, alas, What I didn't enjoy was her reasoning for the third-act breakup. It was as if all of her character growth from the rest of the story just vanished in one fell swoop. And it is for that reason that I'm giving this story 3 ⭐️

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This book was so cute! Emmy Harper, a screenwriter who hasn’t acted in years, takes the role of her own character after castings prove to be a miss. The man who caused her to take a step back from acting gets casted, last minute, as her starring opposite.

I loved all the witty banter between Emmy and Grayson. The two made me laugh and kick my feet giggling.

I love a good romance read and while the tropes have been done before the storyline still felt fresh and the two had such good chemistry.

This one was definitely hard to put down. 5/5 ⭐️ 4/5🌶️

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Sounded cute on paper, but in practice it's some petty betty adults who would sabotage their careers to make a point? Okay, that's oversimplified, but still an annoying undercurrent. Mainly I just couldn't be informed that the guy smelled like charcoal and pine one more freaking time.

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I received an advanced copy of this book from NetGalley and the publisher, Putnam. Thank you so much!

Fallon Ballard is an auto-buy author for me, and when I saw Right on Cue was available in NetGalley, I immediately requested it, somehow got approved, squealed with excitement, and prioritized it to the top of my TBR.

In Right on Cue, we follow Emmy Harper, a nepo-baby in Hollywood who tried acting in her teens, immediately gave it up due to being mortified by her costar, Grayson West, and focused on her rom-com script writing career instead.

Fast-forward and now Emmy is in her late 20s, getting ready to try acting again in her newest Rom-Com movie, No Reservations. As an actress and producer on the movie, Emmy is a bit nervous. Also, casting has been struggling to find the perfect male costar for her. Right as she is checking into the hotel, which is also the main location for the film, she literally runs into Grayson West, the man who "ruined" her acting career earlier. And he's been cast as the costar of her new movie.

Her hatred for Grayson overshadows their scenes together where his acting is on par with a dead fish. Finally through some nudging from the director, she realizes her hatred is actually pent up sexual frustration and the two start a "costars with benefits" relationship. And you can guess how it goes from there.

I enjoyed this book, but honestly it is not my favorite of Falon's books. Aspects I enjoyed: Hollywood setting/filming, enemies to lovers, Grayson West, snowing mountain lodge setting, ice-skating scenes. Aspects that didn't work for me: miscommunication (twice) that makes Emmy so incredibly immature, Emmy seems underdeveloped as a character compared to some of the other female leads Falon has written, very quick MC orgasms. This is definitely the steamiest of Falon's books so far, and the sex scenes are well-written, but they are pretty insta-hot, and I simply prefer slow burn/anticipation.

I'm so glad that Falon wrote her "heart-book" and I enjoyed this one, but it's not my personal favorite, as I identified more with the MCs in Lease on Love and Just My Type more. However, I highly recommend this if you like the things I've mentioned above, and I will continue to get excited for (and read) Falon's books!

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This was a cute little rom com that I really enjoyed reading. I liked the moments of vulnerability that Grayson had. He seemed like a sweet cinnamon roll of a man, which is at odds for someone with his good looks. He did everything right and forgave Emmy when she made an utter fool of herself and hurt him.
Emmy was cute, but I had issues with her being so rude and insensitive at times to Grayson. She had no trouble cutting him down and I really didn’t love that about her. I also didn’t love the non-communication leading to the third act breakup. I wish she would have tried a little harder, and that he wouldn’t have forgiven her so quickly.
Their chemistry together was great and I loved their moments where they were just with each other without worries about anything else.

I voluntarily read and reviewed an advanced copy of this book. All thoughts and opinions are my own.

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While this book is pretty run of the mill when it comes to Hollywood rom-coms, it was a fun, low angst read that I flew through. My biggest issue was the unnecessary 3rd act breakup. I understood the miscommunication in the past because they were teenagers, but not in the present when they were adults in a loving relationship. Despite that, this book just worked for me and I had fun reading it.

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Falon Ballard writes adorable, heady, sexy romance novels, and Right On Cue is no exception! With a Hollywood backdrop, Emmy and Grayson are sworn enemies from their teenage years, and now due to a series of unfortunate events, they are once again costars; this time in a rom-com. Featuring classic tropes, and a fun twist on “one bed” on set, this book is a romance must-read! Be warned, the third-act breakup feels a bit forced because we know our two stars belong together.

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3.5 stars rounded up.
Right on Cue is a breezy, low-angst romcom from Falon Ballard. Emmy Harper is a succesful romantic comedy screenwriter, from Hollywood royalty, and went the serious route last year writing an Oscar winning screenplay. Now her best friend is directing her latest work, though they are having a hard time finding the leading lady. Everyone involved in the film believes Amy is the best to fill the role, even though her one and only time in front of the camera ten years ago crashed and burned. She agrees and shows up to the cozy small town's inn where they are shooting and discovers they recast the lead with Grayson West, an action star. He also played her love interest in the movie that flopped years ago. She can't stand him. He is not into being in a romcom, and dials it in on their scenes together. But they have to figure out a way to make this movie work, and along the way things start to heat up.

I enjoyed reading this book and look forward to seeing what Falon Ballard has planned next. Thank you NetGalley and Penguin Group for the ARC for my honest review.

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🎬Right on Cue by Falon Ballard 🎬

Out on Feb 27 2024 by GP Putnam

Emmy Harper has made a career out of screenwriting swoon worthy romantic comedies and living firmly out of the spotlight. Grayson West is a big budget action movie star whose face and name are instantly recognizable worldwide. Emmy and Grayson starred in a poorly received movie as teens, and Emmy never wanted to act again because of it. When her latest romcom can’t find a leading lady, Emmy reluctantly signs on to star. A last minute change in romantic leading man from Emmy’s trusted friend to none other than Grayson West threatens to derail the entire production.

I love celebrity romances, and this one did not disappoint! The banter between Emmy and Grayson was on point, as was the fact that “Grayson Fucking West” seemed incapable of acting opposite Emmy on purpose. The behind the scenes of movie making, red carpet premieres and celebrity gossip was super fun.

The primary conflict in this one felt super avoidable and because of that it was a little frustrating. Miscommunication isn’t my favorite when it’s used to break up an otherwise solid relationship because I have a hard time believing it, as I did here. I did enjoy the reconciliation though!

Recommended if you love: 🎬 celebrity romance 😈 enemies to lovers 🫣 “just one time to cut the tension” 🗣️ miscommunication 🥹 “you’ve completely ruined me” ❤️ showmance to forever love

Thank you to @netgalley and Putnam Books for the advanced copy to read and review. All opinions are my own.

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Right on Cue was absolutely adorable! I love Falon Ballard's writing. It's quick and snappy and this one had a lot of zingers between the two main characters. Little bit of enemies to lovers, some spice thrown in, and characters that are well thought out and have flaws. The entire supporting characters also had development and layers.

It was absolutely a delight to have Emmy be a writer and Greyson to be the leading man who was not what she expected at all. The two of them developed alongside each other with some bumps along the way. Their relationship was a delight to see unfold, even if the 3rd act miscommunication trope happened. Not a huge fan of that particular trope, but it wasn't a make or break moment for me. Ballard's writing is what drew me in after having read Just My Type earlier this year and I adore her writing.

This book is genuinely funny, quippy, and an overall good time. 5 out of 5 stars from me, and I anticipate anything this author writes.

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Once again, Falon Ballard has made me love another one of her books. It starts off quick enough where I was sucked right in and instantly felt like I knew the characters. Ballard writes in the acknowledgments that she loved writing this book and I felt like you could truly tell. It was just so pleasant and enjoyable.

There were so many funny references (like the Kombucha girl) but also some very earnest moments. I loved Grayson and Emmy's growth and their ability as characters to make mistakes, process them, and try to do better.
Their communication (once we got past the "we hate each other" tension) was fantastic. They gave each other space when needed but also found ways to communicate as a couple and let one another express their feelings.

I just really love good communication between characters.

Thank you to Putnam and NetGalley for an eARC in exchange for an honest review!

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When I sat down to start reading this novel, I noticed Falon Ballard’s dedication read along the lines of “This one’s for me.”

I was glad I spotted that dedication for one reason: it immediately told me to adjust my expectations, as this story would likely be self-indulgent and full of Ballard’s favorite romcom elements. And it absolutely was! Of course, that isn’t necessarily a bad thing—if anything, knowing that would be the case allowed me to set aside the expectation that this novel would move me emotionally and, instead, I allowed myself to simply have fun. And what fun it was! It was easy to disappear into the page of this book and absolutely lose track of time. But, with that being said, this book felt different from Ballard’s previous two books. It felt more commercial and lacked the usual depth and charm of her other stories.

As far as plot goes, it was rather standard for an adult romcom and paced well. I found it difficult to set the book down because I wanted to see the next relationship milestone and see the next internal conflict Emmy needed to work through. However, a lot of Emmy and Grayson’s relationship development moments—such as: bonding through simply talking and hanging out—happened off-page, Sure, there were a few scenes where we saw them hang-out instead of enjoying spicy times, but I really wanted to see some of those small bonding moments. It was evident that a lot of development occurred off-page during the PR filming of the Newlywed Game; the two had unbelievable chemistry and knew each other so well, so it was a shame to miss out on learning the little things about both characters.

This is a smaller note, but once the romance plot (the A-plot) took the reins, a lot of other sub-plots fell away. I know Ballard’s writing strengths, so I wished we had a little more check-in with the movie plot and more development of Liz and Emmy’s friendship. Liz was a strong minor character, so it was a shame to see her shunted away on the page.

As far as tropes go, there was one that I had a lot of fun with, and another, well, not so much. I haven’t had much reading exposure to the “Right Person, Wrong Time” trope, and I really enjoyed it! It felt close to enemies-to-lovers, but there was more logic behind it. Although, I do wish there was more exploration of this trope (I wanted Emmy and Grayson to sit down and simply communicate so badly!), but that was hindered by a different trope. The miscommunication trope. I don’t think I’m the first person to say the market is oversaturated with this trope, but I understand why it's widely used. It relies on the internal conflict of the main character and their developmental journey. But I struggled with this trope being used twice in the plot. The first time was understandable, seeing as Emmy and Grayson were teenagers and there is the emotional immaturity aspect to that age. But the second time was less believable. Emmy was an adult and had started to show signs of change, of being willing to communicate with Grayson about her feelings. For her to take a half-listened to conversation at face-value and completely shut Grayson out (third act breakup) was difficult to swallow. Which was made even more difficult to believe when, after two scenes, Grayson forgave Emmy quickly and without her proving herself as having changed. Unfortunately, that third act was the weakest part of the novel.

In the end, I had quite a juxtaposed reading experience. In the moment while reading, I immensely enjoyed the story on the page and never wanted to leave the characters behind. But, when I walked away from the book, I found myself feeling confused and picking at all the inherent weaknesses in the story structure. While I would recommend this to other readers, I would warn them to temper their typical Falon Ballard expectations and simply sit back to enjoy another silly, comforting little romcom.

Thank you to G.P. Putnam's Sons and NetGalley for providing me with an ARC of this book.

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what a lovely read. another win by falon ballard. thanks so much for the arc! i adored grayson (hate the name though...) and was rooting for him throughout the book. i did not like the lack-of-communication trope at the end, i felt like that didn't make much sense based on the characters. overall though, i enjoyed this book - devoured it in just a few hours.

i might regret saying this but i almost wish there were a couple time jumps? i feel like the strength of Emmy's relationship w her dad would have really been helped w a flashback or two. there were just some gaps there that i would have liked to see filled. there were just a few plot holes that really affected the believability of this book.

please please please fix the formatting of these ARCs. it really impacts the reading experience - random typos, multiple words mushed together, random text in red font?? it is SO distracting.

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I’m definitely in my celebrity romance phase. I really enjoyed this story. It was an easy to read and went quickly but without missing a beat. The overall plot was a perfectly balanced with all the rom-com movie troupes you’d want. So it does leave it a bit predictable but this to me is a great sweet simple love story that’ doesn’t over complicate things. Our main characters Emmy and Grayson are a perfect match and they have really great chemistry. I was unsure if I was going to like Grayson because he did come off a bit unlikeable but as the book went on he grew on me. He didn’t have very much of a personality tho. Emmy would compliment him on things about himself and I was left thinking “wait when did he even show that?” As a reader I feel like his character would have benefited from having his POV shared this way there would be no question about who he is as a character. Emmy was a good female lead who you could easily relate to. She didn’t come across whiny or to alpha female. She was pretty normal which I liked the most about her. Nothing was over the top. The supporting characters were nice to have along the way especially her mom. I really loved the relationship between Emmy and her. The story was overall a pretty straightforward and not an overly dramatic romance that I really enjoyed and appreciated reading to help get out of a reading hangover.

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This was my first book by Falon Ballard and I absolutely adored it. Emmy and Grayson are scorching together. This book starts off strong with the enemies to lovers trope and the "enemies" portion lasts for a good while before the "lovers" parts begin. I love how they slowly get to know one another and the spice is on point. What I didn't like was the third act breakup and the "miscommunication" between the two MC's. The ending was perfect though, so I am not "that" mad. :)

Thank you NetGalley and Falon Ballard for the ARC of this book in exchange for an honest review.

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This follows Emmy and Grayson who end up starring alongside each other in a romcom. The issue is she can’t stand him.
I really enjoyed this. I love a celebrity romance and it was so interesting to read about characters that are both celebrities and some of the struggles that they face.
I did feel like there was too much spice. It just felt repetitive and I didn’t need the detail every time. And the miscommunication at the end was so frustrating that I started to not root for the characters.
Overall it was a good time, the setting was in a small town for most of it which I love, and the writing was funny so I think if you like this author and these tropes, you will enjoy it!
Thank you to NetGalley and Penguin Group Putman for the eARC in exchange for an honest review!

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