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The cover and "with all the feels of a Taylor Swift song" in the description lured me in. However, the rest had trouble keeping me. While this was a coming of age romance the reliance on the miscommunication trope was maddening. The pacing was good for having the whole plot take place over 24 during the Senior Sunrise trip. I think the biggest issues is if I was 12 plus years younger this book would have been a hit. But the miscommunication, bratty high school girls, prom and fears of parental divorce just isn't something I can resonate with anymore. That made it hard for me to deal with the miscommunication trope to push through the plot. I think there are readers aged 15-20 that would enjoy this book. A nice Summer, friends to lovers, high school romance.
I requested this because I liked the premise, and I still do. But I also realized that my ten year high school reunion is this year, and young adult books do not always hit the way they used to. Young adult fantasy is easier to get into.
I read parts of this, and am giving feedback for the premise and elements.
I love friends to lovers. It’s one of the best tropes. Best friends to lovers? It’s even better. But this begins as two juniors with a virginity pack, and I didn’t make it much further than that because I am closer to thirty than anything else.
The writing is very good. I think that readers will be sucked into this book without a problem and hope the author has a good release!
This story did character so well. The high schoolers were highly realistic teenagers with big flaws, pettiness, and insecurities—which led to a lot of drama. I especially enjoyed how the theme played out and how all the characters learned that opening up and living their truth felt so much better than keeping their secrets locked inside. The characters' growth and development was really satisfying and the romance was fun too.
This book was so cute!
Thank You Netgalley for providing me with an e-arc in exchange for an honest review<3
I wish you would hooked me in because (duh) its title is a Taylor swift song title and the length made it a perfect palate cleanser ya book. It had so much more depth than I expected and the characters felt real if we can ignore their rich people's behaviour. It takes place over a day and I feel like it provided enough (maybe too much) information to set the scene and move on.
Overall, a great short-ish, palate cleanser, summer, ya romance book that will make you giggle and smile at your preferred reading format.
Recommend to people that are in a slump or in search for easy to understand writing with some plot.
It's also friends-to- lovers so EXTRA cute<3
Sigh...I'm struggling with what to say about I Wish You Would. I got sucked in quickly, which was nice since I've picked up and put down about 4 or 5 books lately because they didn't snag my attention quickly. I read this book quickly, but I had two major complaints. Let's get into the story.
Natalia and Ethan have been best friends for years. They made a pact in freshman year that if they were still virgins by senior year, they would use each other to change that. First of all, I think that's completely idiotic, and if this information had been in the description, I probably would have skipped this book. Why would "just friends" even consider making a pact like that? It makes no sense. And the reasons that Natalia shared were bogus as all get out. Anyway, after junior prom, they had a moment where they considered calling in the pact. But Natalia made a comment that spooked Ethan, and he backed out knowing that he couldn't cross that line with her without changing their relationship. Natalia takes his backing out as rejection. These two could have rendered this book pointless if they'd just had a simple conversation. Honestly, I don't love it when books are centered around one or two big misunderstandings.
Natalia is the student council president, and it's her job to organize these events for the school, like Senior Sunrise. Like the pact that Natalia and Ethan made, I found the entire idea about Senior Sunrise and writing these bravery letters to themselves bogus. I mean this is one of those things that sounds good, but the execution would never work. If this is an event the school holds every year (not the camping part, but the letter-writing part), there's no way that people's personal secrets being shared or exposed has never happened or come up before if they keep them in some jar for a big burning ceremony. It only makes sense to burn those suckers immediately if you're going to have some big event like this. But also, why does a group need to come together for individuals to write a letter like this to themselves? Why isn't this an exercise that each kid could do on their own time in the privacy of their own home and dispose of in whatever way they want to? If you were going to have some bogus tradition like this in the first place, that is.
I could continue describing the events of the book, but honestly, I don't feel the need to do so. Even though I've complained already, one of my biggest two complaints was that there was so much drama. Do you guys know how video content creators have learned to cut clips to different camera angles and to hype the drama so that people's brains are engaged and never bored? Well, I felt like the writing in this book was the equivalent of watching some of those YouTubers who play video games and hype their videos so much that it feels ultra-intense the entire time. One minute Natalia's running away, and Ethan's chasing her. Only for them to have the briefest of conversations that didn't actually move them any closer to a real discussion of their emotions or the secrets they're hiding from each other, only for Ethan to run away from Natalia, and then her to chase him right back. The back and forth was like watching a yo-yo go up and down. That's not even to include the actual events the characters experienced or were struggling with.
The book featured essentially 10 characters (not including the adults). Of those 10, four were LGBTQIA, two adults were sexual predators of some sort, and one of the LGBTQIA identified as a they/them. Guys...this makes no sense whatsoever. The character "identifies" as an individual but uses plural pronouns. I don't understand how we've gotten to this place. One character was a bully. Bullying used to be pushed in every young adult book for a period, but now apparently, the criteria for mainstream publications is to have at least one they/them character. We also had 2 characters that were "persons of color". Unnecessary information if you ask me, except the characters have to experience adversity because of their races. I only mention this because it felt like we were checking all the boxes in a leftist agenda. This felt like the exact narrative that certain individuals want to portray as a typical American experience, but I just don't see this where I live. Maybe it's because the book takes place in California. Again, had I known this was the cast of characters this book would feature, I would have skipped this book.
All of that said, I find it hard to rate this book. On the one hand, I read it quickly. I was interested in finding out what happened to Natalia and Ethan. I wanted to see them resolve their issues. But I also had so many logistical issues with this story...the plot, the characters, the writing method, the drama. All of it was just too much for me to truly enjoy this book. Overall, I guess the best rating I can come up with for I Wish You Would is 3 Stars. Have you read I Wish You Would? What did you think? Let me know!
Thank you to netgalley and the publisher for the opportunity to read this book before release day. I really enjoyed this YA debut novel. It held true to Rachel Lynn Solomon and Chloe Liese vibes.
Such a touching, REAL teen story with all the elevated emotion of first love, misunderstandings and all. Great supporting cast, both other teens and adults.
I love a good young adult book when the emotions are real and not over dramatized. The characters need to be relatable and their angst understandable and heartfelt. The frustrations of their miscommunication would normally work my nerves but with teens it’s perfectly acceptable because you know they just don’t get it but their emotions are high. You get all of that in this book. I really loved it!
First off, I love the cover and title of this book. I was excited to read it! I usually love YA romances, but this book relied way too much on the miscommunication trope. It really took away from my enjoyment of the budding romantic relationship between Ethan and Natalia. The story also felt too slow, even though most of the events take place on a particular day.
Sadly, this book just wasn’t for me, but I’m glad to see so many others are enjoying it! I’m just not a big fan of the constant miscommunication.
Thank you to NetGalley for the ARC!
Oh my god, this book was so cute!! I wasn't even thinking about it as a potential favorite but it completely took me by surprise. I was so invested in this so quick I could not stop reading. I can't begin to describe how much I appreciate wholesome romances that aren't all fluff.
Natalia and Ethan were absolutely everything — together as well as individually. The mood of this story was very reminiscent of To All The Boys I've Loved Before, one of my all-time favorite YAs, so I was already in with the vibes of this. But it was the writing of the protagonists' bond that really sealed the deal for me. Since that first car scene, I thought their avoidance of each other, and the underlying friendship and love was juggled so well. The intricacy of their feelings was so well-written that I was truly invested in their history.
I really loved the plot too! Something about an academic girlie romance that will always speak to me. I thought it was so cute how Ethan was loyal to Natalia without suffocating her, and she knew he was there for her whenever she needed him to be. Natalia's people-pleasing personality was honestly so relatable and I felt for her throughout this book. Watching her navigate trying to avoid conflict while in the depths of it, and handle a situation that was out of her control was such a compelling read; her relationship with her friends and classmates really made the book. I mean, the whole thing is set in one location over the span of like, a day, but at no point do you feel that. That's such a hard thing to do and the author does it so well.
I can't talk enough about how much I appreciate a good YA romance, and reading about two teenagers who don't know what to do with what they're feeling is just so wholesome. You know, when they do figure it out!!
I loved everything about Ethan, Natalia, and this book. It was just what I needed when I picked it up, and a solid four star read (on the upper spectrum!).
I would say this book is a 4.5 leaning towards a 5, which is great for a debut author. The cover is so good and it has a great concept. It is also a friends-to-lovers romance, which is one of my favorite tropes. I read this one in about a day because I couldn't put it down and it sucked me in right from the beginning. I think it did feel a little long towards the middle-end of the book and I wish it had been a tad less angsty, but overall it was very solid and I look forward to reading more from this author!
I WISH YOU WOULD is a charming and emotional debut young adult romance from Eva Des Lauriers. The two main characters are incredibly likable and sympathetic, if flawed in the way that all teenagers are. The "this whole thing could be resolved if they'd just talk" trope is strong here, but it's perfectly believable given the characters' deep friendship, their prom night encounter, and the various situations with their families and with their classmates at Senior Sunrise. The balance between how all the characters treat each other with varying cruelty and compassion rings so true for high school, and I love how the writing leans into big, gushy emotions.
This book is perfect for fans of You’ve reached Sam, and If he has been with me. After their prom they decide to enact their pact that they would be each other’s first if they were single by prom, and after second thoughts and she bolts they end up going their own ways for the summer. After spending a weekend for a senior retreat before graduation, she writes down her fears and places it in a jar to burn, but only after she places her letter in the jar that she realizes she doesn’t want a specific person to know her fear, only when she tries to reclaim her letter it ends with her spreading the letters to the wind. Her and her friend gather all of them but 7 notes. After a lot of self growth they both realize what it is what they really want out of life and that they need to go after what they want and not what people expect of them.
🔹Dual POV
🔹He falls first
DNF, mostly for personal reasons. Book’s got an interesting premise, but it’s a little too heavy on the exposition dumping, especially for a contemporary. I’d like to try and revisit this when I’m in a better headspace.
Call this book Humpty Dumpty because 'I Wish You Would' BROKE me and put me back together again. The perfect second chance YA romance.
The book was a little cliched but you know what? It worked. I did not like how hard it leaned into the miscommunication trope. JUST LET CHARACTERS COMMUNICATE PLEASE!
A fun summery read for the beach. I enjoyed reminiscing about the complications of high school romances through the two main characters in this book. Remember how difficult everything was when you were a teen with a crush? This novel will take you right back to those painfully difficult days. I enjoyed the character development and the setting was especially fun. What a great idea for a senior year memory maker!
I would give this to any 15-18 year old library patron who is looking for a contemporary young adult with a romance centered plot. I felt like it touched a lot of great YA notes - solid side characters and a compelling plot.
This was a cute book. I did feel that it was slow at times. I’m not the biggest fan of miscommunication trope but it did work here since this was a YA novel!
Thank you Macmillan for the eARC!
I really struggled with the pacing and the structure of this book. I tried giving it time to fix itself, but the back and forth POVs really slowed down the pacing.
Also, I feel like we get a lot of reveals within the first few chapters and I think this novel as a whole would benefit from a restructuring.
Not for me, but this could definitely be for someone!!
Thank you Henry Holt and Co. and NetGalley for an arc in exchange for an honest review.