An extremely appreciable piece of story written by an ambitious 12 year old aspiring to be an author. Or that's what it felt like. The concept was not bad by the way. But it got real hard to finish these 85 pages. ughh amateurishness at its peak. These clans that are fighting and battling each other over this region. I mean it's not the worst setting. It could have been entertaining in fact, but for the maddeningly childish almost stupid tone of writing. It felt like the author was a child and had never had any experience of professional writing. Anyhow it wasn't a good story, it's better left alone.