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I’m not sure this book knew what it wanted to be. It was marketed as a romance, but the romance is shallow. Ellie and Prospero are seemingly the main characters in the blurb, yet there are multiple other characters with their own chapters. The marketing of the novel is incredibly misleading, and that hurts its reception.

The idea of being normal and then suddenly finding out you’re <i>not</i> normal is a strong premise that could go any direction. I was excited at the idea of these characters learning to adjust to their new lives, but the novel paired the characters off with love interests immediately, not giving the characters—or even the relationships—time to develop. The use of multiple POVs was interesting at first, but when nearly every character mentioned got a chapter, it ruined any suspense that had been built.

Initially, I found Maggie’s story to be the most compelling. Anyone who rejects a call to action because of genuine (and external) stakes is always going to be the most interesting to me. The others didn’t have a strong enough drive or a sympathetic goal that that I wanted to root for. The relationships were almost entirely physical, so I couldn’t even understand why the couples were so attached. I had no reason to care, both positively or negatively, about any of these characters, and that hadn’t changed by the end.

The story was pretty fast-paced, which I both appreciated and resented. I thought the plot was interesting, at least when it was present, but it wasn’t meaty enough to carry the book. That is where strong characters (or a strong romance, you know, as advertised) could’ve helped, but the focus was too scattered to connect to anyone.

Overall, this book had ambitions that were greater than its page length. I didn’t hate the story, but I feel pretty apathetic about it. Some ideas worked, a lot didn’t. Maybe future books will help strengthen the world and the characters, but as of now, I am not interested in continuing.

<b>ENDING</b> cliffhanger
<b>POV</b> multiple (6) / third person
<b>RATING</b> 2 / 5

Thank you to publisher and NetGalley for a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.

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This was an okay read for me. I liked some parts more than others. Pros: FMC is a small town librarian and single mother, there's a great cast of queer characters an interesting magical parallel universe in need of saving. Where I started to get bored was when Maggie is basically kidnapped and forced to attend a magical college where she is put through a series of tests to see if she might be the one foretold in a prophecy to save this magical town/world.

The middle of the story seemed to drag of me and I was hoping for more action and romance if I'm completely honest. I was also a little confused by the choice of narrators, since one of the female characters sounded like a male narrator. Overall kind of a mixed bag but I would be interested in seeing what happens next in this new series. Many thanks to NetGalley and the publisher for an early digital and audio copy in exchange for my honest review!

Fav quote: 'Never cross a librarian, they catalogue everything.' >> I need this on a t-shirt ASAP!

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Crenshaw is a land of magic where witches dwell, but the land is dying. Witches go to our world to find other witches and bring them home, hoping maybe that this time they have brought the one who will restore magic to the land.
Ellie is a librarian and carer of her elderly aunt. Ellie longs for something exciting ti happen, but even she couldn’t imagine the witch Prospero entering her library and awakening the magic within her. Ellie finds her way to Crenshaw and learns of a prophecy that may involve her.
Remedial Magic will appeal to fans of Nora Roberts’ fantasy romances. A fast paced and quippy fantasy romance.

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I would like to thank the publisher and Netgalley for the opportunity to read this book. All thoughts and opinions are my own and are not swayed by having been given this ARC.

The story was good. The world and the characters needed a little more development. I was side tracked by all the missing little words and editing issues which I hope the publisher catches before this goes to print.

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"The Magicians meets One Last Stop in this brand-new fantasy romance Remedial Magic, about an unassuming librarian who 1) has fallen in love with a powerful witch; 2) has discovered that she is a witch; and 3) must attend magical community college to learn how to save her new world from complete destruction by New York Times bestselling author Melissa Marr!

Ellie loves working in her local library in the small town of Ligonier. She loves baking scones and investigating the mysterious and captivating in her spare time. And there is nothing more mysterious and captivating than the intriguingly beautiful, too properly dressed woman sipping tea in her library who has appeared as if out of nowhere. The pull between them is undeniable, and Ellie is not sure that she wants to resist.

Prospero, a powerful witch from the magical land of Crenshaw, is often accused of being... ruthless in her goals and ambitions. But she is driven to save her dying homeland, and a prophecy tells her that Ellie is the key. Unbeknownst to Ellie, her powers have not yet awakened. But all of that is about to change."

Melissa Marr bringing a Magicians vibe to Tor's new imprint Bramble? Pinch me now!

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Unfortunately this ended in the case of not every book is for every person. I really wanted to like this book but I just couldn't get into it at all.

I appreciate Tor and Netgalley for this e-arc.

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Three people, thrown into a world of magic and forced to go to witch college all the while deal with relationship drama, new powers, and no escape. This story is told in about 6 POVS and the three main characters are Ellie ( a local librarian who lives a cozy life), Maggie (a lawyer who is trying to escape her abusive ex and save her son), and Dan (a guy who went hiking and was dying of cancer but has a second chance at life). Ellie meets Prospero, a mysterious woman who kisses her ( Prospero was going to kill her but decided not to, she was sent to retrieve Ellie because there was a prophecy about Ellie saving the magic world). Maggie gets into a car crash that was planned by her husband that would have killed her and her son but her magic awakened when she saved them both only for her to be whisked away by the handsome Sondre, the headmaster of the witch college, and Dan awakens after a hiking accident at the witch college. Ellie is excited about the prospect of having magic and falling for the beautiful woman who kissed her. Maggie wants nothing more than to escape and go back to her son, but that wont stop her from sleeping with Sondre. Dan refuses to leave, he wants to stay at witch college forever. All the while witches are dying from a mysterious disease and the Ellie has to solve the prophecy. This book was a if you took three drops of paint and put it into water, muddy, all over the place, and lacking any clear distinction and the end product is just something that is unclear and not pretty. Initially I was so excited to read this book but it immediately fell flat, and I kept pushing myself to finish it and the fact that this is the first book in the series is a big no thank you, especially with how this book went. I definitely will not be continuing this series. This book starts off abruptly and is all over the place, the characters all lacked depth and actual interesting aspects to them, the world building felt nonexistent, and cohesive story where? The book doesn't really feel like much is happening and for a book that was advertised as The Magicians meets One Last Stop, it gave neither to me and I enjoyed both of those books. This book was not for me, and unfortunately I should have DNF'ed by the second chapter because it just kept dragging on and I just was left disappointed by the end. This one is not for me and if you like magic school and relationship drama then give it a go, I guess, maybe you'll have a better time with it than I did.

*SPOILER* The ending itself was just not it ( the fact that Maggie is forced into a marriage and to have her and her sons minds warped and she has to obey Sondre while Ellie is forced into marriage and mindwipe by Prospero all the while Dan ( who barely even had any personality or characterization throughout the book and really did NOTHING, seriously go on Dan, give me nothing) gets to just enjoy life. I felt ick, just so much ick,

*Thanks Netgalley and Tor Publishing Group, Bramble for sending me an arc in exchange for an honest review*

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I fully expected to love this book from the description and the fact that I've really enjoyed a lot of Melissa Marr's work. But I didn't. I think the issue was partly the marketing text and vibe of the cover did not match the book at all. So I'd say there's definitely a bit of a marketing mix up here that's probably not entirely on the author. If you're looking at this and thinking it will be a cozy, sapphic fantasy with just enough stakes to make it interesting (like I did) don't read it. If you're looking at this and seeing a fully complicated world with an ensemble cast of flawed, morally ambiguous characters who are not always making good decisions as they try to solve problems out of their control, then you'll have a better chance of enjoying it. My other issue was that there was a major bait-and-switch cliffhanger right at the end that was chock-full of consent issues due to the nature of the magic, and it just left a bad taste in my mouth.

Now to be fair, while I didn't like any of the human characters very much, the hobs were great, and definitely a silver lining. And Melissa Marr does know how to build a world, Crenshaw is definitely well fleshed out, and feels like a real place. It wasn't a place I'd like to live, beyond the fact that it's in danger, the magic itself is sinister and controlling, and I think that's at the root of a lot my issues with the book. I know this is slated to be a series, and I think Marr has the skill to take it somewhere. I'm just not entirely sure if I'll feel like going along at this point.

I've given it 3 stars, because I don't think it's badly written. I think it wasn't marketed appropriately, and that it should probably come with some trigger warnings for both ableism and consent due to the nature of the magic.

I received an ARC from Netgalley, this is an unbiased review.

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A lighter fantasy with a queer romance, Remedial Magic has some really strong things going for it. The world building is immersive and a fun take on witches, though at times delves into more illogical or nonsensical, but it was still pretty fun at times. The pacing takes it time ramping up, but speeds up quickly once the action starts. The ending...is a little much. Overall, this book shouldn't be taken too seriously or analyzed too closely to be enjoyed!

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I wanted to like this book. The premise sounded intriguing and the magical system sounded awesome, but I ended up DNFing this one. There were too many POVs and things going on that didn’t add to the story and made the story as a whole confusing and hard to follow.

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I’m having some trouble getting my thoughts together on how I feel on Remedial Magic. Ultimately this book didn’t really work for me, as it was presented as a fantasy romance. It’s not a romance, even though there are romance elements and maybe as the series for it continues, it’ll get there, but as a book 1, I’m feeling kind of confused. The description tells about Ellie, a quiet librarian who finds out she’s a witch, and Prosperro, a powerful witch from Crenshaw who is ruthless in her goals of saving her homeland. There’s a lot more corruption to Crenshaw though and a lot more characters that this story follows. This story has multiple POVs that, with the description going in, feels confusing. There are a lot of individual stories fuel the overarching story. I like Maggie, a mother who will do anything for her son, but her story is infuriating because she is so justified in her motives and no one is helping her. Ellie too feels inconsistent in her characterization. She wants so much out of life and she’s originally painted as sort of meek, but as soon as her magic awakens, she’s anything but. And while I enjoyed the chemistry in Maggie’s romantic story, I didn’t feel the chemistry or draw of Prospero and Ellie. There are definitely a lot of cozy fantasy vibes and the motivations of the characters are super interesting. I feel like there’s still a ton to explore in the world building and the ending has a dark cliffhanger feeling. I don’t know if I’d continue the series, or what the plans are for it, but I’m also curious where the story goes next.

2.5, rounding to a 3

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This makes for two almost back to back Bramble titles that completed lacked in the good vibes gene. Whereas the first make me angry and frustrated, this one just made me bored, confused, and frustrated. So at least it’s a little different.

This had a very awkward and abrupt start for a story and I was feeling very much dragged along against my will as I struggled to understand who these characters were (mostly our main one) before they were thrown into fantastical situations as well as into their respective romances. Except.. see aforementioned awkward and abrupt and also poorly transitioned scenes. We jump around to quite a few POVs actually and each chapter is short and that just adds to the strangeness of the whole story. We’re getting introduced to characters so quickly and then fleeing their perspective before we understand anything about them beyond the cardboard cut-out explanations that are offered us.

And to compound that weirdness everyone is pairing up ridiculously quickly and for no reason whatsoever considering the unknown and uncertain realities of their circumstances and how suspect and side-eye everything is. Why. Make it make sense.

The last thing I’ll complain about, because I gave up on this before I could accumulate even more things to complain about in order to avoid another long ranty review (oops sorta missed the mark on that one but also I’m just trying to save my sanity) is if there’s a translation spell to make everyone understood no matter their native tongue why did the Norwegian character speak as if he was using babelfish translate? That doesn’t track.

Also also sorry one last thing. It’s 2024. Stop with the Harry Potter references please. For all books but especially queer ones. Be considerate of your readers.

Anyway, don’t know how this ends because I couldn’t even be bothered to skim the bit that was left but I’ll definitely be thinking thrice before I pick up another Bramble title in the future (exception being the Broadbent series but I was intrigued about those even before the trad deal.. though they might prove my point anyway! who knows. not me.. not yet).

1.5 stars

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Reviewed thanks to a copy provided by NetGalley.

3.5/5 stars

So many conflicted feelings.

My favorite part is probably the hobs which I'm still curious about.

All the points of view were kind of infuriating. On the other hand they also made the story work because it really leaves you off kilter.

The world and magic system feel lived in. There is a plethora of problems that will make you wonder if and how the problem should be solved.

That ending is a doozy but there just aren't enough answers to be had.

Best Quote= What if there are no villains?
What if there are no heroes?

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My goal for 2024 is to read books I actually enjoy and if I'm not enjoying to give them up. I am tired of slogging my way through books that are just meh. So for this title I dnfed at 37% I just couldn't do it.

This book had all the elements I normally love: cozy magical setting, librarians, wlw romance, but something just fell flat for me. There were too many characters and I didn't really care about any of them.

This is a minor pet peeve but apparently this is the first book in a series? I think that should be made more clear somewhere because occasionally I just want a standalone fantasy book.

I do think young adults at my library will be interested in this but unfortunately the book was not for me.

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A delightfully queer and chaotic "mundane adults discovering their inherent magic potential" story that asks thoughtful questions about destiny, passion, governance, and consent. Marr does a stellar job of elevating the trope of personal desires vs. greater good conflicts with her examinations of who uses their power and how. Recommended!

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I really had so much hope for this book, who wouldn’t like queer magical main characters with a cozy witchy setting? I think this book suffers from the fact that there are just too many narrators (6 POVs in total). From the original description, I didn’t realize we were going to get so many different points of view, and it was so hard to keep up with. There were so little pages per POV that I was always forgetting who I was reading about. The description of this book makes it seem that Ellie and Prospero are the main characters, and they are, but the narrative is shared among several others, weakening the connection with each character. There were POVs that I really didn’t care for and just wanted more Ellie and Prospero. The plot also seemed disjointed, mostly from the changing POVs, with intriguing elements introduced but not adequately explored. I do have to say that the cliffhanger at the end of the book was crazy! I will probably check out the next book to see what happens, but I hope that the next book has much more Ellie and Prospero and hopefully less POVs.. Thanks to Melissa Marr, Netgalley and Tor Publishing Group for an arc in exchange for my thoughts.

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The style is heavily narrative and heavily expositional. Not for me, I stopped after chapter 2 (5%). For all the exposition, I didn’t totally feel like the vibes were there. I’d guess this will fall around the three stars for the target audience, four for the right reader.

Thank you to NetGalley and Tor for the ARC.

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I wanted to like this book. It has lesbians, witches, toxic pools of sludge, and a librarian. At times, it felt like it wanted to be a screwball comedy; other times it wanted to philosophize on being a hero or villain. It never cohered into a story. The book ends abruptly, setting up the sequel, which I won’t be reading,

The Hobs deserve better.

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I enjoyed this book once I was able to fall into the world and get to know the characters. I enjoyed seeing their stories from their points of view.

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This was an interesting read!
I really wasn't sure what to expect when I started Remedial Magic, which is the first book in the A Course in Magic series.. I assumed there would be romance and some light magic/fantasy sprinkled in, but what I got was unexpected, in a good way.
This story follows multiple characters with multiple points of view, which I think works really well with regards to character development and trying to determine character motivations. I also really enjoyed several of our main characters and a few of the background characters, as well.
Melissa Marr really paints a picture when describing the magical town of Crenshaw, making it sound interesting, inviting, and concerning, all at the same time!
There's a lot of world building that needs to take place in this book and for the most part, I think Marr was successful in doing so. The reader learns needed information, but there are also some bread crumbs sprinkled throughout that will hopefully pay off in later installments of this series. The magic/fantasy is a much bigger part of the story than I was initially anticipating and I am so glad it was!
I did find that some of the romantic storylines moved a bit too quickly to be believable, but I'm willing to give Marr the benefit of the doubt.
This story leaves off on an interesting note, making me wish the next book in the series was available to pick up. It's definitely a series I will continue with and I'm really hoping the second book focuses on Crenshaw as a town, but also as a magical entity!

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