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The characters were adequately developed, contributing to the overall narrative. The plot, added a satisfactory element of surprise and suspense. The author's writing style is solid, making each page a decent read. The atmospheric descriptions enhanced the experience, although some parts felt a bit lenghty. With careful attention to detail and a touch of creativity in storytelling, the narrative drew me in. While it met many expectations, there were moments when I wished for more clarity in certain aspects. Regardless, I enjoyed reading this book.

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I would rate this book 3.5 stars. I feel that the plot was a good speed and that the characters were enjoyable to read about. The book had some typos here and there. I loved that it had a dual POV and that the characters didn't get along immediately. I enjoyed that the mmc had sweet moments to the fmc so he wasn't being an ass all the time in the beginning. The ending definitely got me I wasn't expecting that turn of events with his father.

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While this book isn't my usual genre it was a fun and easy read. It is 10/10 spicy - like a really spicy 50 Shades of Grey mixed with Fantasy. There were a few parts that were out of my comfort zone but overall it was a really great story that kept me engaged and reading.

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I really wanted to like this book, I really did. The writing itself was better than I anticipated, especially for a self published novel. It had a lot of potential but I had too many issues with specific pieces of the plot.

The biggest issue I had was the idea of virginity. I personally hate the whole virginity aspect that most books play on but I can sometimes understand it and it is small enough that I can ignore my distaste for the virginity kink. It was completely impossible to ignore in this book. The fact that wolves can apparently scent virginity, that her virginity was apparently still intact after fingering and minor penetration, and the fact that they kept coming back to it over and over again. I broke my hymen with a damn tampon but apparently hers is somehow still intact and apparently making her valuable because if it.

I also thought the plot and characterization was a little weak. Kira wanted to be a leader yet she didn’t make much effort to gain allies except try to get into the “popular” pack. The plot felt very high school despite the characters being 18+ and I couldn’t get a feel for a distinct personality for Kira or Nat.

If you’re reading just for the smut and like virginity kinks, dom/sub, pet play, and anal, than it will be right up your alley. Unfortunately that is not my thing.

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Are you sick and tired of just another grown up Twilight? Have you been craving a vampire werewolf romance set in a fantasy world with the spice dialed up as far as it can go? Then congratulations our prayers have been answered! This sexy story will pull you in and never let you go, much like our heroine Kira as she finds herself ensared by the vampire prince.

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This is the first book of two and having read this one, I am really looking forward to the next book in the series!

The characters were well developed and I loved the mix of personalities and getting to know them as they book progressed

The book had a well developed and planned out storyline and I thought it was really well written. It really held my attention and I flew through the pages as I wanted to find out what was happening – not one for the feint hearted!

The characters were well developed and I loved the mix of personalities and getting to know them as they book progressed

It is 4 stars from me for this one, I really enjoyed it – highly recommended

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This is a hot and steamy book with a love story doomed from the beginning! Kira grew up knowing how her life was supposed to be and determined to change it for her and all of the wolves. Meeting Nathaniel changed everything and nothing, she still has her own fate in mind, even if the more she learns about him the harder it is to hate all of the vampires. Nathaniel is also keeping secrets and right when we should learn everything from him there is a cliffhanger ending! Be prepared for the cliffhanger and the wait for book 2, I am dying to find out what happens next!

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I couldn't put this book down, finished it in a day. Now this book has some very spicy scene that I thought the author wrote well. These scene play nicely in5o the plot of the book. I like that their was a balance between the plot and the spicy scene. The author does give a warning before reading about the spicy scene and that they left it on a cliff hanger. However I was so involved in reading the story that I didn't realize that I had gotten to the last chapter till it just ended. I can't wait to read the next book. I need to know what happens to the characters.

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You know that feeling when a book ends and you sigh, wishing there were just a few more pages. Definitely one of those books.

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