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Interesting concept, but not executed to its full potential.

1. The main characters weren’t all that interesting to begin with. Nothing about them stood out for me (unless you count the many ways Jenna’s life falls apart!)

2. No chemistry whatsoever between Jenna and Benji. But even worst, I couldn’t really identify a connection between them. Maybe with more candid moments shared, I could’ve gotten a glimpse of it.

3. Undeveloped secondary characters that drag the story instead of moving it along.

4. Way too many POVs. When you have that many voices adding to the story-telling, you need clear transitions so that the reader can follow along nicely without wondering who is saying/thinking what.

Overall, not the book for me. I did like the concept of a young woman overcoming the different obstacles life throws at her and finding comfort in a nice country boy, but the concept lacked in execution.

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